I will say that I enjoyed many of the concepts that this author explored with this story, such as immortality, the depressing reality of aging and mortality, and who or what can be considered as a living, sentient being. I admit that Arthur is hardly a likeable character, which was obviously intentional, but I believe that seeing the world through his point-of-view fleshed out some of the fears that many readers may have about getting old or their own mortality, which is a very difficult thing to face. Though the novel was touching on some very deep concepts about humanity, it never explored these ideas with much depth so, in that regard, I was quite disappointed.
Admittedly, the story lost its momentum after the first third of the book. Aside from the pacing, another thing that bothered me was that many of the aspects of this "soon to be true story" was quite unbelievable. For instance, I found it inconceivable that 60 years from now, formal governments worldwide will no longer exist and will be replaced by corporations. Also, a new species of humans arose as a result of evolutionary changes that occurred from society's perpetual dependence on technology. These creatures, which cannot be classified as humans biologically, literally had pin-shaped heads. Though both elements were quite intriguing aspects of this universe, the author did very little to make these concepts convincing or believable to the readers as only a single page was utilized to explain both.
Aside from Arthur (and Lucy haha), I was also a little disappointed in the characters. Bing spent quite a bit of time describing characters, like Sallie, yet, in the end, these details never evolved into anything consequential. I was looking forward to a surprising revelation about Sallie, for many reasons, but that never happened. Liv and Gene were very boring characters, which made reading this novel more difficult because I found myself not caring about either of them.
Finally, the ending was just okay. There was one aspect I really liked about it, which explored one of the themes that I mentioned previously, but, overall, it was still very predictable.