Jump to ratings and reviews
Rate this book
Rate this book
Please The ending has been modified from a cliffhanger to a transition. On his way to return Shira to her home in Shinkya, Pol Cissert is called upon to solve two mysteries. His reward is something he has no desire for, but he must put that aside while he travels to the exotic and dangerous country of Shira’s birth. He finds that deadly politics badgers him every step along his journey

358 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 23, 2017

326 people are currently reading
38 people want to read

About the author

Guy Antibes

79 books141 followers
I write action/adventure fiction with a definite proclivity towards Sword & Sorcery. I like magicians, but I'm less partial to unicorns, dragons, elves and dwarves. But give me a hero with a magic sword and I'll make him sing... Wait, I already have!

I've published a number of works under the CasiePress imprint and there are more to come.

I'm an older guy (Guy!), married and all my kids have grown up and given me grandkids to dote over. I've read thousands of books and found that in most cases, I'd rather write than read.

Ratings & Reviews

What do you think?
Rate this book

Friends & Following

Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!

Community Reviews

5 stars
359 (50%)
4 stars
249 (35%)
3 stars
82 (11%)
2 stars
15 (2%)
1 star
1 (<1%)
Displaying 1 - 11 of 11 reviews
6 reviews
September 2, 2017
Great book up until the confusing/disappointing end...

(Spoiler alert... kind of)
I am not a fan of books that develop a man character over the course of a series and then introduce memory loss as a plot twist to redevelop the same character all over again. I typically find this to a cop out and was disappointed to see the author go this route at the very end of the book.

I also don't understand the actions of anyone at the end of this book. The main character is suspicious of being betrayed but leaves his main weapons behind? His alleged betrayers/saviors only recourse is to steal his memory and drop him in a foreign country? His companion (who can secretly talk to him without anyone hearing) is suspicious of potential betrayal but remains silent? I actually really enjoyed this book but the ending left me confused and disappointed.
272 reviews2 followers
November 2, 2020
Shira unlikable

I've been wondering why through all the books, I'm on the last one now, why you've made Shira so unlikable. She is prone to several mannerisms that do not endear her to the reader at all. I keep hoping you will split her off to fall in lone with that general down south. Give Pol a chance to meet someone who values him instead of resenting, arrogant,passive agressive, maybe ambitious and being jealous of his abilities. She is strong and can be without the pettiness. I guess I will see. He is likable but a a co character she hasn't been.
Profile Image for Stuart Macmartin.
718 reviews6 followers
February 3, 2022
He’s still meandering through life, reacting to things as they happen, but that’s mostly because others have control. Interesting new society but we didn’t see enough and it felt too oriental. But still, kept me reading. Interesting new magic ideas. I’m not sure I understand anyone’s behaviour in the last chapters. Seemed a bit contrived, for plot.
Profile Image for Merlin Orr.
30 reviews
December 26, 2024
I really enjoyed the book, right until I didn't. When your entire storyline touts the mental capabilities and savvy of the main character then incredibly stupid unforced blunders happen to veer the storyline off in a new direction... It's to jarring for me to follow and maintain interest. I downloaded the next book but I'm very disappointed right now.
325 reviews
March 20, 2018
For someone so smart Pol makes soo many mistakes and I felt like Pol didn't use some of his regular abilities just to prolong the story which is stupid. He falls for traps easily avoided by using his power.
Profile Image for Pete.
13 reviews
October 20, 2022
Not What I Hoped

I was enjoying this series of books until I read the end of this one, so it’s just another series I won’t finish. I had high hopes, but when the magical prodigy is so easily defeated, I was more than disappointed! What a waste! Thanks for nothing.
Profile Image for Frank Bertino.
1,771 reviews20 followers
October 31, 2024
Entertaining

Pol becomes involved in new adventures. Peril, attacks, battle, heartbreak, intrigue, politics, and kidnapping ensue. I like the action, humor, adventure, intrigue and romance. I look forward to the next book.
Profile Image for Robert Spellmann.
342 reviews4 followers
November 5, 2019
Completely unexpected

I did not see the pilot twist coming that happens in this book! And, I cannot begin to anticipate what happens next! Read on...
718 reviews6 followers
September 24, 2020
Excellent

Another fine mess we're in, Ollie! This is a good narrative that is going on. The author will need to
599 reviews5 followers
March 4, 2025
Fantastic

I read the first 4 books and loved them! I am rereading my books and found book 5! Now I can read the next adventure in book 6! Thanks!!
Profile Image for Amanda Kern.
726 reviews8 followers
February 8, 2020
Good book

I really enjoyed this book. I can't wait to see what happens next. This book does keep you interested and it keeps you reading. I will be rereading the other books in this series.
Displaying 1 - 11 of 11 reviews

Can't find what you're looking for?

Get help and learn more about the design.