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Illaria #1
Heir of Illaria
In Illaria, there is a fate worse than death. As long as I can remember, I’ve been taught to fear the Necromancer King. He controls the kingdom of Illaria with dark sorcery and the constant threat of his undead army. I never thought I’d have reason to cross his path. Everything changed the day his guards tried to kill me. That’s when I found out my whole life has been a lie. By joining a resistance group called the White Ravens, I’ve claimed new roles. Princess of Illaria, sorceress in training, and threat to the Necromancer King.
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First published January 23, 2017
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September 4, 2017
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I received this free eBook from Netgally in exchange for my honest opinion.
Wilona has lived all her life with her grandmother in a small town. Her grandmother has taught her to fear the king and his guards, but one day she walks away in the forest and meets the king's guards, who after interrogating her let her go.
When she arrives at her house she tells Grandma everything and Grandma decides that they must leave immediately. But it's too late, the guards are at their door. They have gone to kill her. A mysterious woman has come to rescue her, but she can not save her grandmother.
This is when she finds out that her whole life has been a big lie. That she is actually the heiress to the throne. She's taken with the White Ravens. They are those who have kept her alive, who have guarded its safety. In the next few weeks she will discover that she is the heir to the throne and possesses magic.
When I started reading I got the impression that it was going to be an excellent fantasy book, but once Wilona/Etta reaches the White Ravens' lair everything becomes boring and predictable. Not to mention the insta-love, they go from zero to I can not live without you.
After turning it around for weeks and losing interest, in the last hundred pages it gets a little more interesting and I could finish it.
In conclusion, it is the typical fantasy story where the protagonist grows without knowing that she belongs to the royalty. Ideal for YA readers.
✨✨✨
Recibí este eBook gratis de Netgally a cambio de mi honesta opinión.
Wilona ha vivido toda su vida con su abuela en un pequeño pueblo. Su abuela la ha enseñado a temer al rey y a sus guardias, pero un día se aleja en el bosque y se encuentra con guardias del rey, quienes después de interrogarla la dejan marchar.
Cuando llega a su casa se lo cuenta a la abuela y está decide que deben marcharse de inmediato. Pero es demasiado tarde, ya los guardias están en su puerta. Han ido a matarle. Una mujer misteriosa ha ido a rescatarle, pero no logra salvar a su abuela.
Aquí es cuando se entera que toda su vida ha sido una gran mentira. Que en realidad es la heredera al trono. Es llevada con los Cuervos blancos. Son los que la han mantenido con vida, que han velado por su seguridad. En las próximas semanas descubrirá que es la heredera al trono y que posee magia.
Cuando comencé a leer me dio la impresión de que iba a ser un excelente libro de fantasía, pero una vez que Wilona/Etta llega a la guarida de los Cuervos blancos todo se torna aburrido y predecible. Ni hablar del insta-love, pasan de cero a no puedo vivir sin ti.
Después de darle vueltas por semanas y perder el interés, en las últimas cien páginas se pone un poco más interesante y pude terminarlo.
En conclusión, es la típica historia de fantasía en donde la protagonista crece sin saber que pertenece a la realeza. Ideal para lectores YA.
I received this free eBook from Netgally in exchange for my honest opinion.
Wilona has lived all her life with her grandmother in a small town. Her grandmother has taught her to fear the king and his guards, but one day she walks away in the forest and meets the king's guards, who after interrogating her let her go.
When she arrives at her house she tells Grandma everything and Grandma decides that they must leave immediately. But it's too late, the guards are at their door. They have gone to kill her. A mysterious woman has come to rescue her, but she can not save her grandmother.
This is when she finds out that her whole life has been a big lie. That she is actually the heiress to the throne. She's taken with the White Ravens. They are those who have kept her alive, who have guarded its safety. In the next few weeks she will discover that she is the heir to the throne and possesses magic.
When I started reading I got the impression that it was going to be an excellent fantasy book, but once Wilona/Etta reaches the White Ravens' lair everything becomes boring and predictable. Not to mention the insta-love, they go from zero to I can not live without you.
After turning it around for weeks and losing interest, in the last hundred pages it gets a little more interesting and I could finish it.
In conclusion, it is the typical fantasy story where the protagonist grows without knowing that she belongs to the royalty. Ideal for YA readers.
✨✨✨
Recibí este eBook gratis de Netgally a cambio de mi honesta opinión.
Wilona ha vivido toda su vida con su abuela en un pequeño pueblo. Su abuela la ha enseñado a temer al rey y a sus guardias, pero un día se aleja en el bosque y se encuentra con guardias del rey, quienes después de interrogarla la dejan marchar.
Cuando llega a su casa se lo cuenta a la abuela y está decide que deben marcharse de inmediato. Pero es demasiado tarde, ya los guardias están en su puerta. Han ido a matarle. Una mujer misteriosa ha ido a rescatarle, pero no logra salvar a su abuela.
Aquí es cuando se entera que toda su vida ha sido una gran mentira. Que en realidad es la heredera al trono. Es llevada con los Cuervos blancos. Son los que la han mantenido con vida, que han velado por su seguridad. En las próximas semanas descubrirá que es la heredera al trono y que posee magia.
Cuando comencé a leer me dio la impresión de que iba a ser un excelente libro de fantasía, pero una vez que Wilona/Etta llega a la guarida de los Cuervos blancos todo se torna aburrido y predecible. Ni hablar del insta-love, pasan de cero a no puedo vivir sin ti.
Después de darle vueltas por semanas y perder el interés, en las últimas cien páginas se pone un poco más interesante y pude terminarlo.
En conclusión, es la típica historia de fantasía en donde la protagonista crece sin saber que pertenece a la realeza. Ideal para lectores YA.
October 25, 2019
Rating: 3.5 Stars
Ive become wary of review copies lately. I actually started reading less of them so I wouldnt go into a reading slump from reading so many mediocre books. I often love the summary but still find myself disapointed. Thankfully I didnt feel that way while reading this. Now that I look back on it I notice that it did have a couple issue but I still really enjoyed it.
In Heir of Illaria we follow Wilona who joins up with a rebel group after shes forced to run from her home when the Kings guards kill her grandmother and then try to kill her. The Necromancer King will do anything to get rid of Illarias one true heir but with new friends and magic on her side it might not be as easy as he'd hoped.
I wasnt expecting the world to be as vaste as it was with all the different countries and types of magic. The workings of the magic system were pretty vague, which was a little disapointing considering the amount of time they spend talking about it but the magic was still fascinating. It wasnt the most original story but the tropes used were ones I love reading about.
The pacing kept me engage throughout and the characters were well developped. For the most part the developpement of the characters and the different relationships were well balanced with the plot and the action scenes. Since I prefer when a story has a bit of both instead of too much of one or the other I appreciated the balance between the two. I enjoyed all the characters in this book.
I loved Wilonas character arc but I thought the wards to keep the King from directly harming Wilona were a little too convenient. I ended up liking Wilona and Ashton relationship but I would have liked to spend more time with them when they were first getting to know each other instead of skipping it and going straight to the part where Ashton started being nice to her.
Wanting to know if she could trust the leader of the rebel group was one of the major reasons I couldnt put it down. After that ending and knowing about the Darkness I see a lot of potential for an amazing sequel. The writing was captivating and easy to follow but I did notice some typos in my review copy. Overall this was an entertaining read with interesting characters. Im happy to say I wasnt bored once.
*received in exchange for an honest review*
Ive become wary of review copies lately. I actually started reading less of them so I wouldnt go into a reading slump from reading so many mediocre books. I often love the summary but still find myself disapointed. Thankfully I didnt feel that way while reading this. Now that I look back on it I notice that it did have a couple issue but I still really enjoyed it.
In Heir of Illaria we follow Wilona who joins up with a rebel group after shes forced to run from her home when the Kings guards kill her grandmother and then try to kill her. The Necromancer King will do anything to get rid of Illarias one true heir but with new friends and magic on her side it might not be as easy as he'd hoped.
I wasnt expecting the world to be as vaste as it was with all the different countries and types of magic. The workings of the magic system were pretty vague, which was a little disapointing considering the amount of time they spend talking about it but the magic was still fascinating. It wasnt the most original story but the tropes used were ones I love reading about.
The pacing kept me engage throughout and the characters were well developped. For the most part the developpement of the characters and the different relationships were well balanced with the plot and the action scenes. Since I prefer when a story has a bit of both instead of too much of one or the other I appreciated the balance between the two. I enjoyed all the characters in this book.
I loved Wilonas character arc but I thought the wards to keep the King from directly harming Wilona were a little too convenient. I ended up liking Wilona and Ashton relationship but I would have liked to spend more time with them when they were first getting to know each other instead of skipping it and going straight to the part where Ashton started being nice to her.
Wanting to know if she could trust the leader of the rebel group was one of the major reasons I couldnt put it down. After that ending and knowing about the Darkness I see a lot of potential for an amazing sequel. The writing was captivating and easy to follow but I did notice some typos in my review copy. Overall this was an entertaining read with interesting characters. Im happy to say I wasnt bored once.
*received in exchange for an honest review*
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October 15, 2017DNF for now.
This might be a really amazing book . . . but I just cannot find any interest in it. Maybe it's too much like some other things I've read recently. So I'm going to set it aside and maybe try again later.
This might be a really amazing book . . . but I just cannot find any interest in it. Maybe it's too much like some other things I've read recently. So I'm going to set it aside and maybe try again later.
May 13, 2017
Title: Heir of Illaria (Illaria #1)
Author: Dyan Chick
Publisher: Illaria Publishing, 2017 (Jan 23)
Genre: YA Fantasy
**I received a copy of the ARC free from the author in exchange for an honest review**
This review can be found on my Blog, TeacherofYA's Tumblr, or my Goodreads page
My Review:
First things first....HOW BEAUTIFUL IS THIS COVER?? I'm in love!
And I'm not surprised that this book called to me....this cover shouts, "Look at me! Read me!"
So I did.
And it was good. So good.
But that doesn't tell you much, does it?
Wilona lives a pretty normal life as a peasant. She lives with her grandmother and does embroidery to help make money. One day in the woods picking berries, however, it all changes. The King's Guards find her and later ambush her in her home. They try to pull her from the home, but a mysterious stranger named Saffron comes in and whisks her away in the nick of time.
