When Mark left the home of his adoptive parents seventeen years ago, he swore to himself that he wouldn’t be back until he could get his revenge. Now eighteen years later he’d moved on and built a life for himself, leaving the past behind. That is until his adoptive brother’s daughter searched him out. The brother who’d made his life a living hell. Now he’s back in his hometown at the request of his ‘niece’ and his revenge just might take another form.
I don't even know what to rate this one. I spent the entire book LMAO. So here is a bit of the book spelled out in gif form...
Our illustrious hero Uncle Mark is sporting an 11-inch dick topped off with a 4-inch thick cockhead...
Our overendowed hero decides his (not really) niece is going to be his and proceeds to devirginize her in a way that leaves the poor girl having some sort of epileptic fit. Complete with eyes rolling up into her head and passing out. Seriously the scene went ON and ON and ON.
He then goes on to "chew her tits" His words, not mine...
Next up we have him sticking his finger in her ass which causes her to squirt and go into another epileptic fit. In fact, ALL this chick does is squirt. Like ALL THE TIME! How this bed wasn't a swimming pool of vaginal fluids is beyond me...
Moving on. After cleaning her up from the blood (yikes) and vag fluid, our intrepid hero was back at it AGAIN (seriously all they did was have sex for the entirety of the book.) This time he "drove his cock past her cervix and into her womb" At this point, I REALLY think he should have picked up the phone and dialed 911...cause that shit ain't right!
But hey..he has gone this far so let us stick that 11-inch (4-inched head) cock right up her ass SANS lube...because why not?
AND I have saved the best for last. I am not entirely sure that our intrepid hero is entirely human. Why do you ask? Because he apparently has a translucent dick...
"Right in the middle of her orgasm I lowered my head and took her swollen nipple into my mouth and sucked. Her pussy caressed my cock and made the sap rise in my balls. As I slammed into her, my cock started shooting off. I wondered as I watched it rush through the chute and into her if this would be the one that breeds her"
And that folks was basically the book in a nutshell. I'll stand back while you all run to pick this little gem of a story up...
4.25 BAD UNCLE MARK STARS She was coming home with me and I didn’t give a fuck what I had to do to make that shit happen. There was no way I was leaving her behind. Besides, I don’t think I could. Something told me I was well and truly fucked.
This book was outrageously naughty and HOT!
The hero, Mark, is NOT the biological uncle in this story. He is an adopted son and the heroine's father was the unexpected child his parents had after they had already adopted the hero. Obviously, they no longer wanted the hero now that they were finally able to have their own natural son. So the poor hero became unwanted luggage and I think that's extremely sad!
PEOPLE LIKE THIS DONT DESERVE KIDS, IMO! It's just wrong to do this to an innocent child!
The heroine, Noël, finds out about her adopted uncle and goes looking to forge a relationship. She was clearly obsessed with him as she communicate with him and tries to get him to come to her grad. He does show up and the sparks fly!!
Now, the hero did have some feelings for the heroine's mother at one point but I want to clearly state that the HERO DOES NOT HAVE SEX WITH THE MOTHER!
And here is the quote proving this fact in black and white. This what is said on the subject after the hero confronts the heroine's father (aka his brother through adoption) the following day after her grad, "....Does she know you fucked her slut of a mother?” I never had her mother you sick fuck. I didn’t say it out loud.
Therefore, he didn't have sex with both of them and he wasn't her real "uncle." And I, for one, was feeling very relieved by this.
Good thing too because the physical things they did went beyond naughty and entered into the purely SINFUL category.
Here is a small sample, I slid my eleven-inch cock up and down her slit before forcing the flanged head past her tight cunt lips. I love the fact that her pussy gapes open after I pull out, but as soon as my cockhead get near her that shit closes up tight. Now I watched my cockhead force her open to take my meat. It was hot as fuck.
THIS WHOLE BOOK WAS HOT!
This is all the information you are going to get out of me on this book, but I really enjoyed this book and I don't care what everyone says about the subject JORDAN SILVER knows how to write an alpha and some hot smut! I AM A HUGE FAN!
Now, I'm not saying all her books are safe, but this one is. So why not venture in and experience this HOT SMUTTY GOOD/BADNESS FOR YOURSELF! You never know, you might become a fan yourself!?
Bossy alpha male in true Jordan Silver fashion. Taboo "uncle/niece" relationship. He never knew she existed. It was a little weird when she called him Uncle Mark when they were having sex.
He dated her mom when they were in high school. Her mom chose the heroine's dad because he was rich. It broke the hero's heart and he left, never returning until the heroine asked him to come to her party. The whole "dating her mom" thing was uneccesary as far as I'm concerned. They may not have had sex but if he cared for her so much, you know they at least made out. Would you want to know your husband once made out with your mom? Chew on that for a minute.
I'm going to try to be nice about it but I will say that if you could cringe to a point where your brain is like hella nah bich, this book would take you there.
