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Empty Threat
Book one of The Black Pages
Elana Black has the power to make herself fictional. But when she decides to start saving all the people in books and TV shows who die just for the sake of advancing the plot, she quickly learns that she's not the only one with her powers.
All Elana wants to do is save people. But these others don't want the stories to change, and they'll do everything they can to stop her.
If you had the power to change fate... to create a happy ending where there wasn't one before... would you do it if it meant risking your own?
Elana Black has the power to make herself fictional. But when she decides to start saving all the people in books and TV shows who die just for the sake of advancing the plot, she quickly learns that she's not the only one with her powers.
All Elana wants to do is save people. But these others don't want the stories to change, and they'll do everything they can to stop her.
If you had the power to change fate... to create a happy ending where there wasn't one before... would you do it if it meant risking your own?
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December 18, 2017
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*A Copy was provided through Review Opp. by Xpresso Tours*
The beginning was kinda slow for me, took me a while to get into it but I’m glad I finished it! Honestly, when I read the description I knew I had to read this. I really enjoyed this book! Empty Threat is a very unique story with engaging characters and an exciting execution.
Empty Threat starts off with Elena Black attempting to avoid socializing at her friend, Olivia’s party by using her secret power to jump into a fictional world by just reading a few ages of a book. It’s only when she wakes up in the real world after her fictional journey that she realizes something seems different. Everything is different and people are after her. She goes through a lot! I won’t give too many spoilers but you have to read it!
I loved this book! I know I already said that but I just can’t say it enough! I’m really happy I got to read and review it! I can’t wait for the next book in the series! I highly recommend it!
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The beginning was kinda slow for me, took me a while to get into it but I’m glad I finished it! Honestly, when I read the description I knew I had to read this. I really enjoyed this book! Empty Threat is a very unique story with engaging characters and an exciting execution.
Empty Threat starts off with Elena Black attempting to avoid socializing at her friend, Olivia’s party by using her secret power to jump into a fictional world by just reading a few ages of a book. It’s only when she wakes up in the real world after her fictional journey that she realizes something seems different. Everything is different and people are after her. She goes through a lot! I won’t give too many spoilers but you have to read it!
I loved this book! I know I already said that but I just can’t say it enough! I’m really happy I got to read and review it! I can’t wait for the next book in the series! I highly recommend it!
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December 23, 2020
This is a delightful fantasy series about a girl who can GO INTO BOOKS Y'ALL!!!! I've read the first one so far and really enjoyed it! It's got a nice mix of action, intrigue, surprises around every corner and my absolute favorite - HUMOR! The protagonist Elana's internal monologue had me chuckling the whole book.
March 25, 2017
This was supposed to give me something to read after work for days. Instead I've had two very unproductive work days. Just when I thought the pacing was slow it grabbed me and kept on going at full speed. The story stands on it's own but is the start of what promises to be a very good series.
May 3, 2020
Another new author for me and a change from my usual genres but this turned out to be an excellent fantasy story. I love the premise for the story. While reading books or watching TV, Elana can literally fall into the story. After, not surprisingly, not sharing this ability with anyone and making sure she didn't upset the main threads of the story, she suddenly decides the characters in the stories are real and can be saved from murder, flesh eating zombies and various other unwelcome ends for their characters. At first, all is well but then it turns out she is not the only one with magic powers and the ability to move between these different fantasy worlds. The lives of her friends and herself are in danger form these other beings, who don't want her changing the stories. The book is well written, with a good sprinkling of humour combining with the action and fantasy elements. Very enjoyable!
December 19, 2018
This is garbage. I wouldn't give this to my worse enemy. The fact that I share a species with the person who wrote this and thought it was good enough to publish makes me want to smash my head into my desk until I forget all about how this piece of shit was green-lighted.
The heroine! Oh god, the heroine. I wanted her to fucking die. I hate her. She's one of the most insufferable, selfish, insensitive and retarded character in all of literature.
ACTUAL OPENING LINE OF THE BOOK:
She is so obnoxious. And supposed to be an adult, too! *laughs in asshole* Here is a collection of quotes I have so lovingly gathered for your enjoyment:
I'm gonna take for granted this showed you the insufferable side of our Marie Sue of the day- who's called Elana by the way- but don't worry I'm definitely going back to that anyway after we deal with the 'selfish' part.
CHAPTER 1: Or how to make your readers cheer for the villains.
If these quotes weren't enough to justify this chapter title for you, don't you worry, we'll go over how Elana doesn't give a fuck about murdering entire dimensions if it means she can feel good about herself!
So Elana's power is to make herself fictional and go into books, movies, series, etc. At first she thinks it's just a neat thing you know, she goes, avoids the main plot as best as she can and goes back. But then she meets a guy in a sitcom who's like her, and he tells her that the 'fictional' worlds are actually other dimensions- so everything is real.
-let's just ignore the fact that the author never clarifies if these worlds are created by the creators we know or simply exist and creators... somehow get linked to that reality in ways that suggest the absolute contrary (stories can be created over decades, building off even more stories and ideas, like a pyramid- how would that even work with this reality the author is presenting us with?) which means creativity isn't a thing?well I mean I can definitely believe that from this author but... -
Anyway that prompts her to... go and save every rando who ever died.
Does n-not c-c-comppu-tee
Thus she actively alters reality in ways that she cannot predict nor understand and she doesn't give a fuck. Let me repeat that- by going off and saving characters who should've died, she is actively altering reality in ways that are impossible for her or anyone to predict, and she keeps going.
Not even that. When her bullshit changes enough stories and actually tears space and dimensions apart, we learn later, the Book police shows up and tells her to stop or else they'll kill her friends. She doesn't, so they go after her friends. Elana manages to save them in extremis, and they get out with their lives. Immediately both her friends tell her to stop. They even vote on it, are begging Elana for their own lives- for fuck's sake, Olivia's roommate was actually a spy. They are just as involved, if not more so- they did nothing and unlike Elana, the Book police has permission to kill them.
And Elana is "Nope, sorry can't do."
***THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE CHARACTER YOU SIDE WITH***
bc that clerk with 12 sec of screentime is more important than the woman who gave me a job and was my friend even when she thought I was an insane bum and my best friend who stuck with me through all this bullshit and got hurt saving my life am I rite
And this is why, dear readers, that you side with the villains in this godawful piss of writing- oh look thesis statement is back because while the fuckers are actively going after innocents, they're actually better than Elana in every way. 1) They know what in the fuck they're doing, unlike her manic ass, 2) they're actually thinking of the world and trying to stop a dangerous terrorist from ending reality as we know it and 3) they're not even trying to kill Elana, in fact they warn her several times and gave her chances to redeem herself before actually going after her friends. In fact, even at the end of the book after she killed several members of the Book police, their chief says there's still a chance she'll be recruited in their ranks after her trial.
