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A New World: Middle Kingdom Book 1
Updated version 2nd Edition.
Jun woke up, not knowing what happened to him. What he found out was that he had signed up for a game he couldn't remember. This began the adventure of him discovering himself and the martial prowess path that he would choose.
Jun woke up, not knowing what happened to him. What he found out was that he had signed up for a game he couldn't remember. This began the adventure of him discovering himself and the martial prowess path that he would choose.
175 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 22, 2017
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May 8, 2017
Struggled through the grammar and prose
Wondered if the authors first language wasn't English due to incessant typos and the use of words incorrectly.
The plot wasn't bad and the fight theory was reasonable
However unless it gets a good edit its going to turn off the majority of readers which is a shame as despite all the above I made it to the end and wanted more.
Get someone to tidy it up and this could be a winner.
Wondered if the authors first language wasn't English due to incessant typos and the use of words incorrectly.
The plot wasn't bad and the fight theory was reasonable
However unless it gets a good edit its going to turn off the majority of readers which is a shame as despite all the above I made it to the end and wanted more.
Get someone to tidy it up and this could be a winner.
December 4, 2017
Not bad
The story I give a 4, very reminiscent of Chinese martial arts stories. Though missing a little human element I the main character a bit. The grammar is a bit lacking at times though, feels like non-native english. Good, but nothing spectacular
The story I give a 4, very reminiscent of Chinese martial arts stories. Though missing a little human element I the main character a bit. The grammar is a bit lacking at times though, feels like non-native english. Good, but nothing spectacular
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