Well, this is almost as stupid as Christie Golden's other Star Wars novels, albeit a tad less egregious since she's working with (mostly) an all original cast so there's a lot less of that teeth-grinding that occurs whenever she writes a well-established character wildly out-of-character. But there's plenty of other nonsense that relegates this to the bin of overtly bad Star Wars books. Let me count the ways. SPOILERS BELOW
I Think Golden Forgot Who the Protagonists Were Mad At
The story is ostensibly about an 'elite' squad of Imperials who are so angry about the destruction of the Death Star, they specifically name themselves 'Inferno Squad', to signal the hellish wrath they're about to unleash on those dirty rebel scum! Except they don't ever fight, or even try to fight any proper rebels. All their missions are under-cover and the purpose of most of them is to thwart corrupt Imperials.
Their one big mission against actual rebels actually targets a surviving cell of the late Saw Guerrera's terrorist network. A network who are so extreme, the Rebels don't even want to associate with them. The Rebels would probably volunteer to pitch in and help bring down the partisans if given the chance. So it's never really clear how any of the squad members' rage toward the Rebels is being satiated here.
You'll Notice 'Elite' was in Quotation Marks
How these four Imperials were selected to join an 'elite' undercover spy squad is beyond me. It consists of two really good TIE pilots, a really good engineer, and a really good data analyst. None of them have, or seem to be given, any special spy training. But that doesn't stop them and their commanding officer from bragging non-stop about how elite they are.
Third Rate Mission: Impossible Knock-Off
If you had to boil this book down to a specific theme, I'd say it was "Third Rate Mission: Impossible Knock-Off". Rather than feature any actual battlefronts, Christie Golden seems to be angling more for an "undercover agents" story. The problem is that Golden just isn't up to writing about espionage in any believable way. As has always been the case in her books, she's much better at sort of announcing how elite and clever her characters are than actually showing them do anything clever, which is a death knell for an espionage book. The plans the squad come up with range from pedestrian to inane to monumentally stupid, but again, that never stops the squad and their commander from going on and on about how elite and awesome they are. Two (but not the only) examples...
a) There's a big deal made early on about how competitive the squad is, and how the leader will be determined by who comes up with the most awesome plan for their first mission. What the mission is, is not explained. I think Golden was going for a lead-up to a big reveal, but forgot that tension is a pre-requisite for dramatic reveals. Anyway, the squad are put into a hotel room and told to individually make their own awesome plans, and then we're told how the perfectionist main character, Iden, just totally busts her ass to concoct the perfect scheme to...again, that's left unexplained. The next day, their commander has very high praise indeed for her plan (even though we still haven't been told what the plan is or what it's for) and makes her leader. When the plan is finally enacted (in what I assume Christie Golden thought was the dramatic reveal), it turns out it involved sneaking into a party, getting the host drunk, and stealing stuff from his office. Oh, and getting him drunk required him to raid his daughter's wedding gifts and steal the alcohol they brought as a gift. It's a monumentally dumb plan and it works to perfection because Christie Golden writes it that way, then has nothing but praise for how elite and clever the squad is and how impressive are Iden's leadership skills. Just super lazy, all around.
b) The other major plan of the book is so stupid it demotes the book from dumb fun to inept and embarrassing. So the gang decides to infiltrate a terrorist cell of partisans. They make a big deal about how dangerous and difficult this will be, and how their lives will be on the line. Golden enters Stupidity Category One when three of the squad infiltrate with alarming ease. Again, much hand-waving is done to make you think this is dangerous, but Golden makes all her terrorists gullible dupes, so the Imperials are never in any danger.
It's the fourth Imperial, ELITE LEADER Iden, whose infiltration takes us to Stupidity Category Ten. The plan is this: replace Saw Guerrera as the figurehead of the terrorists. Now, there is a certain shaky logic to this. Iden is a prominent Imperial wunderkind, and if she were to suddenly start denouncing the Empire and going rogue and doing Very Rebellious Things, at the very least, her public defection could be a cool propaganda coup for the Rebellion.
But logic, even of the shaky sort, isn't how Christie Golden rolls. Iden doesn't do any of those things, but instead develops a very different, very 'elite' plan. And at every step in this scheme, the least logical thing happens. Step One: Iden conspicuously expresses remorse about the destruction of Aldaraan while one of her fellow TIE pilots is secretly recording her. He turns over the recording to the authorities for Iden's own good, and she is suddenly Public Enemy Number One in the Empire. So, she becomes Hated and Despised because she says out loud that she feels bad about innocent people who died. The anger is so prevalent, she's a front page story! Her father learns about what happened by seeing it on the news! (actually, he secretly already knew since he's her commanding officer and in on the plan!) Why does the Empire aggressively and vehemently vilify someone who expresses regret over civilian casualties during war? Because if they behaved like normal people, the Elite Squad Plan would crumble to dust.
