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Sex & Santería: We Submit to The Priestess Next Door
I want to start by saying that, Lupe—our fifty-something, husky-voiced, entrancingly sexy and powerful neighbor, who sings at an after-hours club, downtown?
I’m not afraid of her.
Not sure where to go after that, other than: The fact that she has sexually enslaved both me and my wife, Patty-the-ER-Doc? I can understand how that might make me sound . . . not entirely credible.
I accept that.
Frankly?
I don’t find my LIFE anywhere in the vicinity of credible.
Lupe is our Priestess, our Goddess, our Alpha and our Omega. There is no pleasure in the world stronger than surrendering both our pleasure and our pain to her, nothing more gorgeous and gratifying, nothing more . . . terrifying.
We ARE afraid of her; we love and cherish that fear.
Is any of this . . . credible?
We no longer live in a Universe where that question even makes sense to us: We live in her orbit, an irresistible field of gravity, power, sexuality, total control.
I would be afraid to live anyplace else.
I’m not afraid of her.
Not sure where to go after that, other than: The fact that she has sexually enslaved both me and my wife, Patty-the-ER-Doc? I can understand how that might make me sound . . . not entirely credible.
I accept that.
Frankly?
I don’t find my LIFE anywhere in the vicinity of credible.
Lupe is our Priestess, our Goddess, our Alpha and our Omega. There is no pleasure in the world stronger than surrendering both our pleasure and our pain to her, nothing more gorgeous and gratifying, nothing more . . . terrifying.
We ARE afraid of her; we love and cherish that fear.
Is any of this . . . credible?
We no longer live in a Universe where that question even makes sense to us: We live in her orbit, an irresistible field of gravity, power, sexuality, total control.
I would be afraid to live anyplace else.
50 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 16, 2017
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About the author
Jon Zelig
113 books60 followersLargely write Femdom; some Age Play of the Dommy Mommy with a Cuckold Husband variety: no incest, no "babies," no diapers.
Over a hundred erotic works on the Kindle Store: www.amazon.com/author/jonzelig
Some work has migrated to Pink Flamingo Media and to Smashwords distribution partners; most of the longer works available in paperback; a few have been brought out as audio books, with more pending.
Twin Sister Joy Zelig is more maledom oriented; a couple of books each from cousins Bram Zelig (PNE) and Zoe Zelig (slightly softer maledom with a bit more romance, perhaps some FSOG echoes).
Reachable at: jonzelig@protonmail.com
www.zeligmedia.wordpress.com
Over a hundred erotic works on the Kindle Store: www.amazon.com/author/jonzelig
Some work has migrated to Pink Flamingo Media and to Smashwords distribution partners; most of the longer works available in paperback; a few have been brought out as audio books, with more pending.
Twin Sister Joy Zelig is more maledom oriented; a couple of books each from cousins Bram Zelig (PNE) and Zoe Zelig (slightly softer maledom with a bit more romance, perhaps some FSOG echoes).
Reachable at: jonzelig@protonmail.com
www.zeligmedia.wordpress.com
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April 19, 2017
This is a perfect quickie vacation in novella form!
As I’m not a big reader of Femdom or PNR, vacation is the best word for this in more ways than one. Well outside my usual comfy zone of erotic tastes, I just couldn’t resist a caliente stay after reading a smidge of the sample. There was a smile on my lips for the duration of my visit to this wacky Club Muff.
You know...being a fool for a woman such as yourself....is always the right thing to do.
↑↑↑ Yeah, that scene in Kill Bill 2 with pimp/daddy Esteban…that’s the voice and inflection I heard with Lupe’s speech. At times, it was perfect ("hongry poosy”); only once was it a wee distracting…overall, an added element of the profane that made me become a cognizant participant in the insanely arcane erotica of this short tale.
The descriptions are all fabulous!
"On one level, Lupe looked ridiculous: Straight out of a Frederick’s of Hollywood catalog, circa 1957. On another level: Damn!
She wore a floor-length, gauzy, I-don’t-know-what, white, frilly, and fully open, neck to toes; beneath that: a short white peignoir that concealed neither her full breasts, with their dark and prominent nipples nor what looked like a carefully delineated, playing card-sized, patch of wildly curly pubic hair; on her feet: high-heeled, white mules, adorned, somehow, with feathers.”
