Just. No. I started this book, and then quit somewhere around page 20 something. I just couldn’t deal with the M/C anymore, nor the OVERLY DETAILED DESCRIPTIONS and did I mention… details? And… ugh!!
But… even after reading much of the same sentiment in most of the 1-star reviews (which is what I was originally going to give this novel), I decided I’d give it another go about three days later. I REALLY hate quitting. Plus, having suffered a concussion myself, back in 2017, I figured, why not? I love mind study & behavioral analysis stuff… so, I began again. Now, I’m going with a three-star review, and here’s why…
Let me start by asking you this… Have you ever had a friend or relative relate a story to you that was SOOooo minutely detailed, you found yourself zoning out and only tuning back in when he or she raised their voice in emphasis, denoting a plot twist, etc.? Well, that’s this book. Lots and lots and lots of minute details… Pages worth.
In fact, to be completely honest, I stuck with the story, patiently hoping the pace would pick up and I would actually be given more ‘story’ to go along with my generous serving of ‘details’, soon and in more abundance, as a reward… NOPE. I made it to about 46% (page 257 of FIVE HUNDRED and FIFTY FIVE!!!) before I finally said “forget this” (I didn’t say that though… it was MUCH WORSE) and fast forwarded to page 484 (a random number chosen near the end). I can HONESTLY say that when I came across new characters & new developments in the plot, that I didn’t recognize, it wasn’t difficult to figure it all out and piece together what I’d “missed”, without losing ANY of the storyline.
Now, from 484 on… it’s a DArN good read. The ‘aha’ moments of how everything came together was BEAUTIFUL, making this a good story. Good story, but regrettably, not a good read. So much could have been omitted without ruining the thread. And this is coming from an INCREDIBLY long-winded individual, me. Easily could’ve been a 5-star novel if my endless patience hadn’t gotten annoyed with the mundane.