Wilona's grandmother isn't so lucky. Wilona isn't sure if she's dead, but according to Saffron, the King and his army of Necromancers are after her. Why?
Because Wilona is a princess.
What I imagine Wilona looks like in Queenish glory!
With help from the White Ravens, Wilona has been protected all her life. She is meant to help the Ravens remove the evil king and restore Illaria to a peaceful land. When Wilona meets a key person in the quest for the throne, she is told she also comes from a long line of Sorcerers. Powerful Sorcerers.
That's what Sorcerers wear, right?
As the Ravens hide Wilona from the king, Wilona gets in touch with the magic inside her. Apparently, Wilona is a pretty powerful Sorcereress. When she receives help from Ashton, a strong Apprentice and a master of fire magic, she realizes that the magic inside her might be stronger than any other Sorcerer. She wants to help bring down the king.
But the king is a Necromancer...and he has someone very important to Wilona.
And he wants Wilona...dead or alive.
This is my vision of a Necromancer King
I will wait to fangirl until after the rundown.
Is It Classroom-Appropriate?
Yes, this is definitely a good YA novel. We have a young girl, orphaned (I know it's a trope but it happens), and we read her story from the first person perspective, which is the most personal perspective one can read. She goes through some confidence boosting as she tires of being used as a pawn....there's some serious girl power in this book. Though I cannot find "academic" value in it, per se, I can find merit in the novel. I think this would be a great book to recommend or allow as free reading. It would also make a nice edition to a classroom library.
With that being said, there's more to the series, so it is hard to assess when this is book one. It does end on a bit of a cliffhanger. The cliffhanger, though, doesn't leave he book in an awkward spot: it is a natural resting place which helps when using a series book independently. (Kind of like how Harry Potter ends in the first book: there's more but you can stop and not feel "unfulfilled.")
Age Range:
Since this is an independent title, it will not be on Lexile. So I have to use my best judgement. There are some swoon-worthy moments, but nothing inappropriate. There's no swearing, which is also nice. I could comfortably recommend this book to ages 13 and up. I think younger fantasy readers will love connecting to Wilona and her struggles, fears, and triumphs.
Before the End Result, I want to introduce you to Dyan Chick, the brains behind Heir of Illaria. I am always thrilled (especially when I love a book), to include some info from the author. But Q&A is even better, right?
Dyan Chick in all her glory!
1. What's your fave genre to read in your spare time?
My favorite genre is definitely YA fantasy. (YES!) I'm also drawn to historical fiction set in Renaissance or Medieval times.
2. What's the strangest/worst job you had before you started writing?
I've had pretty typical jobs: waitress, bartender, nanny, retail stores. Probably the worst job was the week I spent working at a bar that had off-track betting. Smoking was still allowed so the whole building was a cloud of yuck and it was full of older men who didn't treat the waitresses very well. I spent a lot of time hiding in the bathroom before I got the courage to quit. It's the shortest job I've ever had.
3. Is this your first book baby?
This is my first book baby! The original idea was conceived in 2011 and I wasn't brave enough to finally finish it until 2016.
4. What are you working on next?
A prequel novella is out now on Instafreebie and will be on Amazon on February 22nd. Currently, I'm finishing up books 2 and 3 in the Illaria series. I also have two projects that are in the outline stages. One is based on a Greek Myth and one is based on a classic fairy tale.
*Here's the linkie to the prequel if you want to taste Heir of Illaria. I haven't read it yet, but I can't imagine that being bad when this was so good: Tales of Illaria: Max and Saffron
5. If you had to take only one book with you on a desert island...would you just end it all? Just kidding...what would you bring and why?
Oh man, only one? Could it be a box set? I don't think I'd ever get tired of The Princess Bride. (I like her more now!)
6. Do you have any favorite authors or people who inspired you to write?
So many favorite authors! J.K. Rowling, C.S. Lewis, J.R.R. Tolkein...lots of others. I'm also very inspired by movies. Star Wars is a big influence for me. I grew up on those movies and a lot of classic SciFi. My parents took us out of school to see new Star Trek movies and the Batman movies that came out in the 90s. Having geek parents is a big plus.
7. Where did you come up with the idea of Heir of Illaria? Do you identify with a specific character? Do you have a favorite?
The idea came from a dream about siblings who were in hiding and didn't know they were the rightful heirs to the throne. It evolved from there. I identify with different parts of each main character. They have traits that I have or traits that I wished I had. I've always been drawn to the idea of standing up for what is right so most of the stories I want to write are about somebody brave enough to fight to change their world. My favorite character to write lately has been my bad-guys. It's fun to get inside their heads.
A thank you to Dyan for letting me ask her inane questions and her actually answering them!
End Result:
You know I've been practically foaming at the mouth for this part, right? You could probably tell by the title of this review that it wasn't an ordinary one.
This. Book. Blew. Me. Away.
I can easily say it surpasses Ever the Hunted, and it almost rivals Frostblood for me. And I loved Frostblood. But this book is magical, easy to read, and quick to get sucked into, as I quickly learned myself. I keep reaching for my Kindle to continue and I don't have book two yet. Luckily it's in its final stages and I'll have it soon. Dyan did give me a prequel Novella and until I have the next book, it will have to suffice.
The only way I can demonstrate my feelings accurately is in gif form:
I give Heir of Illaria ★★★★★. If I could give more, I would. I'm in love. So to show my point even more...
Now, let me tell you: you need this book if you love YA Fantasy. I'm not trying to overhype...but I could see this on the shelf with the likes of Frostblood or The Kiss of Deception series. That's saying a lot.
So I hope I made my point.
Happy Reading, y'all!
Author: Dyan Chick
Publisher: Illaria Publishing, 2017 (Jan 23)
Genre: YA Fantasy
**I received a copy of the ARC free from the author in exchange for an honest review**
This review can be found on my Blog, TeacherofYA's Tumblr, or my Goodreads page
My Review:
First things first....HOW BEAUTIFUL IS THIS COVER?? I'm in love!
And I'm not surprised that this book called to me....this cover shouts, "Look at me! Read me!"
So I did.
And it was good. So good.
But that doesn't tell you much, does it?
Wilona lives a pretty normal life as a peasant. She lives with her grandmother and does embroidery to help make money. One day in the woods picking berries, however, it all changes. The King's Guards find her and later ambush her in her home. They try to pull her from the home, but a mysterious stranger named Saffron comes in and whisks her away in the nick of time.
Wilona's grandmother isn't so lucky. Wilona isn't sure if she's dead, but according to Saffron, the King and his army of Necromancers are after her. Why?
Because Wilona is a princess.
What I imagine Wilona looks like in Queenish glory!
With help from the White Ravens, Wilona has been protected all her life. She is meant to help the Ravens remove the evil king and restore Illaria to a peaceful land. When Wilona meets a key person in the quest for the throne, she is told she also comes from a long line of Sorcerers. Powerful Sorcerers.
That's what Sorcerers wear, right?
As the Ravens hide Wilona from the king, Wilona gets in touch with the magic inside her. Apparently, Wilona is a pretty powerful Sorcereress. When she receives help from Ashton, a strong Apprentice and a master of fire magic, she realizes that the magic inside her might be stronger than any other Sorcerer. She wants to help bring down the king.
But the king is a Necromancer...and he has someone very important to Wilona.
And he wants Wilona...dead or alive.
This is my vision of a Necromancer King
I will wait to fangirl until after the rundown.
Is It Classroom-Appropriate?
Yes, this is definitely a good YA novel. We have a young girl, orphaned (I know it's a trope but it happens), and we read her story from the first person perspective, which is the most personal perspective one can read. She goes through some confidence boosting as she tires of being used as a pawn....there's some serious girl power in this book. Though I cannot find "academic" value in it, per se, I can find merit in the novel. I think this would be a great book to recommend or allow as free reading. It would also make a nice edition to a classroom library.
With that being said, there's more to the series, so it is hard to assess when this is book one. It does end on a bit of a cliffhanger. The cliffhanger, though, doesn't leave he book in an awkward spot: it is a natural resting place which helps when using a series book independently. (Kind of like how Harry Potter ends in the first book: there's more but you can stop and not feel "unfulfilled.")
Age Range:
Since this is an independent title, it will not be on Lexile. So I have to use my best judgement. There are some swoon-worthy moments, but nothing inappropriate. There's no swearing, which is also nice. I could comfortably recommend this book to ages 13 and up. I think younger fantasy readers will love connecting to Wilona and her struggles, fears, and triumphs.
Before the End Result, I want to introduce you to Dyan Chick, the brains behind Heir of Illaria. I am always thrilled (especially when I love a book), to include some info from the author. But Q&A is even better, right?
Dyan Chick in all her glory!
1. What's your fave genre to read in your spare time?
My favorite genre is definitely YA fantasy. (YES!) I'm also drawn to historical fiction set in Renaissance or Medieval times.
2. What's the strangest/worst job you had before you started writing?
I've had pretty typical jobs: waitress, bartender, nanny, retail stores. Probably the worst job was the week I spent working at a bar that had off-track betting. Smoking was still allowed so the whole building was a cloud of yuck and it was full of older men who didn't treat the waitresses very well. I spent a lot of time hiding in the bathroom before I got the courage to quit. It's the shortest job I've ever had.
3. Is this your first book baby?
This is my first book baby! The original idea was conceived in 2011 and I wasn't brave enough to finally finish it until 2016.
4. What are you working on next?
A prequel novella is out now on Instafreebie and will be on Amazon on February 22nd. Currently, I'm finishing up books 2 and 3 in the Illaria series. I also have two projects that are in the outline stages. One is based on a Greek Myth and one is based on a classic fairy tale.
*Here's the linkie to the prequel if you want to taste Heir of Illaria. I haven't read it yet, but I can't imagine that being bad when this was so good: Tales of Illaria: Max and Saffron
5. If you had to take only one book with you on a desert island...would you just end it all? Just kidding...what would you bring and why?
Oh man, only one? Could it be a box set? I don't think I'd ever get tired of The Princess Bride. (I like her more now!)
6. Do you have any favorite authors or people who inspired you to write?
So many favorite authors! J.K. Rowling, C.S. Lewis, J.R.R. Tolkein...lots of others. I'm also very inspired by movies. Star Wars is a big influence for me. I grew up on those movies and a lot of classic SciFi. My parents took us out of school to see new Star Trek movies and the Batman movies that came out in the 90s. Having geek parents is a big plus.
