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The Grumpface
The Grumpface is a poetic fairy-tale that tells the story of Dan, an inventor who ventures into a forest looking for a rose. Instead he finds the mysterious Grumpface who threatens to hold him captive unless he passes some difficult challenges. What follows is a humorous adventure that neither Dan nor the Grumpface could have anticipated.
The Grumpface is a tale in the spirit of any grand adventure. It is about a clumsy young inventor's quest for love and the challenges he must face to find it. It is also a tale of bravery, absurdity and happiness, and the power of these qualities over negativity and sheer grumpiness.
Every parent will be acquainted with their own little 'grumpface' now and then. This story stands as a small piece of hope - that no matter how ingrained the grump, there will always remain in every one of us a smile or a laugh just waiting to come out.
The Grumpface is a tale in the spirit of any grand adventure. It is about a clumsy young inventor's quest for love and the challenges he must face to find it. It is also a tale of bravery, absurdity and happiness, and the power of these qualities over negativity and sheer grumpiness.
Every parent will be acquainted with their own little 'grumpface' now and then. This story stands as a small piece of hope - that no matter how ingrained the grump, there will always remain in every one of us a smile or a laugh just waiting to come out.
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32 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 1, 2017
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B.C.R. Fegan
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B.C.R. Fegan is a writer and sedulous scholar of philosophical, theological, and Assyriological interests.
He is also the author of several award-winning books for children and is the founder of TaleBlade Press.
A resident of the wild and wind-swept isle of Tasmania, he enjoys study, teaching and producing books that have a profound impact on the positive development of children and young adults.
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July 17, 2017
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July 1, 2017
I received this book from TaleDale Press for an honest review. Thank you to them and the author for providing me with this opportunity.
I am a huge fan of picture books and read them all the time for work so I was excited when I was asked to review a copy of this book. The things about picture books is that they are versatile and can be enjoyable for both adults and children. What I liked most about this book was the fact that it made me feel like I was reading a new and improved take on a fairy tale. I'm a huge fan of any sort of re-tellings so this definitely was a bonus for me. I also enjoyed the artwork which was definitely rich in color and looked quite different from a lot of artwork I've been seeing in children's books lately. The story maintained my attention and definitely made me smile at various points.
There was one thing I didn't find appealing about the book and it was the rhyme scheme. Sometimes it worked perfectly which is a great way/tool for children to improve their reading skills; however, there was a time when it didn't work for me at all and the text become awkward and felt slightly forced. I understand what the author was trying to do; however, it didn't work for the book on a consistent basis.
Overall, it was a great picture book. I really enjoyed it and I would love to see more things from this author.
I am a huge fan of picture books and read them all the time for work so I was excited when I was asked to review a copy of this book. The things about picture books is that they are versatile and can be enjoyable for both adults and children. What I liked most about this book was the fact that it made me feel like I was reading a new and improved take on a fairy tale. I'm a huge fan of any sort of re-tellings so this definitely was a bonus for me. I also enjoyed the artwork which was definitely rich in color and looked quite different from a lot of artwork I've been seeing in children's books lately. The story maintained my attention and definitely made me smile at various points.
There was one thing I didn't find appealing about the book and it was the rhyme scheme. Sometimes it worked perfectly which is a great way/tool for children to improve their reading skills; however, there was a time when it didn't work for me at all and the text become awkward and felt slightly forced. I understand what the author was trying to do; however, it didn't work for the book on a consistent basis.
Overall, it was a great picture book. I really enjoyed it and I would love to see more things from this author.
May 26, 2018
What a fun kids story. I had fun reading it to my four-year-old granddaughter, with its rhyming, lyrical language and a nice mix of things that felt silly (aka fun, for a four-year-old) and serious. That my granddaughter was giggling at the Grumpface (the guy in the book, not her grandfather) was another good sign. We both enjoyed and my granddaughter hopes to revisit the grumpy old guy (that would be the grandfather this time) for another reading of The Grumpface.
**Originally written for "Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy. **
**Originally written for "Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy. **
July 30, 2017
In The Grumpface, B. C. R. Fegan author and Daniela Frongia illustrator, crafted an entertaining book for any child. With a premise easy to follow, the child will giggle and wiggle as they listen to this fun filled book.
A grumpy man became grumpy with a wizard. The wizard changed him into Grumpface and placed him deep in the dark forest. Grumpface would have to laugh before he would change back to a man. He devised a game for the people who wandered into the forest. They had to complete three task or stay in the forest. Dan wanted to find a rose for the flower vender, Bella, who he loved. Going into the forest, he meets Grumpface and laughter follows as Dan tried to complete the three task.
I love rhyming poems and stories; I am sure any child would love to have this book. The rhyming will catch the adult or child's attention immediately. Children will find the rhyming easy to remember and follow. All children love to have someone read to them; this book is perfect for any time of day as you set with your child.
With illustrations, detailed and colorful, children will love looking at the pages in The Grumpface. I do not think they will be frighten as Grumpface resembles an old grumpy green leprechaun. With help from the reader/adult, children will understand laughter can change a person's attitude and outlook; the reader/adult should explain Grumpface becomes a different person after seeing Dan's funny attempts to complete the three task. The reader/adult can also impress upon the child how the man became Grumpface; an excellent teaching tool. An adult could sit with the child who's reading age and explain the concepts of the book.
I found The Grumpface perfect for child ages 5-10. The Grumpface has a happy ending for all. Also, I would not hesitate to buy this book for a child. I am sure it will become a favorite book in mom's arsenal; a good book for any child's collection.
The GRUMPFACE RECOMMENDATION: STARS 4
FINALLY, PLEASE NOTE:
Additionally, I received this book from the author and chose to voluntarily review the book with an honest children’s book review.