Chapter 2: Or how Elana is just great, guys, and smart and funny and the most selfless psychopath of all.
We've already talked about her, but let's get even more in depth about this strange thing that calls itself 'the protagonist'. A thing that I feel is... wrong.
The first time we see her she's at a party and bored. A guy comes talk to her and she doesn't even have the decency to engage with him. She then takes a book and vanishes. In that book she meets this random guy she hangs out with for a while. It was pretty boring, I don't remember anything about their interaction except that he gave her a book and she took it back with her irl and is shocked by that.
This is where your start wondering, what is this woman? She can go into fictional worlds, yet never thought of bringing back something with her? Her, the woman who doesn't give one shit about millions upon millions of people dying because she can save one person? It's almost... out of character for her.
Then you ask another question: just who the fuck is she? What is her childhood? Where are her parents, how did she get her powers, how did her first travel happen, what happened afterwards? Never answered, people. Her parents are never mentioned. The only mentions of her powers' origin is that "[she] got them a few years ago." Now, what does that mean? Is it inherited? Did she steal it? Does she even know how it happened? Did she just realize she had it now when opening a book?
I don't think even the author knows. Or else he would've fucking put it in the book, hack as he is.
Thus, after a while, you realize that Elana isn't really a character. She's something the author wanted to happen, despite the characterization she has. She's such a smart ass with quick retorts that she's gonna do them all the time, even when her friend is having a mental breakdown. She cares so much about life, she's gonna let entire universes get destroyed by her just so she can save Grandma from being ran over by a reindeer.
Doesn't that sound... kinda stupid? Because it is. How come she never questions this resolve she got... two day ago? How come she was open to Paolo's revelation that all the worlds are real, but she won't listen to the goddamned world police? Why am I introduced to a bunch of characters in a zombie apocalypse when I know they're all going to die because Elana is terrible at saving people? Why did the author think that this was good enough to subject the masses to?
Epilogue
Let me tell you what the author wanted, because I've traveled in fucking Twilight and brought back Edward frickin' Cullen to tell me what's going in that pit of hell a doctor would call a brain. He wanted a story about someone who saves fictional characters from their death and added crazy rules that made the character look like a self-aggrandizing psychopath instead of a kind-hearted yet naive person, and didn't even realize it.
But it seems the other reviewers didn't either, so what do I know! Ahaha see you next time on "End me now", where you'll always find your overly detailed negative reviews! *exits out of 14th floor window*
The heroine! Oh god, the heroine. I wanted her to fucking die. I hate her. She's one of the most insufferable, selfish, insensitive and retarded character in all of literature.
ACTUAL OPENING LINE OF THE BOOK:
"I was struck by the sudden idea of how absurd it would be if my life were a story somewhere and this is where it began."
She is so obnoxious. And supposed to be an adult, too! *laughs in asshole* Here is a collection of quotes I have so lovingly gathered for your enjoyment:
"Maybe I'll get bit by a magic spider!"
"I took a sip of my whiskey. This is terrible whiskey. [Fucking tense swaps in a published work-] Maybe it was magic whiskey, and I'd get alcohol related super powers!"
"To me, interrupting a conversation is worse than drinking orange juice immediately after brushing my teeth."
"I'd run over those wrong way teeth, the evil teeth that usually accompany a sign saying something along the lines of 'Dear Lord, please do not drive this way! We could not possibly warn you any more clearly! I promise that you will regret this!' I'm paraphrasing."
"The thought of rich, Corinthian leather in [my car] made me giggle."
"You know, I always just assumed English muffins originated in England, but I realize now that I honestly don't know."
"I'm twenty-four"
"I let all these things happen at once, and I asked myself that simple question: How, book? Simple, but it also opened up other questions immediately. How do you exist? You are a book, and you are real and how are you even a thing? How did book? How... are... a book... even? Book. Boooooook!"
"She managed somehow, in spite of Quantum Theory and God, to work 25 hours a day, 8 days a week and 366 days a year."
" 'No you don't get to-'
'You're right, I just-'
'Where did you go?'
'I was in the-'
'In the-?'
'Yeah, and I-' "
" 'I can't believe you threw your phone!' I finally shouted before erupting in more laughter.
'Are you serious right now? We almost died!' [my friend] Olivia shouted. She seemed offended maybe. Annoyed at the very least.
'And you... and you cracked the screen!' My ribs already hurt before this but now they were pure agony.
'I kept you alive, idiot!' Olivia said shoving me.
'Oh God, I need air!' I gasped, rolling down my window.
'I mean it! Stop!' she pleaded.
I wanted to, but couldn't. 'There were just so many other things you could have thrown!' "
I'm gonna take for granted this showed you the insufferable side of our Marie Sue of the day- who's called Elana by the way- but don't worry I'm definitely going back to that anyway after we deal with the 'selfish' part.
CHAPTER 1: Or how to make your readers cheer for the villains.
If these quotes weren't enough to justify this chapter title for you, don't you worry, we'll go over how Elana doesn't give a fuck about murdering entire dimensions if it means she can feel good about herself!
So Elana's power is to make herself fictional and go into books, movies, series, etc. At first she thinks it's just a neat thing you know, she goes, avoids the main plot as best as she can and goes back. But then she meets a guy in a sitcom who's like her, and he tells her that the 'fictional' worlds are actually other dimensions- so everything is real.
-let's just ignore the fact that the author never clarifies if these worlds are created by the creators we know or simply exist and creators... somehow get linked to that reality in ways that suggest the absolute contrary (stories can be created over decades, building off even more stories and ideas, like a pyramid- how would that even work with this reality the author is presenting us with?) which means creativity isn't a thing?
Anyway that prompts her to... go and save every rando who ever died.
Does n-not c-c-comppu-tee
Thus she actively alters reality in ways that she cannot predict nor understand and she doesn't give a fuck. Let me repeat that- by going off and saving characters who should've died, she is actively altering reality in ways that are impossible for her or anyone to predict, and she keeps going.
Not even that. When her bullshit changes enough stories and actually tears space and dimensions apart, we learn later, the Book police shows up and tells her to stop or else they'll kill her friends. She doesn't, so they go after her friends. Elana manages to save them in extremis, and they get out with their lives. Immediately both her friends tell her to stop. They even vote on it, are begging Elana for their own lives- for fuck's sake, Olivia's roommate was actually a spy. They are just as involved, if not more so- they did nothing and unlike Elana, the Book police has permission to kill them.
And Elana is "Nope, sorry can't do."
***THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE CHARACTER YOU SIDE WITH***
bc that clerk with 12 sec of screentime is more important than the woman who gave me a job and was my friend even when she thought I was an insane bum and my best friend who stuck with me through all this bullshit and got hurt saving my life am I rite
And this is why, dear readers, that you side with the villains in this godawful piss of writing- oh look thesis statement is back because while the fuckers are actively going after innocents, they're actually better than Elana in every way. 1) They know what in the fuck they're doing, unlike her manic ass, 2) they're actually thinking of the world and trying to stop a dangerous terrorist from ending reality as we know it and 3) they're not even trying to kill Elana, in fact they warn her several times and gave her chances to redeem herself before actually going after her friends. In fact, even at the end of the book after she killed several members of the Book police, their chief says there's still a chance she'll be recruited in their ranks after her trial.
Chapter 2: Or how Elana is just great, guys, and smart and funny and the most selfless psychopath of all.
We've already talked about her, but let's get even more in depth about this strange thing that calls itself 'the protagonist'. A thing that I feel is... wrong.
The first time we see her she's at a party and bored. A guy comes talk to her and she doesn't even have the decency to engage with him. She then takes a book and vanishes. In that book she meets this random guy she hangs out with for a while. It was pretty boring, I don't remember anything about their interaction except that he gave her a book and she took it back with her irl and is shocked by that.
This is where your start wondering, what is this woman? She can go into fictional worlds, yet never thought of bringing back something with her? Her, the woman who doesn't give one shit about millions upon millions of people dying because she can save one person? It's almost... out of character for her.
Then you ask another question: just who the fuck is she? What is her childhood? Where are her parents, how did she get her powers, how did her first travel happen, what happened afterwards? Never answered, people. Her parents are never mentioned. The only mentions of her powers' origin is that "[she] got them a few years ago." Now, what does that mean? Is it inherited? Did she steal it? Does she even know how it happened? Did she just realize she had it now when opening a book?
I don't think even the author knows. Or else he would've fucking put it in the book, hack as he is.
Thus, after a while, you realize that Elana isn't really a character. She's something the author wanted to happen, despite the characterization she has. She's such a smart ass with quick retorts that she's gonna do them all the time, even when her friend is having a mental breakdown. She cares so much about life, she's gonna let entire universes get destroyed by her just so she can save Grandma from being ran over by a reindeer.
Doesn't that sound... kinda stupid? Because it is. How come she never questions this resolve she got... two day ago? How come she was open to Paolo's revelation that all the worlds are real, but she won't listen to the goddamned world police? Why am I introduced to a bunch of characters in a zombie apocalypse when I know they're all going to die because Elana is terrible at saving people? Why did the author think that this was good enough to subject the masses to?
Epilogue
Let me tell you what the author wanted, because I've traveled in fucking Twilight and brought back Edward frickin' Cullen to tell me what's going in that pit of hell a doctor would call a brain. He wanted a story about someone who saves fictional characters from their death and added crazy rules that made the character look like a self-aggrandizing psychopath instead of a kind-hearted yet naive person, and didn't even realize it.
But it seems the other reviewers didn't either, so what do I know! Ahaha see you next time on "End me now", where you'll always find your overly detailed negative reviews! *exits out of 14th floor window*
October 12, 2017
The main character of the book is Elana Black. Elana has the ability to fall into a story - literally. Whether book or TV she can feel the pull and enter a story. Now she has told no one of this ability and has been a passive participant until she comes to the realization that the characters are people with lives and she could save some of those people. But there are those (very powerful) who do not want the stories to change and the adventure starts. Racing between stories and her real life Elana must figure out what is going on and why the red suits are after her. There is a subplot of a mystery of a missing childhood friend and how this friend, who everything didn't believe, might know exactly what is happening. This book will definitely amuse everyone from teens to grandparents.
May 6, 2017
Thank you to Danny Bell and Xpresso Book Tours for this free readers edition. In exchange I am providing an honest review.
The premise of this book intrigued me. A person can become fiction and enter into books and TV shows. As a voracious reader this idea is fantastic to me! So I had to give this title a try.
Elana Black spends her days working at a bookstore and reading books in her spare time. She also, a couple of years ago, discovered she can somehow enter into books that she's reading. She doesn't really understand it but she really likes it. But her entry and return from Aldous Huxley's Crome Yellow was different. Something changed and she isn't sure what to do about it, if anything. Deciding to shrug it off, Elana goes about her days until someone appears at the bookstore asking for a copy of Crome Yellow. Huh, that seems weird. And that moment sets off a series of events that end with leading Elana to discovering the powers behind her ability to enter into fictional stories and trying to preserve her life along with others.
There is A LOT of promise and potential in this story. Maybe too much for book one. Bell, in an effort (I think) to make Elana seem her age employed a very cheeky attitude - but it ended up getting on my nerves. I found her to be more annoying than the heroine she is supposed to be. And Bell's unpacking of this ability Elana and others have is lacking in development and foundation. I was very confused by what the Gardeners, etc were. There wasn't ever an explanation that brought clarity to the reader - or actually to Elana. It felt like that part of the storyline was many ideas that Bell had, he couldn't pick one or two to focus in on and so he just stitched them all together. For me that made the story and what was happening very disjointed. There were a lot of parts that I would have to re-read and I still couldn't quite follow. The sudden "stardom" of Elana among the people who can do what she does was predictable but not done well. Overall, because of the disjointed sections of the book and Elana's character, I didn't really like the book - which was disappointing because as I said - this is a unique storyline and that has so much promise and potential. I feel like if Bell had slowed the story down a bit and taken more time to provide a better background/explanation on this weird group of people that I might have taken more to the story and maybe even Elana, although the flippant attitude he gave her didn't really work (for me). Bell gets stars for effort and the unique storyline but his execution needs work.
April 10, 2017
From the moment I read the description, I knew I had to read it. I don't know a single reader who has never wished something ended other than the way it did and wanted to be the one to right it. And I'm so glad I did! Fast paced, clever, funny, exciting, I read it in I two days and am already looking forward to the rest of the series. Elena is a character I can identify with and root for, and I look forward to following the rest of her adventures.
June 15, 2017
What a fantastic book!! I'm so happy to have won this wonderful book on goodreads giveaway. I didn't want the story to end. :( I wish I had Elana's power....then again don't we all. It's a must read and I highly recommend this book to all who need an adventure.
June 29, 2017
I have to admit that I'm not a huge fiction reader as of late. While I gobbled down fiction like candy in middle school, having to endlessly cram down novels during high school and college English and literature classes turned me off to it for a good while now. When I picked this book up, I wasn't sure I was going to be able to really get into it. However, this book is taking me back to those days in 7th grade when I couldn't wait to hit up the school library once a week for a new fantasy fiction treasure.
