On the surface level, The Reality Thief by Paul Anlee has all the makings of a great science fiction story. The plot is unique. The science informing the plot is plausible. The themes of the story are quite relevant to today's social turmoil. The characters are adequate. Yet by the end of the story, I felt somewhat disappointed. While the book is good, it never reaches its full potential. This is partially due to three main factors: the characters, the pacing, and structure of the story. At times, these aspects of the story seems to compete with one another, not really coalescing and it can lead to a disconnect and turn off for the reader.
So part of the reason why the story can turn off readers is due to the structure of the story. The story is divided into three main substories. One substory focuses on Darian Leigh, a scientific wunderkind due to an artificial lattice developing within his brain as a fetus due to his mother’s research. This lattice allows him to process and comprehend large amounts of information, though it does have some downsides such as requiring downtime to process information, headaches, etc. Around him, the United States undergoes severe social turmoil, facilitating the splintering of the union. He becomes a professor in the newly created country of Pacifica. His first major research project is to create a machine designed to explore how the natural laws of the universe evolved into being by generating a microverse. However, this research draws the ire of the powerful quasi-religious governing body of the Neo-Confederacy.
The other two substories deal with characters in the far future. One substory deals with the arrival of a stranger to a space colony of humans on the outskirts of a faraway galaxy. This attracts the attention of one of the leaders of the community, Brother Stralasi due to the oddness of it. This event precipitates an adventure that seeks to open Stralasi’s eyes to the truth about his religious beliefs and the godlike prophet he follows. The other substory is somewhat of an inverse. A cybrid, that is a conscious artificial intelligence, named Darya opposes the plan that the aforementioned prophet has created to control the universe. She has grown to oppose how the prophet keeps everyone ignorant. After her rebellion was crushed the first time around, she seeks to rebuild her groups and sabotage the prophet’s plan utilizing any means available. Now the summaries of the three substories were given to illustrate how divergent the substories are in terms of theme and setting. And while I do appreciate how creative the settings and characters are, they do not reinforce one another. It is pretty clear that the all three stories are connected, not just in terms of themes but also in a direct sense since Darian’s story takes place in the past of the other two substories. But beyond a few references, the stories feel completely self-contained. This hurts the overall story because the constant shifting from substory to substory deprives the characters of development. And while Stralasi’s and Darya’s substories have decent plot developments that may keep a reader entertained, Darian’s substory does not have anything to keep a reader engrossed.
So the characters in this story are fairly flat. That is to say that they do not have a lot of character growth. And with Darya and Stralasi, their substories are plot driven enough to where that is not too big of a detriment. Yet with Darian, there is nothing there to really engage the reader. Darian as a character is not fleshed out. And since he does not have a plot driven narrative, he needed character growth or moments to help a reader connect with Darian. If anything, the way Darian is written will turn off readers even if they agree with him. Darian is written in a way that is reminiscent of how r/Atheism used to be on Reddit. That is to say, he is arrogant and condescending, even when he does not mean to be. And while he does have moments where he does realize that he should use more tact, these moments are few and far between. Darian is not the only one who suffers from this, however. Many of the characters feel like caricatures. Which lessen the themes’ impact as we do not see them develop. One theme of Darya’s substory is the idea of how far one should go to promote their ideals and stop an unthinkable event. The problem is that Darya does not receive any real resistance to her plans. In fact, the other Cybrid she has for this goal, Macy, seems to acquiesce to her plan without any resistance besides the initial argument. We really do not see Stralasi change as well as his world view expands. And while this is the first part of a series of books where we may see more development of these characters, first impressions are everything. This is not to say that there is nothing good about the story, however. The themes of the story are important. The science behind the story is fairly plausible. And the writing is pretty good. I just wish the characters were worthy of the story that they are in.