Basically, our young hymen laden heroine has an adoptive uncle whom she has a major lady boner for even though she's never met him. She finds him sups hot and continually fingers herself while messaging him, also hinting she wants to boink. She has parent issues and thinks that the dude who dated her mom and was dumped would be so happy to bag her, because, Ay papi.
The hero wants REVENGE on the fam who fcked him over, and decides to do it by screwing his non blood pseudo niece. Also he really knows shes a submissive through her texts, gets her "daddy's princess" necklace on the first meeting and then almost wets her through his leaking dong on the dance floor.
Then they finally "bang bang into the womb" which was...an experience. These are only FEW examples..
It had been years since I’d seen a hairy pussy. I was surprised when my fingers first found her under her underwear. But the soft curls surrounding her deep gash, which was my ultimate goal, added a little extra spice. I was experiencing a lot of firsts tonight it seems. I usually prefer a well-shaved cunt, but instead of being repulsed I found the sight when I turned her around to face me exciting. Plus the thought of shaving her pussy later made my cock leak even more. He definitely has not seen a lot of 70s porn, and I wonder why most of her heroes having a shaving fetish
I love to eat pussy. I can spend hours eating the right pussy and I had a feeling that hers was going to be the queen of all cunts. Seems like he ate a lot of cats
The gush of liquid into my mouth surprised me so much I almost let her clit slip out of my mouth. But instead I held on, sucking all her sweet juice into my lungs. Point 1. Her vagina is a leaking faucet Point 2.Fluid in lungs leads to aspiration pneumonia
I’ve never tasted anything like her before. Fresh, sweet, slippery pussy juice like only the young can have I guess. WOW
I love a woman who cums. Love making them cum. I have never seen one cum as spectacularly as my darling niece. Say WUT
Fuck me she really is a gusher. No one-time fluke. If I hit her G-spot, her pussy shoots juice. Is this poetry?
She couldn’t fit my whole length inside her mouth, in fact she could barely get her lips around the head, but with the pre-cum and her spit it was easy for her to stroke my cock while eating the head. Is his peen an elephant's trunk..
The first spurt hit me hard, almost knocking me off of his cock, but I held tight with both hands and stroked jet after jet of hot sperm into my mouth. Please kill me
By the end of that week I was fighting my kid for the tit. She’s such a dainty little thing she didn’t feed much and my poor wife was always left hurting. What’s a guy to do? Im officially done. Time to go on a long JS break again.
This was supposed to be a taboo read. It just ended up being a weird, traumatic brain herpes with loads of leaking cum and gushing cooches.
Unrated.
P.S. Dearest authors. Women can successfully have many pregnancies, but please stop with the "I'll breed you as soon as the doctor gives you an OK". The body needs time to recover and how is breeding like a rabbit sexy? Poor heroines.
I never thought I'd say there were too much sex scenes in a book. I love to read them but while reading this one, I kept thinking when they would stop. Maybe because I'm not as connected as I wanted to be. It's not a bad book for me. It's just not as good as I'm used to when it comes to JS books.
The story is about Mark and Noel.
Her grandparents adopted him before they found out they're having a baby and it was too late to return him. He didn't have a good life with them so he left.
After eighteen years, Noel searched for him and asked him to come to her graduation.
He's a rich and successful man now. He came for her and won't be leaving without her.
This book was hot. It's Jordan Silver so I always expect shock and awe with her books. I would have given it higher because this one was pretty good but...
I hated the cover
I did not like her calling him uncle Mark! Especially in bed, or in public after everyone knows your a couple!! it skeeved me out I couldn't get into that. Gross. He wasn't really an uncle. He was adopted, left the family at 17 because the family treated him like crap and never returned. .No one ever brought him up or acknowledged his existence, the heroine heard things in passing about him from the town so out of curiosity she sought him out.
I wish it didn't just end, even though there is an epilogue I feel like it never had an ending. It just skipped to the epilogue.
So, if I could name one author that I read religiously (wow, that sounds very wrong in this context) and yet ashamed to announce to the world, it would be Jordan Silver.
This book is about Aaron niece looking for her long lost uncle (though. It really blood related since he was adopted) to take her away from her annoying family. They meet and insta-attraction! Lots of sexy times here so if you're not into that don't pickup this book.
Well, you can say now that small ott stories (smuts) are no longer my scene !!
I mean yeah, there was a time i used to enjoy them and some of them are even my favourites but now i can't help but roll my eyes all the time or laugh at some absurd scenes!!
But i am pretty sure i can flip anytime but for now i am done 👅🤗
Mark was the son his parents never wanted, he was adopted but shortly after they had him they were able to conceive their golden child. His childhood was often met with tolerance and distance. He left as soon as turned eighteen and never looked back. When his niece, not by blood invites him to her graduation he decides to go. What he doesn't expect is the chemistry between them and the desire to make her his.
This was a bit too much for me, I had a hard time with Noel constantly calling Mark Uncle. Normally I like Jordan Silver's books but this one was a bit uncomfortable at times.
