Short and...not too sweet. The novella revolved around the Duke of Roxburgh's four daughters, the oldest of which, Chastity Hamilton, was the heiress to his title. Chastity was 24 and didn't seem to be in too much of a hurry to marry. She had filled the mothering role to her three sisters Olivia, Jessica, and Lucy ever since their mother had died 8 years earlier. However, the duke was determined to see her wed and was willing to blackmail her by threatening to marry her to a man 25 years older than her if she didn't find her own groom within two months' time. Chastity, outraged, made a deal with the duke by saying whomever she was to marry must first find matches for each of her sisters before she would agree to marry him. At this point, the reader was introduced to Sir Stirling James who, coming out of nowhere, agreed to Lady Chastity's challenge so he could then marry her. There was no explanation in the storyline of how Sir James came to learn of the challenge or even why he was so interested in fulfilling it in order to marry Chastity. He just...appeared. He had never met her or her sisters before. He had only been shown miniature portraits of each of the ladies, which led to his acceptance of the challenge.
But the more important thing was, this book wasn't about Lady Chastity or Sir James, though. It was about the youngest sister, Lady Lucy (who was just 17 years of age and had not yet had a come out) and 21-year-old Quinn Ramsey, the infamous Baron of Delny, otherwise known as the Devil of Delny, a known rake. Neither of these two had ever met before, although Lady Lucy had heard of the Baron and his wicked ways. They met for the first time at a ball and only danced together once. However, the Baron did not make a good impression on Lady Lucy during the ball. The next thing the reader learned was that everyone was at the church and the two were getting married.
The story lacked a great deal of character development. The reader didn't have a chance to learn much about anyone and the story seemed rushed. What the reader did learn was that two people would be controlling the outcome of eight lives without so much as a twinge of guilt or concern. The duke decided it was time for his daughters to wed...which is what fathers did, understandably. However, for Sir James to be the one to decide to take control was a bit out of place. Perhaps if the author had taken time to explain in this first book more about who he was, where he came from, why he chose to accept the challenge, then maybe the reader might have been able to accept what occurred in this book and what will happen in the next three to come.
From the opening lines to the ending, the events took all of just a few days...maybe just five or six total, if that many. How does a romance develop one character being totally against getting married to getting married? There was no time for the couple to court or get to know each other. They hadn't even shared a kiss. There was no time to show a development of chemistry or passion. There was little to no drama. There was a heck of a lot of angst though.
This book definitely did not get the Keeper for the Shelves award.