I won't rate this as I DNFed it. There's potential in the author, and the writing itself was well enough, it just wasn't my cup of tea at all.
While the prose was mostly fluent enough to allow a quick and easy read, I found things that got my hackles up pretty early on. While I have no problem reading grimmest Grimdark, with every topic that involves, the handling of these can be very different. And I didn’t think Darkness Forged handled two topics well at all: Rape and infertility.
Early in there’s plenty of male banter about swapping wives, getting between their legs and so on. As this was just the way the characters are, it didn’t stop me from reading, but it definitely annoyed me. Also if I have to read “ploughing the trench” one more time I’ll go bang my head against a wall.
Prose wise there was a ton of Midgard specific vocabulary that was thrown in without any explanation. This wasn’t a problem for me as I have read a lot of stories in the same setting, so I either knew it or could well guess what was talked about. But there’s a lot of specific names or races, which might make it hard going for someone new to it. Here’s a few examples – from just one page!
Berserkir, varulfur, Ás, Aujum, Sviarlanders, Aesir, vaettir, Nidavellir, dvergar
What also annoyed me were a few instances of very modern words, when the rest of the prose is the opposite, with a lot of nigh and naught.
Well, the world isn’t new at all obviously. Having read a lot of different styles and stories set in the same world, it was quite hard not to compare this with other books that draw on similar mythology. And I did think a lot of the other books I read handled it better than Darkness Forged. I think Darkness really works best if you are familiar with a lot of the terminology and world already, and if you aren’t, you have a whole wheelbarrow full of new words and names and can easily get lost between them. Authors like Harris and Whitecastle manage to put a lot more background information in there, which a lot less… let’s call it “name dropping”, and yet avoid infodumps, which will make it much easier to access.
I know this is supposed to be a redemption story, and I intellectually know the characters aren’t meant to be likable. That doesn’t change me hating them emotionally, and therefore not care one single iota about what would happen to them.
One felt so two dimensional I didn’t even know why he was in the story at all. One just seems to hit things. And the third is someone I’d rather see dead.
The rather constant small bits about slave girls or thinking about taking women, or even touching a wounded woman’s breast when you’re actually trying to help, that didn’t help at all. Even while this story is meant to show the slow succumbing to darkness, the first such instance happened before he even got to the place that “tortured him and made him into something dark”. And I just can’t feel sympathy for such characters. At times he disgusts himself, which doesn’t really change him one bit anyway. No, the only thing that keeps these men in working order is – their wives? Take their wives and there goes their whole morality and humanity right along with them? What sort of men are those?
I must confess in my 34 years of life, this is the third book I ever rage quit. Just 36 pages from the end, when it wasn’t about one more sex slave getting the protagonists attention, but the perfectly perfect and only thing that’s keeping him sane – wife. While this alone wouldn’t have been that bad, this on top of the whole rape stuff was the final straw for me.
Smallish spoiler ahead, as it happens earlier in the timeline, but late in the book:
When a usually exceptionally strong and stable woman, the one who is supposedly the light of your life, has tears in their eyes saying “Perhaps I am barren” and you then go and ask: “Is that the truth? Could you not conceive were you so inclined?” I just want to go and punch your teeth out.
Even if in this story that might be the case, then phrase that scene differently, having that information out before that specific dialogue would be nice. There’s a lot of couples out here in the real world, some might even read this book, that can’t conceive, and while that doesn’t mean a topic like that can’t be used in books, I wish it was handled with more sensibility than this. As I can’t set the character in fire, I was tempted to throw the ereader out the window…
The descent into darkness, just didn’t work for me. Look at our other books, like Black Stone Heart, with a similar theme. There we also have a character on the slippery slope, and going down, down, down into darkness. But there I felt it was well done, and I did care for the character(s), even if I was repulsed by their actions. In Darkness Forged I didn’t care either way. I didn’t even want for them to fail, I just wanted to be done with the story.
While I can absolutely see potential in the author, I couldn’t stand the characters at all. I didn’t care for any of them, and if halfway through they’d all have ended up on a stake, I’d probably have shrugged and read on without any emotion attached. Near the end I might have been happy to see at least the main protagonist on a pyre. So this one sadly wasn’t my cup of tea at all.