A grumpy man became grumpy with a wizard. The wizard changed him into Grumpface and placed him deep in the dark forest. Grumpface would have to laugh before he would change back to a man. He devised a game for the people who wandered into the forest. They had to complete three task or stay in the forest. Dan wanted to find a rose for the flower vender, Bella, who he loved. Going into the forest, he meets Grumpface and laughter follows as Dan tried to complete the three task.
I love rhyming poems and stories; I am sure any child would love to have this book. The rhyming will catch the adult or child's attention immediately. Children will find the rhyming easy to remember and follow. All children love to have someone read to them; this book is perfect for any time of day as you set with your child.
With illustrations, detailed and colorful, children will love looking at the pages in The Grumpface. I do not think they will be frighten as Grumpface resembles an old grumpy green leprechaun. With help from the reader/adult, children will understand laughter can change a person's attitude and outlook; the reader/adult should explain Grumpface becomes a different person after seeing Dan's funny attempts to complete the three task. The reader/adult can also impress upon the child how the man became Grumpface; an excellent teaching tool. An adult could sit with the child who's reading age and explain the concepts of the book.
I found The Grumpface perfect for child ages 5-10. The Grumpface has a happy ending for all. Also, I would not hesitate to buy this book for a child. I am sure it will become a favorite book in mom's arsenal; a good book for any child's collection.
The GRUMPFACE RECOMMENDATION: STARS 4
FINALLY, PLEASE NOTE:
Additionally, I received this book from the author and chose to voluntarily review the book with an honest children’s book review.
May 5, 2017
We've all had those days where it seems like we can't do anything right. At least, I've had them, and I'm guessing you have too. In the picture book The Grumpface, Dan is having one of those days. Actually, he's always having one of those days. Dan is an inventor, but he just can't seem to get any of his inventions to work. He also can't work up the courage to talk to Bella, the beautiful girl he sees selling flowers every day outside his window.
When Dan gets captured by the Grumpface - a cranky creature who will only release Dan if he can achieve one out of three tasks - it seems like Dan is destined to remain a prisoner forever. Because how could he possibly succeed at the Grumpface's impossible tasks when he can't do anything right ever?
What Dan doesn't realize is that sometimes getting it wrong is even better than getting it right.
The Grumpface is a fun little story, in the vein of Dr. Seuss, about a hapless young inventor and an old grump under a curse. The illustrations are fun, the story is whimsical, and the ending is a bit of a surprise.
I'm guessing we've also all had days when we're more like the Grumpface (or maybe days when we start out as Dan and end up as the Grumpface).
Whether you're a well-meaning optimist whose ventures keep failing, or a hardened pessimist who just can't shake that layer of grumpiness, The Grumpface is a story for you.
When Dan gets captured by the Grumpface - a cranky creature who will only release Dan if he can achieve one out of three tasks - it seems like Dan is destined to remain a prisoner forever. Because how could he possibly succeed at the Grumpface's impossible tasks when he can't do anything right ever?
What Dan doesn't realize is that sometimes getting it wrong is even better than getting it right.
The Grumpface is a fun little story, in the vein of Dr. Seuss, about a hapless young inventor and an old grump under a curse. The illustrations are fun, the story is whimsical, and the ending is a bit of a surprise.
I'm guessing we've also all had days when we're more like the Grumpface (or maybe days when we start out as Dan and end up as the Grumpface).
Whether you're a well-meaning optimist whose ventures keep failing, or a hardened pessimist who just can't shake that layer of grumpiness, The Grumpface is a story for you.
March 1, 2018
Cover
Cover artwork is quite good. It's bold and fun and appealing. The "Grumpface" is wonderfully expressive, and this immediately draws the reader in. I would recommend a bit more shadow under his hat so that his (green) face stands out more from the green in the background.
The title treatment is good. I'm a little thrown off by the positioning of the author/illustrator credits. Since the two name are given equal prominence in size, the fact that they're not lined up bothers me. Either add "Written by" above the authors name, or at least line up the two names horizontally (as is done on the title page).
Illustrations
The artwork is entertaining and quite well done. All of the characters are expressive and interesting - and of course, the Grumpface is highly entertaining throughout.
There are a few pages in particular where the art is especially impressive. I loved the scene in the cave, as the lighting is very well done and there's a genuine sense of depth and scale.
Story
The story of the Grumpface is fun, entertaining, and well-paced. It teaches a nice little lesson without being too "preachy." As always, I'm not a huge fan of rhyming books. This one is pretty good, though some of the wording seems a bit forced. Overall though, I do recommend The Grumpface. I think families will enjoy the pacing and storytelling, as well as the fun illustrations.
Cover artwork is quite good. It's bold and fun and appealing. The "Grumpface" is wonderfully expressive, and this immediately draws the reader in. I would recommend a bit more shadow under his hat so that his (green) face stands out more from the green in the background.
The title treatment is good. I'm a little thrown off by the positioning of the author/illustrator credits. Since the two name are given equal prominence in size, the fact that they're not lined up bothers me. Either add "Written by" above the authors name, or at least line up the two names horizontally (as is done on the title page).
Illustrations
The artwork is entertaining and quite well done. All of the characters are expressive and interesting - and of course, the Grumpface is highly entertaining throughout.
There are a few pages in particular where the art is especially impressive. I loved the scene in the cave, as the lighting is very well done and there's a genuine sense of depth and scale.
Story
The story of the Grumpface is fun, entertaining, and well-paced. It teaches a nice little lesson without being too "preachy." As always, I'm not a huge fan of rhyming books. This one is pretty good, though some of the wording seems a bit forced. Overall though, I do recommend The Grumpface. I think families will enjoy the pacing and storytelling, as well as the fun illustrations.
