The first book in this duology, The Wizard’s Promise, made me so nostalgic. A teenage girl who dreams of adventure gets accidentally dragged into a sea-faring quest to save a queen. Well, I was that teen girl, desperately wishing that something like that would happen to me. (I mean, I still do, but I did then too). It was so fun to see her experience life on her own, battling sea monsters and finding friends in new cultures, all while practising magic. It was a delightful return to youthful escapism.
The second book, The Nobleman’s Revenge, left me a little less impressed. While the adventures do continue, they’re soaked in a teenage romance that, like most first forays into love, is quite awkward. The small glances and nervous kisses and slippery hand-holding were just not what I’d have liked in an adventure myself, so without the nostalgia, I was left without the rose-coloured glasses and saw more of the flaws in the plot, pacing, etc. For example, I thought the motivations and machinations of the Big Bad could have been more fleshed out, as his evil never felt all that far-reaching. Perhaps that’s revealed more in the duology before this one.
Unfortunately, I also noticed a large number of typos and doubled-up words, words out of order (e.g., “…I that said” instead of “…that I said.”). The most glaring was probably the main character’s surname being misspelled multiple times.
This is a 3.5/5 for me, I think. 4/5 for Book 1 and 3/5 for Book 2, so 3.5/5 for both and rounding it up to 4/5. I would definitely recommend this to readers who are young or want to feel that spark of teenage adventure again.