Breaking Her Innocence

Untouchable #2

by Madison Faye

Johanna

I thought it was just a job - I’d go work on a stranger’s ranch to save my aunt and uncle’s farm.

Except that was a lie, and now I’m a prisoner, being groomed to be sold to whoever can pay.

It all seems lost, until I meet the two men charged with guarding me.

Dominant, gorgeous, and rough - the two rugged cowboys look at me in a way that sends dirty, filthy, forbidden thoughts through my head and heat through places in my body it shouldn’t.

Something about them makes me want to let them take me any way they please, until I’m begging for more.

But I’m their captive, and this is all wrong. I definitely shouldn’t feel this way, and I definitely shouldn’t moan when they put their rough hands all over me.

A good girl like me shouldn’t want them to claim my innocence.

Both of them…


Roman/Colt

She doesn’t belong in a place like this. She’s too sweet, and too good.

Too innocent.

But something about that untouched purity brings out the beast in us, and makes us want to claim her as our own.

It’s our job to guard her. It’s our job to teach her, and train her - make her the perfect plaything for some rich pr*ck when he comes to buy her.

But now that we’ve laid eyes on her, there’s no way we’re giving her up.

Now we’re obsessed , and if we want to save her, we have to break her.

She’s never been touched, but we’re about to put our filthy hands all over her…


Breaking Her Innocence is a quick and filthy book involving two utterly obsessed alpha heroes, one sassy heroine, and enough insta-love, steam, and sugary-sweetness to make your Kindles melt. This mfm romance is all about her – no m/m. If you love over-the-top, slightly unrealistic, and wildly dirty stories, this one’s for you! HEA with NO CHEATING!

Genres: Menage, Romance, Erotica, M F M, Erotic Romance, Novella, Adult

132 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 6, 2017

About the author

#1 bestselling contemporary romance author Madison Faye is the dirty alter ego of the very wholesome, very normal suburban housewife behind the stories. While she might be a wife, mom, and PTA organizer on the outside, there’s nothing but hot, steamy, and raunchy fantasies brewing right beneath the surface!

Tired of keeping them hidden inside or only having them come out in the bedroom, they’re all here in the form of some wickedly hot stories. Single-minded alpha hero, sinfully taboo relationships, and wildly over-the-top scenarios. If you love it extra dirty, extra hot, and extra naughty, this is the place for you! (Just don’t tell the other PTA members you saw her here…)

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Reviews

[Alaina · Rating 3 out of 5]

I love Madison's smutty writing so much and I really enjoy her Forbidden Series.

Breaking Her Innocence is the second and final installment in this series and it was a pretty good one. It's a multiple POV from Johanna, Roman, and Colt. Johanna is basically sold as a sex slave so that she could save her uncle's farm.

First off, her uncle and aunt knew about this whole thing and I hated that about them. God, I don't know why the farm was that important to them since they didn't have the money to pay for it.. but hey.. let's sell our niece and basically guilt her into leaving with this man because hey.. her parents died a really bad time for us. Second, fuck them.

Roman and Colt were delicious looking men and the smut made me swoon. I'm glad they were there for Johanna throughout the book because Jeb, the man they worked for, gave me the cringiest(?) of cringes. THE MAN WAS CREEPY AF GUYS.

Overall, I liked this book. I'm happy for their happy ending. HOWEVER, how do people just accept not know which guy is the father of the baby?!? I will forever question that about these books.

[Raine · Rating 5 out of 5]

****ARC provided by author in exchange for an honest review.****

I am such a fan of Madison Faye. She always writes great strong heroes and innocent, yet feisty women and mostly menage. Yum! This one is no different. The story is slightly dark since Johanna is basically sold by her aunt and uncle to a smarmy rancher to help save their farm. In turn the rancher is going to auction her off to the highest bidder to use as his sex slave. Our two strong heroes are there and, also because of circumstances, are roped into helping the smarmy rancher. But Johanna's innocence leads our heroes, Roman and Colt, to fall in love and come up with a plan to save her. I won't give away the rest of the plot, but the three MCs do have an HEA at the end with some super hot sexy shenanigans thrown throughout to make this short story well worth reading.