July 13, 2017
With the whirl of a fairy tale, this book pits the grumpiest of grumps against a man that just might make him giggle.
Grumpface was once a normal man. . .or so they say. He was so grumpy that he was placed under a curse. Whenever travelers run across him, they are taken captive and must complete one of three tasks to gain their freedom again. But when a very clumsy traveler happens across, a strange end awaits Grumpface.
I love the cover on this one and the illustrations of Grumpface. His trolly glare hits hard, making it clear just how grumpy this guy is. The illustrations in general are bright and bold, and bring the story across nicely. The text is rhymed and sits alongside the illustrations to create an easy read aloud. Young listeners will quickly understand what's going on and sink into the tale. The message is clear as Grumpface starts to smirk, although the humor isn't exaggerated and remains, in most cases, more mild.
The fairy tale brings a little adventure, a little humor and a clear message. Children ages 4 and up are a fitting audience for this one.
I received a complimentary copy and wanted to leave my honest thoughts.
Grumpface was once a normal man. . .or so they say. He was so grumpy that he was placed under a curse. Whenever travelers run across him, they are taken captive and must complete one of three tasks to gain their freedom again. But when a very clumsy traveler happens across, a strange end awaits Grumpface.
I love the cover on this one and the illustrations of Grumpface. His trolly glare hits hard, making it clear just how grumpy this guy is. The illustrations in general are bright and bold, and bring the story across nicely. The text is rhymed and sits alongside the illustrations to create an easy read aloud. Young listeners will quickly understand what's going on and sink into the tale. The message is clear as Grumpface starts to smirk, although the humor isn't exaggerated and remains, in most cases, more mild.
The fairy tale brings a little adventure, a little humor and a clear message. Children ages 4 and up are a fitting audience for this one.
I received a complimentary copy and wanted to leave my honest thoughts.
May 13, 2017
The following book was kindly sent to me by the author, B.C.R. Fegan, who requested a review. This book is out now and you can get a physical or ebook copy by visiting the publisher's website, TaleBlade Press, or by checking out Amazon. :-)
The Grumpface by B.C.R. Fegan with illustrations by Daniela Frongia is told entirely in rhyme. It's the story of Dan who is a clumsy dreamer inventor who is simply trying to win over the affections of the girl he's loved from afar. The Grumpface is a creature determined to thwart anyone he comes into contact with no matter how earnest or good-hearted. It's not a huge leap to learn that the main character and Dan have a run-in and shenanigans ensue. If you're looking for a sweet book about a character that never gives up no matter how insurmountable the odds then you should look no further. Added bonus is that this book is told in rhyming verse which hearkens back to the fairytales of old (and which little people especially enjoy). This is one that I think they'll be requesting over and over to read. 7/10
The Grumpface by B.C.R. Fegan with illustrations by Daniela Frongia is told entirely in rhyme. It's the story of Dan who is a clumsy dreamer inventor who is simply trying to win over the affections of the girl he's loved from afar. The Grumpface is a creature determined to thwart anyone he comes into contact with no matter how earnest or good-hearted. It's not a huge leap to learn that the main character and Dan have a run-in and shenanigans ensue. If you're looking for a sweet book about a character that never gives up no matter how insurmountable the odds then you should look no further. Added bonus is that this book is told in rhyming verse which hearkens back to the fairytales of old (and which little people especially enjoy). This is one that I think they'll be requesting over and over to read. 7/10
May 5, 2017
"In a land far away, in a time long ago, was the Village of Hay near the Forrest of Ho." I had to giggle at this first line.
The story of Grumpface had sort of a "Beauty and the Beast" theme. A man, who only seeks to win the heart of a beauty, must complete a list of challenges when he is captured by Grumpface. I guess the tasks would only represented the man's worthiness of the fair maiden. The illustrations were simple and vibrant. I especially liked the volcano rendering and I enjoyed the comical undertone throughout. But I thought there were a few holes in the story line. It just had some things that didn't quite make sense, and I also didn't take to the language too well. Were kids even going to understand that? Rhyming was cute, even though some of the lines were a bit too cheesy for my likes.
Overall, I thought this was a cute children's story.
The story of Grumpface had sort of a "Beauty and the Beast" theme. A man, who only seeks to win the heart of a beauty, must complete a list of challenges when he is captured by Grumpface. I guess the tasks would only represented the man's worthiness of the fair maiden. The illustrations were simple and vibrant. I especially liked the volcano rendering and I enjoyed the comical undertone throughout. But I thought there were a few holes in the story line. It just had some things that didn't quite make sense, and I also didn't take to the language too well. Were kids even going to understand that? Rhyming was cute, even though some of the lines were a bit too cheesy for my likes.
Overall, I thought this was a cute children's story.
May 7, 2017
I chose to read this book after receiving a free copy from the author. All opinions in this review are my own and completely unbiased.
The Grumpface is a fairy tale about Dan, a young inventor who wants to woo a girl who sells flowers but he is too shy to talk to her. He decides he must find her a rose because she doesn’t have any. He wanders into Grumpface’s part of the forest and is challenged to perform tasks to be able to return home. Poor Dan does his best but fears he will never see his love again.
This is a story of hope and perseverance as well as humor and bravery overcoming grumpiness and negativity. The Grumpface is a good story to teach children the importance of being hopeful and positive like Dan, rather than grumpy like Grumpface. It also has vibrant illustrations and the text is in verse, both of which will keep the attention of children.
The Grumpface is a fairy tale about Dan, a young inventor who wants to woo a girl who sells flowers but he is too shy to talk to her. He decides he must find her a rose because she doesn’t have any. He wanders into Grumpface’s part of the forest and is challenged to perform tasks to be able to return home. Poor Dan does his best but fears he will never see his love again.
