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Civilizations have once again emerged from the ruins of Pralaya, and with a new dawn arrive new ambitions. Ordained by fate, several legions of a ruthless clan have been reported to be seen marching into the boundaries of Bharata. The origins of the Hayacree are unknown, yet their intent is evident: to create a new world order.

The tides of war will bring forth valiant men and women of great fortitude and a divine force to unite them all against the strong will of the enemy. While the matters of kings and kingdoms are to be shouldered by a young prince of Wagharr, a supernatural alliance of Mahayogis and Suparnas will need to travel beyond the realm of man to discover the architect behind the Hayacree invasion.

The hunt for the real enemy will lead them to an expanse invisible to the human eye.

In its depth lies an evil waiting to be discovered, waiting to rise.

314 pages, Paperback

First published April 1, 2017

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Profile Image for Vishnu Chevli.
650 reviews602 followers
April 2, 2018
Overall Verdict:- Engaging one time read


A video-game like cover and not so descriptive colophon, these were the first impressions that the book gave me before I opened it. I was expecting another one of those Mahabharata tales that were being told from a different perspective (The title had Arjuna after all!!).

That’s where I was wrong, gladly I might add.


"Warjuna" is a well-narrated story where Krishnaraj engages us with familiar Mahabharata characters but in a lusher Mother Nature’s picturesque description.

We have a mysterious/intriguing Sauron like villain Mrithasu who wants to capture, destroy and rule by channeling Hayacree forces to do his bidding. There’s chaos amongst the Indian Kings as they have been promised immortality if they join. Arjuna is a mercenary prince of Wagharr who is going with-the-flow and fighting the Hayacree in whatever kingdom he finds himself in. Kanha, the prince of Dwarka, who also happens to be a Mahayogi provides him the not-so-direct but helpful guidance he requires whilst he himself is engaged in a bigger proxy battle with Mithrasu in other realms as well to prevent his rise; trusting Arjuna will take care of this one.


The book is written in a third person narrative. The flow of the story is good where the scenes are described in extraordinary detail capturing the reader's imagination. But yes, there are times especially in the first half of the book where it feels that the scenic description is way too much, leaving a limited space for the plot. The chapters are short and well arranged which provides a relief for people to take a breather or two and keeping them interested in what comes next.


Kanha as a character is well narrated. But, alas, the same cannot be said Arjuna whose name the novel bears. He feels lost most of the time, but Krishnaraj uses this to his advantage to channel the same in the readers as well. The character of Draupadi seems better narrated but less used as compared to Arjuna. The other numerous supportive characters have been tried to give justice as well which sometimes makes it difficult to maintain the plot.

It's amidst such confusion that we reach the ending, which feels a little bit disconnected and rushed. A lot of questions feel unanswered, but we let it slide as more is yet to come.

I personally felt that the humor content was less throughout the book. However,
Krishnaraj successfully creates an ancient India which is mesmerizing, magical and filled with the mysterious.


For Krishnaraj’s well-imagined maiden effort, my rating for “Warjuna” would be 3.5/5. Wishing him a best of luck for his book two.

Detailed Review Link - http://chevusread.blogspot.in/2018/04...
Profile Image for Ruchi Patel.
1,151 reviews94 followers
July 5, 2017
Amazing book. Very well use of mythological characters in the fantasy fiction. I love that. Book holds the interest of readers from begging to end. When i started the book. It literally remind me of game of thrones plot. Indeed a nice one. I like the use of characters such as arjuna, kanha, draupadi. Eagerly waiting for the second part
Profile Image for Surabhi Sharma.
Author 5 books107 followers
May 8, 2017
What a wonderful book it is. I think the main characteristics of a good book is how fast it engages a reader's attention and not let it go till the end. This book has it. With every page turns, the reader gets more and more intrigue and bound to seized at one place. I would say this book is unputdownable.

The author borrowed a few characters from Indian folklore Mahabharata like Kanha, Arjuna, Draupadi among others and put them in a world he created. The world of Arjuna; the prince of Wagharr. The story has no resemblance of that of Mahabharata. The genre is epic fantasy.

The book is just the beginning of the series of Warjuna. The book is a perfect deal for the epic fantasy fiction readers. A very well written book. Interesting read. I can assure the readers that they can bet on this book. The book is a masterpiece.

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Profile Image for Pallabi Dutta.
148 reviews32 followers
July 4, 2017
*I was provided a free copy of this book in exchange of a honest review by the author.*

"There is much to prepare for, and for that you should not doubt your circumstances. I need you to trust the flow of the universe. I need you to trust me."

This was a very tough book to rate. Normally these decisions are pretty easy to take. You love a book, sometimes you don't.

This story started off pretty vague. The story opens up focused on the main character 'Prince Arjuna' crown prince of Wagharr, on the run from the invading Hayacree forces. He was instructed by his father, the King to safely reach a place called 'Himavan' with his people. His plans don't go as planned and he is transported to a place in the midst of fight, miles away from his home in the opposite directions where he wakes up delirious to start his adventure, a piece of key chess figure moved with the will of Krishna across all of the Barata to unite all Kingdoms to rally together and fight the Haycree.

The author has created a alternate universe with few names of characters plucked from the Hindu Epic Mahabarata, likes of Arjuna, Drapaudi, Garuda, and foremost among them Krishna.

It is great book with the one draw back. The characters, none of them connected in any they should have. Problems of writing a epic fantasy is that, focus too much on world building and you loose out on developing a character. The character gains new power but what about as a person, how is this journey developing him. Prince Arjuna frankly had the charisma of a light bulb. Very useful in nature but once you close the book you will forget about him.
I have read so many epics fantasy novels that with end number of characters appearing and disappearing I had not trouble keeping track of any of the characters but still this failed to impress with any them.

Like every bollywood movie, scenes just happened to be conveniently placed in the background for the story to move forward. If it was one time I would have let it go but every 20 pages I could see the pattern. Was it done purposefully or the editing team didn't notice it, I am not sure. If you are taking the pain to create something so epic, I would suggest look into the small details more carefully. Its the small details which always make the big picture at the end of the journey.

