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Twin Brothers #1

Their Spoiled Brat

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We want someone we can call our own, someone that will be our Brat.

Sharing is caring they say, or at least that’s what the Wright Twins say. Three's never a crowd when it comes to these brothers and when Stephanie Sander’s answers their AD on a dating website, they know they’ve hit the jackpot.

Twin Alpha’s set on making every girl's fantasy my reality. Selling my virginity was never an option until it became the only thing I had left. In order to stay in school, I needed to come up with money, and a lot of it. One date with the Wright twins and I would be set for awhile, until I met them, and let them bring me back to their mansion for some drinks.

One drink led to another and before I realized it they had me in their bed, whispering dirty words in my ear. They wanted to own me and make me theirs and the worst part was I wanted to let them. I wanted to be their spoiled Brat, who did all the dirty things they desired.

There was only one pesky little problem, one thing that I failed to tell either of I was a virgin, and I wasn’t sure that either of them would still want me once they found out.

-This is a STEAMY, I mean HOT, HOT, HOT M/F/M romance that ends in a HEA. This is SMUT all the way through. Pour yourself a drink, and shuck the panties to the floor because it's time to get dirty with the Wright brothers.-

200 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 29, 2017

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J.L. Beck

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J.L. Beck is the USA Today Best Selling author of unapologetic romance. She lives in WI with her husband, two kids, and four dogs. She enjoys writing and recently starting a literary agency to help represent authors in the industry.

To learn more about her books or interact with her go here: https://linktr.ee/jlbeckbooks

J.L. Beck xoxoxo

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Profile Image for Coco.V.
50k reviews128 followers
July 11, 2017
Hot fast ménage read that was a good distraction. On the smutty scale of one to ten, this one's definitely a ten. :D
Profile Image for LIA  Kh. .
329 reviews38 followers
May 19, 2017
bad writing, bad plot. there's other author can write a lot better stories
Profile Image for Nicole.
312 reviews41 followers
April 29, 2017
~4,5~ stars from me!!!

Another steamy, hot romantic story from the author only this time we have two heroes with our heroine which make things even more sparkly and well I think that almost every woman has fantasized even once in her life about two gorgeous twins and every dirty thought that comes with them.... Well, I think that this book will awake or create this fantasy!!

Stephanie will have this opportunity after being forced to go in search for money for her college so without having much choice she chooses a dating website in order to earn some money and the result is that she ends up with not one but two billionaires who want her.. Rider and Hawk.

Lot's of hot scenes and sweet dialogues with a fast pace plot and HEA. I certainly recommend it and I'm looking forward to reading the next book the author will create!!

Profile Image for Laura Bair.
18 reviews
April 27, 2017
This book is utterly hot and will make your panties melt, Beck of course leaves you wanting more with this one, the sex scenes are through the roof and you won't be able to handle putting this bad boy down once you start to read this. J.l. Beck you are my hero and simply marvelous I love all of you books and can't wait to see what comes next.
Profile Image for Dita.
1,139 reviews13 followers
May 1, 2017
"I guess they were right, everything was better in two's."

Oh yeah two hot men definitely double the fun. Another hot one from J.L Beck.
Not my favorite, because I had a hard time connecting with those characters, but I really enjoying reading it.
There's many hotness here, well with two cocky confident hot men, there's no doubt you'll get plenty steamy stuff.

As for the characters, love Hawk and Rider, although sometimes they act very confusing, one moment they're put that Alpha's stunt, the next moment they're so not Alpha.
And Stephanie, I admire that she puts her studies as priorities, but sometimes she's acting so annoying, well she is the spoiled brat, guess that type of characters is not my fav.

Overall it's a fun short steamy book.
If you love steamy romance with spoiled brat and two hotties, this is the book for you.

*I voluntarily received a review copy of this book
Profile Image for Chris.
1,316 reviews38 followers
June 4, 2020
This was smutty... and except from smutty it was also hilarious! The dialogues were like a badly staged adult movie! I knew that it would be like that when I started reading it but I didn't expect it to be so funny. Totally worth it!
Profile Image for Megan.
666 reviews60 followers
July 3, 2017
This one is 2.5 stars for me. I love a good triad story as much as he next girl, but something was missing here for me. The sexy times were decent, but the editing errors were so glaring in some places that it was completely distracting.