This is a story of hope and perseverance as well as humor and bravery overcoming grumpiness and negativity. The Grumpface is a good story to teach children the importance of being hopeful and positive like Dan, rather than grumpy like Grumpface. It also has vibrant illustrations and the text is in verse, both of which will keep the attention of children.
May 8, 2017
The Grumpface written by B.C.R. Fegan is a wonderfully written children’s story about an inventor who ends up lost in the forest and soon is caught by the Grumpface and has the opportunity to walk free if he can complete one of 3 tasks. This silly story is sure to entertain the children, and teaches some good lessons. The illustrations are beautiful and well done and really add to the story. I loved the rhyming rhythm, as it really added to the fun of the story. The happy ending was nice and it was a very entertaining read from start to finish. My daughter, who is 8, really enjoyed this story and was able to read most of the words on her own, with only a little help from me once in a while. Overall I highly recommend this book as I’m sure it will be the new favourite of any child that reads it.
July 2, 2017
This is a book about a clever, but clumsy, inventor, Dafty Dan, who secretly loves the girl selling flowers in his village. While searching the nearby forest for a rose to give to her (since roses will not grow in her garden), he is trapped by a very grumpy, green creature with warts on his nose, called "Grumpface." Grumpface will not let Dan go free until he performs three difficult tasks. As Dan sets out to solve the tasks by inventing, he somehow never manages to invent what he intended, and so the story unfolds.
B.R. Fegan's artful, rhyming prose is reminiscent of children's fairytales from earlier times. Together with Daniela Frongia's glorious whimsical illustrations, this book will capture the attention and imagination of both parents and children.
(I received a review copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.)
B.R. Fegan's artful, rhyming prose is reminiscent of children's fairytales from earlier times. Together with Daniela Frongia's glorious whimsical illustrations, this book will capture the attention and imagination of both parents and children.
(I received a review copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.)
May 15, 2017
As a teacher I have long been used to reading aloud to young children and I know that they like nothing more than a story that rhymes throughout. They will concentrate so hard to stay within the spell cast by the power of rhyme. This is a charming story of the grumpy old Grumpface (he looks like an angry leprechaun) and a young lad who wants to impress his love by bringing her a rose. As in many fairy tales Dan is forced to complete three tasks in order to be set free by the Grumpface. He is an inventor so that shouldn’t be too hard – should it? Well, you’ll see that he is not the most successful of inventors!.
July 19, 2017
You will immediately notice the humorous rhyme in which B.C.R. Fegan sets his story. The Grumpface is just fun to read because the words just skip along your tongue. But children will love the challenges Dan faces to win his freedom to search for the one item that Dan can present to Bella as a token of his admiration and love.
And Grumpyface? He learns a few lessons himself. The challenges he gives Dan to free him of the forest is exactly what frees them all and leads Dan down the path there the rose grows.
And Grumpyface? He learns a few lessons himself. The challenges he gives Dan to free him of the forest is exactly what frees them all and leads Dan down the path there the rose grows.
February 25, 2019
This is a delightful children’s book that the adult will enjoy as much as the child. Can’t wait to read it to the grands!
May 22, 2017
I received a copy of this book from TaleBlade Press in exchange for an honest review.
From the moment I received the email asking to review this book, I knew I had to read it, and not just because I was feeling like a grumpface myself that day. This is pitched as a new sort of fairy tale, and the premise of it just seemed like too much fun, with the Grumpface character, the struggling inventor, and the fairy tale like qualities.
I work with children, and use a lot of books in my music program. If I've learned anything from using books in my programs, it is that kids are hard to please. They'll listen to any old book you read them, but a book had better be good if you want them to come back to it again and again. And I really think that The Grumpface is going to be one of those books that kids ask for over and over. They'll love the Grumpface character, the adventures, and the funny inventor.
The Good Points of The Grumpface:
The story in this book is great. It's short, as a children's book should be, but there is a lot of stuff packed into it. It's quick paced and fun, but the author doesn't waste any time on unnecessary details or build up that would drag the story down.
I love how the author keeps the silliness of the story in the book, but doesn't put any of the characters down for their silly or dumb actions. Dan isn't the brightest bulb in the bunch, and does some silly things, but he doesn't really come across like a caricature or have the Grumpface talk down to him, the way some stories do. So many books these days are either overly serious, or mocking towards different characters, and it's nice to see one that doesn't.
The illustrations are brilliant throughout the story. They're brightly coloured, detailed, and definitely going to catch the kids' attention from the moment they open the book.
I loved the characters in this book. There are only three, but it works perfectly for this book. The love interest is minor, and we don't get a lot about her. But the Grumpface is a distinctive creature, but still has some hints towards the grumpy people we've all met in life. And the inventor's optimism and determination is fantastic.
The Downsides of The Grumpface:
Some of the lines throughout the book feel awkward, and are tricky to say aloud (at least, for me and my partner). It seemed like some grammatical accuracy was sacrificed to make the rhymes work. It affects the reading, because you have to go back and figure out what the line is trying to say.
Some details between the text and the illustrations were incongruent. The main one was the colour of the girl's hair. It's a detail, but kids will pick that up.
This is something that may be just me, but I think it would have been more visually appealing if some of the illustrations spanned two pages, instead of being a unique image on every page. My reader showed two pages at once, like a hardcopy book, and some of the pages looked a little funny side to side. But maybe just me.
All in all, I liked this book! It's a great story, definitely worthy of being added to our collection of standard fairy tales, and I can't wait to share this with the children I work with. It does have some awkward phrasing, but the story more than makes up for it. If you or the children in your life love fairy tales, are ever a grumpface yourself, or love silly stories, you should definitely check out The Grumpface.
