I can't believe that I'm going to write this...but DNF at 62%
Usually I will read a book from end to end, no matter how torturous it is. The only other book I have ever not finished is The Vampire Lestat (both because it was a sequel to my favourite book of all times but also because they turned Lestat into a mother loving pussy). But I just couldn't keep going. Not with so many books on my shelves calling out to me that I know will be worlds better than this.
If you were to judge a book by its first line, then every indication was that this would have been great.
A week after Mother found her sleeping on the ceiling, Amy Thomsett was delivered to her new school. Like a parcel.
So what went wrong?
1. Too many characters
There is a list of all the houses at the back, with all the girls and staff by their names. But this is just way too many to keep track of. Especially when some of them are referred to by their nicknames after their initial intro, and there is no reminder of who is who. Other than the main characters, Amy, Rayne, Fingers, Kali, Paulie, and Freckles, everyone else just kind of merged together. It was confusing and really infuriating.
2. Similarities
Amy is an 'Unusual,' which seemed very similar to being a 'Preculiar' (as in Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children). Disturbingly similar, actually. And while it was a focus for a while, it ended up not really seeming to matter anyway. Also, all the students have meals in a big hall where they sit in their houses on long wooden tables with the staff at the head table. Sound like Hogwarts anyone?
3. Plot
There was no sense of urgency, no concern for the characters. Why was Kali kidnapped? And after Amy and her friends go to rescue her, and she realised who was responsible, why didn't she do anything else, or hell even think about it some more. Instead it was forgotten for ages to the point where I almost forgot it happened. The main story seemed to be focused around Rayne and her hostile take over of the school to become 'Queen Ant' but seeing as she didn't even come into play until page 109, it felt almost like a completely different book.
4. Not Caring
I did not care whether any of the characters lived or died. Amy was the protagonist, but I felt so disconnected with her. Like I was just watching her from above and not allowed to enter into her inner most thoughts. What was happening meant nothing, and I could not understand what would happen if the Black Skirts were successful. Was it the end of the world? The destruction of the school? At 62% it didn't seem to be going anywhere. And I couldn't have cared less if the world swllowed the whole school.
5. Lose ends
I know I didn't finish the book, so these ends may have been tired up, but since some of the intriguing plot points in the first few chapters didn't eventuate to anything by the time I called it quits, I'll mention some here. The principal, Dr Swann, wanted to take Amy under her wing, because she was an Unusual she was supposed to be learning to harness her powers. Well, nothing happened, and the principal disappeared soon after this with no one too concerned where she was. Also, Amy's mother sent her daughter to Drearcliff after finding her floating on the ceiling, but was she scared, did she want this behaviour to stop? Amy seemed to go from denying her powers to accepting them in no time at all. And her mother was never mentioned again.
So considering all of these issues, as well as a severe case of over writing in almost every paragraph, and both the characters and plot not leaving an kind of indelible mark on me at all, I will place it back on my shelves unfinished. Maybe I will give it another go one day...but probably not.