This page is covered with synopses so I won't retread the story's subject another time. I'll just discuss my experience reading it.
The book is written in first person from the viewpoint of the title character in a very casual, conversational tone. I admit that I was skeptical about this style at first. It would have been easy for this writing style to get too cloying and obnoxious. However, I think the author does a good job of balancing the title character's humorous, neurotic personality with the story's flow. As the reader, you get to know Elana very well without affecting the pacing. It works well for this particular story.
Speaking of the story's flow, the pacing is fairly quick. No part of this book could be described as "dragging." There are no chapters dedicated entirely to describing food. Honestly, I think the author could have slowed things down a bit in a couple of spots. This book is anything but boring, mostly for the better.
As I brought up in the beginning, this book reminds me of something I'd pick up from the library in middle school for fun. The language and subject matter should be appropriate and engaging for pre-teen and up (or, at least, my pre-teen nerdy self).
The ending came on quickly but I really enjoyed the twist at the end. I found it surprising. It's leaving me really looking forward to the rest of the series.
Overall, I'd recommend this book to anyone looking for an exciting, breezy read through a fantasy world where fiction is more than entertainment.
Disclosure: I was gifted this book by the author, who I know personally.
This page is covered with synopses so I won't retread the story's subject another time. I'll just discuss my experience reading it.
The book is written in first person from the viewpoint of the title character in a very casual, conversational tone. I admit that I was skeptical about this style at first. It would have been easy for this writing style to get too cloying and obnoxious. However, I think the author does a good job of balancing the title character's humorous, neurotic personality with the story's flow. As the reader, you get to know Elana very well without affecting the pacing. It works well for this particular story.
Speaking of the story's flow, the pacing is fairly quick. No part of this book could be described as "dragging." There are no chapters dedicated entirely to describing food. Honestly, I think the author could have slowed things down a bit in a couple of spots. This book is anything but boring, mostly for the better.
As I brought up in the beginning, this book reminds me of something I'd pick up from the library in middle school for fun. The language and subject matter should be appropriate and engaging for pre-teen and up (or, at least, my pre-teen nerdy self).
The ending came on quickly but I really enjoyed the twist at the end. I found it surprising. It's leaving me really looking forward to the rest of the series.
Overall, I'd recommend this book to anyone looking for an exciting, breezy read through a fantasy world where fiction is more than entertainment.
Disclosure: I was gifted this book by the author, who I know personally.
December 29, 2018
Awkward and introverted Elana Black is a young woman with the unique ability of being able to enter the fictional world. She can literally walk the moor in Wuthering Heights or trade prat falls in an 80's sitcom. Surrounded by fiction at the bookstore she works at, it is the perfect escape for this insecure yet intelligent twenty-something. Little does she know that these fictional worlds have a larger impact on the universe so when she decides to save the characters who die in the stories, it unleashes greater forces who will do anything to stop her.
This book is quite the wild ride. Written in the first person, we are carried along in a flood of emotions as Elana tries to navigate the real and the fictional world. Her complete lack of direction in her life is the perfect metaphor for what twenty-somethings have to deal with today. Elana had a nice character arc as we learn with her as she bungles into places where she ought not to.
However, the world building was a bit overwhelming and sometimes didn't make sense. It was if the author was trying to do too much. Also, almost every time Elana got into a tight spot someone else saved her or the bad guy changed their mind. (Even Elena wondered about that, but she didn't really dig into why until much much later.) I think it would have made her character stronger and made more sense to address why she was getting off the hook sooner.
Despite these minor foibles, the book is fast-paced and a lot of fun, and I have already bought the second book in the series.
This book is quite the wild ride. Written in the first person, we are carried along in a flood of emotions as Elana tries to navigate the real and the fictional world. Her complete lack of direction in her life is the perfect metaphor for what twenty-somethings have to deal with today. Elana had a nice character arc as we learn with her as she bungles into places where she ought not to.
However, the world building was a bit overwhelming and sometimes didn't make sense. It was if the author was trying to do too much. Also, almost every time Elana got into a tight spot someone else saved her or the bad guy changed their mind. (Even Elena wondered about that, but she didn't really dig into why until much much later.) I think it would have made her character stronger and made more sense to address why she was getting off the hook sooner.
Despite these minor foibles, the book is fast-paced and a lot of fun, and I have already bought the second book in the series.
June 29, 2017
Elana Black is someone who can literally escape into a good book. At the beginning, she mostly uses it so she can get out of awkward parties (from her perspective, all parties are awkward), but she eventually learns that she's not really making herself fictional- all stories are actually glimpses into other realities. Realizing this, she sets out to do what any moral person with the ability would do- saving people who die just to advance the plot. She is then attacked by an organization of others with her powers who want to preserve those realities as they exist in the books, and has to figure out how her powers work while being attacked by almost every other person who has them. It's a great read, and I can't wait until the next book comes out so that we can learn more about Elana and where she comes from.
September 21, 2018
Elana is not your usual hero. Uncomfortable in social settings she is much happier reading a book than making conversation. She has a small group of friends and works in a friend's bookshop. Her superpower is being able to jump inside the story she reads or even watches on television. What bookworm wouldn't want that ability?
When Elana starts to help people in the stories rather than simply observe things become more complicated. Shadowy characters are determined to stop her. Others appear to want to help her. Ignoring the warnings Elana puts herself and her friends in danger.
Towards the end of the book, Elana learns of the Prophecy. She's unsure what it means but it seems along with two of her friends she has a central role to play.
Imaginative and exciting read.
When Elana starts to help people in the stories rather than simply observe things become more complicated. Shadowy characters are determined to stop her. Others appear to want to help her. Ignoring the warnings Elana puts herself and her friends in danger.
Towards the end of the book, Elana learns of the Prophecy. She's unsure what it means but it seems along with two of her friends she has a central role to play.
Imaginative and exciting read.
June 25, 2018
Daaaang.
Okay. Let's start with the premise. All stories are real. Books, television, movies, comics, all exist as different worlds, and Elana can enter them at will. I can't believe anyone doesn't think that's unbelievably cool.
And Elana! Oh, honey. I feel Elana on a molecular level. She's an anxiety-ridden, food-loving book nerd, and I love her to death. The story is in first-person from Elana's point of view, and her voice is consistently smart, snarky, occasionally rambling. She's someone I would definitely hang out with.
Ultimate rating: 4.5 stars. I know it's the first in a series, but I felt like there were just a few too many questions left unanswered at the end, even though the main problem receives closure.
Okay. Let's start with the premise. All stories are real. Books, television, movies, comics, all exist as different worlds, and Elana can enter them at will. I can't believe anyone doesn't think that's unbelievably cool.
