I entered in new city and spirit was following me, she enters within me I feel shivering, men ghost come at my room, for showing presence of him by creating throat clearance, sound of foot step, sound hinting the presence of some one. Suddenly get wild try to hit me kill me, dreaming same all girls like one girl jumped in the well and hanging, before suicide ate wadapav, hunger spirit ate food what I cook, and...
Description: 'A fascinating journey with spirits' is a story about a girl who joins a hostel of girls, but soon finds that the hostel is haunted and many good as well as bad spirits dwell in there. She talks to many of them and befriends some of them.
Review: The theme of the story is well defined with many characters filling the colors; so the character making is good. Plot is good as well. But I'm afraid the language used, lacks stability. Every now and then, grammatical errors are made by the writer. And I believe the writer could have used a better title; the title writer has used ain't promising.