I am not really a fan of the pacing, it started off vague, picked up the momentum and then in between lost me again to capture my attention midway.

Now moving on to the Pros, since you end any good discussion with the good stuff.

The writing style is great. Impressive actually. For a epic fantasy book, everything was handled very nicely. The story has lots to offer. The Indian fantasy plate is drying up but authors like these, coming up with unique idea gives us hope.

That's it folks. Go and read this if you want to enjoy a Indian epic fantasy book.
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392 reviews4 followers
August 10, 2017
When I started reading the book, it seemed similar to the Shiva trilogy wherein also a common man has to fight extraordinary odds to fulfil his great destiny. However as I read further it became apparent that the similarity was superficial. The genre of the book is Indian fantasy; it is not based on the Mahabharata although it borrows a few names/characters from it.

The plot: The book is set in an age where Bharata is divided amongst many kingdoms and is being invaded by the evil Hayacree forces. Arjuna who is prince of a small country called Wagharr is on a mission to lead his people away from the invading forces. Magical circumstances create scenarios where he has to lead the people of various kingdoms to fight against the mysterious Hayacree. In this fight, he is guided by a Mahayogi Kanha (who is the prince of Dwarka). The book chronicles the adventures faced by these two protagonists.

What I liked about the book: The story is fast paced and has a lot of action/adventure. Krishnaraj (author) does a great job at pacing the story. He creates interesting moments to keep the reader hooked. The world created by him is vast and full of splendour and mystery. Mrithasu the leader of the Hayacree is wrapped in intrigue and mystery and keeps the reader guessing as to the extent of his powers. The build-up of good against evil is managed really well.


What could have been better: The protagonist Arjuna is never really fleshed out. It was difficult for me to connect with him. As to why is he so special? Why does Kanha who is a mahayogi have so much faith in him? Often Arjuna is worried about returning to Wagharr rather than facing the issues at hand making him appear reluctant and lucky in his decisions. It would have helped to know Arjuna's back story, his beliefs etc to really like him. Some of the characters portrayed are one dimensional and are mere props including Arjuna’s love interest Draupadi.

The book needed to have a map which shows the world as imagined by the author and a list of characters from various factions.

To sum up, Warjuna is a really good debut in the fantasy genre and worth the time reading.
Thank you to the author for sharing this book in return for an honest review.
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289 reviews17 followers
September 5, 2017
Wow... what a book kept me intrigued to it till the last page and making me eager to read its next book in the series. Language, character and all the essence required is perfect. This book is about a common man Arjuna who has a big destiny to fulfill who will lead Bharata against the enemy which is yet to be described here. Here one word is used 'grakal' according to the description it resembles the opening shown in Avengers first part from where the army of Hydra attacks and also the big creature shown somewhat resembles Vritrasur in the book. Author has just taken the name and character of the mahabharata saga but in any way it doesn't resemble the saga. Its such a story which keeps the reader hooked to the book and expecting what will happen ahead. Eagerly waiting for the 2nd book. It's a awesomest Goodread... ☺️
122 reviews19 followers
June 17, 2017
My take

This is a  historical /mythological novel based on the charterers and concepts  from the grand epic Mahabharatha .As the Mahabharatha , a  major Sanskrit epic of ancient India  holds the story of Kurusetra war ,this book tells about the war between the Bharatha and Hayacree.


We use to entertain  the wonderful feelings whenever we hear the stories from the Mahabharatha  due to the philosophical and devotional content and this book stands in the same line.  When I start to  read the book , I can not leave it before finishing it.The narrative  has  kept me glued to the pages.

A quintessential war story of Bharatha and Hayacree ,  this tale of  valour,  courage and sacrifice has enthralled me a lot .


The Plot

The story begins with the prince of Wagharr  a small kingdom within the jurisdiction of Avanti Arjuna carrying the message of invasion by Hayacree to the Raja Raghupath Triveni King of Ashmaka .As he has seen the omen he wants to inform the king that War is inevitable and they have to prepare for victory At that time Kanha the prince of Dwaraka who wants to deliver a confidential message from his king.The war horn is heard by all and the battle begins.There are many sub plots involving  war events  and planning war strategies for victory and defeating the enemy.


The Pro

"it is within the depths of desolation you discover God and the Devil it is there you make an ally and a foe."

PrabodhaIII (Revered theologian ,Kingdom of Avanti Bharata)

The book WARJUNA BOOK 1 :MRITHASU RISING ,propagates the above message in an effective way .

This plot- driven social drama has got strong language and engrossing characters. .The poignancy ,the hard truths ,and raw sentiments have definitely given  a  thrill to me. Larger -than life period drama is capable of entertaining you a great extent .

The language is superb and strong in the  literary flavour with rhyme. The plot is creepy and strong one. Both concept and execution are nice .

The title Warjuna Book one refers to Arjuna the champion of archery. It is his one man show in the war between Bharatha and Hayacree .  The title holds the letter W to Arjuna  and War means fire and destruction .

There are 66 chapters with a Preface  and a chapter exclusively giving the details about the Kingdoms of Bharata. , Hayacree , Hiyolat ,Inhayat,Deyatis, Seeeds of Maya , Cheerakas , Garudev Suprnas.

The book carries all the elements of a historical novel like war, assassination, backstabbing of traitors, courage ,  camouflage , suspense , surprises and  thrill .Well placed twists and turns due to the action and adventure of MCs serve as a page Turner.This overwrought political period drama would make  you wonder struck with the magnificent scenes and unimaginable happenings  .

The cover model and design are wonderful. The meaning for Sanskrit words are given in the footnote. A map may  be a fitting tool for guiding us.


My favourite

I admire the main protagonist for his energy and youthfulness.His charming and charismatic persona makes the reading a pleasant experience. Also I like his companion Jagati the stallion gifted to him by Tanupath the Vaidyan.

I find the Author is fond of Mother  Nature and his description of  various sceneries is the proof for it.To cite an example I give below the following sentence.