7. Where did you come up with the idea of Heir of Illaria? Do you identify with a specific character? Do you have a favorite?
The idea came from a dream about siblings who were in hiding and didn't know they were the rightful heirs to the throne. It evolved from there. I identify with different parts of each main character. They have traits that I have or traits that I wished I had. I've always been drawn to the idea of standing up for what is right so most of the stories I want to write are about somebody brave enough to fight to change their world. My favorite character to write lately has been my bad-guys. It's fun to get inside their heads.
A thank you to Dyan for letting me ask her inane questions and her actually answering them!
End Result:
You know I've been practically foaming at the mouth for this part, right? You could probably tell by the title of this review that it wasn't an ordinary one.
This. Book. Blew. Me. Away.
I can easily say it surpasses Ever the Hunted, and it almost rivals Frostblood for me. And I loved Frostblood. But this book is magical, easy to read, and quick to get sucked into, as I quickly learned myself. I keep reaching for my Kindle to continue and I don't have book two yet. Luckily it's in its final stages and I'll have it soon. Dyan did give me a prequel Novella and until I have the next book, it will have to suffice.
The only way I can demonstrate my feelings accurately is in gif form:
I give Heir of Illaria ★★★★★. If I could give more, I would. I'm in love. So to show my point even more...
Now, let me tell you: you need this book if you love YA Fantasy. I'm not trying to overhype...but I could see this on the shelf with the likes of Frostblood or The Kiss of Deception series. That's saying a lot.
So I hope I made my point.
Happy Reading, y'all!
August 31, 2017
This one is a hard one to review. For the majority of this novel, I was bored. Very, very, bored. There was a lot of stuff going on and it was a non-stop adventure yet at the same time, the story was just not holding my interest. It almost felt like there was TOO much going on within the storyline with the main character's background/identity and all of these discoveries were happening in such a short period of time. It was hard to get a grasp on each new development because shortly after, something else would be introduced. Sorry if this is coming off confusing but I'm really trying to avoid giving away any spoilers.
With that being said, even though this wasn't the novel for me, I could see others enjoying it. It's fast-paced, has magical elements, and has romance. Personally, if anything, the romance was the part of the novel that most kept me reading.
I rarely ever begin a series without continuing but with this series, I doubt I will continue. It was mediocre and I don't feel the interest or attachment to any of the characters/story enough to continue.
**Thank you to the publisher for supplying me with a copy of this book via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**
With that being said, even though this wasn't the novel for me, I could see others enjoying it. It's fast-paced, has magical elements, and has romance. Personally, if anything, the romance was the part of the novel that most kept me reading.
I rarely ever begin a series without continuing but with this series, I doubt I will continue. It was mediocre and I don't feel the interest or attachment to any of the characters/story enough to continue.
**Thank you to the publisher for supplying me with a copy of this book via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**
December 4, 2017
I absolutely loved this book! It was everything you can ask for in a fantasy young adult novel! It's medieval times with sorcerers and a girl who never knew she was royalty but was thrown into it. There's romance, battles and suspense. I will definitely be reading the rest of this series!
Wilona is 17 years old living in a small village. She has been raised by her grandmother and never really had any friends. She's been sheltered her whole life. She helped her grandmother with her job as a seamstress but was also taught to read, write and the Gallic language.
The only thing she had from her parents was a pendant she wore hidden under her dress around her neck. It wasn't until the day her grandmother was murdered did she find out what it actually meant.
Now she find out her true name and is drawn into a world of sorcery, all the while wishing she could go back to the cottage she shared with her grandmother. That can never happen.
An evil sorcerer is the king of Illaria but he isn't meant to sit on that throne. Wilona is only at the beginning of her journey and self-discovery.
This book was given to me by NetGalley and the publisher for a fair and honest review.
Wilona is 17 years old living in a small village. She has been raised by her grandmother and never really had any friends. She's been sheltered her whole life. She helped her grandmother with her job as a seamstress but was also taught to read, write and the Gallic language.
The only thing she had from her parents was a pendant she wore hidden under her dress around her neck. It wasn't until the day her grandmother was murdered did she find out what it actually meant.
Now she find out her true name and is drawn into a world of sorcery, all the while wishing she could go back to the cottage she shared with her grandmother. That can never happen.
An evil sorcerer is the king of Illaria but he isn't meant to sit on that throne. Wilona is only at the beginning of her journey and self-discovery.
This book was given to me by NetGalley and the publisher for a fair and honest review.
March 4, 2017
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Heir of Illaria is an entertaining YA fantasy read with an interesting plot and unique setting! Although I enjoyed reading this book, I wasn’t completely satisfied with it because of few issues. This is a clear case of it’s not you, it’s me. I didn’t put high expectations on this book but I was very intrigued when I read the premise of it. The characters are good but I was disappointed with how the romance was executed. Some parts of the story felt rushed and less detailed. However, readers who are new to this genre would definitely love this book.
The story follows Seventeen year old Wilona who lives with her grandmother in a village far away from the king’s Castle. Her grandmother warned her to never step out of the village but one day when she sneaks out into the kings woods her paths crosses with the kings soldiers. Her mistake brings the kings soldier’s later on her doorstep who tries to kill her. Surprisingly, she’s saved by a woman who claims that she’s a member of a resistance group called White Ravens. Later, Wilona learns that she’s the old kings daughter which makes her a princess and also a huge threat to the necromancer king. Wilona don’t know anything about being a princess or a sorceress. Before joining the resistance group she was warned not to trust anyone. When Wilona finally arrives at the White Ravens she’s in for many surprises and it seems like she also possess a unique power that can help them defeat the Necromancer King.
I liked Wilona! She is innocent and naive girl who hadn’t seen a violence in her entire life. She started as a weak character but eventually she grows into a strong character who can speak for herself. Ashton is a sorcerer apprentice and also Wilona’s love interest who helps wilona in discovering her elemental power. I wasn’t impressed with his character yet but I do really want to know more about him. Though the romance isn’t the central focus of the book, I think it could’ve been better executed. There’s barely any heart to heart conversations between them but suddenly they’re in love with each other and that’s why it seemed a bit awkward for me. The secondary characters are interesting but sadly they aren’t fleshed out well. Saffron is a kickass character and I liked her friendship with Wilona. Max is a character that I didn’t liked from the start and I pretty much hated how he treated Wilona like how she doesn’t have a say in anything. The necromancer king also the evil villain of this story is definitely not what I expected him to be and would love to see more of him.
The plot is pretty interesting but at the same time it was quite predictable because It’s a typical fantasy plot that I’ve already seen in lots of books. The story started with an exciting start but as it progressed, It slowly turned into less exciting when the plot took a slow pace with Wilona’s training. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the ending part and I wish the story was a bit more detailed and more action packed. The romance feels forced and It’s one of my favorite aspects in YA fantasy reads so it’s a bit disappointing. The story was told in Wilona’s POV and the writing is flawless. I liked the elemental magical system and also the kingdom of Illaria, they are the best aspects of this book. The book finally concluded with a minor cliffhanger and I might read it’s sequel but I’m not sure yet.
Overall, I like it but I don’t love it! For a debut novel, I think it’s a good start and hope the sequel would be much better.
Heir of Illaria is an entertaining YA fantasy read with an interesting plot and unique setting! Although I enjoyed reading this book, I wasn’t completely satisfied with it because of few issues. This is a clear case of it’s not you, it’s me. I didn’t put high expectations on this book but I was very intrigued when I read the premise of it. The characters are good but I was disappointed with how the romance was executed. Some parts of the story felt rushed and less detailed. However, readers who are new to this genre would definitely love this book.
The story follows Seventeen year old Wilona who lives with her grandmother in a village far away from the king’s Castle. Her grandmother warned her to never step out of the village but one day when she sneaks out into the kings woods her paths crosses with the kings soldiers. Her mistake brings the kings soldier’s later on her doorstep who tries to kill her. Surprisingly, she’s saved by a woman who claims that she’s a member of a resistance group called White Ravens. Later, Wilona learns that she’s the old kings daughter which makes her a princess and also a huge threat to the necromancer king. Wilona don’t know anything about being a princess or a sorceress. Before joining the resistance group she was warned not to trust anyone. When Wilona finally arrives at the White Ravens she’s in for many surprises and it seems like she also possess a unique power that can help them defeat the Necromancer King.
I liked Wilona! She is innocent and naive girl who hadn’t seen a violence in her entire life. She started as a weak character but eventually she grows into a strong character who can speak for herself. Ashton is a sorcerer apprentice and also Wilona’s love interest who helps wilona in discovering her elemental power. I wasn’t impressed with his character yet but I do really want to know more about him. Though the romance isn’t the central focus of the book, I think it could’ve been better executed. There’s barely any heart to heart conversations between them but suddenly they’re in love with each other and that’s why it seemed a bit awkward for me. The secondary characters are interesting but sadly they aren’t fleshed out well. Saffron is a kickass character and I liked her friendship with Wilona. Max is a character that I didn’t liked from the start and I pretty much hated how he treated Wilona like how she doesn’t have a say in anything. The necromancer king also the evil villain of this story is definitely not what I expected him to be and would love to see more of him.
The plot is pretty interesting but at the same time it was quite predictable because It’s a typical fantasy plot that I’ve already seen in lots of books. The story started with an exciting start but as it progressed, It slowly turned into less exciting when the plot took a slow pace with Wilona’s training. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the ending part and I wish the story was a bit more detailed and more action packed. The romance feels forced and It’s one of my favorite aspects in YA fantasy reads so it’s a bit disappointing. The story was told in Wilona’s POV and the writing is flawless. I liked the elemental magical system and also the kingdom of Illaria, they are the best aspects of this book. The book finally concluded with a minor cliffhanger and I might read it’s sequel but I’m not sure yet.
Overall, I like it but I don’t love it! For a debut novel, I think it’s a good start and hope the sequel would be much better.
August 22, 2017
DNF. I received a free copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Rating: 1
I kept trying to get into this, but just couldn't. The premise seemed interesting and thought it might be on par with the Tearling series, but my God the writing killed me! So over simplified and the dialogue was cringe-worthily awkward. I just can't with these books that are eye-roll inducing when there are SO MANY well written, entertaining books out there instead and only so many hours in the day.
Here's what I was sold on: Necromancer King with an Undead Army, girl with a mysterious past who joins forces against him and hopefully is super badass (didn't get that far if it happened), dark sorcery. And yeah, it bears repeating - UNDEAD ARMY.
