First of all, I will start with the aspects of my dislike of this book that are my own fault.
- I saw the three novels packaged together and assumed that they comprised a complete story arc. So when I read this volume, I was expecting the conclusion of a story. That's on me.
- I have a personal distaste for excessive descriptions of battles or physical fights. When folks start describing whose right leg is under someone else's left arm, I start to zone out a bit. A completely personal issue.
- I was suspicious of the first book in this series and fairly antagonistic toward the second. I only read this one because it was already on my Kindle. It might be considered unfair to post a negative review of a book I really had no business reading.
With all that in mind, I found this book the most frustrating out of the three. I don't want to give spoilers, but it seems most of the previously introduced story elements are no longer of much importance but you better duck, cos some new ones are flying straight at you.
Our hero Loren has an ongoing struggle with the idea of killing anyone (mostly because she wants to be Batman), which I thought had a lot of potential as a source of conflict, but unfortunately that potential is squandered on circular arguments and a lack of introspection. Loren seems to think it would be wrong to kill to save her friends' lives (and conveniently always finds a way out of it) but would she kill to save her own? Maybe she will be forced into this dilemma at some point but there have been several pitched battles and it hasn't occurred to her yet.
She is pretty happy to injure folks though, having seemingly never encountered the concept of dying from an injury. She also does not even hesitate slightly about the deaths of the non-human sentient creatures who pop up in increasing numbers in this instalment. Another character points it out to her, and it seems like the kind of philosophical argument that should keep someone with Loren's morals up at night, but it's never mentioned again. (Instead she dwells a lot on the poor sod she left behind in her village in chapter one, book one, who up until now she has had no romantic interest or even honest friendship with - he was obviously in love with her, but she seemed ambivalent verging on active dislike of him.) I also found the sentient-but-dim characterisation of the non-humans a bit concerning, but we haven't got all day, I need to complain about the story arc some more.
I was pretty frustrated by events towards the end of this book. There was a great deal of dithering about whether to trust people in the previous volumes, but that all seems to be set aside, we're just playing it straight now. We know so little about each character's motivation, I was half expecting a dramatic twist. Jordel remains inconsistent about including Loren in his plans, and even about his overall goals, sometimes insisting on extreme prudence, sometimes throwing everyone in danger. Half the time I wasn't sure if he was grooming Loren or preparing her for some big reveal (spoiler: it's neither). He gives away almost no info despite the high stakes, and Loren seems to have given up asking.
Our resident wizard, Xain, is suffering horrific withdrawal and mostly gets little sympathy (however Loren gets over his mass murder in book two pretty quick, all things considered). The kiddos are still around but contribute almost nothing to the plot this time. There is a reasonably good boss fight (suspension of disbelief notwithstanding) and some mild peril while adventuring for Loren (laws of physics notwithstanding), but far too much hanging around chatting about things that didn't appear to move the plot along, before a sort of anticlimactic climax. And again, no spoilers, but the ending suggests that what we have to look to forward to is more of the same - Loren having no idea what's going on or why, having custody of two small but surprisingly articulate children for no reason, and presumably doing some foolish s*** with magestones, despite no longer having the excuse of ignorance.
Look, it's not all bad - it was mostly fast paced enough that I found it kind of a page turner, and there were movements toward exposing some of the lore, which as i said in my review of the last book, seems to exist but remains mostly mysterious to both characters and reader. I read a little about the author, and it seems he was determined to create something different to the tropey cliché fantasy where some farm boy finds out they're the chosen one and embarks on a quest to kill God or whatever. And that is commendable, but sometimes tropes exist for a reason. It's one thing to say - my main character isn't the chosen one, she's just some random girl caught up in things she doesn't understand. That's got tons of potential. But I think it's frustrating for the reader to be three books in and still have no idea what's actually going on or who the enemy is, or even a coherent explanation of the magic system or the political situation. Maybe its just been a while since I've read straight up fantasy and I'm expecting too much? I don't know a thing about publishing, but I suspect a committed and stern editor could have resolved a lot of my issues with this story pretty easily.
The addenda were a mixed bag. Some of them read like drafts of the authors notes, and should have been incorporated into the story instead, or at least dropped at an earlier point. I did enjoy the letters from Damaris as an insight into her character.
I won't be continuing with the series as my frustration has outpaced my curiosity. I can honestly say I have absolutely no idea where it's going next, but this is my stop and I'm getting off.