He closely watched the manner in which flowers shed light :some stayed bright while others turned dim , then glowed brighter as though they had pulses of their own.

Throughout the book we can come across such wonderful narrations.


My verdict 

Krishnaraj ,the Author has lived every moment in his imaginary world of Arjuna and his narration of the story reflects his joy in giving the minute details in a brilliant manner.Explaining the natural sceneries  to the preparation of a case for judgement he has put in all his  efforts to give an exemplary  picture which fact leads us to make the reading an enjoyable journey .He has done a great deal of research and read the Mahabharata to create a classic masterpiece.

This book serves as  a good collection for  bookworms and every book shelf in all the households should carry the book. As the title suggests , more books  would come as sequel to this one. You can buy the book and give a wonderful  read.             For full review visit my bloghttps://talesandreviews.blogspot.in/?m=1
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Author 1 book16 followers
July 15, 2017
Krishna and Arjuna are immortal pair in our Mythology who are cousins, best of friends, and even share the relation of Guru and disciple. The author Krishna Raj had picked up these two characters and few more from Mythology and weaved a fantastic fantasy novel which intriguing and gripping to read.

The story is about an over ambitious yogi Mrithasu who is using his power to spread evilness in the country Bharata. It is up to Krishna and Arjuna to stop this evil from rising.

After a long time I've read a book at par with the Meluha series of Amish Tripathi. It is not easy to pick up mythological characters and to fit them in completely different time and arena and to create a story out of it. But Krishna Raj has managed to do so with ease and elegance.

Warjuna is well plotted with many twist and turns, exciting and jaw dropping scenes. Author had penned his imagination so perfectly in words that all the war and battle scenes, rescue episodes are vivid enough for readers to visualise.

Character of Arjuna was simply impressive. He is shrewd and cunning, brave and courageous who could win the loosing battle. Kanha was secretive yet heart warming.

A must read whoever likes to read epic fantasy novels. Eagerly waiting for the next book.
Profile Image for Pratip Vijayakumar.
131 reviews10 followers
December 13, 2017
Title: Warjuna (Book 1: Mrithasu Rising)
Author: Krishnaraj
Total No. of Pages: 302
Format: Paperback
Genre: Mythological Fiction

Note: I received a free copy of this book in return for an Honest Review.

Re-writing the Indian Mythologies and re-telling them to suit the audiences of certain culture have been there for a long time in India. When Indian English Authors decided to retell Indian Mythology in their own way or retelling the life story of a Character has given some really good results. Some of them succeeded in doing so starting from Ashok. K .Banker's retelling of Ramayana or Anand Neelakantan's Asura gave a, even more, spin to Ravana's life and relationship with Sita. They really did a great job in that. But Amish's humanising of god and putting them in a state to achieve their greater destiny gave a great reach which also became Bestseller of all times. Thus started mushrooming of retelling Mythology or Mythology Spin-Offs.There is always a knack to hook the audiences with the Author's imagination but only a few succeed in doing so. Mythological fiction these days have become more like the Horror-Comedy line of movies in Tamil Cinema, few fare, well but many fail miserably.

Warjuna by Krishnaraj is once such take on the Indian Mythological world. I wouldn't say it is a miserable attempt nor a great one and the book stands somewhere inbetween. The Prince Arjuna of Wagharr is on the run from the invading Hayacree forces along with women and children to a place called Himavan. Later, he seems to have been transported somewhere to the Southern part of Bharata. We are as blank and delusional as him. Thus starts the journey of the saviour of Prince Arjuna with the intent to save Bharata from the mysterious Mrithasu and the allied Hyacree forces. Who are these Hyacree forces? Who is Mrithasu? Did Arjuna save his people and Bharata as a whole? What is his part of this big game? Warjuna has all these answers for you.

The Author tried to do a Worldbuilding with few Mahabharata characters like 
Kanha, Draupati and Garuda with them playing a significant part of this plot while there are others who played smaller roles. The major problem I had with this book was that The Author was busy in Worldbuilding and setting up a Universe of his own but with too many characters it was really hard to keep up. Most of these characters felt disconnected even after completing the book. Instead of jumping to various parts of the Bharata, the Author could have slowly paced to that Anti-climax. Readers could have felt even more connected that way. Another small issue was there were minor grammatical and editing errors wish that could be avoided in the future books.

Even though with this flaw, the book was quite captivating. The Storyline seems to have great potential in becoming a series of books. Hope the Author doesn't screw up with forthcoming books. Character building for few was done really well and now I could still remember How Arjuna or Kanha would think in certain situations. The narrative style is great and the flow is smooth. 

In a Nutshell: As a whole, this book has a lot of potentials to become a great series but in worldbuilding, process the Author lost his way somewhere. Otherwise, the book is a great read and there seems nothing unnecessary in the book with regards to each character. They serve some purpose for the story to move forward.

Do I recommend this book? I definitely do.

Happy Reading :)
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766 reviews232 followers
October 8, 2017
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“I have witnessed Mrithasu’s growth before my own eyes. He could have been a Brahmarishi. He can still benefit mankind with the sacred knowledge he has painstakingly acquired from each realm.” “Instead, he has spun quite a spectacular web of evil”, Kanha replied with a calm smile.


I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.

Introduction
‘Warjuna Book 1: Mrithasu Rising’ is written by Krishnaraj HK.

It is a blend of Indian mythology with standard fantasy fare. I went in expecting something like Anand Neelakanthan’s re-imagining of Indian epics (Asura, Role of the Dice, Rise of Kali); instead it is written more like Shatrujeet Nath’s books (The Guardians of the Halahala and The Conspiracy at Meru) which use Indian mythological characters but in original stories.

‘Warjuna’ has some nominal characters from the Mahabharata like Arjuna, Ghatokgaja and, of course, Krishna. The story revolves around the rising of an ancient evil (Mrithasu), which leads to the invasion of India and conflicts in the heavens.

