I appreciate Hugo's descriptions of small towns in the Northwest, Montana, etc. He focuses a lot on the natural world, fishing, industrialization and economic depression, really pulling out the particular lexicon of particular places and activities. But it's really hard to pay attention to any of that because of the mountain of shit eclipsing his poems.
What is really off-putting about Hugo's voice is his increasingly intense misogyny, leaking out here and there to the point where it's almost impossible to see anything else. It starts out small. Women are mentioned usually as an amorphous mass "the women", often in the guise of "whores" (so many poems mention 'the whores'). Women are frequently described as attractive (the most important trait in a lady, clearly) or cruel (but often both). He writes in one poem that "demons, always deposited cruel/in the prettiest unmarried girl,". Several times he says something to the effect of "Girls don't like me", or "All girl should be nicer" (The Lady in Kicking Horse Reservoir), the flip side being a poem called "In Your Good Dream", in which "Girls won't make fun of you here". It only gets worse as the collection moves forward in time. In a bizarre (and really transparent) dream poem, he catches a giant fish that "wants to kill you", which he is then told is a "'Girl fish'". And it just keeps getting more terrible.
There's creepy fixation on girl's bodies:
Describing an old Valentine picture: "a plump girl in a swing/who never could grow body hair or old/in all that lace"
In a poem-letter to a friend, asking her to go to a dance with him, he describes the "Girls in mini minis, tighter than skin/ over their behinds". (He then goes on to pressure her to say yes, saying "Think about it. Say yes. Be nice.")
There's the obligatory casual rape mention:
In a list of "heroes of time", he includes Genghis Khan, saying: "We've conquered your land. Now we want women./Bring them today at high noon to the square. After we've had them, we'll get out of here." (this list includes Odysseus, Joseph, Michelangelo, and the poet himself!).
And super unsettling casualness when describing violence against women:
"I'm laughing at a neighbor girl beaten to scream/by a savage father and I'm ashamed to look." (What?!)
One poem returns to a refrain to the effect of: "that girl upstream was diced by scaling knives"
If Hugo's vision is to be believed, women's only value is their ogle-able exteriors, which unfortunately hide queen-bitch hearts. The prettier the girl, the more cruel. It's as though they exist only to trap men and therefore violence against women is justified or meaningless because they're basically cardboard contraptions of temptation and punishment.
Hugo has two tiny moments of being even slightly self aware of his hatred of women. One is a poem in which a waitress mocks the narrator (Hugo, presumably), to which he "tried to tell her how many lovers [he'd] had.". He then drives for miles hating her, then "remembered what/ the doctor said: really a hatred of self." The second time is in a letter-poem, discussing poverty and how it damages people. He says: "finally,/ hate takes over, hippie, n-word, Indian, anyone you can lump/ like garbage in a pit, including women." At least there's a small kernel of self-knowledge there (and a whole lot of racist baggage to unpack, with that misogyny).