Step Two: Next, they stage a very public punishment for Iden meant to shame her. The shameful punishment is that she's sent back to the Leadership Academy at which she once studied and becomes a security pilot there? And she lives with the headmistress? I'm using question marks because these don't seem like punishments and I'm confused?
Step Three: Wait for the terrorists to come kidnap her from the Academy because surely, they will independently realized that a TIE pilot who expressed regret about civilian casualties in wartime would make the perfect figure head for their violent terrorist extremist mission. And of course since Christie Golden controls everything, this dumb plan goes perfectly, and total infiltration is achieved.
Elite!
Mary Sue's For Everybody!
Every single character is described as being perfect and beautiful and clever and elite in every way, plus one extra personality trait. Iden's personality trait is that she's the Mary Sue. One guy's trait is that he's an arrogant wiseacre who never says anything clever but everyone reacts to his banter as if it were. One guy's trait is that he's an ace engineer. One girl's trait is she has an eidetic memory. Otherwise, they're pretty interchangeable. As usual, Christie Golden just kind of mentions their traits a lot as opposed to using them as drivers of the characters' actions. When they're making their plans for their first mission, for example, she basically says something along the lines of, "Del's plan involved droids (because he likes technology *wink wink*), and Hask's plan involved being charming (because he's an arrogant wiseacre *wink wink*), and Seyr's plan involved memorizing things (because she has an eidetic memory *wink wink*), but Iden's plan was the best as it combined all the best elements of everyone else's since she's practically perfect in every way (*wink wink*)!" Aside from actually seeing Iden's plan play out, none of the other plans are ever described other than mentioning the squad members' character traits and how they featured heavily in their planning.
And all of this is in addition to all of the characters having the emotional maturity of teenagers writing fan-fiction (which, incidentally, is a pretty good description of Christie Golden's writing style).
Utterly Irredeemable Characters
Golden writes these characters as if they're supposed to be sympathetic, and honestly, other, better writers have been successful at humanizing various Imperial characters. They're not all raving sociopaths, and it is true that otherwise normal people have a fascinating ability to rationalize some pretty heinous things. There is a workable story there. But Golden doesn't write these characters as if they're misguided and blind to their own ugly natures. She plays it pretty straight. She portrays them as honorable and friendly and loyal and caring and you get the sense that you're supposed to like them. And then suddenly (and this is super SPOILERY), she has them decide to help the terrorists kill 400 school children with a bomb because to save the children would blow their cover. Now, if their ultimate goal was to save an entire planet or the galaxy or the universe, maybe you could just about wring an interesting moral dilemma out of sacrificing school children for the greater good. But Inferno Squad's stakes are pretty low. They're basically trying to root out how the terrorists are getting ahold of some sensitive information. So naturally, Golden writes this sequence as if their decision is completely justified.
I kept waiting for a big plot twist where the squad would realize they were dupes in their commander's plan, putting their own morality and safety on the line for the benefit of fat-cat higher-ups. But no. They gnash their teeth and rend their garments, and it's all in earnest, and they're viewed (and view themselves) as heroes for the lengths to which they were willing to go. These are very stupid and morally vacuous characters and impossible to root for.
Arbitrary Golems
There are these strange creatures that show up about halfway through the book for no apparent reason. One of the nice terrorists discovers them with one of the undercover agents and they bond over the mysterious clay statues with crystal innards. For no apparent reason, the inquisitive pair become convinced that the statues are droids who are controlled telepathically. The statues come alive at the end of the book to retrieve some dead bodies, and everyone is utterly perplexed as they realize that these very creatures have been responsible for disposing of all the dead bodies the terrorists dump in some remote location. The terrorists have been disposing of dead bodies there for months, and no one was curious enough to find out why the bodies kept disappearing. It was so out of the blue and unconnected to anything else in the story, and I was left as confused as the characters at the profound lack of plot or thematic relevance. Now I'm an English Lit major, so I'm literally a trained professional at pulling metaphorical symbolism out of my ass, but this one had me stumped.
In Conclusion
So anyway, this was pretty standard Christie Golden dreck. The kind of book twee fourteen year olds go gaga over, since what's more fun than self-identifying with a plucky Mary Sue who is perfect in every way? When her Fate of the Jedi novels were finished, I was optimistic that I'd never have to read another book by Golden again. Then came this deceptively titled book to make me read one more. (Deceptive, because I stupidly thought this was a sequel to the vastly superior Battlefront: Twilight Company, which is a book that's actually about battlefronts and wars).