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Flirting with the Law
She’s been tempting us for longer than she knows. Now it’s time to find out what happens when you cross the law.
Samantha:
Getting pulled over is the last thing I need after I find out my scumbag of a fiancé is cheating on me.
But that’s before I see the cops who step out of that squad car.
They’re dangerously gorgeous - rough looking and tattooed, not to mention dominant and demanding. Even more, the way they look at me stirs something dark inside of me that’s just dying to get out.
And I know I should be scared, or furious at their rough, hands-on treatment when they make me bend over the hood of the car and submit. I know I definitely shouldn’t be turned on when they cuff my hands behind my back and put their filthy hands on me.
And I definitely shouldn’t want them to keep going. I definitely shouldn’t want more…
Blake/Dustin:
We’ve had our eyes on her for longer than she knows. It was our job to watch her - seeing her at her most vulnerable, at her most intimate.
And now we’re obsessed.
Now we’re consumed with the primal need to have her and make her ours.
She might not be the criminal we’re after, but she’s wrapped up in this now, and there’ll be no denying us the sweet, innocent prize we’ve been dying to put our dirty hands on.
Come hell or high water, Samantha Caraway will submit to us.
Both of us.
And not even the law we uphold will stand in our way.
Flirting With The Law is a quick and filthy book involving two utterly obsessed alpha heroes, one sassy heroine, and enough insta-love, steam, and sugary-sweetness to make your Kindles melt. This mfm romance is all about her – no m/m. If you love over-the-top, slightly unrealistic, and wildly dirty stories, this one’s for you! HEA with NO CHEATING!
For a very limited time, this book now also features two other stories of mine. Twice Bossed and Bossed Three Times are included in the back of this book as special thank you for picking up this new release edition!
Samantha:
Getting pulled over is the last thing I need after I find out my scumbag of a fiancé is cheating on me.
But that’s before I see the cops who step out of that squad car.
They’re dangerously gorgeous - rough looking and tattooed, not to mention dominant and demanding. Even more, the way they look at me stirs something dark inside of me that’s just dying to get out.
And I know I should be scared, or furious at their rough, hands-on treatment when they make me bend over the hood of the car and submit. I know I definitely shouldn’t be turned on when they cuff my hands behind my back and put their filthy hands on me.
And I definitely shouldn’t want them to keep going. I definitely shouldn’t want more…
Blake/Dustin:
We’ve had our eyes on her for longer than she knows. It was our job to watch her - seeing her at her most vulnerable, at her most intimate.
And now we’re obsessed.
Now we’re consumed with the primal need to have her and make her ours.
She might not be the criminal we’re after, but she’s wrapped up in this now, and there’ll be no denying us the sweet, innocent prize we’ve been dying to put our dirty hands on.
Come hell or high water, Samantha Caraway will submit to us.
Both of us.
And not even the law we uphold will stand in our way.
Flirting With The Law is a quick and filthy book involving two utterly obsessed alpha heroes, one sassy heroine, and enough insta-love, steam, and sugary-sweetness to make your Kindles melt. This mfm romance is all about her – no m/m. If you love over-the-top, slightly unrealistic, and wildly dirty stories, this one’s for you! HEA with NO CHEATING!
For a very limited time, this book now also features two other stories of mine. Twice Bossed and Bossed Three Times are included in the back of this book as special thank you for picking up this new release edition!
115 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 13, 2017
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About the author
Madison Faye
108 books3,645 followers#1 bestselling contemporary romance author Madison Faye is the dirty alter ego of the very wholesome, very normal suburban housewife behind the stories. While she might be a wife, mom, and PTA organizer on the outside, there’s nothing but hot, steamy, and raunchy fantasies brewing right beneath the surface!
Tired of keeping them hidden inside or only having them come out in the bedroom, they’re all here in the form of some wickedly hot stories. Single-minded alpha hero, sinfully taboo relationships, and wildly over-the-top scenarios. If you love it extra dirty, extra hot, and extra naughty, this is the place for you! (Just don’t tell the other PTA members you saw her here…)
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Tired of keeping them hidden inside or only having them come out in the bedroom, they’re all here in the form of some wickedly hot stories. Single-minded alpha hero, sinfully taboo relationships, and wildly over-the-top scenarios. If you love it extra dirty, extra hot, and extra naughty, this is the place for you! (Just don’t tell the other PTA members you saw her here…)
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November 27, 2017
Ok, the whole cop thing was seriously hot! Dustin and Blake are best friends and partners who are investigating Samantha's fiance. They fall for her during their month of surveillance. They pull her over for speeding but decided to let her go because she's off limits to them. When they find her a second time spying on her fiance, they can't pass up the opportunity it presents.