***NOW WE HAVE SOME SPOILERS***
What I got was a naive, immature and simple girl who can't even handle "princess" lessons for 3 days which include standing up straight and eating properly. Sigh, Oh well. On to the next.
Rating: 1
I kept trying to get into this, but just couldn't. The premise seemed interesting and thought it might be on par with the Tearling series, but my God the writing killed me! So over simplified and the dialogue was cringe-worthily awkward. I just can't with these books that are eye-roll inducing when there are SO MANY well written, entertaining books out there instead and only so many hours in the day.
Here's what I was sold on: Necromancer King with an Undead Army, girl with a mysterious past who joins forces against him and hopefully is super badass (didn't get that far if it happened), dark sorcery. And yeah, it bears repeating - UNDEAD ARMY.
***NOW WE HAVE SOME SPOILERS***
What I got was a naive, immature and simple girl who can't even handle "princess" lessons for 3 days which include standing up straight and eating properly. Sigh, Oh well. On to the next.
March 16, 2017
Království plné magie. Král nekromant, uchvatitel trůnu. A jedna ztracená královská dědička, která si jde pro to, co jí právem patří.
Wilona žije ve vesnici se svou babičkou, dokud ji jednoho dne nenapadnou strážci samotného krále Nekromanta. Najednou ji všichni touží zabít a pronásledují ji. Smrt má doslova v zádech, když na ni král pošle své probuzené mrtvé. Naštěstí se setká s příslušníky odboje, kteří jí prozradí, že je dědičkou trůnu. Jak se zdá, jen ona jediná může dokázat přemoci krále, který zabil její rodiče a zmocnil se království. Pomůže jí v tom objevená magie i ohňový mág Ashton, který je mimochodem velmi přitažlivý...
Heir of Illaria mi ze začátku neskutečně připomínala Královnu Tearlingu. Nápad je totiž velmi podobný. Ale zatímco Královna Tearlingu mě moc neohromila, tato kniha mě pohltila. A ten konec wow :) Heir of Illaria je mnohem povedenější sestřička Královny Tearlingu. Je v ní více magie, sympatičtější postavy, více boje a napětí, méně kralování :)
Wilona žije ve vesnici se svou babičkou, dokud ji jednoho dne nenapadnou strážci samotného krále Nekromanta. Najednou ji všichni touží zabít a pronásledují ji. Smrt má doslova v zádech, když na ni král pošle své probuzené mrtvé. Naštěstí se setká s příslušníky odboje, kteří jí prozradí, že je dědičkou trůnu. Jak se zdá, jen ona jediná může dokázat přemoci krále, který zabil její rodiče a zmocnil se království. Pomůže jí v tom objevená magie i ohňový mág Ashton, který je mimochodem velmi přitažlivý...
Heir of Illaria mi ze začátku neskutečně připomínala Královnu Tearlingu. Nápad je totiž velmi podobný. Ale zatímco Královna Tearlingu mě moc neohromila, tato kniha mě pohltila. A ten konec wow :) Heir of Illaria je mnohem povedenější sestřička Královny Tearlingu. Je v ní více magie, sympatičtější postavy, více boje a napětí, méně kralování :)
December 6, 2023
I would probably have enjoyed this if I was a teenager but as an adult I am way too critical of yet another teenager living in ignorance about their royal heritage plus instalove. Pass. 2.5 ⭐
August 19, 2017
I really, really wanted to like this one but it fell short for me. The story had a lot of promise but there were some issues I had with the editing and they kept pulling me out of the story. The pacing was also a pain point for me as there were parts that dragged for me and other parts where I felt like I missed something.
I did like the characters and thought between the king, the White Ravens, and Wilona, there is a great story here. I might check out the next book just to see what happens next but we'll see.
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the review copy.
I did like the characters and thought between the king, the White Ravens, and Wilona, there is a great story here. I might check out the next book just to see what happens next but we'll see.
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the review copy.
September 4, 2017
I received this book as an ARC in exchange for my review
Heir of Illaria is a good example of a YA fantasy story that is written well for its intended audience. The characters, especially Wilona/Etta, are easy to relate to and full of life. The plot is similar to that of many fantasy books in that a seemingly simple girl discovers a past hidden from her and goes on to discover her true potential with the help of many new friends. However, it is appropriately geared to the YA group because it doesn't complicate things too much, i.e an extensive list of characters or various plot lines to keep track of, like many more adult fantasy novels do. It also sets up things well for successful sequels and in my opinion, potentially even a prequel.
If there is anything to criticize about this novel, it might be that it could use a bit more detail in regards to Wilona's training as an apprentice sorceress. The bits that are there are good, but it did seem like her control went from none to great more quickly than it should. Oh, and I did find it bit awkward when the others characters seemed to randomly refer to Wilona by that name and by the name of Etta somewhat randomly after the reveal of her past. It became more defined later, that some characters would refer to her as one or the other, but this could be more refined earlier.
All in all, this was a very fun read that I would recommend to anyone that is of a younger age (maybe 13-18) or even older lovers of fantasy who want a bit of a break from more complicated reads, but still want a great story and well written characters. I can't wait for more from this new author
Heir of Illaria is a good example of a YA fantasy story that is written well for its intended audience. The characters, especially Wilona/Etta, are easy to relate to and full of life. The plot is similar to that of many fantasy books in that a seemingly simple girl discovers a past hidden from her and goes on to discover her true potential with the help of many new friends. However, it is appropriately geared to the YA group because it doesn't complicate things too much, i.e an extensive list of characters or various plot lines to keep track of, like many more adult fantasy novels do. It also sets up things well for successful sequels and in my opinion, potentially even a prequel.
If there is anything to criticize about this novel, it might be that it could use a bit more detail in regards to Wilona's training as an apprentice sorceress. The bits that are there are good, but it did seem like her control went from none to great more quickly than it should. Oh, and I did find it bit awkward when the others characters seemed to randomly refer to Wilona by that name and by the name of Etta somewhat randomly after the reveal of her past. It became more defined later, that some characters would refer to her as one or the other, but this could be more refined earlier.
All in all, this was a very fun read that I would recommend to anyone that is of a younger age (maybe 13-18) or even older lovers of fantasy who want a bit of a break from more complicated reads, but still want a great story and well written characters. I can't wait for more from this new author
February 2, 2017
An amazing book can't wait for book 2
October 3, 2017
I received a copy of this book from Netgalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
Heir of Illaria is a book I came across on Netgally that stood out to me because of the cover, hello gorgeous, and the mention of a necromancer king in the synopsis. If you don’t know this about me. Necromancing is a thing I find highly interesting but don’t come across too often. So that was an instant need to read for me. Unfortunately the book didn’t quite live up to the expected darkness.
To be honest, the book has a bit of a cliché young adult fantasy going on where the not so special girl finds out she is a princess, heir to the throne and has a special power. Which can be fun when it is filled in well and can manage to twist away from it at some point. Unfortunately it doesn’t quite manage to do that until the very end.
The start to the book, when we get to meet Wilona, feels rushed. We move through things incredibly fast and there is little explanation. Our main character doesn’t put her foot down about any of it and just lets herself get pushed around and accepts it all without any explanation to be honest. It made her feel flat as a character.
In the second half of the book she had a bit more personality about her. I liked how she made it clear she didn’t want to be queen and wanted to get away from that. She slowly grows into the role that a princess needs though and tries to put her foot down to her brother every now and then. She also doesn’t want to be married of. And is vocal about that in her own mind which is great. But doesn’t actually manage to get it out to the person that matters. It then gets so easily resolved for her so she didn’t have to deal with it. Bit of a shame really.
I found the magic system rather on the messy side. They are aligned with the elements. Fire and water are rare but why? And where do their powers come from? Is there a story or a legend surrounding them? They also have to make hand movements but then it is said they don’t have to be exact. And some can do it without movements. What are the rules exactly?
The romance moved too quickly unfortunately. I think there was potential there for a good romance but it just moved forward too fast. Where was the real connection being made?
The idea of the king necromancer which I would love to know more of and the ending were interesting. But there wasn’t enough emotional impact for me to truly care about it. There wasn’t enough bond between some of these characters to create the impact the author wanted.
Overall the book was an okay read but couldn’t pull itself away from the typical young adult fantasy. It also needs more world building, especially when it comes to the magical system.
Heir of Illaria is a book I came across on Netgally that stood out to me because of the cover, hello gorgeous, and the mention of a necromancer king in the synopsis. If you don’t know this about me. Necromancing is a thing I find highly interesting but don’t come across too often. So that was an instant need to read for me. Unfortunately the book didn’t quite live up to the expected darkness.
To be honest, the book has a bit of a cliché young adult fantasy going on where the not so special girl finds out she is a princess, heir to the throne and has a special power. Which can be fun when it is filled in well and can manage to twist away from it at some point. Unfortunately it doesn’t quite manage to do that until the very end.
The start to the book, when we get to meet Wilona, feels rushed. We move through things incredibly fast and there is little explanation. Our main character doesn’t put her foot down about any of it and just lets herself get pushed around and accepts it all without any explanation to be honest. It made her feel flat as a character.
In the second half of the book she had a bit more personality about her. I liked how she made it clear she didn’t want to be queen and wanted to get away from that. She slowly grows into the role that a princess needs though and tries to put her foot down to her brother every now and then. She also doesn’t want to be married of. And is vocal about that in her own mind which is great. But doesn’t actually manage to get it out to the person that matters. It then gets so easily resolved for her so she didn’t have to deal with it. Bit of a shame really.
I found the magic system rather on the messy side. They are aligned with the elements. Fire and water are rare but why? And where do their powers come from? Is there a story or a legend surrounding them? They also have to make hand movements but then it is said they don’t have to be exact. And some can do it without movements. What are the rules exactly?
The romance moved too quickly unfortunately. I think there was potential there for a good romance but it just moved forward too fast. Where was the real connection being made?
The idea of the king necromancer which I would love to know more of and the ending were interesting. But there wasn’t enough emotional impact for me to truly care about it. There wasn’t enough bond between some of these characters to create the impact the author wanted.
Overall the book was an okay read but couldn’t pull itself away from the typical young adult fantasy. It also needs more world building, especially when it comes to the magical system.