Yet, I know the writing style won’t be for everyone (you who love your grammar-perfection over artistic liberty, I’m talkin’ to you…). I LOVED it—kept the pace fast and added to the tension/build-up.
And the Puma…. "…lazily grazing viscous trails on her lower back…” That was such a pleasant surprise, like knowingly ordering an unpronounceable dish while slightly tipsy on some local cocktail, with only the vaguest of ideas as to what will actually be served, and then being utterly, orgasmically, thrilled with the first bite.
As with any good vacation, even a quickie, I was immersed in the environment of this one: the humidity tranquilized, the scents enveloped, the primal music swayed, the flavors lingered, and the sex….
….aaahhh….I soooo fuck needed this vacation!
Many thanks to the author for a freebie copy.
As I’m not a big reader of Femdom or PNR, vacation is the best word for this in more ways than one. Well outside my usual comfy zone of erotic tastes, I just couldn’t resist a caliente stay after reading a smidge of the sample. There was a smile on my lips for the duration of my visit to this wacky Club Muff.
You know...being a fool for a woman such as yourself....is always the right thing to do.
↑↑↑ Yeah, that scene in Kill Bill 2 with pimp/daddy Esteban…that’s the voice and inflection I heard with Lupe’s speech. At times, it was perfect ("hongry poosy”); only once was it a wee distracting…overall, an added element of the profane that made me become a cognizant participant in the insanely arcane erotica of this short tale.
The descriptions are all fabulous!
"On one level, Lupe looked ridiculous: Straight out of a Frederick’s of Hollywood catalog, circa 1957. On another level: Damn!
She wore a floor-length, gauzy, I-don’t-know-what, white, frilly, and fully open, neck to toes; beneath that: a short white peignoir that concealed neither her full breasts, with their dark and prominent nipples nor what looked like a carefully delineated, playing card-sized, patch of wildly curly pubic hair; on her feet: high-heeled, white mules, adorned, somehow, with feathers.”
Yet, I know the writing style won’t be for everyone (you who love your grammar-perfection over artistic liberty, I’m talkin’ to you…). I LOVED it—kept the pace fast and added to the tension/build-up.
And the Puma…. "…lazily grazing viscous trails on her lower back…” That was such a pleasant surprise, like knowingly ordering an unpronounceable dish while slightly tipsy on some local cocktail, with only the vaguest of ideas as to what will actually be served, and then being utterly, orgasmically, thrilled with the first bite.
As with any good vacation, even a quickie, I was immersed in the environment of this one: the humidity tranquilized, the scents enveloped, the primal music swayed, the flavors lingered, and the sex….
….aaahhh….I soooo fuck needed this vacation!
Many thanks to the author for a freebie copy.
April 21, 2017
Danny and Patty develop a strange relationship with Lupe.
The priestess next door.
Danny is beautifully cuckolded but with a surprise twist.
Short but oh so sexy and sweet.
Five stars
The priestess next door.
Danny is beautifully cuckolded but with a surprise twist.
Short but oh so sexy and sweet.
Five stars
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August 31, 2017After learning this book was banned by the Great & Powerful Zon, I just had to see what linguistic acrobatics the author did to get it republished. Brilliant and oh so cleverly devious :)
(Original Review Posted On Other Version):
This is a perfect quickie vacation in novella form!
As I’m not a big reader of Femdom or PNR, vacation is the best word for this in more ways than one. Well outside my usual comfy zone of erotic tastes, I just couldn’t resist a caliente stay after reading a smidge of the sample. There was a smile on my lips for the duration of my visit to this wacky Club Muff.
You know...being a fool for a woman such as yourself....is always the right thing to do.
↑↑↑ Yeah, that scene in Kill Bill 2 with pimp/daddy Esteban…that’s the voice and inflection I heard with Lupe’s speech. At times, it was perfect ("hongry poosy”); only once was it a wee distracting…overall, an added element of the profane that made me become a cognizant participant in the insanely arcane erotica of this short tale.
The descriptions are all fabulous!
