Some books, even in a series, will explain references when it brings up previous events. This one doesn't. You either try to have to forget you read it or sink, waiting for the life preserver known as details.
Time is an optical illusion. From one part of the chapter to the next, days, weeks, or months can pass. So I guess there's a lot of dead air in India's life. Even after the threatening note she gets last year - and with no other reference to it for months and months and months ....
Vulgar language out of the blue. Perhaps people talk like that; but this is our introduction to them. It makes the relationships seem juvenile, simplistic, and shallow.
Oh, yeah, now it makes sense why the MC in her mid 20s have to give us a play by play of her erotic dream. Cuz she was a virgin when and he popped all of her cherries in the previous book. So *now* there are details galore in the sex area.
And after the rekindle it, MORE details. With an elderly aunt. Some families are just friends, I suspect. No respect, no discretion, no common sense. "We're all adults here" doesn't really mean we need to talk about only sex. I talk about sex with my friends, too, but ... you know. In an adult way, not like beer drinking, high-on-weed, hormone-driven teenagers in a mall Food Court. Oh, nevermind, they took a page out of Trump's play book.
So after chapters of blah blah blah and skipping through time, comes an abundance of minute by minute movements because they're a couple again.
Not only is it sad that she has no life to write about when he's absent from her life, but it's pathetic a book revolves around it, when it claims to have more depth.
In possession, the only depth is his thrusts illustrated in the bedroom.
It does get 2.9 stars because overall correct grammar usage, sentence structure and editing was ingenius. A few formatting errors.
If there was any forewarning, I definitely wouldn't have entered the drawing for this giveaway and happily allowed another winner my spot, who knew what s/he was getting.