Considering the 'Men of Valor' series...? This isn't horrific. I mean, I even finished it. I might even keep it, because it was actually somewhat enjoyable. But having said, this Somerton/Amy story is a *TOTAL* rip-off of Suzanne Brockmann's Starrett/Alyssa story. She didn't even change the initials. And because Starrett/Alyssa is *THE* most sexually charged of the Brockmann couplings, this LI book is actually far more romantic than most. Just as an FYI. Which in my opinion is a *GOOD* thing - the upped romance - but the stealing from Starrett/Alyssa thing was... all right, kinda bogus, you have to admit.
And okay, Johnson made Somerton/Starrett the sniper instead of Amy/Alyssa, reversing the roles to try to make it 'different', but is it really? C'mon. Starrett/Somerton is a SEAL, Amy/Alyssa works with him through a different agency, both of the couples are constantly at odds over the slightest thing, Somerton/Starrett turns into an idiot around her, setting her off without even trying... it's the SAME. STORY. AS. BROCKMANN'S books.
I kinda wish Johnson wasn't a copycat.
There are some better things about this one than the last two LIS/MoV books in this series by Johnson that I've read - there's actual *FAITH* in this one. Both of them pray almost all the way thru the book. Which is... a HUGE step up. Kinda wish it were more than God-demands ("Help me do this!" "Save my niece, God!" "Get me out of this!!!"), but hey, praying at ALL is an improvement, and I'll take it.
The book starts off telling us Somerton wishes he were anywhere else but on a cruise ship for his favorite cousin's wedding. Then it immediately tells us he's comfortable anywhere, as a SEAL. Soooo... why doesn't he want to be on a cruise ship in the Caribbean? We're never told, and it makes NO sense why a Navy man wouldn't want to be on the water. So... no, the writing isn't a lot better than previous books.
He's even dissing on cruise ships having pools. I don't see that as being in character with a SEAL - he would be glad he could do laps in the wee hours. And he would *get* that you can't just dive off the side of a cruise ship and swim in the ocean. NONE of her writing is ever good or logical or explained or... (((sigh.)))
Amy/Alyssa gets taken while trying to keep baddies from kidnapping her niece (an ambassador's daughter who baddies want to use as leverage to get her daddy to release a Middle Eastern baddie Amy had imprisoned). She ends up in a storage closet with cleaning chems, but never ONCE thinks of squirting/splashing any on the people coming after her. Really??? Because if she's a 'trained' agent, wouldn't she use any and all available resources?
Then there's the overdone 'crawl-through-ducts-big-enough-for-a-human' schtick that I'm SURE there's room for on a boat (?!) - that's always fun. There's a LOT cliche in this series. On top of what's stolen, of course.
Pg 96 we're told the bank account of a SEAL who takes few vacations, has no family/house, and no expenses to speak of is 'anemic'. Riiiiight. How does that work, exactly?
Pg 191 - An arm comes around her neck, and her gun clatters to the floor. Do you REALLY believe that a trained operative would drop their gun like that? Only - *ONLY* - because the author told her to. Wouldn't happen IRL. Not a chance. Shoddy writing.
Amy is half the woman Alyssa is, and Somerton doesn't have half the personality Starrett does. But there's not kinky sex in this... which... gotta say, while I skip it in Brockmann's, the foreplay sizzles WAY more over there than in this.
Having said...? This wasn't horrible. It just wasn't good. And a rip-off. Which is also not good. But if you want to stay away from books with language and sex and still get a little taste of action? This wasn't terrible. So three stars.
And who knows, maybe this is a sign that Johnson is growing as a writer? I'll take *ANY* baby steps I can get, with her. Learn from Brockmann, Liz. We need a good replacement for her, now that she's gone to the LGBTQ+ side...