From the moment I received the email asking to review this book, I knew I had to read it, and not just because I was feeling like a grumpface myself that day. This is pitched as a new sort of fairy tale, and the premise of it just seemed like too much fun, with the Grumpface character, the struggling inventor, and the fairy tale like qualities.
I work with children, and use a lot of books in my music program. If I've learned anything from using books in my programs, it is that kids are hard to please. They'll listen to any old book you read them, but a book had better be good if you want them to come back to it again and again. And I really think that The Grumpface is going to be one of those books that kids ask for over and over. They'll love the Grumpface character, the adventures, and the funny inventor.
The Good Points of The Grumpface:
The story in this book is great. It's short, as a children's book should be, but there is a lot of stuff packed into it. It's quick paced and fun, but the author doesn't waste any time on unnecessary details or build up that would drag the story down.
I love how the author keeps the silliness of the story in the book, but doesn't put any of the characters down for their silly or dumb actions. Dan isn't the brightest bulb in the bunch, and does some silly things, but he doesn't really come across like a caricature or have the Grumpface talk down to him, the way some stories do. So many books these days are either overly serious, or mocking towards different characters, and it's nice to see one that doesn't.
The illustrations are brilliant throughout the story. They're brightly coloured, detailed, and definitely going to catch the kids' attention from the moment they open the book.
I loved the characters in this book. There are only three, but it works perfectly for this book. The love interest is minor, and we don't get a lot about her. But the Grumpface is a distinctive creature, but still has some hints towards the grumpy people we've all met in life. And the inventor's optimism and determination is fantastic.
The Downsides of The Grumpface:
Some of the lines throughout the book feel awkward, and are tricky to say aloud (at least, for me and my partner). It seemed like some grammatical accuracy was sacrificed to make the rhymes work. It affects the reading, because you have to go back and figure out what the line is trying to say.
Some details between the text and the illustrations were incongruent. The main one was the colour of the girl's hair. It's a detail, but kids will pick that up.
This is something that may be just me, but I think it would have been more visually appealing if some of the illustrations spanned two pages, instead of being a unique image on every page. My reader showed two pages at once, like a hardcopy book, and some of the pages looked a little funny side to side. But maybe just me.
All in all, I liked this book! It's a great story, definitely worthy of being added to our collection of standard fairy tales, and I can't wait to share this with the children I work with. It does have some awkward phrasing, but the story more than makes up for it. If you or the children in your life love fairy tales, are ever a grumpface yourself, or love silly stories, you should definitely check out The Grumpface.
May 5, 2017
"In a land far away, at a time long ago,
Was the Village of Hay, near the Forest of Ho.
In the midst of the forest, in the darkest place,
Lived a grumpy old creature they called the Grumpface.
And once in a while did a traveller go
On his way to the village through the Forest of Ho
And so easy it was to get lost in that place
And get caught in a trap by that grumpy Grumpface."
An awkward, bungling inventor named Dan looks through his window every morning and sees the lovely Bella, a street flower vendor, who calls out her flowers by name to the passers-by. Unfortunately she has no roses to offer for sale as none have grown. Dan, smitten by her beauty, decides to find a rose she so desires and present it to her.
He goes on a journey of discovery into the Forest of Ho, gets completly turned around, then finds he is totally lost. He is captured by an ogre named Grumpface. Grumpface is so named because many years ago a wizard cast a spell upon him leaving his face permanently grumpy or so he thought.
No one is allowed to leave Grumpface's forest until he can successfully complete one of three tasks the ogre challenges him to perform. Dan uses his not-so-reliable inventions to perhaps capture a beautiful bird in a lantern, to help aid him cross a bridge over an active volcano while blindfolded, and the third? Well he must go into a deep, dark cave and find a small silver statue that is somewhere strewn on the ground. Oh my! Can he overcome these obstacles with his invention's shortcomings? Surely he can complete at least one of the quests successfully and then be released to return back home to his beloved Bella? Each time his efforts are botched... but are they really? The outcomes might be failures but they are such ridiculous failures that a tiny smile flickers across Grumpface's face each time and each time that smile gets bigger and bigger!
On his last challenge Dan trips and falls in the dark cave sending the statue he is trying to locate flying. When he emerged to present the statue to the ogre it's not the statue but his boot. Grumpface finds this so amusing and so utterly ridiculous that he burst out laughing and cannot stop. The laughter breaks the curse upon him and he returns to a normal man. The happy guy is so thrilled to be back that he releases Dan immediately, even giving him a reward of how to find a precious rose to take back to his sweetheart Bella.
All fairytales have happily ever after endings and this one is no exception. Told in rhyming couplets this book is a perfect read aloud to share. Everyone loves a heartwarming story, a hero who risks his very life to acquire the girl of his dreams, and who can resist the transformation of a Grumpface into a Smileyface... it's redemption at its very best.
The illustrations are crisp, charged with vibrant colours and so expressive. They can stand alone as a reason to get the book. This is the author's debut book and I can't wait for his next one. I highly, highly recommend "The Grumpface" to my readers.
Was the Village of Hay, near the Forest of Ho.
In the midst of the forest, in the darkest place,
Lived a grumpy old creature they called the Grumpface.
And once in a while did a traveller go
On his way to the village through the Forest of Ho
And so easy it was to get lost in that place
And get caught in a trap by that grumpy Grumpface."
An awkward, bungling inventor named Dan looks through his window every morning and sees the lovely Bella, a street flower vendor, who calls out her flowers by name to the passers-by. Unfortunately she has no roses to offer for sale as none have grown. Dan, smitten by her beauty, decides to find a rose she so desires and present it to her.
He goes on a journey of discovery into the Forest of Ho, gets completly turned around, then finds he is totally lost. He is captured by an ogre named Grumpface. Grumpface is so named because many years ago a wizard cast a spell upon him leaving his face permanently grumpy or so he thought.