The only thing that put a damper on this story was Samantha's fiance. He's cheating on her and when she follows him to the woman's house she ends up getting all hot and bothered watching her fiance get it on with another woman. That was a hard pill to swallow. Other than that, I enjoyed the cop fantasy this story brings. ARC provided by author.
The only thing that put a damper on this story was Samantha's fiance. He's cheating on her and when she follows him to the woman's house she ends up getting all hot and bothered watching her fiance get it on with another woman. That was a hard pill to swallow. Other than that, I enjoyed the cop fantasy this story brings. ARC provided by author.
February 17, 2017
3 Please Frisk Me Officer Stars!
This one was my least favorite out of the last few books I have read by this author. The plot lacked any real depth and it read a little bit too much like a bad porn at times. A SMOKIN' HOT bad porn, but all I could picture was Dustin and Blake with pornstaches and bowchickawowow playing in the background.
Still, I enjoyed it for what it was!
This one was my least favorite out of the last few books I have read by this author. The plot lacked any real depth and it read a little bit too much like a bad porn at times. A SMOKIN' HOT bad porn, but all I could picture was Dustin and Blake with pornstaches and bowchickawowow playing in the background.
Still, I enjoyed it for what it was!
January 23, 2018
- 2.5 stars -
Flirting with the Law is the first book I've read by Madison Faye. I didn't realize I had gotten a novella and so I wasn't in the mind set for a quick and under developed storyline.
I liked the premise of the story as well as the sexiness and strength of the characters. I would have loved it better if there had been more build up, explanation, development, depth and dimension.
Additionally, there were numerous editing errors with spelling, missing words and incorrect or missing punctuation. So many that it became distracting; thus the .5 reduction in the rating to a 2.5.
Flirting with the Law is recommended to those who are looking for a quick and light read filled with loads of steamy scenes, enjoy a M/F/M theme, and an accelerated storyline.
Flirting with the Law is the first book I've read by Madison Faye. I didn't realize I had gotten a novella and so I wasn't in the mind set for a quick and under developed storyline.
I liked the premise of the story as well as the sexiness and strength of the characters. I would have loved it better if there had been more build up, explanation, development, depth and dimension.
Additionally, there were numerous editing errors with spelling, missing words and incorrect or missing punctuation. So many that it became distracting; thus the .5 reduction in the rating to a 2.5.
Flirting with the Law is recommended to those who are looking for a quick and light read filled with loads of steamy scenes, enjoy a M/F/M theme, and an accelerated storyline.
February 26, 2018
Hello Cop Smuttiness!
I actually really liked this book. The characters, the romance, the hot sex scenes, the cops, and even the douche bag cheating ex-boyfriend. I loved it all. I honestly can't wait to get into the second book!
Dustin and Blake are best buds and they are slowly falling in love with Samantha, who is girl they have been surveilling for the past month or so. Of course I got on board with them all being together because honestly he "boyfriend" was a two-timing douche and he wasn't even good at it. He got caught like multiple times and though he was the "shit" when he actually wasn't. UGH, I hated him so much.
I loved the ending and like I mentioned earlier.. I seriously can't wait to dive into the second book of this series.
I actually really liked this book. The characters, the romance, the hot sex scenes, the cops, and even the douche bag cheating ex-boyfriend. I loved it all. I honestly can't wait to get into the second book!
Dustin and Blake are best buds and they are slowly falling in love with Samantha, who is girl they have been surveilling for the past month or so. Of course I got on board with them all being together because honestly he "boyfriend" was a two-timing douche and he wasn't even good at it. He got caught like multiple times and though he was the "shit" when he actually wasn't. UGH, I hated him so much.
I loved the ending and like I mentioned earlier.. I seriously can't wait to dive into the second book of this series.
December 5, 2018
This was the absolute most ridiculous book I've ever read. I could not stop loling because the events that take place in this book were just jaw dropping. Like seriously?! The smut was pretty good. But like the rest. Just no... I can't. Lololol.
