I appreciate the craft here but find John Hankiewicz's comics to be very tedious to read. On paper this should be up my alley, especially because some of his panels look strikingly similar to my own photography. Might be myopic of me (because of this resemblance) but I gravitate more towards those landscapes and quiet spaces accompanied by diaristic prose like McCollum Park/Mellenium Park and Westmont Is Next.
However the more stoic and surreal poetry feel so detached and while dance in comics is an interesting experiment it comes across like he is making the argument for its use in an academic context, especially when accompanied by many extended references to colleges in both books, either as student or professor (or both).
The effect for me is mostly intellectualized emotions instead of raw feeling. A personal thing, but I'm not sure if that's what I read comics for. These panels all seem to want to elevate the mundane, not be a part of it. I can respect that but feel there's only a few grounding moments throughout; a necessary contrast.
I'm glad I read this after being confused by his follow-up Education though. It gives a lot of clarity to what he's attempting to do with the medium, which is interesting, for sure, but sometimes it feels like homework.