Fall Back Down

by LegilimencyMe

Harry Potter Fanfiction
Seven years after the war, Hermione runs into Draco and his son, Scorpius. Hermione decides to not hate the boy simply because of his father. Despite their past differences, Hermione finds herself developing a relationship with Draco.

325 pages, Fan-fic

Published September 7, 2012

Reviews

[Labmonkey · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fanfic about Draco running into Hermione at her bookstore in Diagon Alley. She helps him as he is accosted by another wizard. He is with his 3 year old son Scorpius. Relationship blooms after Hermione takes care of the two and builds a relationship with the two (along with the Potter/Weasley family).

Quidditch Ginny, best friend James Potter, Teddy raised by Harry, eventual Ron and Pansy, supportive Narcissa, not a slow burn. Sex scenes quick and rushed with little to no foreplay.

Cute story but peppered with so many spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, incorrect tenses, missing words, incorrect words, awkward sentences that it took me out of the story a lot. Could have used an English speaking alpha and beta reader to help clean it up.

Great premise and, as always, loved little Scorpius

[BlueberryCherries · Rating 5 out of 5]

Very sweet! Nice side pairings! Wish the sequel was available!