To begin, I cannot give this book a rating.
The story is simple and standard, but in a fun, cheap-read kind of way. This is a book for when you're looking for pure action with not a lot to think about. If I were to judge it strictly on the main story, it would be five stars hands down.
But there were a couple problems that killed it for me. The first were the characters. The cast is diverse, but everyone is either a stereotype (ie. the black guy who wears gold chains, has gold teeth, and actually says "it's all about the bling"), or they're diminished in some way (the generic "Asian"-American in a universe where bad or potentially hostile Asians are identified more specifically - the "Japanese warlord" or the shadowy "Sino-Koreans;" or the "Navajo" who has to remind the leader they're equal partners in the business, then finds himself surprised when he learns that leader has arranged a new job and he's been left out of the loop again).
That by itself doesn't kill the book. I could chalk it up to having read this at the wrong time, reading too much into it, or simply enjoy the rest of the story once getting past those set-ups. It's the sexism that goes above and beyond, and I think that's what heightened my awareness for the other, smaller things.
I can pretty much sum it up with a scenario from the opening chapters: You decide to betray your client when you learn he's running a human smuggling ring, turning helpless women into sex slaves and selling them on the black market. You take such a moral high ground that you decide to throw the job away when you're desperate for the cash, it could result in the bank taking your ship, and your team mates will be forced on public assistance. You're barely away from the villain when you realize some of your team has vanished . They're already below seducing the very women you just rescued, and trying to get them into their own beds. What do you do?
A) Rush down there and smack them around before they abuse these women further.
B) Blame the women for the behavior of the men ("He also realized it was more than likely the passengers had done the seducing, or at least played an equal part, given the way the women had behaved during the weeks leading up to their rescue.")
C) Plan to dock their pay for the behavior, then wish more of your crew would join in on the abuse so you could save even more money ("With luck, more of his crew would misbehave in the coming weeks.")
D) B & C
Sadly, this is just the beginning. Our main character treats the only woman on his team (coincidentally his girlfriend) as if she's some delicate thing that needs protecting. Even she complains of this attitude, so I have to give points for the counterbalance. However between missions, we're given a couple sequences to demonstrate that she is in fact weak. The two of them are weightlifting with the Navajo, and there is strange bit about having to reduce the weight when it's her turn. Next we see the two "sparring" with strength-enhancing exoskeletons. He's afraid to hurt her, so he has his suit turned down to minimum strength, letting her win each round. She eventually gets upset and calls down the black guy to replace him as her sparring partner. Maybe I was tainted by the first scenario, because it seemed he was a little too happy to have a go at her and beat the crap out of her. One thing that wasn't a mistake was his decision to call her a bitch at her lowest point in their match. In the moment of redemption, that's the straw where she finally finds her strength and beats the crap out of him, but instead of learning a lesson, that's only the first time we hear him toss that word around.
Later in the piece, the main character convinces her to stay behind on the ship when the main mission of the story gets underway. And of course the villain flies up and takes control of the ship. There's a moment where he faces off with her, and I was certain the call back to the sparring match would prove to be a pay-off, but instead, it's another case of her getting the crap beat out of her. What's worse, her biggest concern is not for her life, but for her looks. "She noticed a pool of blood underneath her where her face had lain on the ground. She touched her features, searching for the source, and felt a sharp pain when she touched her cheek. The bone was shattered, she thought. The notion saddened her. Rade had always said she had the cutest cheeks. The cutest dimples."
To be fair, I once enjoyed one story where the racism was overt - the author entered into full blown diatribes. I got to thinking about why that was when I certainly didn't agree with the attitude or the argument. For one, in that case, the attitudes were isolated; the author would make his case and go back to the story, where as here, every time it looked like I could forget about it, the black guy pops up to randomly call someone a bitch, or an extremely lewd conversation springs up out of nowhere to constantly pull me back into that. Secondly, the other book had a strong counterbalance to the racist attitudes: the salvation of the main characters came only because they teamed up with a minority group and worked together. Here, in the main story, the female character's moment came only as a brief escape so she could fire off the ordinance and prevent the bad guy from blowing away the gate that allowed her boyfriend to follow them - beyond that she was the epitome of the damsel in distress. Thirdly, the racist author expressed the views as part of some social commentary. I did not agree with his assessment in the least, but at least he was trying to get a conversation going...instead of tuning out and dismissing it because of the racism, it was something that got me thinking what the true reasons for the problems rising in that book might be. The idea of allowing hate speech here in the US is not to allow idiots a mouthpiece, but rather to initiate some rather tough discussions that the PC culture almost forces us to ignore.
The reason I can't 1-star this piece is that it did get me thinking about the issue of sexism in entertainment. There are a lot of hyper-masculine books and movies that pull off this macho, chauvinistic society without the sexual and physical abuse coming from the heroes. There are a lot of stories that create these kinds of societies and create the "realism" while leaving us some kind of hope. Bringing Stella Home by Joe Vasicek has a young woman captured by space barbarians and added to the leader's harem. It is a world that is every bit as vile, and when she gets a chance to escape it, she makes the decision to stay. It is weird that she would choose to stay on as the barbarian leader's sex object, but throughout her ordeal, she learns how to subtly manipulate the situation, and by the moment of choice, she faces a difficult reality that she can bend the leader and potentially save lives. It's not an easy decision for her, but it's a moment of sacrifice; that something good can come from all the evil.
Ultimately, this book did get me thinking, and that is, after all, the point of science fiction. For that reason, I can't come up with a rating, but this was an issue that overshadowed everything for me.