Goodbye Peter Pan

by Bled Dry

Prompted by a feeling, Alice leads the Cullens back to Forks, but ten years is a long time in a brief human life. Edward's wish for Bella to have a nice human life seems to have been fulfilled. Bella believes that once she loved a remarkable boy, but in the end he didn't love her. Can Edward convince her she is wrong?

Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Angst - Bella, Edward - Chapters: 41 - Words: 101,221 - Updated: Dec 9, 2014 - Published: Mar 24, 2014 - Status: Complete - id: 10212570

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10212570...

Genres: Fan Fiction

184 pages, Unknown Binding

Published March 24, 2014

Reviews

[Romantic_AT_Heart · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is an New Moon AU romance where Bella moved on romantically but still held feelings for Edward. The Cullens come back to town and Edward tries to win a married Bella back.

This Bella didn’t appeal to me. I didn’t feel any great love triangle. Yes, Edward hurt her, but she held on to her marriage when they obviously wanted different things. Mike wasn’t listening. He wanted what he wanted from her with no regards for her desires. Angela was the worst friend EVER as she conspired with Bella’s husband to get Bella to change her stance on not having children. The resolution of the love triangle at the end was disappointing.