It's not that I think this one was bad but it was short and considering that it was like 75% sex and very little story. Mark was adopted as a baby seven months before his adopted parents had a baby boy of their own named Roy. It was too late to return him and there was a lot of resentment in the family because of this. Unfortunately Mark was the one who bared the brunt of their hostility even though he was an innocent child. When Mark and Roy were both 17 Mark was in love with Elaine but when she found out Roy would be the one to inherit the family fortune she dumped Mark for Roy. Having had enough of his so called family Mark left town and never looked back becoming a success all on his own. It's now 18 years later and Noel, Roy and Elaine's daughter is graduating from high school. Noel doesn't like her womanizing father who almost ran the family business into the ground or her mother who has always been indifferent to her. They live in a small town so even though her family never mentions him Noel has heard all about her Uncle Mark. She's curious to meet him so she tracks him down and invites him to her graduation. They've been texting each other for months and Noel has developed quite a crush on Mark so she's very anxious to finally meet him in person. Here is a line from the book that had me pissing my pants laughing : There was a bulge in her tummy where my cock was almost protruding. Lol !
I absolutely love reading Jordan Silver books they never disappoint.
Uncle Mark is there after Noel has tracked him down after he dis-owned his adoptive family 18 years ago. Noel & Uncle Mark have been exchanging flirty text messages and Mark decides that he will attend the party and maybe extract the revenge on his adoptive brother that he deserves, that is until he sets eyes on Noel and the game plan changes. Now he wants her as his and nothing is stopping him from claiming what he is.
Get ready for a dirty, hot, smutty and unbelievable read. Couldn’t stop reading this book. Be warned there are some seriously hot sex scenes in this……
Could not put it down. Seriously hot and not just the sex scenes but wow. Any fan of Jordan Silver will love this book as well as the others. But be warned have a fan near by you will need one.
This book gets the award for weirdest sex scene ever.
As usual, Silver's heroes have monster cocks. Like..."get that shit away from me you freak" sized cocks".
And the heroine doesn't have orgasms, I think she either; A: gets possessed à la Regan in The Exorcist, or B: has epilepsy, and someone should call a doctor.
I'm going with possession, because similarly like Regan, she squirts.
If you read any of Jordan Silvers stories you know how HOT HOT HOT they are, this is the same. Girl falls in love with uncle but he really isn't her uncle not blood related tho. HEA
Partendo dalla copertina che è qualcosa di orribile il libro non è molto meglio. Praticamente lui prende la "nipote" ci sono due scene di sesso e il libro finisce. Lui all'inizio parla di sottomissione ma tanto è buttato lì a cazzo perchè non viene sviluppato il tema. Nelle scene erotiche lui continua a ripetere sempre le stesse cose. E poi c'è un epilogo che ci mostra che stanno assieme con una figlia assolutamente a random. Perché ripeto la storia sono due scopate e lui che la porta fuori di casa dei genitori. Fine
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She did it again I absolutely loved this book!!! I would totally recommend this book it went well beyond all of my expectations and I can't wait for more books to come out!!!!!
This was a great read! I absolutely could not put it down to drive home from work. I stayed at work to finish reading before making my way home. Thank you! I love alpha men!
Quick super sexy hot read. Instead of the revenge he was once upon a time seeking, Mark ends up with more than he bargained for when he returns to his hometown for his niece's graduation.
Ehm... Ok, I don't know how I should rate this. There were some good bits, and then...well, some really bad shit. Like, I'm incredulous I kept reading, that sort of stuff. First off, the girl had a seriously thick hymen, cause it took him like 4 hard thrusts to get through it. And she bled like she was murdered. Second, the way she kept squirting, I would have suggested she at least drank some water in between sessions. Dehydration is real. Three, he had a big as fuck dick and took her ass sans lube (well, except her copious amounts of pussy juice). It must have hurt like a S.O.B. Four, he must have had a double personality or something, because one moment he was KINDA sweet, the next was angry and kinda violent. You pull that shit with me, I'll feed your balls to the neighbor's dog. And last (well, for now), there was too much sex. I mean, except for the first few chapters, as soon as she meets him at the hotel, they start fucking like maniacs and never ever stop. So... I really wanted to rate it 3 stars, but I'm not sure I could. It's a 2.5 stars at most.
So a few things happened here. Older male sudo family member, young girl taboo. Semi attention grabbing story line about a child scorned who comes back for revenge and finds a taboo relationship. Typical Jordan Silver alpha male "punishes" the woman for an infraction using rough painful sex. All that being what it is all it amounted to was a gigantic f**k fest. That's great if all you're looking to do is get off which don't get me wrong has a place and time and I'm not knocking it at all. However, I was looking for a story that drew me in and grabbed on never letting go. I didn't get that and that was a major disappointment. I found myself skimming paragraphs and sometimes skipping full pages just to get through the sheer amount of sex. This one fell way short for me.