SPOILERS AHEAD
I've been a fan of Sherrilyn's for YEARS! I've bought everything this women has ever released, I've been to KCON, and I have a tattoo based off her DH series. I'm a stan for anything this woman puts out, but I am seriously disappointed in her for this absolute waste of a book.
1/3 of the book was original content. I'm not even joking. 2/3's of it was previous scenes from other books told from the POV of Bastien, but even then he barely added anything original to the scenes. Sure, we got him feeling guilty and sad, but other than that he barely added anything to the scenes. Most of the time it was word for word from the other books. It was like Sherrilyn C&P'ed and totally forgot that Bastien was even there.
The original 1/3 of the book was rushed, lazy, and just a huge disappointment. We got to see how Bastien and Ember met and that was about it. We didn't see how their relationship developed, nothing. Normally, we get to see how a relationship flourishes but nothing this time. I was so horribly disappointed because that's usually the meat of Sherrilyn's stories. I live for the banter, the onset of new love, the passion. NOTHING! We see how they met, fast forward to her refusing his proposal, and then BAM! Bastient's family is horribly murdered, he's banished, and it's on to stuff we've already read before.
Also, I really hated how they did Alura. We got ONE scene at the beginning where she was in cohoots with Barnabas (Bastient's uncle) about the whole coup. Skip to the end where Sherrilyn either completely forgot she put this scene in or she ignores it and makes Alura's whole reason for fucking Bastien over simply because he chose Ember and not her. I'm sorry, what? Did you forget the scene where Barnabas caught Alura out on the balcony on her wedding night and make vague remarks about his whole 'plan' and Alura's part of it?
Not to mention the fact that I'm so sick and tired of Sherrilyn playing the whole 'THEY'RE DEAD! NO WAIT, THEY'RE NOT!' trope. Seriously, every single time someone dies in one of her stories I just roll my eyes and secretly think, 'Naw, they're not. It's just a ploy.' Every time there's a big reveal that so-and-so isn't dead, I just roll my eyes, sigh, and continue to read. It's overrated, old, and honestly, so incredibly insulting. It's a waste of time, lazy as all get out, and honestly, the fact that Sherrilyn keeps using the same trope over and over, it's annoying.
And let's not forget the fact that everyone is related to everyone in one way or another. It's like the family tree of The League is one giant circle. I get that there's this whole brotherhood thing going on wherein you're family even if you're not related BUT THAT'S NOT EVEN WHAT'S GOING ON HERE! EVERYONE IS RELATED! So-and-so is the half brother of so-and-so and also the 2nd cousin of so-and-so and the in-law of so-and-so. It's confusing and sooooooooo annoying. Half the damn book was Sherrilyn mansplaining who's related, how they're related, AND OH WAIT, THERE'S A NEW RELATION THAT YOU DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT! SURPRISE!
No, Sherrilyn, the surprise is that you have become a lazy, predictable writer. And it's shameful. It's shameful, disappointing, and downright insulting to your fans.