And Elana! Oh, honey. I feel Elana on a molecular level. She's an anxiety-ridden, food-loving book nerd, and I love her to death. The story is in first-person from Elana's point of view, and her voice is consistently smart, snarky, occasionally rambling. She's someone I would definitely hang out with.
Ultimate rating: 4.5 stars. I know it's the first in a series, but I felt like there were just a few too many questions left unanswered at the end, even though the main problem receives closure.
December 21, 2019
The premise of being able to jump into a book (or show) and change the outcome is alluring to any avid reader - oh how many times I've wanted to save an owl or Sean Bean (he deserves a good ending) I knew I had to read this book.
I adore the storyline - a bit up in the air over the MC - I think she rubbed me the wrong way a bit, but that is realistic. We don't all like everyone!
I love the ideas that went into this fantasy book so much that I'll follow the rest of the series! 4/5 stars
I adore the storyline - a bit up in the air over the MC - I think she rubbed me the wrong way a bit, but that is realistic. We don't all like everyone!
I love the ideas that went into this fantasy book so much that I'll follow the rest of the series! 4/5 stars
April 22, 2017
No spoilers:
I really enjoyed this book!! The characters were all fully realized and well rounded, Elana Black is a fun, flawed and exciting new hero in a brilliant first book!! It's got a great plot that moves with characters that engage the reader, and that I want to spend more time with. It transported me in the way that really great books tend to do, so that time starts to lose meeting, and you get lost in the story. The author has a really great voice, and it's hard to believe he hasn't been writing novels for years. It was a page turner, I couldn't put it down, and I honestly can't wait to read the next books in the series!!! Get to work, Danny!! Write!!! Faster!!!!
I really enjoyed this book!! The characters were all fully realized and well rounded, Elana Black is a fun, flawed and exciting new hero in a brilliant first book!! It's got a great plot that moves with characters that engage the reader, and that I want to spend more time with. It transported me in the way that really great books tend to do, so that time starts to lose meeting, and you get lost in the story. The author has a really great voice, and it's hard to believe he hasn't been writing novels for years. It was a page turner, I couldn't put it down, and I honestly can't wait to read the next books in the series!!! Get to work, Danny!! Write!!! Faster!!!!
March 29, 2017
A ton of fun in a well-written and hilarious novel! Elana is the girl I always wanted to be, and I identify with her in so many ways that it made this novel hard to put down. Great book, can't wait for the next one!
August 18, 2017
What a brilliant book. Loved every minute of it. The story, the adventure, the heroine. I was totally drawn in to Elana's world....pure escapism. Thoroughly recommended. The author has the most wonderful imagination, can't wait for #2
I interviewed Danny Bell for Book Talk Radio Club, you can listen to his interview here. https://www.booktalkradio.info/danny-...
I interviewed Danny Bell for Book Talk Radio Club, you can listen to his interview here. https://www.booktalkradio.info/danny-...
June 16, 2017
I love the synopsis of this book and was delighted to pick up a copy. It starteed brilliantly and pulled me in almost instantly. The story starts with Elana trying to avoid socialising by using her talent to jump into a fictional world. It's only when she wakes up in the real world that she realises that this time was different. The book was brilliant and I loved the whole idea. I loved the way the story was told and how it seemed to join up with various clues sprinkled in the pages. It was amazing and an excellent start to what looks to be a brilliant series. I will be watching this author for more books! Highly recommended!
January 1, 2018
Received as a review copy. Empty Threat is a Young Adult novel with a Paranormal/Fantasy background, contemporary Urban Fantasy. Set in our world, Elena Black is able to travel into fiction. This ability is not exclusive to her and the conflict revolves around her difficulties with dealing with others who have these paranormal/supernatural powers.
The most noteworthy aspect of this novel is the dialog and mood throughout. The millennial characters all speak as real people, self-deprecating remarks, and non-obscure pop culture references. The fictional worlds that are mentioned are canonical English literature when it isn’t the characters make note of how no one ever thinks of that book. I appreciated the relatability of the protagonist, even her mistakes are understandable to the reader. The spine of the story involves the concept of reality and morality. The use of magic/powers is the medium for discussing this. Are the fictional people in those stories worth fighting for? Worth saving? Worth loving? If it’s all fiction then none of these reactions should matter, but as the one with agency it does matter.
I was engaged throughout the story. I did dislike the vagueness of how the physics of this universe work, magic/powers and brushing on extraplanar existence. More clarity of the limitations of the powers or further into the extreme expenditure of them would be able to show the range of how this world differs from our own while not giving away any of the finer details meant for future books.
I fully enjoyed reading Empty Threat. I would suggest this for others who enjoy YA novels or contemporary Urban Fantasy. The morality theme in regards to the fictional worlds would appeal to those interested in Many Worlds theory or on moral agency. Overall, very much looking forward to the next book.
The most noteworthy aspect of this novel is the dialog and mood throughout. The millennial characters all speak as real people, self-deprecating remarks, and non-obscure pop culture references. The fictional worlds that are mentioned are canonical English literature when it isn’t the characters make note of how no one ever thinks of that book. I appreciated the relatability of the protagonist, even her mistakes are understandable to the reader. The spine of the story involves the concept of reality and morality. The use of magic/powers is the medium for discussing this. Are the fictional people in those stories worth fighting for? Worth saving? Worth loving? If it’s all fiction then none of these reactions should matter, but as the one with agency it does matter.
I was engaged throughout the story. I did dislike the vagueness of how the physics of this universe work, magic/powers and brushing on extraplanar existence. More clarity of the limitations of the powers or further into the extreme expenditure of them would be able to show the range of how this world differs from our own while not giving away any of the finer details meant for future books.
I fully enjoyed reading Empty Threat. I would suggest this for others who enjoy YA novels or contemporary Urban Fantasy. The morality theme in regards to the fictional worlds would appeal to those interested in Many Worlds theory or on moral agency. Overall, very much looking forward to the next book.
July 4, 2021
The premise for this book is so good. SO good. That is what makes reading it all the more disappointing. The story suffers from the same problem that we typically see in movies based on our favorite stories... there is just too much happening too fast with little care taken to explain what the story is about. The plot is pushed aside and hurried forward at light speed so we can all get to the next action scene. The problem here is this isn't a movie and you can't distract the reader with cool effects, hot bodies & CGI. This world is built completely in the imagination as a team effort between the author and reader. The beginning was great and fully fleshed out. It was slow but so what--- it made sense. Our leading lady had no clue what was happening but it didn't matter because it was all new & exciting. Then the drama builds & we are introduced to **some guy who wants to (kill?) her and her friends---some guy hiding out from the same murderous dude in a tv show---a girl locked up in an institution >who we never actually met< & also some guy who vaguely pops in to show off his white clothes & leave all his weapons & books around conveniently. Oh, & don't forget the random helpful but ominous deity. BTW--- none of these people are clarified or given meaning- they are more so used as plot devices to push the story forward & lead to more action scenes & heroic monologues. Nothing is done top make you care one way or the other of they live or die. Don't get me started on the band of ruffians she tracks down because "they are just like her" just so guess what..... action scene & they are dead---& she learned NOTHING about why she is really being hunted or where the power comes from. Anyway---5 stars for the idea- 0 for the execution.