June 11, 2018
This was a cute and sexy insta-love quick read.
July 5, 2020
This was a short and sexy read!
Speaking of which, it is Tuesday. We need to get going to Maria’s place so we can watch ‘shitty, small-dicked blowjob night’ at the Santiago house.”
“Hope you brought popcorn,” I muttered
Speaking of which, it is Tuesday. We need to get going to Maria’s place so we can watch ‘shitty, small-dicked blowjob night’ at the Santiago house.”
“Hope you brought popcorn,” I muttered
March 20, 2017
This was just okay....
March 4, 2017
Samantha moved to the west coast to be with her fiancée Tim. She gave up a promising teaching position back home for him and the move was due to Tim being made partner in a law firm. But when she gets there, he loses his job and has been out of work. Suddenly he is acting off which prompts Sam to monitor Tim and his movements and such-which leads to her finding out he has been cheating on her for a while. Sam got so angry, she takes his new convertible car and drives away to the beach. Her driving is what gets her pulled over by 2 sexy cops-she was speeding rather fast. Thing is, there is a reason for their pulling Sam over and speeding isn’t just it.
The drama, angst, passion, suspense and mystery leads to a pretty good storyline. I would have liked to seen Sam get more of a backbone when it came to her ex and some of his actions but overall , I did enjoy the interactions she had with the 2 hunky cops--Blake and Dustin. They really cared for Sam and there was so many twists and turns in this story. I loved it and cant wait for the next book by this author.
My rating: 4.0 stars ****
"I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book in exchange for an honest review***
The drama, angst, passion, suspense and mystery leads to a pretty good storyline. I would have liked to seen Sam get more of a backbone when it came to her ex and some of his actions but overall , I did enjoy the interactions she had with the 2 hunky cops--Blake and Dustin. They really cared for Sam and there was so many twists and turns in this story. I loved it and cant wait for the next book by this author.
My rating: 4.0 stars ****
"I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book in exchange for an honest review***
February 23, 2017
This was the second cheesy over the top book I read in the same day. Samantha was uprooted and moved to the west coast to be with her fiancé, Tim. She gave up her teaching job and Tim was made partner in a law firm. He has since been let go and has been out of work for several months. She sees his phone one morning and finds out he's been cheating on her for a while. Angry she takes his new convertible car and heads to the beach. On her way there she gets pulled over by two sex on a stick cops because she was speeding.
February 27, 2018
Sam finds out her fiance is cheating on her. Lucky for her, she runs into 2 hot cops that happen to be staking her out. Of course, she doesn't realize this when she hooks up with them for the first time. But, she can't stay mad because the three of them have a connection, right? And when the ex-fiance who is on the wrong side of the law kidnaps her, who comes in to save the day in a blaze of bullets and boners? Yep, the two hot cops. And then the 3 of them live happily ever after. Yay!
This was a fun quick read.
This was a fun quick read.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 8, 2017
Something about this just didn't gel for me. Everything happened so fast, there was zero buildup to anything that happened. It read like a porno. Plus, the epilogue was very lazy.
February 18, 2017
Good read
This book was a good quick spicy read. There were some minor editing issues but overall a pretty good read.
This book was a good quick spicy read. There were some minor editing issues but overall a pretty good read.
April 24, 2017
Delicious
Samantha sure has her head stuck in the sand when it comes to her fiancée. She overlooks so much stuff for a douchebag. Reminds me how often we let stuff go with people we care about. This is a very sexy and unbelievable fantasy though. I would love to meet her two hot cops on the side of the road and get frisked so deliciously.
Samantha sure has her head stuck in the sand when it comes to her fiancée. She overlooks so much stuff for a douchebag. Reminds me how often we let stuff go with people we care about. This is a very sexy and unbelievable fantasy though. I would love to meet her two hot cops on the side of the road and get frisked so deliciously.
February 27, 2017
A sexy insta-love short story with added bonus! I enjoyed this one as I was looking for something smutty and quick and it delivered just what I expected!
February 24, 2017
When the blurb admits that it's an unbelievable story, it makes it easier to swallow when it actually is. Two cops, one girl under surveillance, one day to fall in love? Whatever, but it was quick, easy, and pretty hot in the storytelling.