September 9, 2017
I was so excited to read Heir of Illaria and the verdict is... it was decent, but no more than that. I put way too much stock in the premise of this book. Queens!! necromancy!! Magic!! Alas, the writing hit me rather flat. I admit I DNFed it a while back, but decided to give it another try. It wasn't amazing but definitely not DNF worthy.
It's hard for me to pin point exactly what it was for me that didn't do it. The writing wasn't terrible, the characters weren't annoying, yet somehow, it all still felt very flat to me. Maybe it's that we really aren't give a good history of the world other than a sentence or two. Maybe it's that our main character and her love interest literally go for hate to love so fast I could have gotten whiplash. Maybe it's that the MC accepts everything presented to her rather easily and the struggle isn't described well or in depth. I couldn't get into this world. In the end, after writing this review, I think what it comes down to is the lack of information.
I think Heir of Illaria is a solid solid read for those getting into the fantasy/romance genre, but a well seasoned patron may find it lacking. I believe I would have really enjoyed this book in my middle school or high school years. The characters can be funny, the main character likeable enough, and the struggles of coming of age something people in their teens can relate to.
It's hard for me to pin point exactly what it was for me that didn't do it. The writing wasn't terrible, the characters weren't annoying, yet somehow, it all still felt very flat to me. Maybe it's that we really aren't give a good history of the world other than a sentence or two. Maybe it's that our main character and her love interest literally go for hate to love so fast I could have gotten whiplash. Maybe it's that the MC accepts everything presented to her rather easily and the struggle isn't described well or in depth. I couldn't get into this world. In the end, after writing this review, I think what it comes down to is the lack of information.
I think Heir of Illaria is a solid solid read for those getting into the fantasy/romance genre, but a well seasoned patron may find it lacking. I believe I would have really enjoyed this book in my middle school or high school years. The characters can be funny, the main character likeable enough, and the struggles of coming of age something people in their teens can relate to.
December 10, 2018
Received from Netgalley for a review
As soon as I started this book I knew it was going to just be a mash up of all of the possible YA tropes: chosen one, lost princess, supernatural powers, most rare power in the world, instant mastery of said power with 3 days training, instant affinity with knife throwing and bow and arrow, hate to love trope which is also a forbidden romance, insta-love pretty much. Uuuuugh. Just thank gosh it was a quick read. For someone who doesn't read much YA, this would be a good read, but for me, a seasoned experience YA reader, this just didn't fit the bill. I'll still finish off the trilogy, as I have them, but no promises..
As soon as I started this book I knew it was going to just be a mash up of all of the possible YA tropes: chosen one, lost princess, supernatural powers, most rare power in the world, instant mastery of said power with 3 days training, instant affinity with knife throwing and bow and arrow, hate to love trope which is also a forbidden romance, insta-love pretty much. Uuuuugh. Just thank gosh it was a quick read. For someone who doesn't read much YA, this would be a good read, but for me, a seasoned experience YA reader, this just didn't fit the bill. I'll still finish off the trilogy, as I have them, but no promises..
January 9, 2017
I received this ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Heir of Illaria is a magical beginning to a long fantasy series, and I look forward to seeing how the plot and characters develop.
Full review to be posted on thebookshelfclub.co.uk
Heir of Illaria is a magical beginning to a long fantasy series, and I look forward to seeing how the plot and characters develop.
Full review to be posted on thebookshelfclub.co.uk
February 3, 2017
I received this book as an ARC in exchange for my review.
I thought that Heir of Illaria was a wonderful book.
A story is woven about a young woman who goes from insignificant country life to finding out she is a princess who was hidden away from the evil king who took over her father’s kingdom. The pace is wonderful to keep the book moving as she joins a band of rebels and struggles with who to trust as she trains to control her newly discovered magic. I also thought the characters were developed wonderfully and I found them very believable and endearing.
The book was very engaging and I was swept away into the kingdom of Illaria as the characters plotted against the Necromancer King. I adore books with magic users so it was fun for me to read the parts about how their magic works and what she can do with hers.
This book is part of a series that is still being written, and I am so excited for the next book!
I thought that Heir of Illaria was a wonderful book.
A story is woven about a young woman who goes from insignificant country life to finding out she is a princess who was hidden away from the evil king who took over her father’s kingdom. The pace is wonderful to keep the book moving as she joins a band of rebels and struggles with who to trust as she trains to control her newly discovered magic. I also thought the characters were developed wonderfully and I found them very believable and endearing.
The book was very engaging and I was swept away into the kingdom of Illaria as the characters plotted against the Necromancer King. I adore books with magic users so it was fun for me to read the parts about how their magic works and what she can do with hers.
This book is part of a series that is still being written, and I am so excited for the next book!
February 10, 2017
This book was something I got to read because of an advanced reader copy, and I'm really glad I had the opportunity. This is a good book and is definitely worth reading. The plot is interesting, and once I got about 50 pages in, it was hard to put down, which is always something good when it comes to reading.
January 18, 2017
First off, What a wonderful way to truly start a writing career! The book has a wonderful character development and such an intensity that cannot be explained other than to say that it had me reading through all hours of the night! I am honored to have been able to read by means of the ARC program.
September 14, 2017
Review also on Christina Reads and Blogs
Rating: 3.5
Holy moley, this book jumps into the action in the first few pages. On one hand it took me a while to get an idea of the setting and the main character with so much happening all at once. On the other side, I was immediately intrigued by this book and wanted to know who she was, why the guards came after her, everything. Wilona lives in a village with her grandmother. One day, her home is attacked by the King's guards, but she is saved by Saffron, a member of the White Ravens. After she is rescued, she learns that what she knows about herself isn't true and she is the daughter of the king who ruled Illaria before the Necromancer King killed him.
The world-building was done very well. I understood the locations, the politics of the kingdoms, and the rule of the Guild without having to go back and forth between passages. Part of me wishes some things were explained a bit more when it came to the Guild. Like why do they test the apprentices every three years, but you can only be tested when you turn 18? Why not do it yearly so everyone has a chance when they turn 18?
The characters were all pretty well developed. Wilona is unsure of herself, since she didn't know before the attack that she was a princess. She's determined to learn whatever she can and work hard. I didn't really get how she was so good at everything she tried with a short amount of practice. Everyone would say it was in her blood, but how do you get princess etiquette and archery ability through genetics?
From the beginning, I loved Saffron. Honestly there was a relationship I was hoping would happen with her, but unfortunately, it did not. She deserves more! She's a clever fighter and a strong soldier. Saffron helps Wilona in any way she can. Speaking of Saffron deserving more, I seriously did not like Max. He seemed off from the first moment we meet him, and from there he just gets worse. He doesn't see Wilona as family, just as a bargaining chip. I suppose it all makes sense later on in the book, but I wish I could have felt some kind of sympathy for him in the beginning. Ashton also kind of bothered me. He didn't like Wilona in the beginning any more than she did him, but then his feelings changed quickly into something more. Then he was against their relationship progressing, then he wanted it to like a chapter later.
However, the pacing is a bit fast and I wasn't sure why things changed so quickly for the character or just the plot. I wish things went slower sometimes, particularly with the interactions Wilona had with some characters. She was trained to be a princess in three days, but one of the characters said it seemed like she'd been practicing for at least a month. For someone who had been living in a remote town without anyone to really hang out with, it didn't seem realistic. The same with her relationship with Ashton. Once she met him, she disliked him and his haughty attitude, which I understood. But then after two days of being together, she got along with him a lot better without any event happening that would make me think they'd get closer as a result.
Another thing that bothered me was that it seemed like every other chapter has the line "Something was wrong" in it. I was fine with the things going wrong, but it seemed like she was always aware that something was going to happen. It was never a surprise; her instincts kind of ruined that for her.
Overall, this was an interesting read and I'd like to read the sequel to see what happens next, especially since it ended on a cliffhanger. If you want a fantasy book with magical powers, a necromancer as a villain, and great worldbuilding, I recommend Heir of Illaria.
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ARC provided via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
Rating: 3.5
Holy moley, this book jumps into the action in the first few pages. On one hand it took me a while to get an idea of the setting and the main character with so much happening all at once. On the other side, I was immediately intrigued by this book and wanted to know who she was, why the guards came after her, everything. Wilona lives in a village with her grandmother. One day, her home is attacked by the King's guards, but she is saved by Saffron, a member of the White Ravens. After she is rescued, she learns that what she knows about herself isn't true and she is the daughter of the king who ruled Illaria before the Necromancer King killed him.
The world-building was done very well. I understood the locations, the politics of the kingdoms, and the rule of the Guild without having to go back and forth between passages. Part of me wishes some things were explained a bit more when it came to the Guild. Like why do they test the apprentices every three years, but you can only be tested when you turn 18? Why not do it yearly so everyone has a chance when they turn 18?
The characters were all pretty well developed. Wilona is unsure of herself, since she didn't know before the attack that she was a princess. She's determined to learn whatever she can and work hard. I didn't really get how she was so good at everything she tried with a short amount of practice. Everyone would say it was in her blood, but how do you get princess etiquette and archery ability through genetics?
From the beginning, I loved Saffron. Honestly there was a relationship I was hoping would happen with her, but unfortunately, it did not. She deserves more! She's a clever fighter and a strong soldier. Saffron helps Wilona in any way she can. Speaking of Saffron deserving more, I seriously did not like Max. He seemed off from the first moment we meet him, and from there he just gets worse. He doesn't see Wilona as family, just as a bargaining chip. I suppose it all makes sense later on in the book, but I wish I could have felt some kind of sympathy for him in the beginning. Ashton also kind of bothered me. He didn't like Wilona in the beginning any more than she did him, but then his feelings changed quickly into something more. Then he was against their relationship progressing, then he wanted it to like a chapter later.
However, the pacing is a bit fast and I wasn't sure why things changed so quickly for the character or just the plot. I wish things went slower sometimes, particularly with the interactions Wilona had with some characters. She was trained to be a princess in three days, but one of the characters said it seemed like she'd been practicing for at least a month. For someone who had been living in a remote town without anyone to really hang out with, it didn't seem realistic. The same with her relationship with Ashton. Once she met him, she disliked him and his haughty attitude, which I understood. But then after two days of being together, she got along with him a lot better without any event happening that would make me think they'd get closer as a result.
Another thing that bothered me was that it seemed like every other chapter has the line "Something was wrong" in it. I was fine with the things going wrong, but it seemed like she was always aware that something was going to happen. It was never a surprise; her instincts kind of ruined that for her.