September 15, 2017
Great start to a series. It's a fast paced story that pulled me in immediately and held my attention from start to finish. We all "get lost" in our books at times. How many times have you seen the question posed "If you could be transported into any book which one would you choose". This is a creative story of "what if" you really had the ability "jump" into the books you are reading. It's an interesting, unusual, humorous and very entertaining story with a unique concept and storyline. I was expecting the books part……but adding in the T.V series was an interesting twist. While it doesn't end in a cliffhanger it does leave the door wide open for all kinds of fun adventures in the future.
My first impression was it's kind of like Jumper but instead of places it's into books and T.V. series.
Elana is an interesting and fun character. She has a personality that immediately likable. She's just a normal girl struggling through life who happens to have this unexplained but awesome ability. She's a Traveler, but she doesn't know what all she can do…. which has some unexpected consequences. Her interactions with the "fictional" characters she encounters and who's fate has already been written in these "fictional" worlds is bound to wreak havoc. There are those, The Gardener's that will stop at nothing to put an end to her Traveling. Not going to say anymore so I won't spoil the story for anyone.
Whitten A. Frank did a really good job with the narration. She has a pleasant voice that is easy to listen to for long periods of time. Clearly spoken with a nice even pace. Good character voices. She gave the characters a personality and brought the story to life. There are also some unexpected and very entertaining audio enhancements throughout the story. Very enjoyable.
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and voluntarily provided this review.
My first impression was it's kind of like Jumper but instead of places it's into books and T.V. series.
Elana is an interesting and fun character. She has a personality that immediately likable. She's just a normal girl struggling through life who happens to have this unexplained but awesome ability. She's a Traveler, but she doesn't know what all she can do…. which has some unexpected consequences. Her interactions with the "fictional" characters she encounters and who's fate has already been written in these "fictional" worlds is bound to wreak havoc. There are those, The Gardener's that will stop at nothing to put an end to her Traveling. Not going to say anymore so I won't spoil the story for anyone.
Whitten A. Frank did a really good job with the narration. She has a pleasant voice that is easy to listen to for long periods of time. Clearly spoken with a nice even pace. Good character voices. She gave the characters a personality and brought the story to life. There are also some unexpected and very entertaining audio enhancements throughout the story. Very enjoyable.
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and voluntarily provided this review.
December 27, 2018
In Empty Threat by Danny Bell the reader is taken on a journey through a universe of different worlds and multiverses. When socially awkward, admitted book-nerd, Elana Black discovers she has the power to enter the world of the books she reads, she has no idea what this power will ultimately mean for her and her closest of friends. It is only when she connects this power to a childhood friend who claimed the same powers, as a child, and was ultimately certified as insane, does she realise that she may, in fact, not be alone in the world with this power.
The author takes us on a voyage of discovery as Elana begins to understand the breadth and depth of her magical powers along with the responsibilities and dangers these powers possess. Once Elana realises that the worlds inhabited in stories may not be as fictional as she first thought, all bets are off and the dangers to Elana from those who don't want her to utilise those powers, increase a hundred-fold.
The author has done an excellent job with Elana's character development. She is portrayed as atypical of many of us who love to read and escape into fiction - socially awkward, incredibly shy and introverted, with just a few very close friends. We watch, as Elana emerges from her shell and begins to understand and adapt to the strange new worlds that have opened up for her. She may well still be full of doubts about herself, but every experience and trial she undertakes makes her stronger, more independent and surer of her place in the scheme of things.
The premise of the story is unique enough to make it stand out for that reason alone, but Elana's journey through the multiverses and of self-discovery lifts this story above your average fantasy adventure. A very good read and one I can highly recommend.
The author takes us on a voyage of discovery as Elana begins to understand the breadth and depth of her magical powers along with the responsibilities and dangers these powers possess. Once Elana realises that the worlds inhabited in stories may not be as fictional as she first thought, all bets are off and the dangers to Elana from those who don't want her to utilise those powers, increase a hundred-fold.
The author has done an excellent job with Elana's character development. She is portrayed as atypical of many of us who love to read and escape into fiction - socially awkward, incredibly shy and introverted, with just a few very close friends. We watch, as Elana emerges from her shell and begins to understand and adapt to the strange new worlds that have opened up for her. She may well still be full of doubts about herself, but every experience and trial she undertakes makes her stronger, more independent and surer of her place in the scheme of things.
The premise of the story is unique enough to make it stand out for that reason alone, but Elana's journey through the multiverses and of self-discovery lifts this story above your average fantasy adventure. A very good read and one I can highly recommend.
August 12, 2020
This is my review of the audio version as posted on Audible:
How many times have you dreamt of being able to jump into your favourite story and meet your favourite characters in person? Well, Elana Black can do just that - enter a story, become fictional, interact with everything within the tale... and make changes...
This is a really interesting concept which leads to an intriguing system of magic - so complex in fact that I still have a problem trying to grasp exactly how it works...:) Elana seems to have the same problem - she's a greenhorn who dives into the depths of an ocean without realizing the dangers and the consequences of her actions but too stubborn to listen to what others, more experienced swimmers, have to say on the matter... This is her strength and her weakness. As a character she is both likeable and irritating as hell - she has good intentions but like a child thinks she's always right, never even once stopping to think before she acts... Still, you like her anyway :)
The plot is really fast and twisted; you can expect the unexpected, predict the unpredictable and you will still find a few surprises on the way to the end:) It starts innocently and I'd even say quite slow, but when it gets on the right track it gains speed and never slows down... And there's a lot of that partly sarcastic, partly ironic kind of humor I love :)
Narration by Ms Frank is fantastic; Elana's personality really shines, but all the other characters are equally well done. Also, all the emotions ring true: irritation, anger, fear, tenderness, love - it's all there present in the voice of the narrator. A really great job, Ms Frank :)
DISCLAIMER: I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
How many times have you dreamt of being able to jump into your favourite story and meet your favourite characters in person? Well, Elana Black can do just that - enter a story, become fictional, interact with everything within the tale... and make changes...
