I was so torn about this review. I always want to support black female authors when I can. Unfortunately, the entire time I was reading, and I did read the whole thing, I could not get past the fact that there seemed to be no copy editor at all. Misplaced and misused punctuation, sloppy grammar, incorrect word usage (i.e. “bare” instead of “bear”, “shutter” instead of “shudder”, “Berry White”…how?!?!), wrong tenses, and on and on.
Pair that with a personal issue I have with black female characters that fall somewhere in one of the 3 stereotypes of black women, Mammy, Jezebel or Sapphire, and this was a difficult read for me. In this case, Mac falls somewhere in the Mammy category, submissive and always giving and caring for others (though strangely, and positively, not with Gavin as far as I can tell). Even her friend Savanna, who everyone seems to love, frequently dictates what she will do.
It is very rare that this happens, but it was Gavin who I didn’t find irritating and saved the book a bit for me. But then that in and of itself was uncomfortable for me because why is the white male character the saving grace?
I thought long and hard about whether to write this or not, but it really bothered me. I don’t know if this was the right thing to do.