Overall, this was an interesting read and I'd like to read the sequel to see what happens next, especially since it ended on a cliffhanger. If you want a fantasy book with magical powers, a necromancer as a villain, and great worldbuilding, I recommend Heir of Illaria.
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ARC provided via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
January 26, 2018
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What fate could be worse than death? In Illaria, the Necromancer King takes over the bodies of his dead enemies, forcing them to slavery. This is a kind of dark sorcery, fitting to his cruel and dark personality.
Wilona has lived her whole life with her seamstress grandmother in a small town, never suspecting that her fate was far greater than she could have ever imagined. One day, the king's soldiers appear and kill her grandmother, who begs Wilona to flee. With the help of a mysterious saviour, Wilona is able to escape, but her grandmother still dies.
With her life in shambles, Wilona is introduced to the White Ravens, a rebel group against the evil king. Still, she doesn't understand why the guards were trying to kill her. Soon enough, Wilona learns that she is, in fact, the daughter of the previous king, who was murdered by his brother. She was sent into hiding with a servant to protect her life and, when her parents were killed, there she stayed.
Now, Wilona has to assume her role as the heir of a country at war as well as develop the magical skills she never knew she had.
Wilona's journey is a very powerful one. Never had I thought, going into this book, that the story would be so captivating. This is the tale of a strong girl that, after realising her whole life was a lie, still had the strength to push forward, be brave and set an example for every young adult out in the world.
A storyline that makes supporting characters shine is also something that makes this book stand out from others in the same genre. Even the smallest character has something important, strength is built trough unity and training. There are also values of sacrificing yourself for others and how family ties are not always what they seem, sometimes, a feeling is more important than blood. By the end, I start seeing signs of how envy and anger can destroy a person.
With fantastical adventures and peril, this is certainly a book that keeps the reader on the edge of his seat, making his heart beat faster at every second. You will laugh, you will cry and you will be as confused as Wilona sometimes. Because of this, I advise this book to everyone, since I believe it contains a little bit of everything.
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What fate could be worse than death? In Illaria, the Necromancer King takes over the bodies of his dead enemies, forcing them to slavery. This is a kind of dark sorcery, fitting to his cruel and dark personality.
Wilona has lived her whole life with her seamstress grandmother in a small town, never suspecting that her fate was far greater than she could have ever imagined. One day, the king's soldiers appear and kill her grandmother, who begs Wilona to flee. With the help of a mysterious saviour, Wilona is able to escape, but her grandmother still dies.
With her life in shambles, Wilona is introduced to the White Ravens, a rebel group against the evil king. Still, she doesn't understand why the guards were trying to kill her. Soon enough, Wilona learns that she is, in fact, the daughter of the previous king, who was murdered by his brother. She was sent into hiding with a servant to protect her life and, when her parents were killed, there she stayed.
Now, Wilona has to assume her role as the heir of a country at war as well as develop the magical skills she never knew she had.
Wilona's journey is a very powerful one. Never had I thought, going into this book, that the story would be so captivating. This is the tale of a strong girl that, after realising her whole life was a lie, still had the strength to push forward, be brave and set an example for every young adult out in the world.
A storyline that makes supporting characters shine is also something that makes this book stand out from others in the same genre. Even the smallest character has something important, strength is built trough unity and training. There are also values of sacrificing yourself for others and how family ties are not always what they seem, sometimes, a feeling is more important than blood. By the end, I start seeing signs of how envy and anger can destroy a person.
With fantastical adventures and peril, this is certainly a book that keeps the reader on the edge of his seat, making his heart beat faster at every second. You will laugh, you will cry and you will be as confused as Wilona sometimes. Because of this, I advise this book to everyone, since I believe it contains a little bit of everything.
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August 8, 2017
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Rating: 3 stars
Heir of Illaria is everything you can expect from a YA fantasy book. In a new, unique fantasy world, our female protagonist has always lived her life as a normal villager until a certain event. She turns into this special snowflake and has to save the world. Oh, and of course a love interest appears as well. We can't forget the romance.
I personally am a sucker for clicheness (sometimes), which is why I did enjoy this first installment. However, I can see lots of people becoming annoyed while reading this book because of the predictability of the storyline.
Moreover, the characters and romance weren't the best written ones but frankly, I could oversee its flaws and still enjoy reading about them.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read but it was nothing special.
Rating: 3 stars
Heir of Illaria is everything you can expect from a YA fantasy book. In a new, unique fantasy world, our female protagonist has always lived her life as a normal villager until a certain event. She turns into this special snowflake and has to save the world. Oh, and of course a love interest appears as well. We can't forget the romance.
I personally am a sucker for clicheness (sometimes), which is why I did enjoy this first installment. However, I can see lots of people becoming annoyed while reading this book because of the predictability of the storyline.
Moreover, the characters and romance weren't the best written ones but frankly, I could oversee its flaws and still enjoy reading about them.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read but it was nothing special.
July 23, 2017
A stunning must read a book series. I am a grown woman and I really think there is a niche missing with books. This is technically a YA book. Don't let that fool you aside from the snippets of new love there is a real meat and bones story here. One that can't be missed. The only part of the book that was subpar to me was the budding romance of our heroine. Typical and, for me, it was like the author took off running through hot coals to get it started...it is not worth downgrading the book it's just a little wrinkle that does well working itself out. I think this book and the series is just as good as any of the best ones out there.
November 8, 2017
Well I usually will read anything tha t has to do with necromancy but this sort of fell short for me. It just wasn't scary or twisted enough and some times I was completely lost as to what was going on. It has the potential to be an amazing book, it just needs a few tweaks.
September 30, 2022
Book Review
Title: Heir of Illaria (Illaria #1)
Author: Dyan Chick
Genre: YA/Fantasy
Rating: *****
Review: I have heard about this series for a while but never picked it up, after reading the intriguing synopsis and I decided now was the time. The opening to Heir of Illaria was amazing and definitely opens the novel with a bang. We are introduced to our protagonist Wilona, who lives with her grandmother believing that her parents are dead and all she has left is an Ouroboros necklace which she is instructed to keep hidden at all times. One night she is out picking berries when she is cornered by two guards who serve the necromancer King, but nothing comes of this until she returns home. She informs her grandmother about the guards and she is going to tell Wilona something when they are attacked by royal guards but a woman appears and fights off the guards. She introduces herself as Saffron and she wears a bracelet identical to Wilona’s necklace and is going to get her to safety and I have a feeling she is from the White Ravens, the organisation the guard mentioned.
After escaping with Saffron they end up at a safe house which is the home of Lady Genevieve. It is here that Saffron explains that Wilona is the daughter of King Augustus who was overthrown by the current King and the White Ravens have been protecting her since the death of her parents. She goes on to explain that her grandmother wasn’t her grandmother but her governess and that her real name is Elisabetta, although her parents called her Etta. Wilona can she herself in the tapestry of her father in his final battle and Saffron also tells her as long as the necromancer King is in power she is a danger to him and a price will be on her head, in order to prepare her for what is to come they need help. I’d like to note here that Wilona/Etta’s reactions during this are very realistic as they bounce back and forth between determination, grief, numbness, and helplessness which is how most of us would react in the same situation.
As we approach the ¼ mark in the novel, Saffron and Wilona spend three days with Lady Genevieve and in these three days Wilona gets a crash course on being a Princess, learning everything from how to walk and eat correctly to interacting with other royals for the sole purpose of securing the White Ravens more allies in the inevitable battle that is to come with the necromancer King. When they leave Lady Genevieve’s home they are heading for another friend’s home Sir Henry to teach Wilona diplomacy before heading to meet with the Ravens themselves. Wilona also learns about different people within the Ravens and the lengths the King will go to in order to be unchallenged and Wilona is a threat he can’t afford. With Sir Henry, Wilona begins learning more and more about the political side of being a royal but she has made it clear that she doesn’t want to be a leader and she suspects the Ravens might be planning to marry her off which she isn’t ready for. But before that she learns she is going to meet with the Kings of Sardinia and Gallia to try and secure alliance with them which she doesn’t feel prepared for but she doesn’t have a choice. Gallia is also where her mother was born and her ‘grandmother’ taught her the language of that country meaning that might be the easier visit. However, I have a feeling that Wilona is going to struggle with the fact she has to be Princess Etta all the time now but that person just doesn’t feel right to her whereas Wilona does.
As we cross the ¼ mark in the novel, Wilona and Saffron are preparing to leave Sir Henry and he warns Wilona not to trust anyone and to rely on only herself and this message comes back to her when she enters to home of the White Ravens. She meets their leader Max, who claims to be her brother although he was born before their parents were married meaning he isn’t eligible to take the throne but I have a feeling that is who the Ravens are aiming to rule the Kingdom not Etta. Max is also a member of the Order of the Dragon, meaning he is a sorcerer who can control fire, the only thing that can hold off the Reapers and he is in a secret relationship with Saffron. Etta immediately doesn’t warn to Max and has a bad feeling about him although she pushes it to the back of her mind because she is exhausted but already we can see members of the community wanting to defer to her because she is the true heir. Ashton is another sorcerer who is chosen to be her guide around the camp and she isn’t dislikes him because of his attitude but when Max tests her for aptitude in magic and she passes Ashton is designated to train her as Max can’t be around her long without getting frustrated. Over the next couple of days Etta learns both she and Max will be in political marriages which she doesn’t want and I have a feeling Etta is going to forge alliances without offering herself as a prize and somehow surpass Max in her mastery of magic or raw ability.
As we approach the halfway mark in the novel, Etta is trying to find out which element her magic aligns with as both Max and Ashton’s magic aligns with fire but she is struggling. Ashton tells her adults find it hard but after a few drinks it is easier so he sneaks her out for a drink where they learn her magic is aligned with water but they attacked. Ashton uses his magic to protect her but Max isn’t happy and basically tells her she has no business learning to fight as they are going to marry her off as soon as they can and the next day to heads out to try and set up an engagement. However, in the five days he is away Saffron agrees to train her and she manages to learn she shares her father’s natural ability in archery and knife throwing. Etta begins training but it is revealed that there is a traitor inside the Ravens and Reapers attack the camp but between her and Ashton they get rid of them, although I believe it was more Etta as she unleashes a large burst of magic. Her brother tells her that she is going to be moved for three weeks before heading to Sardinia where she will marry the Prince so she can’t get involved with Ashton despite the fact she is falling in love with him but I have the feeling she isn’t going to do what her brother wants. Master Edwards tells her that the necklace she carries marks her as the true heir as does her magic as the last person to wear that seal was her great-grandfather who was also the last water sorcerer.