This is a really interesting concept which leads to an intriguing system of magic - so complex in fact that I still have a problem trying to grasp exactly how it works...:) Elana seems to have the same problem - she's a greenhorn who dives into the depths of an ocean without realizing the dangers and the consequences of her actions but too stubborn to listen to what others, more experienced swimmers, have to say on the matter... This is her strength and her weakness. As a character she is both likeable and irritating as hell - she has good intentions but like a child thinks she's always right, never even once stopping to think before she acts... Still, you like her anyway :)
The plot is really fast and twisted; you can expect the unexpected, predict the unpredictable and you will still find a few surprises on the way to the end:) It starts innocently and I'd even say quite slow, but when it gets on the right track it gains speed and never slows down... And there's a lot of that partly sarcastic, partly ironic kind of humor I love :)
Narration by Ms Frank is fantastic; Elana's personality really shines, but all the other characters are equally well done. Also, all the emotions ring true: irritation, anger, fear, tenderness, love - it's all there present in the voice of the narrator. A really great job, Ms Frank :)
DISCLAIMER: I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
July 20, 2017
Independent Reviewer for Archaeolibrarian - I Dig Good Books!
This was a very interesting story idea. The leading character has the ability to become fictional and “dives” into stories. It’s kind of a fun idea if you think about it and is the first time I’ve ever come across a story like this.
If you’re an avid reader like myself, and always have a book going, reading a story about being able to become a fictional character, is exciting, fun, enticing, and a true pleasure. That’s definitely how I felt when I agreed to read this story. I was pleased with the overall story, was more than pleased with the idea, and was fairly pleased with the way the author told the story.
The author does a great job with details and descriptions. When the character “turns” fictional, it’s comical at times how she lands into the story. It’s heartwarming how she just wants to save the characters. The scenes were easy to picture and the details were easily understood.
My only complaint was it was a bit slow. At times, the details seemed to drag on a little bit, and it took a little while to grab my attention and pull me in. It didn’t hold my attention the entire time, it seemed to be hit or miss on that aspect. It was a lovely story overall, so that’s why I only knocked it down 1 star.
I suggest to give the book a chance and see if it’s your type of story. I think it’s a book everyone needs to give a chance because it’s such a fun idea!
* A copy of this book was provided to me with no requirements for a review. I voluntarily read this book, and my comments here are my honest opinion. *
This was a very interesting story idea. The leading character has the ability to become fictional and “dives” into stories. It’s kind of a fun idea if you think about it and is the first time I’ve ever come across a story like this.
If you’re an avid reader like myself, and always have a book going, reading a story about being able to become a fictional character, is exciting, fun, enticing, and a true pleasure. That’s definitely how I felt when I agreed to read this story. I was pleased with the overall story, was more than pleased with the idea, and was fairly pleased with the way the author told the story.
The author does a great job with details and descriptions. When the character “turns” fictional, it’s comical at times how she lands into the story. It’s heartwarming how she just wants to save the characters. The scenes were easy to picture and the details were easily understood.
My only complaint was it was a bit slow. At times, the details seemed to drag on a little bit, and it took a little while to grab my attention and pull me in. It didn’t hold my attention the entire time, it seemed to be hit or miss on that aspect. It was a lovely story overall, so that’s why I only knocked it down 1 star.
I suggest to give the book a chance and see if it’s your type of story. I think it’s a book everyone needs to give a chance because it’s such a fun idea!
* A copy of this book was provided to me with no requirements for a review. I voluntarily read this book, and my comments here are my honest opinion. *
April 25, 2018
•audiobook•
“Empty Threat is a Full Threat of Unique! "
What was one of the most memorable moments of Empty Threat?
Following Elana was enjoyable and memorable. It was easy to get lost in this book! (And some places - it probably wasn't intended as I felt I missed something.)
Have you listened to any of Whitton A. Frank’s other performances before? How does this one compare?
This is Whitton's only book thus far and she was remarkable.
Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?
It was a bit heartbreaking when she lost •delete spoiler name here• but I don't think the book was written to cause tears of joy or sorrow. The characters were vibrant, yet still lacking a bit of depth.
Any additional comments?
I had high hopes for this book. The author and narrator aimed to please and hit the mark. The characters were full of personality and made the story come to life. It fell slightly short of evoking deep emotions or response, possibly because I was aware I was 'on the outside peeking in'. I was carried along for the ride, yet not taken for the ride.
I'm still not sure if I fully understand the Traveler and the Gardener (??) other than knowing Elana is a Traveler who ticked off the other group. With this being an entire new idea of power, (not the run of the mill, overused powers known), more information could have been the clincher.
I am looking forward to this series and watching/listening/reading more from this duo.
It is totally credit worthy and pleasing!
"I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review."
“Empty Threat is a Full Threat of Unique! "
What was one of the most memorable moments of Empty Threat?
Following Elana was enjoyable and memorable. It was easy to get lost in this book! (And some places - it probably wasn't intended as I felt I missed something.)
Have you listened to any of Whitton A. Frank’s other performances before? How does this one compare?
This is Whitton's only book thus far and she was remarkable.
Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?
It was a bit heartbreaking when she lost •delete spoiler name here• but I don't think the book was written to cause tears of joy or sorrow. The characters were vibrant, yet still lacking a bit of depth.
Any additional comments?
I had high hopes for this book. The author and narrator aimed to please and hit the mark. The characters were full of personality and made the story come to life. It fell slightly short of evoking deep emotions or response, possibly because I was aware I was 'on the outside peeking in'. I was carried along for the ride, yet not taken for the ride.
I'm still not sure if I fully understand the Traveler and the Gardener (??) other than knowing Elana is a Traveler who ticked off the other group. With this being an entire new idea of power, (not the run of the mill, overused powers known), more information could have been the clincher.
I am looking forward to this series and watching/listening/reading more from this duo.
It is totally credit worthy and pleasing!
"I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review."
April 25, 2018
•audiobook•
Empty Threat is a Full Threat of Unique! "
What was one of the most memorable moments of Empty Threat?
Following Elana was enjoyable and memorable. It was easy to get lost in this book! (And some places - it probably wasn't intended as I felt I missed something.)
Have you listened to any of Whitton A. Frank’s other performances before? How does this one compare?
This is Whitton's only book thus far and she was remarkable.
Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?
It was a bit heartbreaking when she lost •delete spoiler name here• but I don't think the book was written to cause tears of joy or sorrow. The characters were vibrant, yet still lacking a bit of depth.
Any additional comments?
I had high hopes for this book. The author and narrator aimed to please and hit the mark. The characters were full of personality and made the story come to life. It fell slightly short of evoking deep emotions or response, possibly because I was aware I was 'on the outside peeking in'. I was carried along for the ride, yet not taken for the ride.