Recommendation
I try my best to support Indian authors. So while my review may sound overly harsh, I still request people to go and buy this book since Indian authors need our support. With that said, I am going to objectively look at the plot, pacing, world building and character development in this book.

First, let’s look at the plot. Did the synopsis sound familiar to you? It should have since it is basically all the standard fantasy tropes mashed together with a thin veneer of Indian characters applied to them. Mrithasu is basically Sauron if we want to take a LOTR analogy. Or if we want to look for similar plots – look no further than The Crystal Shard series or The Riftwar series, for example.

Next, the pacing and writing. The pacing is weird. I found it very hard to get into the book and It took me multiple attempts to finish it. One part of the problem is the writing. It is episodic, stilted and does not flow naturally. There is a kernel of a decent story in there somewhere but the text needs a lot more editing. The other problem is that this book reads like the first draft of stage play. There is too much of exposition and the breaks from conversation to world building or plot movement are too abrupt.

The world building is decent enough with a few original concepts. But, these concepts need more polish. I think that with more subtle explanation, getting into the world of this book will be easier.

Character development is non-existent. The culprit is two-fold. The previously mentioned exposition is the first problem. The second problem is that there is no real challenge for the hero. The protagonist needs a hero’s journey for a character arc to exist. Unfortunately, Arjuna seems to find everything falling into place naturally. So how will this journey happen? And how can we empathize with his struggles, if he has none.

Ultimately, ‘Warjuna’ is disappointing. As a baseline, I found Amish Tripathi’s Meluha series to be utter trash and I love Shatrujeeth Nath’s books. So if you liked ‘Meluha’, there is a good chance you will like this book. If not, try Shatrujeeth Nath.

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553 reviews86 followers
August 8, 2017
I got mixed feelings about this book. The premise looks fascinating. The characters are drawn from mythology, and while I appreciate this reworking on the familiar tropes, the author needs to develop them significantly to suit his story. I love mythological fantasy, and this book being set in an alternate universe refurbishes the genre. However, there are many deficiencies that needs to be fulfilled if it wants to stand in the niche of epic fantasies in the market.

This isn't a big book, because the author focuses more on events rather than worldbuilding. The chapters are short, and the storyline progress in a linear fashion. Hence, it is easy to keep in pace with the story. But, I believe that in an fantasy which is meant to be epic, and the premise promises it, the promise remains unfulfilled. The author is caught too much in the flow of events and indulges himself. I would have liked to know more about the kingdoms of Avanti, Ashmaka, Erahuz dominion, the kingdom of Wagharr and the others. Rather than giving details about them at the end of the book, the author should have Incorporated about them in the story regarding the politics, cultures, and their part in the upcoming conflict. Being a land which is invaded by unknown invaders, I would have liked to see more of the political tension between the kingdoms, but what I got was the picture of panic, and a few assasinations. Also, the author gives very little details about the Hayacree, who are the main envoys of evil in the story. I believe if he had done this, the story would have had its bulk as well as solid foundation for future developments in the world he has tempted to build in the story, because in a first book in a series the first has to bear the weight of its world so that the events progress smoothly along with the story. And, here the author has somehow ignored it.

The book has its characters drawn from the vast treasure-trove of Indian mythology, most probably the two great epics. Arjuna as the chief protagonist lacks the usual charisma, and his character is a bit too straightforward to pique interest. I wanted his personality to be more complex and deep. Here, only his capability as a strong and confident warrior is focused upon. However, he shows some good leadership skills. Kanha or Krishna is portrayed as a Mahayogi, an Avatar, and his character lacks the charming dynamics. He plays the role of a guide again, but it seems a little flunky. Draupadi has the potential to become a strong female character, and I'm eager to see how the author will place her part in the later storyarc. The chief antagonist Mrithasu remains an impalpable but a powerful presence throughout the story. He is one hell of a fascinating character, of great power. However, his background remains a mystery. The complaint I have with the characters is that they appear to be one dimensional, which is unlikely of a character to be in mythical fantasy.

The most significant thing I search for in a fantasy is the element of magic. In Warjuna, I got it, but it was like grasping water. The Mahayogi powers seemed too metaphysical to me. However, I liked the concept of tje 'seeds of maya' and 'devayatis'. The 'Hiyolat' is yet to be explained. I particularly liked the way the author has portrayed the Suparnas, the celestial beings with wings and a eagle-face. Also, the spirits of Bhoomidevi was a good way of portraying spirits. The beast which occurs seemed like a mix of Chimera and Cerberus, but it was good.

The narrative structure of the novel is easy to follow, and the writing is simple, and to some extent it is a good thing. I will say that the book would have been better, and more interesting if some requirements that I mentioned would have been filled out. A prologue makes a fantasy interesting, because it is the center aeound which the entire story of a fantasy revolves. Here, it was almost absent. I wanted a prologue which is maybe some 2-3 pages, and an Epilogue to end with which was also absent, and hence the ending was bland and predictable, which I expected to be a boggling cliffhanger. Well, keeping aside the shortcomings, I will say that the story has potential and the promise to become a strong fantasy series. I'm eager to see what the author will do in the later novels. Readers of mythological fantasy might want to give it a shot.
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122 reviews6 followers
July 14, 2017
No! This is not a re-telling of the Mahabharata in a different context with a different point of view! The names Arjuna, Kanha, Garuda and Draupadi may sound very familiar. So do the names Bharata, Avanti, Panchalla. The familiarity stops exactly there. The rest of the book is a totally fresh new story. If one wanted to tell a fresh new story then why does one want to use the old names? That's the question to be answered.

The challenge of writing fantasy lies in the balance an author can strike between world building and character building. And while one is at it, the story cannot stop. Here lies the Brilliance of Warjuna. Krishnaraj builds his story in a familiar albeit new world of Atulya and in the land of Bharatha. So, we don't have to rake up our brains when he says Avanti, or Dwaraka or even the elusive Mount Sumer is familiar to the mythologically tuned Indian mind. The reader, therefore, is aware of the world and it's setting in an intuitive manner. The only thing the author has to point out is the difference between the old and new. So if he says that Mount Sumer is covered by a mystical haze which prevents it being seen by human beings, and Suparnas, those powerful magical creatures with wings (like Garuda) reside on Mount Sumer, it makes intuitive sense. Thus, we get hooked into the story straight away. No time is lost in world building and at the same time since we know that Garuda is not exactly the same Garuda in the "puranas", we look forward to what this Garuda is up to in this world. Nail biting is eventual.