As we cross into the second half of the novel, Etta is being sent to the sorcerer trials with Saffron and Ashton as it protected by many magical enchantments so Etta should be safe there. However, before they even get there another group of Reapers attacks them and together Ashton and Etta fight them off. After arriving at the trials Etta meet Ashton’s friend Celeste and is instantly jealous of her but this is overshadowed when she meets Master Flanders whose own ability lets him see what element other sorcerers are aligned with. He tells her magic is actually called artic fire and it is extremely rare as water sorcerers are the rarest of all. In fact, the only family known to have a water sorcerer in every generation was the royal family, the same one Etta came from. He also offers to help her control her magic so she is less likely to pass out after using it. During her training session with Master Flanders he tells her that she is stronger than her brother and he should be afraid, coupled with her dreams of being Queen of Illaria, Etta has decided she isn’t going to marry the Prince Max arranged for her but she is going to fight with her own power and marry for love just like her parents.
As we approach the ¾ mark in the novel, the trials are attacked and at first everyone wants to get Etta out of there but knowing her power is stronger than her brother she is determined to stay and fight and it is her magic that turns the tide of the battle with her lightning strikes. However, people still die in the encounter and afterwards Master Flanders takes Etta and Saffron to a safe place to tell Saffron that Max shouldn’t take the throne but Etta as her water alignment means that she is the only one that can stop the Darkness. The Darkness is seen as a fairytale but older people like Master Flanders remember the signs of the Darkness coming and it is beginning again and Saffron has to agree that she is better to take the throne than Max but this may be fuelled by her feelings for him as he would be able to marry her if Etta was Queen. Etta’s plan comes full circle when the Prince calls off their engagement as he has married in secret as their Kingdom has allied with the necromancer King, which makes Max furious and he is even more angry when Etta reveals she can create artic fire the only thing that can stop the Reapers. A new plan is forged for them to attack the King while he thinks they are weak and to show them that the true heir to the Kingdom is unafraid. After some training she is able to control her artic fire and produce it a lot quicker than before and she also has numerous other spells in her arsenal now she is officially Master Flanders apprentice and finally the day has arrived for the plan to be carried out.
As we cross into the final section of the novel, Etta realises that Max has lied to her and quickly returns to join the battle at a critical moment when no one else can use their magic. Etta gets rid of all the Reapers and the King makes an appearance asking Etta to join him for dinner at his castle even offering her to bring a guest but not her brother. When she recounts the battle she declares she is taking Ashton to the dinner where they learn the truth about Max and his heritage, the king offers Etta to rule at his side but she refuses knowing now she is going to claim the throne for herself as it rightfully is. When they return she confronts Max who confirms what the King told her but he won’t work with her as he wants the throne for himself and take his few followers with him but over a hundred more as their to support their Queen. Overall, Heir of Illaria was a rollercoaster journey and I honestly can’t wait to read the rest of the series as soon as I can.
Title: Heir of Illaria (Illaria #1)
Author: Dyan Chick
Genre: YA/Fantasy
Rating: *****
Review: I have heard about this series for a while but never picked it up, after reading the intriguing synopsis and I decided now was the time. The opening to Heir of Illaria was amazing and definitely opens the novel with a bang. We are introduced to our protagonist Wilona, who lives with her grandmother believing that her parents are dead and all she has left is an Ouroboros necklace which she is instructed to keep hidden at all times. One night she is out picking berries when she is cornered by two guards who serve the necromancer King, but nothing comes of this until she returns home. She informs her grandmother about the guards and she is going to tell Wilona something when they are attacked by royal guards but a woman appears and fights off the guards. She introduces herself as Saffron and she wears a bracelet identical to Wilona’s necklace and is going to get her to safety and I have a feeling she is from the White Ravens, the organisation the guard mentioned.
After escaping with Saffron they end up at a safe house which is the home of Lady Genevieve. It is here that Saffron explains that Wilona is the daughter of King Augustus who was overthrown by the current King and the White Ravens have been protecting her since the death of her parents. She goes on to explain that her grandmother wasn’t her grandmother but her governess and that her real name is Elisabetta, although her parents called her Etta. Wilona can she herself in the tapestry of her father in his final battle and Saffron also tells her as long as the necromancer King is in power she is a danger to him and a price will be on her head, in order to prepare her for what is to come they need help. I’d like to note here that Wilona/Etta’s reactions during this are very realistic as they bounce back and forth between determination, grief, numbness, and helplessness which is how most of us would react in the same situation.
As we approach the ¼ mark in the novel, Saffron and Wilona spend three days with Lady Genevieve and in these three days Wilona gets a crash course on being a Princess, learning everything from how to walk and eat correctly to interacting with other royals for the sole purpose of securing the White Ravens more allies in the inevitable battle that is to come with the necromancer King. When they leave Lady Genevieve’s home they are heading for another friend’s home Sir Henry to teach Wilona diplomacy before heading to meet with the Ravens themselves. Wilona also learns about different people within the Ravens and the lengths the King will go to in order to be unchallenged and Wilona is a threat he can’t afford. With Sir Henry, Wilona begins learning more and more about the political side of being a royal but she has made it clear that she doesn’t want to be a leader and she suspects the Ravens might be planning to marry her off which she isn’t ready for. But before that she learns she is going to meet with the Kings of Sardinia and Gallia to try and secure alliance with them which she doesn’t feel prepared for but she doesn’t have a choice. Gallia is also where her mother was born and her ‘grandmother’ taught her the language of that country meaning that might be the easier visit. However, I have a feeling that Wilona is going to struggle with the fact she has to be Princess Etta all the time now but that person just doesn’t feel right to her whereas Wilona does.
As we cross the ¼ mark in the novel, Wilona and Saffron are preparing to leave Sir Henry and he warns Wilona not to trust anyone and to rely on only herself and this message comes back to her when she enters to home of the White Ravens. She meets their leader Max, who claims to be her brother although he was born before their parents were married meaning he isn’t eligible to take the throne but I have a feeling that is who the Ravens are aiming to rule the Kingdom not Etta. Max is also a member of the Order of the Dragon, meaning he is a sorcerer who can control fire, the only thing that can hold off the Reapers and he is in a secret relationship with Saffron. Etta immediately doesn’t warn to Max and has a bad feeling about him although she pushes it to the back of her mind because she is exhausted but already we can see members of the community wanting to defer to her because she is the true heir. Ashton is another sorcerer who is chosen to be her guide around the camp and she isn’t dislikes him because of his attitude but when Max tests her for aptitude in magic and she passes Ashton is designated to train her as Max can’t be around her long without getting frustrated. Over the next couple of days Etta learns both she and Max will be in political marriages which she doesn’t want and I have a feeling Etta is going to forge alliances without offering herself as a prize and somehow surpass Max in her mastery of magic or raw ability.
As we approach the halfway mark in the novel, Etta is trying to find out which element her magic aligns with as both Max and Ashton’s magic aligns with fire but she is struggling. Ashton tells her adults find it hard but after a few drinks it is easier so he sneaks her out for a drink where they learn her magic is aligned with water but they attacked. Ashton uses his magic to protect her but Max isn’t happy and basically tells her she has no business learning to fight as they are going to marry her off as soon as they can and the next day to heads out to try and set up an engagement. However, in the five days he is away Saffron agrees to train her and she manages to learn she shares her father’s natural ability in archery and knife throwing. Etta begins training but it is revealed that there is a traitor inside the Ravens and Reapers attack the camp but between her and Ashton they get rid of them, although I believe it was more Etta as she unleashes a large burst of magic. Her brother tells her that she is going to be moved for three weeks before heading to Sardinia where she will marry the Prince so she can’t get involved with Ashton despite the fact she is falling in love with him but I have the feeling she isn’t going to do what her brother wants. Master Edwards tells her that the necklace she carries marks her as the true heir as does her magic as the last person to wear that seal was her great-grandfather who was also the last water sorcerer.
As we cross into the second half of the novel, Etta is being sent to the sorcerer trials with Saffron and Ashton as it protected by many magical enchantments so Etta should be safe there. However, before they even get there another group of Reapers attacks them and together Ashton and Etta fight them off. After arriving at the trials Etta meet Ashton’s friend Celeste and is instantly jealous of her but this is overshadowed when she meets Master Flanders whose own ability lets him see what element other sorcerers are aligned with. He tells her magic is actually called artic fire and it is extremely rare as water sorcerers are the rarest of all. In fact, the only family known to have a water sorcerer in every generation was the royal family, the same one Etta came from. He also offers to help her control her magic so she is less likely to pass out after using it. During her training session with Master Flanders he tells her that she is stronger than her brother and he should be afraid, coupled with her dreams of being Queen of Illaria, Etta has decided she isn’t going to marry the Prince Max arranged for her but she is going to fight with her own power and marry for love just like her parents.
As we approach the ¾ mark in the novel, the trials are attacked and at first everyone wants to get Etta out of there but knowing her power is stronger than her brother she is determined to stay and fight and it is her magic that turns the tide of the battle with her lightning strikes. However, people still die in the encounter and afterwards Master Flanders takes Etta and Saffron to a safe place to tell Saffron that Max shouldn’t take the throne but Etta as her water alignment means that she is the only one that can stop the Darkness. The Darkness is seen as a fairytale but older people like Master Flanders remember the signs of the Darkness coming and it is beginning again and Saffron has to agree that she is better to take the throne than Max but this may be fuelled by her feelings for him as he would be able to marry her if Etta was Queen. Etta’s plan comes full circle when the Prince calls off their engagement as he has married in secret as their Kingdom has allied with the necromancer King, which makes Max furious and he is even more angry when Etta reveals she can create artic fire the only thing that can stop the Reapers. A new plan is forged for them to attack the King while he thinks they are weak and to show them that the true heir to the Kingdom is unafraid. After some training she is able to control her artic fire and produce it a lot quicker than before and she also has numerous other spells in her arsenal now she is officially Master Flanders apprentice and finally the day has arrived for the plan to be carried out.
