Lacey has a lemonade stand at the end of the world. She’s waiting for a ride, and finds one in the shape of the monosyllabic Pilgrim, a man who makes up for his lack of chit chat with the passenger in his head which he calls Voice. Together they go on a quest for Lacey’s sister and her family.
I'm a huge fan of post-apocalyptic fiction, and the comparison to my all-time favourite The Stand had me really excited about Defender – albeit warily, since I couldn't see how anything could live up to that hype. Sadly, even taking the marketing into account, I was left disappointed.
I did like Lacey’s relationship with Pilgrim, which I thought was developed well, and I was intrigued by the stories of the Flitting Man which is very clearly setting up a Good vs Evil smackdown…but honestly, not enough that I’d want to read any more.
Defender takes place several years after the apocalypse (brought about by people hearing voices) and frankly, I want to read THAT story. The bit where society crumbles is always the best part of any apocalyptic fiction, and here, not only do we miss out on it, we learn very little about what happened since Lacey led a sheltered life in her grandma’s farmhouse and basically missed the whole thing, and Pilgrim doesn’t even remember who he is.
I loved the voices concept, but aside from Pilgrim’s Voice, it plays a very small part in this story – in fairness, this is no doubt because this is the first of 4 books, but 450 pages of an America deserted apart from a gang and a couple of crazy loners didn't really bring anything new to the post-apocalyptic table.
For something which sets itself up as a vast, sprawling epic, there are very few characters and I felt only Lacey, Pilgrim, and arguably Voice are given any real depth. It does feel unfair to compare Defender to The Stand (although the publisher started it!), but what makes The Stand work so well is the huge cast of well rounded characters in various places, all with different attitudes and beliefs. In Defender, the few other characters they meet on their journey all fit into either Neutral Good (by virtue of not actively trying to kill them) or Bad (rapists – SO MANY RAPISTS – murderers, cannibals), and we’re left to assume this is because how hard life has been over the last 5-6 years without any other detail.
My biggest issue however was the character of Alex, who spends the entire book being rescued after gang rape and torture, captured, and then rescued after being raped and tortured all over again by a whole new set of people. This doesn't appear to affect her in any noticeable way. I assume she will have a much bigger role in later books, but the lack of any agency or apparent point for this character’s existence other than to give Lacey and Pilgrim a reason to put themselves in danger drove me bonkers.
Women generally do get the fuzzy end of the lollipop here and are mostly seen as property – raped, threatened with rape, tortured, etc. I'm sure there would be a lot of this in a post apocalypse scenario, but there would certainly be plenty of other scenarios too (The Stand demonstrates this admirably and I think realistically) and in any case I would think a world in which some people are guided by voices and others aren't would surely lead to all sorts of different hierarchies springing up rather than the bog standard “men will rule through physical/sexual violence because they are generally stronger” idea which is rather tedious and unimaginative.
Overall, very disappointing for me but if you haven’t read much post apocalyptic fic then have at it. Then check out The Stand, World War Z, The Passage, Robopocalypse, The Day of the Triffids, The Handmaid's Tale, Station Eleven.