It's not really the type of story I like to read, but as far as erotic fantasies go, this one was nice.
It's not really the type of story I like to read, but as far as erotic fantasies go, this one was nice.
February 16, 2017
I received this book for a voluntary, completely honest and non incentivized review. Obviously this is a short, fast, over the top story. Having said that, Sam came across as indecisive and although she "jumped" right into the arms of the 2 officers, she seemed weak when it came t the rest of her life. Too deep? Yeah probably, especially for this type of book. It was entertaining for the sake of fantasy.
April 5, 2018
Dustin & Blake are best friends and partners who happen to be investigating someone along the way they slowly start falling for Samantha who happens to be the fiance of the guy they are trying to bust.. Knowing she has nothing to do with what is going.. their rules are thrown out the window when they pull her over the little vixen.. lots of drama.. lots of tension!!
Only thing I was eh about.. the guys catching her getting off watching her fiance fk another woman.. yeah grossed out by that.. could have skipped over that.
2 handsome rough cop males
Sassy bold frustrated gal
M-M-F
Sexy hot sex
Drama
Cheating
HEA & Epilogue
Only thing I was eh about.. the guys catching her getting off watching her fiance fk another woman.. yeah grossed out by that.. could have skipped over that.
2 handsome rough cop males
Sassy bold frustrated gal
M-M-F
Sexy hot sex
Drama
Cheating
HEA & Epilogue
August 20, 2017
Spoilers in ***stars***. if you don’t want to know, don’t read them.
Overall: This book is not a romance novel, it is what I call girlporn. It is erotica. Samantha is engaged to a lawyer for a drug dealer. She is being surveiled by two cops. One day she finds out her fiancée is cheating on her. She races out of the house only to be pulled over in a bikini. From there most of the book is physical until the climax (possible pun intended). *** They pat her down with some groping. The next time they see her they have sex. Then she is kidnapped by the drug lord. After they rescue her, more sex.
M: Heck if I know, they don’t exchange more than 2 sentences before they are ‘in love’. Apparently they fell in love while watching her (sometimes in the shower) on surveillance tapes.
F: Heck if I know. The only personality trait we have is that she likes being dominated and called a slut.
Instalove: Yes. They are in love before any words are exchanged. Also Instalust.
POV: Alternate F/M third person.
Pace: Fine, I skimmed some bits but that is not because the plot is slow. It is because there was no plot.
Pursuer: The men pursued.
Separation: No.
Violence/Dark: Kidnapping, some gun play.
OM/OW Drama: No. They men tried to go to a bar to pick up a OW that looks like F, before actually talking to her.
Hot: Not hugely original. The author’s vocabulary is limited and anatomical male parts are described as big c**ks a great many times. *** Ana1. Dom/Sub. Multiple M/F/M Though I am under the impression there is a right D/S and a wrong. While D/S can seem like women who like being controlled, possessed or ‘owned’ that isn’t what it really is. D/S, when done correctly by authors, is about trust, support and ethical intimacy. When done poorly, it is about women getting off other people telling them what to do. It is not done well here. ***
Humor: Nope.
Sadness: Nope.
P.S. I tend to write reviews late at night, there WILL be typos.
Overall: This book is not a romance novel, it is what I call girlporn. It is erotica. Samantha is engaged to a lawyer for a drug dealer. She is being surveiled by two cops. One day she finds out her fiancée is cheating on her. She races out of the house only to be pulled over in a bikini. From there most of the book is physical until the climax (possible pun intended). *** They pat her down with some groping. The next time they see her they have sex. Then she is kidnapped by the drug lord. After they rescue her, more sex.
M: Heck if I know, they don’t exchange more than 2 sentences before they are ‘in love’. Apparently they fell in love while watching her (sometimes in the shower) on surveillance tapes.
F: Heck if I know. The only personality trait we have is that she likes being dominated and called a slut.
Instalove: Yes. They are in love before any words are exchanged. Also Instalust.
POV: Alternate F/M third person.
Pace: Fine, I skimmed some bits but that is not because the plot is slow. It is because there was no plot.
Pursuer: The men pursued.
Separation: No.
Violence/Dark: Kidnapping, some gun play.
OM/OW Drama: No. They men tried to go to a bar to pick up a OW that looks like F, before actually talking to her.