I am reading an ARC version, but I do see that as of now the current release of 'Breaking Her Innocence' comes with two other stories:
'Sugar & Spice' and 'Professor: A First Time Novel' both of which I loved...especially Professor which had some really great panty-melting fun!

[Cheryl Graham-Petit · Rating 4 out of 5]

A quick, wildly hot, and dirty MFM romance story that will leave you panting for more. Madison Faye gives you a steady flow of steam that keeps you breathlessly reading till the end.

I volunteered to review an advanced readers copy of this book.

[April Symes · Rating 4 out of 5]

Madison Faye is one heck of a writer. Her books do get motors running… She writes about menage, alpha heroes, and sweet but sassy women. This book is really no different than what she writes about. This is a MFM romance that is quick, smutty and wildly hot but with a darker tone to it.
If you like your romance with a dark tone and you love your romance with a bit of a smutty feel, then this is the perfect read for you. You will love Joanna, Roman and Colt. This is one awesome read. It will leave you breathless and coming back for more.


My rating: 4.5 stars ****
"I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book in exchange for an honest review***

[Kika · Rating 2 out of 5]

I wasn't actually going to rate or review this, because I didn't actually want to admit I read it. Because the story is icky. I knew it would be and I read it anyway hoping for something redemptive, but nope, it's mostly just an icky backstory that leads into some alright smut that needed more lubrication to be plausible.

This is free on KU, but I wouldn't recommend it.

[Shann Luvs · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNR’D this mess

[Rosewhite · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 ⭐.

[Tracy Kincaid · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hot and sexy with a dark twist. Distracting editing issues but other then that.

[Angelia · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received this ARC copy of this book from the Author for an honest review. I whole heartedly recommend this book. There are steamy sex sences, lust, family betrayal, brotherly love, no abuse. The heroes and the heroine have instant lust.

[SBee Reviews · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is great little hot & dirty story that was very enjoyable to read ;-D

I received an ARC for Breaking Her Innocence and voluntarily reviewed this book. Nineteen-year-old Johanna has been living on her uncle and aunt's farm with their children ever since her parents died in a car crash five years ago. Their farm was in danger of going under, so they arranged for her new "employment" with Jed Pike. When she awoke in her new home, she was told that her new employment was not to be farm work, but to learn how to please men instead, and that she was to be "broken in" by two cowboys who had volunteered to do the deed, Roman and Colt. When this pair had set eyes on her two weeks earlier during the assessment visit to the farm, they knew she was way too sweet and innocent to deserve what her family did to her or was going to happen to her when her time there was over, so they take control of her training to gentle the process for her. But since Johanna was wildly attracted to them, she was quite receptive and eager to learn, and it doesn't take long at all before Roman and Colt realize that they don't want to let her go, and that the odds of being able to keep her for themselves were very, very slim. So how are they going to prevent her from being sold off to a monster when she is ready?

[Darlene I read WAY to many books · Rating 3 out of 5]

More cowboysss!! i have a small kink for them lol lets get on with the review!! we start off with poor Johanna i swear i wanted to slap her aunt and uncle who would sale off their family like that?! like who? he doesn't even tell her what "type" of farm shes working in.. like what type of family does that... She catchs a second of 2 handsome rough cowboys that she thinks she going to work with.. oh man.. is she wrong..

Colt and Roman are working for Jeb they know the shady stuff thats going on and can't stop it since they owe a debt.. is this the final push to make them break away? is seeing Johanna sold to a old fat guy enough for them??

Somethings in this was kinda wired... or meh like the guys shaving her private area since she didn't know how to shave it?

Click and buy it!!!
Instalust
2 alpha big hard protective cowboys
young virgin shy gal
No Cheating
Drama shes sold to a man so her family can keep their place
M-M-F
Smuuutttt loadss of it
anal play
HEA
EP

[Dee · Rating 5 out of 5]

WHAT COULD BE BETTER THAN ONE HOT COWBOY?!… TWO!!!

Madison Faye has introduced another SMOKIN HOT, 5 STAR read to the insta-lust/love genre! Combining not just one, but two scorching hot cowboys, along with a sweet innocent young woman, guarantees the perfect recipe for one steamy ride in the hay! Fast paced, “Breaking Her Innocence” flows seamlessly. For a novella, the plot is very well developed and the main characters are extremely likeable. As with all of Madison Faye’s novellas, the story is professionally written with few to no grammatical errors. Highly engaging, from the first page to the last, I highly recommend “Breaking Her Innocence” (18 and over of course)!