No one is allowed to leave Grumpface's forest until he can successfully complete one of three tasks the ogre challenges him to perform. Dan uses his not-so-reliable inventions to perhaps capture a beautiful bird in a lantern, to help aid him cross a bridge over an active volcano while blindfolded, and the third? Well he must go into a deep, dark cave and find a small silver statue that is somewhere strewn on the ground. Oh my! Can he overcome these obstacles with his invention's shortcomings? Surely he can complete at least one of the quests successfully and then be released to return back home to his beloved Bella? Each time his efforts are botched... but are they really? The outcomes might be failures but they are such ridiculous failures that a tiny smile flickers across Grumpface's face each time and each time that smile gets bigger and bigger!
On his last challenge Dan trips and falls in the dark cave sending the statue he is trying to locate flying. When he emerged to present the statue to the ogre it's not the statue but his boot. Grumpface finds this so amusing and so utterly ridiculous that he burst out laughing and cannot stop. The laughter breaks the curse upon him and he returns to a normal man. The happy guy is so thrilled to be back that he releases Dan immediately, even giving him a reward of how to find a precious rose to take back to his sweetheart Bella.
All fairytales have happily ever after endings and this one is no exception. Told in rhyming couplets this book is a perfect read aloud to share. Everyone loves a heartwarming story, a hero who risks his very life to acquire the girl of his dreams, and who can resist the transformation of a Grumpface into a Smileyface... it's redemption at its very best.
The illustrations are crisp, charged with vibrant colours and so expressive. They can stand alone as a reason to get the book. This is the author's debut book and I can't wait for his next one. I highly, highly recommend "The Grumpface" to my readers.
October 31, 2017
The Grumpface by B.C.R. Fegan Review
A new children's book looks to become an instant classic in The Grumpface by B.C.R. Fegan. Harking back to the days when fairy tales and folklore
were intertwined, this story of a mythical creature and the young man who must try to outsmart it in order to escape is something children will love
instantly. Here is the synopsis:
The Grumpface is a poetic fairy-tale that tells the story of Dan, an inventor who ventures into a forest looking for a rose. Instead he finds the mysterious Grumpface who threatens to hold him captive unless he passes some difficult challenges. What follows is a humorous adventure that neither Dan nor the Grumpface could have anticipated.
The Grumpface is a tale in the spirit of any grand adventure. It is about a clumsy young inventor's quest for love and the challenges he must face to find it. It is also a tale of bravery, absurdity and happiness, and the power of these qualities over negativity and sheer grumpiness.
Every parent will be acquainted with their own little 'grumpface' now and then. This story stands as a small piece of hope - that no matter how ingrained the grump, there will always remain in every one of us a smile or a laugh just waiting to come out.
A wonderful blend of poetry and childlike wonder, this amazing story was incredibly well written and the artwork was superb. A wonderful hark back
to the days of classic children's stories, the story helped blend elements of romance, adventure, self-worth and the fight to never give up on your
dreams. The poetry inspired writing was well done, and the artwork made great work of vivid color schemes and warmth that many children will flock
to read.
Overall this was a fantastic children's book that any parent would love to read to their child. A great story with wonderful artwork, B.C.R. Fegan
has a wonderful grasp on not only what children will be entertained by and enjoy, but on the kind of stories parents will want their children
to read and grow up with. I highly reccomend this book to anyone who reads children's books, and I look forward to seeing more from this incredible
author.
A new children's book looks to become an instant classic in The Grumpface by B.C.R. Fegan. Harking back to the days when fairy tales and folklore
were intertwined, this story of a mythical creature and the young man who must try to outsmart it in order to escape is something children will love
instantly. Here is the synopsis:
The Grumpface is a poetic fairy-tale that tells the story of Dan, an inventor who ventures into a forest looking for a rose. Instead he finds the mysterious Grumpface who threatens to hold him captive unless he passes some difficult challenges. What follows is a humorous adventure that neither Dan nor the Grumpface could have anticipated.
The Grumpface is a tale in the spirit of any grand adventure. It is about a clumsy young inventor's quest for love and the challenges he must face to find it. It is also a tale of bravery, absurdity and happiness, and the power of these qualities over negativity and sheer grumpiness.
Every parent will be acquainted with their own little 'grumpface' now and then. This story stands as a small piece of hope - that no matter how ingrained the grump, there will always remain in every one of us a smile or a laugh just waiting to come out.
A wonderful blend of poetry and childlike wonder, this amazing story was incredibly well written and the artwork was superb. A wonderful hark back
to the days of classic children's stories, the story helped blend elements of romance, adventure, self-worth and the fight to never give up on your
dreams. The poetry inspired writing was well done, and the artwork made great work of vivid color schemes and warmth that many children will flock
to read.
Overall this was a fantastic children's book that any parent would love to read to their child. A great story with wonderful artwork, B.C.R. Fegan
has a wonderful grasp on not only what children will be entertained by and enjoy, but on the kind of stories parents will want their children
to read and grow up with. I highly reccomend this book to anyone who reads children's books, and I look forward to seeing more from this incredible
author.
December 27, 2019
A lovely creative rhyming story about a grumpy old ogre who'd been cursed and so lived in the forest capturing anyone who would pass near him. There is also a man called Dan, who is too shy to approach a lady he likes, so decides to find her a rose, but to do so, he has to enter the Grumpface's forest and gets caught. To be free, the Grumpface gives Dan three chances to complete tasks set by him. Dan completes the tasks, though not as expected, which causes the ogre to laugh and breaks the curse. Great story.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 21, 2017
The first thing that the reader is greeted with when beginning to read this book are the pictures. The detail and colour are absolutely sublime. They almost jump off the page at you which makes you sit up and take notice and want to continue reading. Although the print was small it was easy to read in spite of the detailed full page colour of the pictures. To say I was impressed is an understatement.