Allow me to uncover another brilliant aspect of Krishnarajs story telling. One of the most inspiring and intriguing relationships in the Mahabharata is the friendship between Krishna and Arjuna. Their intimate and deep connectedness is often portrayed as the connect between the Human (Nara) and the Divine (Narayana). It is said that in each cycle of the earths destruction and rejuvenation, at each stage where the Human and the Divine need to unite to create and/or destroy, we shall find Krishna and Arjuna. Now that Mrithasu, the evil force is rising to claim the realm of Humans, we find Arjuna as a mercenary warrior with an uncanny, undiscovered, intuitive ability to wage war and Kanha as a Mahayogi who is definitely not human but a very different class of Divine as well. They are beginning to unite. Arjuna struggles to see his own leadership and struggles to rise up to the occasion. Kanha knows he can't simply overpower the evil without Arjuna. Herein lies the drama. Arjuna's rise as a leader and Kanha's divinity in support of balance between good and evil. Though the ground treaded is all familiar, the drama is fresh and new. There is a lot to learn and also superb entertainment. The language is fluid the pace is relaxed and the build up to Mritasu Rising is definitely adrenaline pumping.

Uncovering a third streak of brilliance, I should say that in the fractured intersecting space of the world's of Mystical and Human, there is infinite scope for discovery of new forms of life, such as the Hayacree, Suparna and Deyati, new social structures they live in, such as the divine authority of the Seven sages and the Mahayogis, and the new drama their interactions could bring in. This is the beginning of a new Tolkien, a new Rowling, a new Riordan and a new Robert Jordan all put together in a new world of Bharatha.

If you have enjoyed all of the above and have had fun reading Amish, Devdatt, Krishna Udayashankar and S L Bhyrappa, this book is for you and I promise you are in for a very different experience. As for me, I am a fan and I am waiting for the next book to come.
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111 reviews6 followers
July 30, 2017
*I was provided a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review by the author.*


"From the darkness that allowed creation, to the creation that bore life and to life that defines both the living and the lifeless, the energy that sustains within all as the omnipresent and omnipotent becomes you"

Warjuna: Book 1 Mrithasu Rising

This ain't Mahabharata or retelling of that classic epic. The author took his favorite characters from Mahabharata and placed them in a different universe. building a fantasy world with characters from the mythological origin is a tedious thing to do and Krishna Raj handled it very brilliantly.

The plot involves Arjuna, crown prince of wargharr leading his people to himavan to safe guard them from upcoming hayacree attack, with a sudden twist of scenario he found himself in a Vaidya sala and given the job of warning the Raja ragu path of ashmakra, from here his journey begins so does ours. what seems to start out as simple invasion war between bharta and hayacree turns out to be fought between light and darkness. arjuna somehow founds himself in this complete mess where his only hope was Kanha, prince of Dwaraka. Kanha was on his own path of finding the greater threat that consumes Bharatha mrithasu. in simple terms, this is an about a young prince who is destined to become great.


Pros :

Brilliant and powerful writing, so thrilling and gripping, the book started with a jet engine pace and completely lost me in the middle and then picked up speed towards the end. the fantasy is awestrucking and might be overwhelming at certain points. there is very few Indian fantasy coming out these days and I am pretty sure this book will outshine everything and encourage new writers towards fantasy.


Cons :

There's quite a number of characters in the story, and almost everyone are one dimensional, there isn't any character development at all, the story is moving brilliantly but the characters remains to be same, I felt that there is a lack of human touch or emotional empathy I couldn't relate with any of the characters. Kanha and Arjuna are a bit over powering and this is a serious problem when comes character development. Kanha is a god he exhibits omnipotence, it's understandable but it makes the reader distance themselves from the character, same with Arjuna, he the savior and hero but even hero need to suffer, be vulnerable.

Another thing that bothered me is the part where Kanha attains enlightenment that whole portion is just vague, i felt it must be stressed.

Overall :

This is a fantastic book, I assure you that you will enjoy this book. recommended to all ages. I finished it in a single sitting. so grab the book and buckle up to get lost in a magical fantasy land.


-- SIDHARTH
Profile Image for Abhilash Ruhela.
643 reviews64 followers
July 23, 2017
Since Shiva Trilogy has made it mark in the Indian litearute market, I have seen many authors trying out their creative piece in the same genre by writing stories based in the historical era. Many authors have done well in it while many have failed badly. I know many books that were meant to be a trilogy but never came out with their 2nd part because the first one itself didn’t work with the readers. It’s very tough to garner the interest of readers when you are writing in the same genre as everyone in the contemporary period where the particular stuff has become fashionable. However, I just completed reading the book named “Warjuna” which is said to be the first book in the trilogy based on the rising of the Mrithasu. The book is written by the author Krishnaraj and published by Notionpress.

This 300-pages book doesn’t allow the reader to get up from his seat and leave it even for a second. The book engages you right from the first page itself. The author does not take time in introducing Arjuna with the readers and makes sure that he is regularly involved in all that takes place throughout the plot. The way author has managed to take out some characters from the epic, The Mahabharata, and use them in a totally new story based in another era makes this book special. Earlier, it took me sometime to understand how exactly is the book related with Mahabharata but after reading some more pages, I understood that it is a totally new fantasy fictional world that the author have created in this book.

