Yak... dnf.
Ok, I know this is an exaggeration of the intent of the story and not what the author was probably aiming for, but this was all I could see.
The H and his country GROOM ‘girls from a young age’ <—- direct quote, in the art of how to please men. They are effectively raising them as obedient - geez, this story has me so irked I really want to write something REALLY offensive here, but it would still describe the mentality. So, they raise obedient housekeepers, mothers and sex toys. They see nothing wrong with aligning every part of the women’s lives to please the man, from how their bodies are prepped to what they eat to ensure his approval.
Thankfully, the h actually does call him out for the appalling way his country and he treat their sex toys... but she still melts and jumps on his cock at EVERY opportunity!
I understand the plot and all and have read others similar that I’ve liked and I think have managed to pull off the inequality and gender bias’s well enough to not have them jumping out at me like fire throwing gorillas, but this one really really misses the mark for me. I got half way, and she’s just been plucked, basted, stuffed and dressed like his preferred Christmas ham, and she’s pissed and ready to have it out with him! Well fine-a-fuck-a-ly!!! She lasts what, 10mins of telling him that this is a huge problem that he as Sheik is perpetuating by saying ‘girl’s can pursue higher education, but we aren’t going to let them do anything but follow orders to clean, fuck or breed... so yes, I’m mildly appeased that she’s thrown the obvious in his face that generations of sexism has kept him blinded too. And he’s throwing around ‘you will marry me’ and she’s thinking ‘I can’t be one of many’ and then they are fucking again! Really!
It’s not that this book is overwhelmed with sex, it’s that she actually has so many problems with the entire situation and his part in it, but she can’t keep her legs closed in his presence, at all. Luckily I don’t need to point out she can’t keep her panties on... cause she’s not given any, but is wrapped in such a way that one tug (from anyone) would leave her naked. And she’s conveniently brushed off the fact that he had her drugged, kidnapped and shipped to his country against her will, ‘cause whatever, no need to be pissed about that, or have any worry about what kind of drugs were used and if they’d affected that baby. She’ll just smile and get primped and preened between jumping on his cock while she’s trying to have a serious conversation with him.
And yes, I understand that the author is trying to show what a huge (I’m guessing soulmate) pull they have to each other, but there is a time to grit your teeth and keep your uglies from bumping for an hour or two.
So yep, this book really managed to piss me off. There was no balance to the I want you and this is our reality. There wasn’t really any sides to him either for all that the author appeared to give him depth, he was just a spoiled cock.
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