I'm still not sure if I fully understand the Traveler and the Gardener (??) other than knowing Elana is a Traveler who ticked off the other group. With this being an entire new idea of power, (not the run of the mill, overused powers known), more information could have been the clincher.
I am looking forward to this series and watching/listening/reading more from this duo.
It is totally credit worthy and pleasing.
"I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review."
Empty Threat is a Full Threat of Unique! "
What was one of the most memorable moments of Empty Threat?
Following Elana was enjoyable and memorable. It was easy to get lost in this book! (And some places - it probably wasn't intended as I felt I missed something.)
Have you listened to any of Whitton A. Frank’s other performances before? How does this one compare?
This is Whitton's only book thus far and she was remarkable.
Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?
It was a bit heartbreaking when she lost •delete spoiler name here• but I don't think the book was written to cause tears of joy or sorrow. The characters were vibrant, yet still lacking a bit of depth.
Any additional comments?
I had high hopes for this book. The author and narrator aimed to please and hit the mark. The characters were full of personality and made the story come to life. It fell slightly short of evoking deep emotions or response, possibly because I was aware I was 'on the outside peeking in'. I was carried along for the ride, yet not taken for the ride.
I'm still not sure if I fully understand the Traveler and the Gardener (??) other than knowing Elana is a Traveler who ticked off the other group. With this being an entire new idea of power, (not the run of the mill, overused powers known), more information could have been the clincher.
I am looking forward to this series and watching/listening/reading more from this duo.
It is totally credit worthy and pleasing.
"I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review."
September 18, 2018
Everyone has a secret power. I wonder what yours is? Elana Black dwells on this conundrum as she tries to figure out the best way to leave her friends party. You see, Elana has a secret power, but it is a power so fantastical that if she told anyone, they would never believe her.
Elana can fall into fiction. Literally.
One minute she is reading or watching the television, the next moment she is physically in the story. Not bad as secret powers go.
Elana has travelled extensively without ever needing a passport. However, with such a power comes great responsibility. Elana can, if she so wills it, change the plot, she can save peoples lives, make them better. But unbeknown to Elana, she is not the only one with such a power, and there are people out there, who are desperate to stop her.
When I read the blurb, I knew I would fall in love with this story. Empty Threat (The Black Pages #1) by Danny Bell was everything I hoped it would be, and then some! As I read it, I could not help but compare it to The Jumper series by Steven Gould, only in Empty Threat, Elana can teleport into fiction.
I adored the characterisation of Elana, she is a wonderful heroine, who hopes to use her powers to bring about good. She did not come across as the average superhero, but I think that is what made her all the more appealing. She is ordinary.
A wonderful concept. With a wonderful cast of characters. Fabulous.
Elana can fall into fiction. Literally.
One minute she is reading or watching the television, the next moment she is physically in the story. Not bad as secret powers go.
Elana has travelled extensively without ever needing a passport. However, with such a power comes great responsibility. Elana can, if she so wills it, change the plot, she can save peoples lives, make them better. But unbeknown to Elana, she is not the only one with such a power, and there are people out there, who are desperate to stop her.
When I read the blurb, I knew I would fall in love with this story. Empty Threat (The Black Pages #1) by Danny Bell was everything I hoped it would be, and then some! As I read it, I could not help but compare it to The Jumper series by Steven Gould, only in Empty Threat, Elana can teleport into fiction.
I adored the characterisation of Elana, she is a wonderful heroine, who hopes to use her powers to bring about good. She did not come across as the average superhero, but I think that is what made her all the more appealing. She is ordinary.
A wonderful concept. With a wonderful cast of characters. Fabulous.
July 9, 2019
This book has a really fun premise and describes a compelling universe. Unfortunately, reading it for me had the feel of re-reading the first Harry Potter book.
Now, I loved Harry Potter as a kid. Compelling universe, well paced story sucking you in—hooked.
But re-reading the first book as an adult,the writing feels childish—aimed at an audience that is not me. The characters I’m supposed to side with are immature and sometimes irritating in their self centeredness and anxieties. The universe I once loved seem full of holes, unanswered questions.
And here’s the thing—I don’t think most of the things that bother me in the first Harry Potter would bother the target audience of eleven year olds. Similarly, I don’t think being inside the head of an immature, socially anxious 24-year-old (Empty Threat’s heroine, Elana Black) would bother the young adult readers this book is aimed at. I also think most people wouldn’t cringe constantly at the occasional awkward phrasing or missing comma the way my SAT-tutor-ass does.
But I am who I am, so I couldn’t love this book the way I wanted to. It’s just not for me. 🤷♀️
Now, I loved Harry Potter as a kid. Compelling universe, well paced story sucking you in—hooked.
But re-reading the first book as an adult,the writing feels childish—aimed at an audience that is not me. The characters I’m supposed to side with are immature and sometimes irritating in their self centeredness and anxieties. The universe I once loved seem full of holes, unanswered questions.
And here’s the thing—I don’t think most of the things that bother me in the first Harry Potter would bother the target audience of eleven year olds. Similarly, I don’t think being inside the head of an immature, socially anxious 24-year-old (Empty Threat’s heroine, Elana Black) would bother the young adult readers this book is aimed at. I also think most people wouldn’t cringe constantly at the occasional awkward phrasing or missing comma the way my SAT-tutor-ass does.
But I am who I am, so I couldn’t love this book the way I wanted to. It’s just not for me. 🤷♀️
December 5, 2020
Elena Black has always escaped into a good book. Only her escape isn't like yours and mine. No, she takes the meaning to a whole new level, delving into the very world the creations are born from. But when she decides that things within those worlds need to change, that the stories she enters and the people within are more than just fiction, she starts something that could jeopardise her very life. Intent of saving others, she puts herself in the crosshairs, especially since not everyone wants her meddling in the way things were meant to be, and there are those who will stop at nothing to prevent her interference.
The first thing to grip me about Danny Bell's Empty Threat was the sheer energy of the book. The first person writing style really jumps from the page and grabs hold of you. Imaginative, funny, emotional, and clever, I really enjoyed watching this story come to life. I really couldn't help but become invested in Elena, and her character is so vibrant and relatable. She's not a cookie cutter protagonist by any means, socially awkward, yet confident in her element. This book is perfectly executed and fully satisfying. I can't wait to pick up the next one.
The first thing to grip me about Danny Bell's Empty Threat was the sheer energy of the book. The first person writing style really jumps from the page and grabs hold of you. Imaginative, funny, emotional, and clever, I really enjoyed watching this story come to life. I really couldn't help but become invested in Elena, and her character is so vibrant and relatable. She's not a cookie cutter protagonist by any means, socially awkward, yet confident in her element. This book is perfectly executed and fully satisfying. I can't wait to pick up the next one.
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