3.5 stars
This book had me all over the place, I like it, I love it, I wanted to throw it at a wall, I was angry then I was engrossed for like a few pages, and repeat. Why was I so, discombobulated? Well dear friends the book, for me, felt all over the damn place.
The opening was amazing, explosives, and heart breaking. But, it slowed down, the pacing was all over the place. And repetitive, every other chapter I was hearing Joan tell me the same thing over and over again, about her parents death, why she wanted to become an assassin, wanting to make a world a better place, her resolve. I got it the first time. It was too much filler that didn't need to be there. There was over explaining, under explaining, and then there was the weird love plot that I felt had no need to be in there. I was getting a Stockholm syndrome vibe.
Outside of that, I love the overall plot and the world that was created, it's original, and when there was action, it was bloody, exciting and entertaining. I wanted to see more of Joan's training, the time skips were a little bit of a piss off because there was no transition, it just happened. I get that this is a set up book as most first books are, but come on, you just can't skip a year on a dime.
This book needs some more work, filler needs to be cut down and more background on the fighting between humans and immortals, a prologue at the start will help with this. I wanted to know more about how they came about, what happens that made the hunt start.
And Joan is a bit of a Mary-sue, I hate to say it, but that's how I feel. Outside of losing her parents, she had it pretty easy, I say this because there isn't any real detail of how horrible her training was. Her mouthy bratty attitude didn't help with that. I didn't find her all that sassy, she was quick to overreact and it got old. There wasn't enough time spent on devolving her as a character.
But there is so much good in this book, and the potential is there hidden under the filler and time skips. I can see it, almost touch it and that's why I kept reading, I needed to know how she became the villain as the synopsis said.
I am going to read the second book, like I said, I do like this story, there are just sometimes that had me shaking my head. I am in love with the plot, the darkness and hero-turned evil. Outside of my own problems with sometimes, this is truly a one of a kind book that you should take a chance on. Everyone reads differently and what I dislike you might not have a problem with. Take my recommendation that you will get hook on this world, the sinister plot and the spiral of good to evil.
Happy Reading.
E.A. Walsh