RATING DETAILS (based on a 5-star rating system):

STEAM FACTOR: 5 SMOKIN HOT KINKY STARS!!
WRITING STYLE: 5 STARS
PLOT: 5 STARS (Based on a 1943 KB file size)
ENGAGING CHARACTERS: 5 STARS
SATISFYING CONCLUSION: 5 STARS

[Camille · Rating 3 out of 5]

This came free with another purchase by the same author. The initial premise is disturbing and I don't like it. But this stuff reminds me of porn (not that I watch it on a regular basis) you have the scene and the characters and then you have a lot of sex. What cracks me up is reading some of the other reviews with "strong characters" or heroines. Um, no. It's not that serious and it's not that developed. I would actually like to read some actual romance where you can feel the love. That's not what this author writes and that's actually fine. She's basically writing porn for female readers. Except they all end in happy relationships with babies. So it's not all complete dirtiness. I mean, it mostly is.

[Destiny Bridwell · Rating 5 out of 5]

I got this as an ARC for my honest review. I do love the books that Madison writes. This is not my first nor my last by here. This was a quick and steamy read. I was a little uneasy about that was going on but it was a great read nevertheless. Johanna has been sold to Jeb to help her Aunt and Uncle keep their farm. She thought she was going to work off he debt but it turns out she is going to be trained and sold to the highest bidder. That is how she meets Colt and Roman. They are guard her and help train her for her new life. Only she becomes their little angel. It will have you panting with each page.

[CV · Rating 3 out of 5]

Like it says in the blurb, "If you love over-the-top, slightly unrealistic, and wildly dirty stories, this one’s for you!"

Johanna, Colt and Roman are all in the same boat and up s*** creek without a paddle. Roman and Colt are working for Jeb to pay off a debt and Johanna was sold to Jeb to pay off a debt for her Uncle so he wouldn't lose his farm. That's the gist of the story.

This is a short erotic romance and has lots of sexy to it that was very arousing. There is an instant attraction between the three of them with a HEA.

The story itself was okay, but I guess you don't buy this kind of book for the storyline.

I voluntarily received an ARC of this book.

[Shelly Celli · Rating 4 out of 5]

I voluntarily received and reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book. This was a good read. The story was great and made me feel for the people who got stuck in the lifestyle that these characters did. To feel you have no other choice than to turn yourself over to human traffickers has to be horrible. Johanna didn't deserve to be treated the way her aunt and uncle treated her, like the bad seed of the family and worth nothing other than free labor. Roman and Colt had their bad times as well that brought them to the farm, but meeting Johanna gave them the reason to get out of it. I loved how things worked out for them all though. Thank you for sharing this story with us.

[Aneesah · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was HOT! That scene on the edge of the bathtub...YASSSSSsss!

My only complaint (outside of a few typos which I have come to expect on these books a "rent" from Kindle Unlimited) was how quickly the ending was wrapped up. I mean, I know for these short reads, I'm sure the author may have a word count quota within which he/she may be working but sometimes I feel like on the end they are phoning it in. Like they get to word 12,000 of a 15K and they say, "ok, what's the quickest way for me to tie a bow on this one and wrap that sh*t up?" The explosion of the "farm" that presumably killed all the bad guys that were potentially going to buy/sell the heroine. . . nah, I'm not buying it. That was just a little too "neat" for me. Otherwise, not a bad little sexy read.

[Nikola Christain · Rating 4 out of 5]

I read this following "Sharing Beauty", and liked it. That's pretty much what it boils down to.

Not that I'm saying I have a thing for cowboys, but... yeah, okay, I have a thing for cowboys. Two cowboys? Even better.

The "not to be touched" angle is a good one, and Faye approaches it well. I like the chemistry between the characters in this one, and thought the men might be her finest characters yet (that I have read, anyway).

They have something to them, at least. More than just being sexy, I mean.

The MFM scenes are hot, which is the whole point of this story. Faye accomplished what she set out to do, so what's not to like?