Hot: Not hugely original. The author’s vocabulary is limited and anatomical male parts are described as big c**ks a great many times. *** Ana1. Dom/Sub. Multiple M/F/M Though I am under the impression there is a right D/S and a wrong. While D/S can seem like women who like being controlled, possessed or ‘owned’ that isn’t what it really is. D/S, when done correctly by authors, is about trust, support and ethical intimacy. When done poorly, it is about women getting off other people telling them what to do. It is not done well here. ***
Humor: Nope.
Sadness: Nope.
P.S. I tend to write reviews late at night, there WILL be typos.
February 19, 2017
Get your iced-drinks ready, ladies, 'cause this is going to get HOT! ;-)
Two cops frisking a bikini-clad woman on the side of the road? That's only the first spark in a lusty chain of encounters between Samantha and her two cop hunks on duty.
Blake and Dustin, all time-friends, become unapologetically addicted to the woman whose fiancé they're investigating. And they cross all kinds of legal, naughty lines because they can't resist the pull from her beauty.
Don't look for logic in this novella, it's just all a purely dirty fantasy written in a light tone. From teasing to enforcing the law on an unsuspecting woman too eager for many attention, this short story is perfect to fuel your libido and have a lot of fun. The only thing I didn't like was when Sam got hot and bothered while spying on a situation that should have angered her instead. No, no.
Double the action, all the insta-love you need, and a few bullets and heroic rescue before the R-rated HEA. Have naughty fun!
Two cops frisking a bikini-clad woman on the side of the road? That's only the first spark in a lusty chain of encounters between Samantha and her two cop hunks on duty.
Blake and Dustin, all time-friends, become unapologetically addicted to the woman whose fiancé they're investigating. And they cross all kinds of legal, naughty lines because they can't resist the pull from her beauty.
Don't look for logic in this novella, it's just all a purely dirty fantasy written in a light tone. From teasing to enforcing the law on an unsuspecting woman too eager for many attention, this short story is perfect to fuel your libido and have a lot of fun. The only thing I didn't like was when Sam got hot and bothered while spying on a situation that should have angered her instead. No, no.
Double the action, all the insta-love you need, and a few bullets and heroic rescue before the R-rated HEA. Have naughty fun!
February 16, 2017
I received an ARC for Flirting With The Law and voluntarily reviewed this book. Blake and Dustin are detectives who have been tasked to investigate Tim Plimpton, a lawyer who had been laid off for the last few months and fiancé to one oh-so-sexy-goddess Samantha Caraway. Not only has Tim been a cheating scumbag, he has been linked to one of the largest cocaine importers into Southern California. During routine beat duty, they pull Samantha over for speeding on the way to the beach. These two alphas step over the line, but they realize that she may be exactly who they were looking for, and now that they have had a taste, she was going to get more than a mere warning and a frisking the next time they catch her. When events ramp up in their investigation, will there even be a chance for them to pursue more than a scumbag fiancés and a drug lords? This was a hot, quick, and enjoyable read!
May 29, 2022
Flirting With The Law is the story of Samantha, Dustin and Blake.
So her fiancé Tim is into some dirty cartel shit and Dustin and Blake are investigating it and they’re best of friends and share lots of women. They set their sights on Samantha and are obsessed with her. One day she’s caught speeding and she’s pulled over and not groped but touched and she grows wet for both men and is astonished. Her fiancé Tim was cheating with the cartel bosses niece and she was furious because of how dumb she looked but also that why he didn’t break it off. Anyways she goes to the womens house to watch Tim and her basically have sex and the officers catch her right then and there and they show her a good time with the handcuffs. Anyways there’s some drama with Tim and her being kidnapped and they save her and then they claim her all in one day.
Solid 4/5
So her fiancé Tim is into some dirty cartel shit and Dustin and Blake are investigating it and they’re best of friends and share lots of women. They set their sights on Samantha and are obsessed with her. One day she’s caught speeding and she’s pulled over and not groped but touched and she grows wet for both men and is astonished. Her fiancé Tim was cheating with the cartel bosses niece and she was furious because of how dumb she looked but also that why he didn’t break it off. Anyways she goes to the womens house to watch Tim and her basically have sex and the officers catch her right then and there and they show her a good time with the handcuffs. Anyways there’s some drama with Tim and her being kidnapped and they save her and then they claim her all in one day.