The book is very fast-paced and the story regularly moves forward without boring the reader at any point. Some or the other events keep taking place in the whole set-up of war and the ideologies shared between the characters and the way war is proceeded with different political mindset gives the reader what he desperately asks for. The only problem with the book is that to move the story ahead in a very speedy manner, author has forgotten to give some time to develop the characters. The characters are just used as a stepping stone in this story and only the main protagonist is discussed in detail. Anyways, the way author describes action-packed scenes, nature, Mother Earth, war-based scenarios tells a lot about how deeply he fantasizes the world within his mind and only after which he shares it with his readers. Overall, this book will make you imagine each and every sentence in your mind and take you to a different world itself. I give this 3.75* out of 5. I am definitely waiting for its 2nd part to release soon and take the author’s work a level up.

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ABHILASH RUHELA!!!
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182 reviews36 followers
July 30, 2017
Actual rating 3.5/5

What can I say about this book? This book totally surprised me. I judged the book by its title and thought it would be just another retelling of Mahabharat or The life of Arjuna. I was wrong. This is entirely different story. Author has borrowed a few characters and their characteristics from the Mahabharat epic. The rest is a story which you can imagine to take place 1000-1500 years back.

The central character of the story is Arjuna, Prince of a kingdom Wagharr somewhere in the North West of Bharat. It is a small kingdom that belongs to Kingdom of Avanti. But they are not obliged to pay taxes to Avanti as Wagharr supplies mercenaries and soldiers to Avanti. Wagharr is supposed to be protected by the Shield of Hanuman. On a tragic day, Kingdom of Wagharr is attacked by a mysterious enemy name Hayacree. While fighting against Hayacree, Arjuna was given the task to move women and children's to a safe place. This journey outside his kingdom changes his destiny. Or maybe, walks him towards his destiny.

The Pros:
The story, writing, characterization is captivating and keeps you glued to the book. Arjuna goes through a transformation from first chapter to the last chapter. He is almost a different character at the end of the book. The descriptions of different states, their capitals, their palaces makes it easy to visualize. The are not many fight sequences in this book in spite of it being a warrior story. But there is a lot of strategy and politics. which I feel hold key to the kingdoms.The fantasy elements are very well blended and not overdone.

The Cons:
Names. I don't understand why they have to be so difficult. The author wanted to differentiate the story from the epic but he went too far with the names. You can hardly remember characters going from one chapter to another. I had turn pages back to lookup for the role of characters to understand. Second is some characters are introduced very abruptly. They jump in front of you out of nowhere and they are supposed to be major players in the story. Kamsa and Draupadi for example. Lastly, There is a history of kingdoms which has been provided at the end. This should have been the fist chapter to make it easy to understand the story. If you want to read this book, Go through this history first.

All in all, This is well written book and totally worth your time. The last chapter has enough suspense to make you wait for the next book in this series.
Profile Image for Aishwary Mehta (The_Fugitive_Biker).
230 reviews31 followers
October 7, 2017
Quote from the Book I Liked - “For to observe and to watch are worlds apart in the definition.” (Para 5, Page 178)

Rating - 4/5

Synopsis - Civilizations have once again emerged from the ruins of Pralaya, and with a new dawn arrive new ambitions. Ordained by fate, several legions of a ruthless clan have been reported to be seen marching into the boundaries of Bharata. The origins of the Hayacree are unknown, yet their intent is evident: to create a new world order.

The tides of war will bring forth valiant men and women of great fortitude and a divine force to unite them all against the strong will of the enemy. While the matters of kings and kingdoms are to be shouldered by a young prince of Wagharr, a supernatural alliance of Mahayogis and Suparnas will need to travel beyond the realm of man to discover the architect behind the Hayacree invasion.

The hunt for the real enemy will lead them to an expanse invisible to the human eye.

In its depth lies an evil waiting to be discovered, waiting to rise.


About The Book - The book is a mythological fiction where the characters name are been taken from the 'Great Mahabharat'. It's a fictional story from a completely different timeline in the completely different Universe. It's about the invasion of a foreign tribe named 'Hayacree' in the auspicious land of Bharat who are being helped by a supernatural force of evil named 'Mrithasu'. The Gods, Humans and other Creatures all fight together to unite the several divided kingdoms of India against the common threat that is Hayacree and Mrithasu (the same thing that The India and the whole world is supposed to do for the betterment of humanity).

The story starts pretty well, having the familiar names and familiar kingdoms from the past. It contains a great plot with magical creatures and a good insight about visiting different reals of the universe through meditation. For a beginner in meditation, it gives quite a knowledge of what you'll feel/see when you go in deep meditation but that's apart from the storyline.

The First part of the series ends quite well with a lot of questions still unanswered and a completely new plot yet to unfold for the upcoming parts of the series. The story sticks together to the main plot rather than diverting towards various other issues like romance which is good for a reader, as he gets what he has expected. Curious about the title of the book 'Warjuna' as only Arjuna, the protagonist, can be deciphered from it. Why is there a "W" is yet to be answered in the parts to come.

Eagerly waiting for the Next part to unravel the story further.

Verdict - A good one time fictional read which will make you stick to the last page of the book and still make you crave more of it.

Congrats to the author Krishnaraj HK for writing this fast-paced, Stick-until-the-last-page book and best of luck for your Future. Hope you give us more of such books and get a Huge success in whatever you chose to do further. Thank you for letting me give the Review copy of this book.

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252 reviews6 followers
July 27, 2017
Dont get carried away by seeing the name Arjuna in the title, this book is not other average puranic story converted to fiction. It has a fresh perspective, but with some familiar character names like Kanha, Arjuna, Draupadi etc. Thats the summary.

Unlike Amish's, Anand Neelakantan's book on the subject which are just fiction mapping of puranic events, this book talks about a parallel universe in which stories unwind. Its not Pandavas, Kauravas etc which we are familiar with.

Arjuna is a perfect protector looming in the shades of Mahayogi Kanha. He knows what is best in the situation and others are always in awe for his suggestions. Being the lead character, he just speaks and acts but after reading he kind of fades away. The strength of character is not yet visible in him.

I liked the depiction of Kanha as Mahayogi which is very welcome change after reading the books by the other authors mentioned above. Kanha is an enlightened being who is trying to group forces to save Bharata from looming danger. The way in which Kanha travels to other realms of world is beautiful, almost a fantasy.