The Goodreads’ blurb doesn’t really do the book justice in my opinion. Granted it is a fairy tale (I could hear the story of the Beauty and the Beast within its pages) but it is much more than that. It celebrates personal growth as well celebrating that there’s more to life than meets the eye. It also showcases how effective properly written poetry makes for easier reading and promotes the easy flow from one thought to another.
The characters of this book were just as well developed as the story itself. The author is very talented and writes great stories for the young child (as well as the young at heart). Due to the way this story was written I was able to read it quickly (it took me approximately 10 minutes to complete) whilst enjoying a sweet story which had a lovely ending. If the caliber of the writing of this author is anything to go by I can’t wait to read more of his work.
The Goodreads’ blurb doesn’t really do the book justice in my opinion. Granted it is a fairy tale (I could hear the story of the Beauty and the Beast within its pages) but it is much more than that. It celebrates personal growth as well celebrating that there’s more to life than meets the eye. It also showcases how effective properly written poetry makes for easier reading and promotes the easy flow from one thought to another.
The characters of this book were just as well developed as the story itself. The author is very talented and writes great stories for the young child (as well as the young at heart). Due to the way this story was written I was able to read it quickly (it took me approximately 10 minutes to complete) whilst enjoying a sweet story which had a lovely ending. If the caliber of the writing of this author is anything to go by I can’t wait to read more of his work.
April 22, 2017
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This was a cute story. I loved how the book rhymed throughout the story. The pages were full of color and was very eye catching and the story-line had a great lesson to be learned.
I am giving this story four stars because the author mentioned that Bella's hair was white as snow, but the illustrator made her hair yellow instead of white. Some children will pick up on that. Other than that, I really enjoyed this story and do highly recommend it as a great bedtime story for children and parents.
The author provided me with a digital ARC copy of the book for review purposes only. No remuneration was exchanged.
This was a cute story. I loved how the book rhymed throughout the story. The pages were full of color and was very eye catching and the story-line had a great lesson to be learned.
I am giving this story four stars because the author mentioned that Bella's hair was white as snow, but the illustrator made her hair yellow instead of white. Some children will pick up on that. Other than that, I really enjoyed this story and do highly recommend it as a great bedtime story for children and parents.
The author provided me with a digital ARC copy of the book for review purposes only. No remuneration was exchanged.
May 1, 2017
Imaginative
What a great story. The first thing that drew me in were the incredible graphics of the story. They told the story right along with the text. The text was well written and rhymed perfectly and wonderfully to tell the grand story. The Grumpface is quite a character, and adorably scary. He's not quite so scary once you get to know him. Dan has to perform several tasks for Grumpface to release him from the forest. It's a good story for children of all ages. Well done.
What a great story. The first thing that drew me in were the incredible graphics of the story. They told the story right along with the text. The text was well written and rhymed perfectly and wonderfully to tell the grand story. The Grumpface is quite a character, and adorably scary. He's not quite so scary once you get to know him. Dan has to perform several tasks for Grumpface to release him from the forest. It's a good story for children of all ages. Well done.
June 6, 2017
Grumpface, is a grumpy old ogre-like green man, who lives in the forest of Ho. He has lived there ever since he was cursed by a wizard.
Whenever people wander into his forest, Grumpface catches them and makes them complete a task. If they win they go free, if they lose, they have to stay with him.
One day Dafty Dan, a failed inventor, wanders into the forest looking for a rose, to give to the woman he loves, Bella. Dan goes too far into the forest and soon ends up in one of Grumpfaces traps. He is then ordered to complete the tasks.
Will Dan be able to complete the tasks, or will have to stay in the forest forever?
The Grumpface is an exquisitely drawn, colourful children’s rhyming book. It reminded me of ‘The Three Billy Goats Gruff’, with its troll making the goats complete tasks to get across the bridge.
The Story is very enjoyable, and has a fairytale-Esq feel to it. The plot is both humorous and heartwarming at the same time. It will certainly keep youngsters entertained from beginning to end.
Reviewed by Stacey on www.whisperingstories.com
Whenever people wander into his forest, Grumpface catches them and makes them complete a task. If they win they go free, if they lose, they have to stay with him.
One day Dafty Dan, a failed inventor, wanders into the forest looking for a rose, to give to the woman he loves, Bella. Dan goes too far into the forest and soon ends up in one of Grumpfaces traps. He is then ordered to complete the tasks.
Will Dan be able to complete the tasks, or will have to stay in the forest forever?
The Grumpface is an exquisitely drawn, colourful children’s rhyming book. It reminded me of ‘The Three Billy Goats Gruff’, with its troll making the goats complete tasks to get across the bridge.
The Story is very enjoyable, and has a fairytale-Esq feel to it. The plot is both humorous and heartwarming at the same time. It will certainly keep youngsters entertained from beginning to end.
Reviewed by Stacey on www.whisperingstories.com
May 2, 2017
***This book was reviewed for TaleBlade Press***
This charming picture book for young readers is a new spin on the classic 'Beauty and the Beast’ tale. In the gloomy Forest of Ho lives a terrible creature called the Grumpface, and what an ugly fellow he is! But he wasn't always so. Once he was as human as you or I, but it's like that old adage 'treat everyone with kindness, for they may be an angel (or god) in disguise.’ This cantankerous old man grumped at the wrong person one day, and found himself cursed by a wizard.