[Debbie Ballard · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved reading the amazing and fantastic romance story written by the fabulously talented Madison Faye. I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader's copy of the book.
Johanna thinks she is going to Jeb Pike's farm to work and has no idea she is being sold into slavery. Two handsome men working off a debt, Roman and Colt, want Johanna and offer to train her. Chemistry, passion, and feelings ignite between the three of them but time is running out.
Read the highly recommended, wonderfully written full of romance, and a love story of two men and a woman.

[Rebecca · Rating 4 out of 5]

**I received this ARC in exchange for an honest voluntary review** This was a hot & sexy short read. Loved the bits of danger weaved in throughout the story. Of course the main focus is the two sexy cowboys Colt & Roman, who are under the thumb of a "farm owner" to work off a debt & the virgin farm girl Johanna, who is to be sold off to slavery. However, the two cowboys will protect her even if it kills them. Good story pacing & storyline for this short & of course the sexy scenes were off the charts on this one. Would recommend :)

[Ann L · Rating 4 out of 5]

Poor Johanna has been sold by her Aunt & Uncle to help pay off debts on their farm.
She thinks she'll be working around the farm, but she's a prisoner brought to be groomed. Roman & Colt see how innocent she is & ask if they could be the ones to break her in knowing they would be more considerate than Jed.

I voluntarily received an advanced readers copy from the author and considering this was a short story it was quite good with a lot of action

[Skye Hegyes · Rating 2 out of 5]

I just... can't... This was in a bundle with "Professor" and I should never have read it. The premise of it seemed intriguing but once I discovered it was about sex trafficking, I should have just put it down. Because of the situation going on with the female lead, I just couldn't believe the romance between her and the other two men who were supposed to be "training" her. It felt unrealistic and a lot like Stockholm syndrome, which... *shudders* No...

[Robin · Rating 3 out of 5]

This one felt rushed to me. There was quite a bit of information that was not part of the story but that was mentioned. Were there more girls, did everyone in the explosion die, what about the staff of the "farm"?? How were the three of them able to get away with how loud they were during sex? Was noone else in the building, no cameras or any other henchmen around?? The way that she lost her virginity one night then anal virginity the next just blows me away, you go girl.

[Susana Leite · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was gifted this ARC for an honest review.

I liked this story very much! The book is an interesting and hot read.

Since this is the first book I read by Madison Faye, I finished the book curious about the author's other stories.

I recommend this story to everyone who's looking a good and hot story!

[Karen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Before you start reading this book make sure
you are not in public because you are going to
get hot and steamy.
Right from the first page you will not be able to
put it down. There's definitely all the right ingredients
in this book to make one fantastic read.
I voluntarily reviewed an advance reader copy of this.
Definitely going to read more books from this author.

[Sue · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was an ok short book about a girl sold into slavery and taken over by two men who wanted to keep her for themselves. It was the usual innocent girl/bad guys story that was pretty much pure erotica. Perfect for those who are in the mood for a naughty good time.

*** 3 *** "good girls play hard" stars

[Eliza Olsen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love times two !

OMG that was awe inspiring. Love times two makes just the right amount of love for Johanna , Ramon and Colt . Yes Madison knew the best way to kill a rattlesnake lol . You take off the head perfect end to a 🐍. Is that confusing enough to make you want to find out hehe . I hope so it's worth the time to read you may be surprised .

[Misty Schott · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love a good ménage romance and this story has two hot cowboys and a young beautiful innocent girl. They are all caught up in some very crappy circumstances and must figure a way out of their predicament. Along the way they have some very steamy sexy hot times together. If you enjoy a good ménage romance with a great story to boot definitely get this book.

[Diann · Rating 5 out of 5]

WOW! I can't say enough good things about this wonderful book.
It is very sexy and exciting. I truly loved this amazing story and
would highly recommend it to everyone.
I voluntarily read an advance review copy of this book.

[Mare · Rating 2 out of 5]

Ok free book #2 within Sharing Beauty. Odd premise in my opinion, Johanna is sold by her aunt & uncle so they don't lose their farm. Colt & Roman are basically indebted to Jed who bought her. Another lust at 1st sight. Don't like the whole women slave concept personally.