Lori G. Armstrong AKA Lorelei James writes a very decent mystery. I couldn’t tell who the culprit was for most of the book. It had me engaged and I wanted to get back to it whenever I had to put it down in order to focus on real life.
The lead character, Julie Collins, is one screwed up woman. With good reason, of course. She had an abusive upbringing and has a string of dead end relationships. She’s got a male best friend, Kevin, with whom she’s at least slightly in love. She’s also got a turnip-brained, lug of a boyfriend and at least one other dangerous man interested in her.
Julie is a beautiful blond (but she won’t be for long with as much smoking as she does – she’ll be gray-skinned and pinch-mouthed by the time she’s pushing 40 – if she lives that long) who attracts good-looking men, but her behavior is less than inviting. She can be a real bitch, but what really bothers me about her is how incredibly, appallingly, freakishly, STUPID she is. Total TSTL when she loses her temper, which is far too often.
And there are other stupid things. Why in the world would someone who’s investigating a situation that included murder leave their gun or their phone in the car? Not only does Julie do that, but her crack PI bestie does it too. Stupid, stupid, stupid. She even says in her inner monologue at one point how much she hates the girls in horror movies who go off to investigate the weird, scary thing in the woods with no backup or weapon. She acknowledges she’s doing the same thing herself at that moment. As if that’s supposed to make it okay that she did it! No, acknowledgement that you’re doing something stupid for no discernable reason doesn’t make you less stupid if you go ahead and do it. That actually makes you even more of an idiot. Ugh.
I don’t love temper tantrum-induced moronic behavior as a plot device, either. It’s annoying as hell. Yes, Julie, taunt violent men on their turf. Just don’t be surprised when you get your ass kicked. Literally. What was the point? What did you learn? Not nearly enough to make it worth it. SMH
But I still give it 4 stars because the mystery is good and, despite my complaints above, I enjoyed the heck out of it. Julie seems like a work in progress so I’m hoping that, after a few books, she’ll evolve into someone a little more stable and prudent. Just enough not to be TSTL, though. She wouldn't be quite the same without vinegar running through her veins.
Lorelei James writes erotica. Lori G. Armstrong may be the same person, but this series is not romance so don’t come looking for some of those great McKay-style hookups. The writing, though, is competent (aside from the contrived catalysts) and engaging. I bought the bundle of four books and I’ve read the first two. If you like mystery and blue collar, working people hashing things out, you’ll like it.
There’s also a hot, dangerous MC president. So it’s got that going for it as well. ;D