"On one level, Lupe looked ridiculous: Straight out of a Frederick’s of Hollywood catalog, circa 1957. On another level: Damn!
She wore a floor-length, gauzy, I-don’t-know-what, white, frilly, and fully open, neck to toes; beneath that: a short white peignoir that concealed neither her full breasts, with their dark and prominent nipples nor what looked like a carefully delineated, playing card-sized, patch of wildly curly pubic hair; on her feet: high-heeled, white mules, adorned, somehow, with feathers.”
Yet, I know the writing style won’t be for everyone (you who love your grammar-perfection over artistic liberty, I’m talkin’ to you…). I LOVED it—kept the pace fast and added to the tension/build-up.
And the Puma…. "…lazily grazing viscous trails on her lower back…” That was such a pleasant surprise, like knowingly ordering an unpronounceable dish while slightly tipsy on some local cocktail, with only the vaguest of ideas as to what will actually be served, and then being utterly, orgasmically, thrilled with the first bite.
As with any good vacation, even a quickie, I was immersed in the environment of this one: the humidity tranquilized, the scents enveloped, the primal music swayed, the flavors lingered, and the sex….
….aaahhh….I soooo fuck needed this vacation!
Many thanks to the author for a freebie copy.
(Original Review Posted On Other Version):
This is a perfect quickie vacation in novella form!
As I’m not a big reader of Femdom or PNR, vacation is the best word for this in more ways than one. Well outside my usual comfy zone of erotic tastes, I just couldn’t resist a caliente stay after reading a smidge of the sample. There was a smile on my lips for the duration of my visit to this wacky Club Muff.
You know...being a fool for a woman such as yourself....is always the right thing to do.
↑↑↑ Yeah, that scene in Kill Bill 2 with pimp/daddy Esteban…that’s the voice and inflection I heard with Lupe’s speech. At times, it was perfect ("hongry poosy”); only once was it a wee distracting…overall, an added element of the profane that made me become a cognizant participant in the insanely arcane erotica of this short tale.
The descriptions are all fabulous!
"On one level, Lupe looked ridiculous: Straight out of a Frederick’s of Hollywood catalog, circa 1957. On another level: Damn!
She wore a floor-length, gauzy, I-don’t-know-what, white, frilly, and fully open, neck to toes; beneath that: a short white peignoir that concealed neither her full breasts, with their dark and prominent nipples nor what looked like a carefully delineated, playing card-sized, patch of wildly curly pubic hair; on her feet: high-heeled, white mules, adorned, somehow, with feathers.”
Yet, I know the writing style won’t be for everyone (you who love your grammar-perfection over artistic liberty, I’m talkin’ to you…). I LOVED it—kept the pace fast and added to the tension/build-up.
And the Puma…. "…lazily grazing viscous trails on her lower back…” That was such a pleasant surprise, like knowingly ordering an unpronounceable dish while slightly tipsy on some local cocktail, with only the vaguest of ideas as to what will actually be served, and then being utterly, orgasmically, thrilled with the first bite.
As with any good vacation, even a quickie, I was immersed in the environment of this one: the humidity tranquilized, the scents enveloped, the primal music swayed, the flavors lingered, and the sex….
….aaahhh….I soooo fuck needed this vacation!
Many thanks to the author for a freebie copy.
May 28, 2019
Danny meets Lupe, his next door neighbor when he locks himself out of the home he and a Patty, his wife live in. Patty won’t be of any help, as she is at the hospital ER where she works.
Danny’s intrusion on Lupe gives birth to a wild sexual yearning for the older Cuban woman, who informs him in advance that he and Patty will become enslaved to her.
This is an excellent beginning of a series of novellas.
Highly recommended.
Danny’s intrusion on Lupe gives birth to a wild sexual yearning for the older Cuban woman, who informs him in advance that he and Patty will become enslaved to her.
This is an excellent beginning of a series of novellas.
Highly recommended.
May 25, 2019
Great short read!
I gave this book a five star rating because it is so good! It's erotic and mysterious all at the same time! I'm definitely going to read more books by Jon Zelig.
I gave this book a five star rating because it is so good! It's erotic and mysterious all at the same time! I'm definitely going to read more books by Jon Zelig.
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