Dafty Dan is an inventor living in the Village of Hay. Dan loves the flower girl who works outside his shop, and he longs to bring her the one flower she wants, but does not have- a rose. Setting off into the Forest of Ho, Dan finds roses, but he also finds the Grumpface’s traps. The Grumpface agrees to let Dan go if he can complete at least one task out of three. Can Dan survive, and bring a rose back to his beloved?
I read this book with my cubs and they loved it! We are going to get a hardcopy version, as mine is on the Kindle. The artwork is wonderful, really bringing the story to life. I like the Grumpface. He looks like a troll, or ogre, but not 'too’ scary for small children.. This little book packs a powerful message that what you are on the inside really affects people’s perceptions of you, and that changing your outlook can change your whole appearance. If you’ve a nasty disposition, you’ll seem as ugly as the Grumpface looked no matter how beautiful you are on the surface. Likewise, a cheerful disposition can brighten the entire room, and no matter the surface appearance you wear, you’ll be the most beautiful there. (Smiling Grumpface is adorable, btw!
🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻 Highly recommended for kids of all ages!
This charming picture book for young readers is a new spin on the classic 'Beauty and the Beast’ tale. In the gloomy Forest of Ho lives a terrible creature called the Grumpface, and what an ugly fellow he is! But he wasn't always so. Once he was as human as you or I, but it's like that old adage 'treat everyone with kindness, for they may be an angel (or god) in disguise.’ This cantankerous old man grumped at the wrong person one day, and found himself cursed by a wizard.
Dafty Dan is an inventor living in the Village of Hay. Dan loves the flower girl who works outside his shop, and he longs to bring her the one flower she wants, but does not have- a rose. Setting off into the Forest of Ho, Dan finds roses, but he also finds the Grumpface’s traps. The Grumpface agrees to let Dan go if he can complete at least one task out of three. Can Dan survive, and bring a rose back to his beloved?
I read this book with my cubs and they loved it! We are going to get a hardcopy version, as mine is on the Kindle. The artwork is wonderful, really bringing the story to life. I like the Grumpface. He looks like a troll, or ogre, but not 'too’ scary for small children.. This little book packs a powerful message that what you are on the inside really affects people’s perceptions of you, and that changing your outlook can change your whole appearance. If you’ve a nasty disposition, you’ll seem as ugly as the Grumpface looked no matter how beautiful you are on the surface. Likewise, a cheerful disposition can brighten the entire room, and no matter the surface appearance you wear, you’ll be the most beautiful there. (Smiling Grumpface is adorable, btw!
🎻🎻🎻🎻🎻 Highly recommended for kids of all ages!
January 16, 2019
Everyone loves a story that begins with 'In a land far away' and this one does not disappoint. Follow the Grumpface and one lovestruck, hapless inventor named Dan as they each work their way to ungrumpily ever after. Written in clever rhymes and illustrated vibrantly, The Grumpface will bring a smile to even the grumpiest of the grumpy.
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March 28, 2018We all wear a ‘grumpface’ at some point…(most before that first cup of coffee in the morning). But, what happens when you tick off a wizard who in turn curses you with a permanent grump face? You live alone in the land of Ho, taking pleasure by granting freedom only to those who can complete three simple tasks. Dan, a clumsy failed inventor is helplessly in love with a flower girl named Bella. Dan accidentally crossed paths with the Grumpface, while seeking a rose to win Bella’s affections. If he ever hopes to see her again, he must complete the three tasks. But, will the failed inventor succeed and, in the process, undue the wizard’s curse? Or, will he fail once again, and be doomed to live in the land of Ho forever?
Bryce Fegan has truly captured the essence of grumpiness in his adorable rhyming book, The Grumpface. The storyline contains imagination, intrigue, mixed with dashes of comedy, romance and an unexpected twist near the end of storyline. The main character, Dan is very inspiring. He keeps reaching for the brass ring, refusing to accept defeat, despite failing every single time. His ‘go-go-go’ attitude is a positive example for children to glean from. As for the antagonist of the book, the Grumpface, one cannot resist the urge to grab this sour-puss off the page and sweeten him up with a hug.
Daniela Frongia did an outstanding job illustrating the story-line. Her interpretation of how a grump-face should look is spot-on, warts and all. The grouchiness of this character, especially the eyes, can be felt. Ms. Frongia’s detail is showcased brilliantly with her illustration of the volcano. It looks so real, one can almost hear the lava bubbling. The palate of colors chosen throughout the book are subtle, yet, complement the classic vibe of the book, giving it a dash of old world charm.
Before leaving this Book Review, you must complete these three tasks:
1. Make a cup of coffee for yourself.
2. Make hot chocolate for the kid(s).
3. Add a copy of The Grumpface to your book collection.
Bryce Fegan has truly captured the essence of grumpiness in his adorable rhyming book, The Grumpface. The storyline contains imagination, intrigue, mixed with dashes of comedy, romance and an unexpected twist near the end of storyline. The main character, Dan is very inspiring. He keeps reaching for the brass ring, refusing to accept defeat, despite failing every single time. His ‘go-go-go’ attitude is a positive example for children to glean from. As for the antagonist of the book, the Grumpface, one cannot resist the urge to grab this sour-puss off the page and sweeten him up with a hug.
Daniela Frongia did an outstanding job illustrating the story-line. Her interpretation of how a grump-face should look is spot-on, warts and all. The grouchiness of this character, especially the eyes, can be felt. Ms. Frongia’s detail is showcased brilliantly with her illustration of the volcano. It looks so real, one can almost hear the lava bubbling. The palate of colors chosen throughout the book are subtle, yet, complement the classic vibe of the book, giving it a dash of old world charm.
Before leaving this Book Review, you must complete these three tasks:
1. Make a cup of coffee for yourself.
2. Make hot chocolate for the kid(s).
3. Add a copy of The Grumpface to your book collection.
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