The antagonist forces fail to impress mostly because their leader is still hiding behind the grand stage. Nothing much is revealed, but it is an intentional plot by the author. The title itself says the name of antagonist "Mrithasu rising". Hoping to see more of the antagonist in future releases.

Other character names hardly register in my mind. The names are so peculiar that I had to struggle keep remembering characters introduced every now and then.

I believe author has the right reasons for using the names from the mahapurana Mahabharatha. But this book 1 doesn't reveal the reason, which was not what one would have expected.

Also happy by seeing the profile of the author, he is not referring him as a Mythologist; which according to me a deregatory term. Mahabharatha, Ramayana etc are Puranas and not Myths. Its high time people understand it.

Overall, its a good book with some familiar names but not the familiar story.

Disclaimer: I was offered the book by author himself on exchange of a fair review. Thanking him for that, and it was worth my time.
Profile Image for Devika Ramadoss.
92 reviews21 followers
June 2, 2017
My Take On Book:

This book really impressed me in many aspects. The characters evolved very magnificently. The title may say as Mrithasu rising but you will feel him only at the end. The story is definitely between the good and the evil.

Author has borrowed the characters name from mahabharata tale but the story is not about mahabharata. Protagonist Arjuna , Prince of Wagharr starts his journey to mighty peaks of Himavan so as to save his citizens. There he discovers what his life has been destined.Kanha( Krishna) is who sets Arjuna in that path. Arjuna is a perfect prince who has all good and intellect qualities. Kanha believes that only Arjun could save mankind from Mrithasu.Arjuna is compelled to travel to different place in Bharata and finds himself being responsible and saves each kingdom from the Hayacree clan attack. Hayacrians take over every kingdom either by fight or by with boon( immortality) if the kingdom wish to surrender themselves. Read more…

I loved the part where each character speaks out there mind, There are many lines reflecting characters mind thoughts. The story travelled effortlessly to each page. The author didn't rush up to the end but steadily moved across the storyline. the last chapter where the author travels to each kingdom after Arjuna left was really awesome. That explains that these kingdom will stand beside Arjuna when the final battle starts.There were no twists and i believe that author has more secrets to revealed.Loads of questions pops up as like why Kanha chose Arjuna? Who is really Mrithasu? Mrithasu tale was least told in this book. I hope that author will be answering these in his upcoming sequel.

This book is the narration of trust,belief,loyalty,anger,betrayal,fight,death and war with the gripping storyline. Abolutely I would recommend this book to others. Kudos to the author for his fine work.
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238 reviews40 followers
July 19, 2017
The cover of this book is of a black surface, perhaps of a rock, burnt to coal. I figured out the 'ARJUNA' and a burning prefix 'W' but couldn't place the two.
Now, after finishing it, may be its an acronym for Wagharr, from where the titular character belong to.

Though many may say that the characters and story have loose resemblance or connection to India's greatest epic : The Mahabharata, for me it wasn't anything like that, except a few names like that of : Arjuna, Kanha, Panchala, Gaduda and a few traits of them. Story wise this has nothing to do with the epics, and have an another dimension of itself altogether.

The writing felt precise, without burden of any extra words or phrases. 66 chapters may sound a bit big in count, but you'll soon feel it's quite small, once you are drowned in the universe that the author has created. A fantasy world, with its magical creatures, common folk and their lore, vast locales and unique attributions makes it so much believable, that at the end, you are thirsting for the next book to come out.

Characterization of each of the person are somewhat same and predictable, once you read a few lines about what are they and what they do. Conflicts are rare. May be we will get the layers, in the next sequels. But the pace of the book, which is quite unpredictable, and the story made it enjoyable for me. The pace switches from a breeze to run within different POVs and slowly forms the web that will be the crux of an epic in making.

A map and a list of the cast of characters, pertaining to each geographic location would have been a great supplement to add to, though due to the ease of the extra lucid writing that is not needed. But, I hope in the next edition as well as the next books, they add these, as it will be fun to trace out the journeys that the characters go through and it will help to picturise the whole story much more vividly.

A big thumbs up for this one. Must Recommended to all the fantasy buffs out there!
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99 reviews
July 26, 2017
Warjuna is not one of the now-so-common retellings of the grand epic of Mahabharata. The characters, being alternate versions of the mythical heroes of lore, reside in a reimagined Bharat with its fair share of warring kingdoms and divine entities. Each wonderfully written chapter of the book exudes the creative imagination of the author in building this world and the events that unfurl within it.
The adventure kicks off from the first page itself, slowly giving way to the dynamic duo of Arjuna and Kanha performing their duties; however, due to a lack of character development, they seem two-dimensional in their actions. Though different from the namesake Pandava prince, the protagonist lacks a story arc and a convincing character foundation, which makes it difficult to root for him in his finest moments. The vast array of characters, with varying complexity of first names and tribe names, suffer the same problem, and some end up being forgotten.
The success of any first book of a series depends on two major factors: plot devices to make it engaging, and cliffhangers to pique interest in the next release. While 'Mrithasu Rising' has enough and more of the latter, the former are few and seem forced. In the end, the reader might feel that they have more questions than answers.
As a standalone book, 'Warjuna: Mrithasu Rising' has its flaws. As a start to the grand epic of Arjuna of Wagharr, it has definitely caught my attention, and I eagerly wait for the next instalment.
3.5 out of 5 stars.
P.S: Thanks to the author for sending me a copy to read and review!
Profile Image for Jayanth Kumar.
24 reviews9 followers
July 20, 2017
Bored of hearing the same epics, Grab yourself a glass of sweet tea, and curl up with "Warjuna Book 1: Mrithasu Rising", a new epic by Krishnaraj HK.

If you have ever heard of the theory of Multiverse, then this book is set in one such universe of infinitely many universes. The book tied me to Arjuna from the start, whom we know to be a great warrior in epics such as Mahabharata. The epic is centred around Arjuna, Khana, Surpanas and others trying to fight against Mrithasu(who has ascended great spiritual heights) who controls the Hayacree and wants to create a new world order.