Solid 4/5
April 11, 2018
This was another quick and dirty mfm from Madison Faye, your go to author when you want to switch it up from Alexa Riley. It has all the smexy scenes, the dominance but not as much possessive obsession.
This one has trusting GF being cheat d on by her lawyer BF/ fiancé. All is not well in that relationship
Being stopped by Police duo, Dustin and Blake the force by day, detectives by night was a coincidence, or was it.
Girl meets these two ex marines
Girl is taken in all ways...
Bit of tension
Violent but satisfying reuniting
Alls well as H, H and h commit and cease and desist the single life for their HEA.
What's not to love?
5 stars, (not general)
This one has trusting GF being cheat d on by her lawyer BF/ fiancé. All is not well in that relationship
Being stopped by Police duo, Dustin and Blake the force by day, detectives by night was a coincidence, or was it.
Girl meets these two ex marines
Girl is taken in all ways...
Bit of tension
Violent but satisfying reuniting
Alls well as H, H and h commit and cease and desist the single life for their HEA.
What's not to love?
5 stars, (not general)
February 14, 2017
Samantha: and blake and Dustins loved story starts out funny they were to watch her they were getting paid to watch her but Samantha went and found her ex cheating on her and drove real fast to get away she was so upset so the law stopped her and that is when she met Blake and Dustin and everything turned out oh yeah so spicy hot and good for all of them yes what a way to go where can I find my own lol so good and great written story loved it I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book Mchelle
March 5, 2017
Is her man cheeting prick ?Who don't want to be "feeled" up by two hot cops when driving to fast,in your bikini?Me please ♡ There dream girl,they have been "stalking" her for some time and want her so bad,but she is off limits!! Caught two times in one day,and the last time it's so "bad"girl ;0) What will the cops do this time? It's so hot and freeking good and a lot of story to bee a short story,loved it♡♡♡Wanted more when i was done :0)
November 25, 2017
SHORT.SWEET.HAPPY ENDING
good point, at-least they spend some time to watch and understand the girl even that was only for the sack of investigation.
First time their sexual involvement was interesting and totally unexpected but it was something new and hot.
ENDING was not satisfying. as always i really like ending where writer show us their lives of after few years and having family.
Well... i enjoyed it.
good point, at-least they spend some time to watch and understand the girl even that was only for the sack of investigation.
First time their sexual involvement was interesting and totally unexpected but it was something new and hot.
ENDING was not satisfying. as always i really like ending where writer show us their lives of after few years and having family.
Well... i enjoyed it.
August 20, 2018
This would have been a 4 star read if at the end they didn't say "i love you."
This is a very fast paced read and insta-love story.
I am not really a fan of insta-love and the reason for three stars.
If they would have just started a relationship together and saved the "love yous" for later down the road, I would have enjoyed this a bit more.
Even so, it is a little unrealistic in its telling.
And kind of unethical.
But if you are looking for a fast, steamy read...this is the book for you.
This is a very fast paced read and insta-love story.
I am not really a fan of insta-love and the reason for three stars.
If they would have just started a relationship together and saved the "love yous" for later down the road, I would have enjoyed this a bit more.
Even so, it is a little unrealistic in its telling.
And kind of unethical.
But if you are looking for a fast, steamy read...this is the book for you.
March 5, 2017
These 3 short stories are absolutely fun and well worth the read - They have all the necessary ingredients to keep you reading, sex, drama, more sex and lots and lots of emotional connections!! Yes, they are sexy - very, very sexy - explicit sex.. but it is done well - there are of course dramatic moments, and the last two stories meet up in the third - love when that happens!!
May 17, 2017
Hello Mr Officer
This one was okay. It was fast and dirty. Maybe a little too fast. Wasn't really any connection or emotion between the characters. Everything happened all at once. If it were longer and emotions were developed it would have been better. I did like the cover and happy ending.
This one was okay. It was fast and dirty. Maybe a little too fast. Wasn't really any connection or emotion between the characters. Everything happened all at once. If it were longer and emotions were developed it would have been better. I did like the cover and happy ending.
February 7, 2018
Well, this was I don't really even know. okay I guess. It is a short read, a novella I guess. The storyline is almost there but not fully. Basically, if you want a fast, mfm read with a bit of a story then you might like it. I just found myself getting a little bored & skimming over parts. So it was okay.
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