As we cross into the final section of the novel, Etta realises that Max has lied to her and quickly returns to join the battle at a critical moment when no one else can use their magic. Etta gets rid of all the Reapers and the King makes an appearance asking Etta to join him for dinner at his castle even offering her to bring a guest but not her brother. When she recounts the battle she declares she is taking Ashton to the dinner where they learn the truth about Max and his heritage, the king offers Etta to rule at his side but she refuses knowing now she is going to claim the throne for herself as it rightfully is. When they return she confronts Max who confirms what the King told her but he won’t work with her as he wants the throne for himself and take his few followers with him but over a hundred more as their to support their Queen. Overall, Heir of Illaria was a rollercoaster journey and I honestly can’t wait to read the rest of the series as soon as I can.
October 16, 2017
Number of pages: 265
Number of times read (including the time before this review): 1
Rating (out of five stars): 1
Release date: January 23rd 2017
*Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for providing a copy in exchange for a review. My opinions are honest and my own.
I’ve become incredibly sceptical of ARCs, especially fantasy ones. With Heir of Illaria, the synopsis is so incredibly vague that I had no idea what to expect, but I knew by the end of chapter 1 it wasn’t going to be good.
The author really didn’t leave enough time for things to happen. One chapter would end with Wilona incredibly angry with the love interest (whose name escapes me), and the next would start with them making out. Another chapter would end with them deciding they need a plan, and the next would start with the plan being put into action. It also wasn’t as if weeks went by off the page. The next chapter would often be set on the same/ following day.
The characters were all one dimensional. I feel like the author built Wilona’s character around the line “I don’t want to rule”, but didn’t go much further than that. The other characters weren’t very distinct either, as evident by the fact that I can no longer remember any of their names.
The plot is your basic YA fantasy plot: girl living in poverty learns she’s the super special heir to the throne/ saviour of the world. There’s absolutely nothing new here. The Necromancer King aspect could have been interesting, but he really wasn’t a big part of the book.
The dialogue was so stilted and strange it felt like the author had never had a conversation with another person. The book had an extraordinary amount of dialogue as well, so it was a rather important aspect of the book.
Overall, Heir of Illaria wasn’t anything new or near good enough to make me forget it wasn’t anything new, earning it 1 star out of 5.
You can read more of my reviews on my blog.
Number of times read (including the time before this review): 1
Rating (out of five stars): 1
Release date: January 23rd 2017
*Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for providing a copy in exchange for a review. My opinions are honest and my own.
I’ve become incredibly sceptical of ARCs, especially fantasy ones. With Heir of Illaria, the synopsis is so incredibly vague that I had no idea what to expect, but I knew by the end of chapter 1 it wasn’t going to be good.
The author really didn’t leave enough time for things to happen. One chapter would end with Wilona incredibly angry with the love interest (whose name escapes me), and the next would start with them making out. Another chapter would end with them deciding they need a plan, and the next would start with the plan being put into action. It also wasn’t as if weeks went by off the page. The next chapter would often be set on the same/ following day.
The characters were all one dimensional. I feel like the author built Wilona’s character around the line “I don’t want to rule”, but didn’t go much further than that. The other characters weren’t very distinct either, as evident by the fact that I can no longer remember any of their names.
The plot is your basic YA fantasy plot: girl living in poverty learns she’s the super special heir to the throne/ saviour of the world. There’s absolutely nothing new here. The Necromancer King aspect could have been interesting, but he really wasn’t a big part of the book.
The dialogue was so stilted and strange it felt like the author had never had a conversation with another person. The book had an extraordinary amount of dialogue as well, so it was a rather important aspect of the book.
Overall, Heir of Illaria wasn’t anything new or near good enough to make me forget it wasn’t anything new, earning it 1 star out of 5.
You can read more of my reviews on my blog.
March 4, 2017
Heir of Illaria is the first in its series. It's about Wilona, who is a hidden princess, with the ability to perform magic - I love magic and Stephanie's review, was what drew me to this book.
The book had it's twist and turns, but I especially loved how strong Wilona was portrayed, despite all she's being through, she did not cave under the pressure. From how she dealt with the drastic changes in her life right from the beginning of the book and fighting for what is right, I feel the story will only get better as it grows.
But, is it just me, the story felt a bit rushed and the ending was a good one, but I didn't really like it at the same time, I feel it could have been better. I hope the second book, delivers more magic and answers a lot more questions, that I have brewing in my head now.
Would I recommend this book to people? Definitely, but only after it has three books, cause it will be more filling and satisfying to read than only reading the first book I think.
3 and a half stars
The book had it's twist and turns, but I especially loved how strong Wilona was portrayed, despite all she's being through, she did not cave under the pressure. From how she dealt with the drastic changes in her life right from the beginning of the book and fighting for what is right, I feel the story will only get better as it grows.
But, is it just me, the story felt a bit rushed and the ending was a good one, but I didn't really like it at the same time, I feel it could have been better. I hope the second book, delivers more magic and answers a lot more questions, that I have brewing in my head now.
Would I recommend this book to people? Definitely, but only after it has three books, cause it will be more filling and satisfying to read than only reading the first book I think.
3 and a half stars
March 5, 2017
A compelling young adult read! I appreciated the strength of the young female protagonist. Hints of Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, and Lord of the Rings. I can't wait for the next book in the series!
September 16, 2017
I tried. I really did try to get through this book but I couldn't.
I would sit down to read it but then I'd find I had set it down to browse pinterest, instagram or another site.
I was Procrastinating.
Procrastinating over reading a book...that's a first for me.
The writing is basic; 'she did this, she said that.' which is fine for a rough draft. There is no excitement even in that action scenes. It is all so predictable.
The worst part that made me had to stop, to not even want to continue the story was the lack of the character's grieving. You can tell straight away that the Author has not know any pain or loss by how her main character acts at the loss of her Grandmother, the only family she has ever known murdered in front of her...
I'm happy the Author has never know such pain; I would never wish it on anyone. But as someone who has known it...its frustrating and even insulting in a way to see a character so unmoved by the murder.
Wilona, our main protagonist is a young and naive girl warned to stay away from the king and his guards but as fate would have it she gets interrogated by a few guards after picking berries one morning. She rushes home to her grandma with an empty basket but the guards ended up following her to take her life. Why they didn't just end her life on the road when they had her? Because plot... I quickly knew how this was going to play out. The grandma sacrifices herself and an unknown stranger saves Wilona just in time. The fight between the guard and the stranger was boring and predictable.
The stranger takes Wilona out of the small town to another nearby, I think that author intended for the travel to be longer, a few days time, but it sounded like it wasn't even two hours. Because after the "ride" Wilona is relaying on Saffron (the stranger).
They get to a Ladys home in a city and here is where I couldn't continue.. Wilona is in a bath tub getting cleaned up, here is where one would generally input the raw emotions that overwhelm a person after a loss, here is where the author can really shine the light on character growth and here is where the readers can connect with Wilona..she didn't do that. Wilona should act one of two ways and feel only one thing. Wilona should be battling with 'My grandma would want me to go on' to 'whats the point? She is not here' I would have had my character put herself under that water and not want to resurface until her lungs burned and her mind screamed. She would not be wondering about what a symbol meant. Everything would be pointless now. She is alone in life. Everything is pointless. She needs to mourn. It should be RAW and UGLY and TRUE. But that didn't happen, she acts like she lost a pet fish not her only family member. After her wash up she is dressed neatly and looks overall...nice. Proper. But she should look like she doesn't care. Her hair should be a dripping mop, soaking the dress, her eyes red and puffed, her expression a mix of pure misery and numbness. She should of dropped into the chair and curled into a ball and not be hungry...not feel anything besides a gaping hole tearing her apart...but no she is hungry and curious, and wants answers. I would like to suggest the author pick up a psychology book...
Overall this book could be good for a kid around 10 years old but I can't say for certain since I did not finish this book. I couldn't finish it.
*I received this copy from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review*
I would sit down to read it but then I'd find I had set it down to browse pinterest, instagram or another site.
I was Procrastinating.
Procrastinating over reading a book...that's a first for me.
The writing is basic; 'she did this, she said that.' which is fine for a rough draft. There is no excitement even in that action scenes. It is all so predictable.
The worst part that made me had to stop, to not even want to continue the story was the lack of the character's grieving. You can tell straight away that the Author has not know any pain or loss by how her main character acts at the loss of her Grandmother, the only family she has ever known murdered in front of her...
I'm happy the Author has never know such pain; I would never wish it on anyone. But as someone who has known it...its frustrating and even insulting in a way to see a character so unmoved by the murder.
Wilona, our main protagonist is a young and naive girl warned to stay away from the king and his guards but as fate would have it she gets interrogated by a few guards after picking berries one morning. She rushes home to her grandma with an empty basket but the guards ended up following her to take her life. Why they didn't just end her life on the road when they had her? Because plot... I quickly knew how this was going to play out. The grandma sacrifices herself and an unknown stranger saves Wilona just in time. The fight between the guard and the stranger was boring and predictable.
The stranger takes Wilona out of the small town to another nearby, I think that author intended for the travel to be longer, a few days time, but it sounded like it wasn't even two hours. Because after the "ride" Wilona is relaying on Saffron (the stranger).
They get to a Ladys home in a city and here is where I couldn't continue.. Wilona is in a bath tub getting cleaned up, here is where one would generally input the raw emotions that overwhelm a person after a loss, here is where the author can really shine the light on character growth and here is where the readers can connect with Wilona..she didn't do that. Wilona should act one of two ways and feel only one thing. Wilona should be battling with 'My grandma would want me to go on' to 'whats the point? She is not here' I would have had my character put herself under that water and not want to resurface until her lungs burned and her mind screamed. She would not be wondering about what a symbol meant. Everything would be pointless now. She is alone in life. Everything is pointless. She needs to mourn. It should be RAW and UGLY and TRUE. But that didn't happen, she acts like she lost a pet fish not her only family member. After her wash up she is dressed neatly and looks overall...nice. Proper. But she should look like she doesn't care. Her hair should be a dripping mop, soaking the dress, her eyes red and puffed, her expression a mix of pure misery and numbness. She should of dropped into the chair and curled into a ball and not be hungry...not feel anything besides a gaping hole tearing her apart...but no she is hungry and curious, and wants answers. I would like to suggest the author pick up a psychology book...
Overall this book could be good for a kid around 10 years old but I can't say for certain since I did not finish this book. I couldn't finish it.
*I received this copy from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review*
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