Michael Z. Williamson continues to follow in Robert Heinlein's footsteps, but this time not in a good way.
The Short of It: Soft porn teenage-cis-male wish-fulfillment start (of about 30% of the book) leading into infiltration sci-fi military story. This book adds nothing to the Freehold Lore and can be skipped.
The Long of It
Like Freehold, the first of the series, this book has a very long entrance building character and world before the action starts. In this case the first third of the book follows Angelica as she bounces around the star-ways. Already well-familiar with Freehold and its wars at this point (book 8 of the series and runs parallel with the existing timeline), this book follows the daughter of hippies as she engages in free love and free travel, living in the moment and hitching rides around the Human worlds. This takes 12 chapters; it could have been done in 2. But we would have missed out on the soft-porn of her being "stuffed and stretched" (verbiage used a couple-few-dozen times in the 12 chapters). Plus "spread" is used like making PBJ at a daycare - every.single.chapter, multiple times.
I've previously compared to Mr. Williamson to Mr. Heinlein for his libertarian, competent-man worldbuilding. Now I need to compare the two for the teenage-male wish-fulfillment character of a women existing solely for the sex act - Angie for Mr. Williamson, Friday for Mr. Heinlein. I know there are women who are like this, and being in a society where sex is not hushed up by a Puritan streak may be more healthy than what the US has right now, but it goes on-and-on. Not what I want in my military sci-fi. A little tingle - sure sign me up (I love romance), but 150 pages is too much. The clubbing-and-aftermaths back to a minor thread thereafter, but because the first third already pushed me past toleration, I didn't like it at all.
I trudged through the stuffing and stretching because I previously enjoyed Mr. Williamson's stories (especially the Ripple Creek series). But the problems continue. Angie, as is her nature to bounce around like a pinball, has very little agency. Only once does she grab her future and changes the direction of her life (Chapter 12). After that, she goes back to being reactive. Most of the time she doesn't have a clue to what is happening and can't explain it to the reader so we flail around in a story with no center, no movement, and no explanations.
Angie, as the point-of-view (POV) character, is acting as a reporter to the readers after the fact and she should have had time to fill in the blanks. She isn't even an unreliable narrator, just an uninformed one ... so why is she narrating the story if she doesn't know what is happening? After living through it and having time to research it after-the-fact? Got me.
Very little is added to the Freehold Lore previously presented. I think this book can be skipped. Concentrate on the Ripple Creek and Freehold proper and direct the Earth infiltration. One fail out of eight books isn't bad, but this one is a fail.
Gave up reading page 412 (way past bedtime), skipped to read chapter 39 (page 487) to epilogue. So 65 pages unread of 501. And, yeah, this is going into my giveaway pile. Not interested in finishing the book; I've already devoted too much time to it.
Trigger Alert: Torture of woman using womanly bits. Not a rape scene under the dictionary definition - i.e. male part A inserted into woman part B, but it was under the clinical definition - body parts were invaded without permission in a manner to establish power dominance. Biggest issue from this - no mental repercussions on the female after she took a shower to clean the ick factor. Just one shower. o_O?