The way in which Khana manipulates Arjuna to fight the Haycree without himself knowing it captured my interests. The way in which Arjuna progress to become a great warrior is depicted wonderfully. Draupadi is also one of my favourite characters in this epic, a woman of admiration with courage, loyalty and Love. I wish to see more of Arjuna and Draupadi in the forthcoming series.

Until now there are no thrilling turns in the story line, this book merely sets a stage for a greater epic. A little more emotion in the words would make the book better. It's definitely a good read. I can't wait till the next part of this saga. I would recommend this book to all who love history, Indian Mythology and people who like to dream of epics and battles.

*I was provided with a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review by the author.*
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60 reviews12 followers
August 5, 2017
This book is treat to action-adventure lovers

Plot: incredibly fast paced.
The author knows 'just' when to end a particular scene and where to begin next so that it is difficult to put down the book.
It has got a lot of action sequence and politics.

Characters: It is not a REBOOT of mahabaratha but the author had taken some known characters and really imagined a new story.

World building: Lot of new places were created and they are Vivacious.

Verdict: This is a world class epic action-fantasy written by an INDIAN. So give it a try, I guarantee you will be satisfied in the end.

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224 reviews17 followers
May 30, 2017
When you read a book that has characters picked up from an epic, the first reaction is that the book will be another angle to that epic. That’s exactly what I thought when I received this book. However, I was pleasantly surprised that it was not the case.
This is truly an exceptional work by the author! Krishnaraj has created a completely new story, a new world by taking two characters from Mahabharata.

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10 reviews
August 24, 2017
It's more like 3.5ish but 4 works here.

Note: Not exactly an adaptation despite borrowing some characters from Indian epics.

With fast narrative & less beating around the bush stuff, this book is 'more action less talk'. The plot is promising and well complemented by the characters portrayed. As the story is growing on a grand scale, I am looking forward to more of 'Wagharr' in book 2.
Profile Image for Kailas Ramachandran.
92 reviews
October 8, 2017
This is not the Arjuna we are so so familiar with...This is different and has different shades to it ! Krishna is there too,Draupadi is there too,but no other sign of other characters of the Mahabharat...Read it for a different hue of Arjun, Waiting for the second and the third parts to completely understand the story..Good Work KP,hard to believe that this is your first book !
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16 reviews1 follower
June 2, 2017
I'm excited to get my copy of this book soon! I will update this review once I finish reading it :)
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24 reviews5 followers
August 8, 2017
The book left me wanting for more in the end.
The story is griping and the characters are beautifully inscribed.
Thank You Mr.Krishnaraj for the opportunity
Profile Image for Prateek Suryaprakash.
2 reviews1 follower
September 13, 2017
Taking characters from Indian Mythology, the author has put forth a brilliant piece of imagination and creativity with this book. Excellent book for someone who likes to read fiction as well as Mythology. Waiting for the second part!
PS: I was given a free copy of the book in exchange for an honest review. The book was worth every second of my time!
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184 reviews1 follower
May 24, 2017
Bending the stories from mythology and creating something new is a very tricky business. And I have always loved a book which bends the characters or plots in such a way that keeps me hooked till the very end. Warjuna by Krishnaraj is one such latest entrant in this list, and I must say I am deeply impressed with the writer's skill to pick up the best from Mahabharata, Krishna, and Arjuna and set them up in a very different background setting altogether.

Wararjuna is the first book in the coming series of mythological fiction which is set in The Age of Atulya. The world has recently started to recover from the age of Pralaya and inhabitants are trying to settle in a new world. But the Gods have a different plan. Enter Hayacrees, a ruthless army of dark powers that have been recently spotted marching towards Bharata. As one by one kingdoms start to fall in their way of darkness, there seems to be no hope for people until a Prince from the kingdom of Wagharr, Arjuna appears out of nowhere to be their savior.

The story opens with Arjuna traveling across a desert along with his kingdom's survivors, who have recently fallen in the way of Hayacrees. Safety of a handful of woman and children is given to Arjuna by his father. But during their journey, he encounters magical powers and divinely inspired people who leave him physically hurt and spell bounded.

When Arjuna opens his eyes next he is being tended by a Vaidya who keeps a deaf ear on his claims that he was with his kingdom's survivors. He doesn't realize that he is a part of a divine plan, plan of Krishna who has other plans for him on his mind.

With Kanha, the King of Dwarka for support, Arjuna tries to reach out to help as much as he can. But things aren't as easy as they seem. Many times he loses in faith in Kanha, and other times he is fighting a war he wasn't supposed to be a part of. Burdened with guilt and grief, he begins his journey back home to Wagharr and his kin but is shocked to see what he witnesses there. Hayacrees are not the only one running for a new World Order, the enemy is bigger than anything Warjuna can imagine. A supernatural alliance of Mahayogis and Suparnas will need to travel beyond the realm of man to discover the architect behind the Hayacree invasion.

Now as I mentioned in the beginning of this review, twisting mythology and its characters is a pretty tedious task and I have seen it go wrong many times. But Krishnaraj is superbly talented in this case! Not only he managed to twist the characters, but he also puts them in a new setting where they are fighting a new war together. The soul of each character is the same, with Arjuna being the Great Warrior he was and Krishna being as secretive and mysterious as he can be.

I found the storyline of Warjuna pretty interesting, and it kept me hooked most of the time. The storyline is well written and the narrative is smooth. Though there were some unnecessary incidents included in the book, especially in the beginning of but those can be ignored since they don't hamper the story in any way. There are ample of characters in the book, different Kings from different kingdoms, but it doesn't leave the reader confused. But I am not sure if everybody would be able to keep up with the character count that Warjuna has.

Overall, Warjuna is a solid opening to the upcoming series. The idea is fresh and interesting, and the book keeps the reader engaged. All in all, it's a pretty good read if you are looking for something different in mythological fiction.
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