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The Femdom Bride
Brad was in for a surprise after his wedding day. Ava, the sweet girl he dated, changed and became a domineering wife that took their relationship to uncharted territory. It started slow and became more intense as Ava brought her girlfriend that Brad served at his wife's instructions and then it got even worse.
This erotic novella is packed with unimaginable sexual encounters and sex games. Ava will capture your attention from the first page to the last. She is unpredictable and very creative at her sex acts with Brad, sometimes with the company of her girlfriend and other times with other men.
This erotic novella is packed with unimaginable sexual encounters and sex games. Ava will capture your attention from the first page to the last. She is unpredictable and very creative at her sex acts with Brad, sometimes with the company of her girlfriend and other times with other men.
107 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 15, 2017
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March 10, 2021
As Ava and Brad are to be married, Brad reflects on Ava’s beauty while Ava, having been a good girl throughout their courtship, plans to finally begin Brad’s training on their honeymoon. Ava checks her bag, which contains leather handcuffs, a leather flogger whip, a few dildos, and a chastity device.
Brad is a mediocre attorney with mediocre looks, but he is heir to his deceased parents’ considerable wealth. Ava is out of his league and their courtship begins when Brad’s friend, Steve, sets up a double-date with his girlfriend Stephanie and Ava. Ava guides the subsequent courtship. The closest they have ever gotten to sex was Ava giving him handjobs and making Brad beg for permission to come.
On their honeymoon, Ava begins his training. She uses Brad’s desires for her as a reward, punishing him by whipping him when he disobeys the rules. There is one primary rule: Obey your wife. When he does something that pleases her, he receives pleasure. When he is disobedient, pain. Apologies and thanks are delivered while down on all fours, kissing her feet.
They arrive home after their honeymoon and Ava wants Brad home at 6 PM precisely. His training continues with pain when he disobeys, pleasure when he is obedient. Ava introduces Stephanie back into the picture, notifying Brad that he is not well-endowed and demonstrating to Stephanie how she controls Brad.
Ava uses Stephanie to threaten Brad and tie him to her more closely.
This book is either written by someone who does not write or speak English well or is so poorly copy-edited that it becomes difficult to read. The story of Brad’s descent is a good one but suffers continually from the prose.
Brad is a mediocre attorney with mediocre looks, but he is heir to his deceased parents’ considerable wealth. Ava is out of his league and their courtship begins when Brad’s friend, Steve, sets up a double-date with his girlfriend Stephanie and Ava. Ava guides the subsequent courtship. The closest they have ever gotten to sex was Ava giving him handjobs and making Brad beg for permission to come.
On their honeymoon, Ava begins his training. She uses Brad’s desires for her as a reward, punishing him by whipping him when he disobeys the rules. There is one primary rule: Obey your wife. When he does something that pleases her, he receives pleasure. When he is disobedient, pain. Apologies and thanks are delivered while down on all fours, kissing her feet.
They arrive home after their honeymoon and Ava wants Brad home at 6 PM precisely. His training continues with pain when he disobeys, pleasure when he is obedient. Ava introduces Stephanie back into the picture, notifying Brad that he is not well-endowed and demonstrating to Stephanie how she controls Brad.
Ava uses Stephanie to threaten Brad and tie him to her more closely.
This book is either written by someone who does not write or speak English well or is so poorly copy-edited that it becomes difficult to read. The story of Brad’s descent is a good one but suffers continually from the prose.
December 1, 2022
This story could have been a real masterpiece of Femdom Erotica. But it's written carelessly. And I'm not talking about typographical errors. There are numerous discrepancies in the provided details throughout the book. Some of those are funny, and some are irritating. For example, they have dated for a year before they married, but on wedding night the husband learns for the first time that the woman he has married is taller than him. And the wife, while she had been taking thorough details from him regularly in every date they had previously, doesn't even know about his work and his daily routine. Author also completely ignored the importance of characterization. As we are provided no details of the man's mentality, his reactions to the cruelest abuse from his new wife became completely unrealistic. Hence, the result is a mediocre story that has some good and fun moments for Femdom Erotica readers, but can't be listed among the best books of the kind.
May 1, 2017
Enjoyable
I enjoyed it actually for about three quarters of the way through but after awhile it seemed repetitious and the novelty wore off. The antagonist was understandably enthralled with such a sexual dynamo of a wife that his trip through the story was almost a straight line! I would say because of her,she was so strong, that she was able and successful in carrying the story on her own!One thing; this author knows naturally dominant women. I was grateful for a genuine loving dominant female,being spared forced and gratuitous homosexuality and in my opinion,writing a pretty good story in spite of the repetition and actions that became rote after a while. Also the spelling got atrocious in spots but that might not be the fault of the author.
I enjoyed it actually for about three quarters of the way through but after awhile it seemed repetitious and the novelty wore off. The antagonist was understandably enthralled with such a sexual dynamo of a wife that his trip through the story was almost a straight line! I would say because of her,she was so strong, that she was able and successful in carrying the story on her own!One thing; this author knows naturally dominant women. I was grateful for a genuine loving dominant female,being spared forced and gratuitous homosexuality and in my opinion,writing a pretty good story in spite of the repetition and actions that became rote after a while. Also the spelling got atrocious in spots but that might not be the fault of the author.
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