Stephanie is in quite a bind. Her dad's company is being sued, so he can't afford to pay her tuition to nursing school next semester. She's so close to finishing school, and she doesn't want to quit. She needs to figure out how to make some big money, quickly. Her best friend turns her on to a website where men and women pay people to go out on dates with them. She's a shy bookworm for the most part. She doesn't date, and she's never had sex. But, when she logs in, she sees Rider's profile, and she's smitten. He's offering $5,000 for one date, so she decides to give it a try.

Rider and Hawk are twins. They like to share women. So, when Stephanie catches their eye on the website, they, as Rider, offer to take her out to dinner. She thinks she'll meet Rider, but really it will be both of them. Of course, they plan to seduce her into coming home with them. They come from a rich family, and they're used to getting what they want. They feel sure that Stephanie will be no exception. They set out to sweep her off her feet.

There was chemistry between the 3 main characters, but something just wasn't quite clicking for me. Besides the fact that some more editing was needed, I felt a little misled by the subtitle of the book, "A MFM Daddy Romance". However, I see that now on Amazon, it currently shows "A MFM Twin Brothers Billionaire Romance", which is much more accurate. Though they called her their "princess" and their "brat", there really wasn't any type of daddy kink to be found. There wasn't a lot of character development, which is somewhat to be expected in a short book like this, but I still noticed it's absence.

I also felt like time passed in the story very quickly, and some scenes were left out that I think I would have benefited from as the reader, for example, her telling her best friend about her new relationship. Stephanie was wishy-washy in the beginning about going on the date at all, and then did a complete 180 once she met the twins. It just didn't quite ring true for me, and I would have liked seeing her explain it to her best friend. I think with an editing overhaul this could be a 3 star read, but I still wouldn't love it.

For what this book is, it was entertaining enough, but it just didn't quite do it for me. I would not be opposed to trying another story by this author in the future.

ARC provided by Author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed by Megan from Alpha Book Club
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Profile Image for Erica.
266 reviews3 followers
April 30, 2017
Stephanie is in her last year of college, going for her nursing degree. Her Dad is in legal trouble with his company and can't help Stephanie pay for college. Her friend Zoey tells her about this website her friend uses, Alphasontop.com, hot men who just pay you for dates. Stephanie signs up after finding Rider's picture online, and the promise of 5 grand. He sets up a date and him and his twin brother Hawk are there. They ask Stephanie to go home with them, and she agrees. They then offer her 10 grand total to stay with them for a week. Stephanie agrees, and they immediately have sex. She stays in school and the guys pay for it. Short, and to the point: sex.
It was good, had hot sex scenes.
The only bad thing, missing words, missing letters, and mis-used words. Those were quite noticeable. I have read other books by the author and it seems to be a pattern. She needs a few more rounds of spell check and beta reading before publishing.
I recieved a copy in exchange for an honest review.
Profile Image for Alice Dukes.
15 reviews10 followers
April 28, 2017
First of allll holy geez!!! I couldn't put this book down!! Stephanie ends up in a bad situation her senior year of college!!! Eager to finish at all mean!! She takes her best friends advise!!!! Takes a risk that no virgin would!! Rider and Hawk meet with Stephanie for dinner she thinks it's just rider but meets both instead how does it all end??? Well you must read to find out!! Trust me you won't be mad!!! 😉
1,018 reviews13 followers
April 28, 2017
Loved this hot and steamy M/F/M menage romance!!! Stephanie and Hawk & Rider the Wright twin brothers!! They have money, she needs money can Stephanie walk away at the end, after having both alpha males????? Love your work!! J.L. Beck!!
Profile Image for Diana Perry.
225 reviews9 followers
May 1, 2017
J.L. does it again! This book is SsssseXy with a Capital X! Characters & storyline flowed freely & before I knew it, I had read the whole book! Hot, sensual naughtiness along beside a set of willing Gorgeous Yummy men & spoiled little rich girl & you're all set for a read you won't soon forget! Definitely a MUST READ! I voluntarily read this ARC & this is my honest review
Profile Image for Innergoddess_Booklover.
596 reviews
June 23, 2017
Honestly I loved the whole twin alpha things going on but the ending just left me with on answered questions so I still want more from the book
Profile Image for Justine Hull.
20 reviews
May 14, 2017
This story is definitely something I would refer to as "Porn in print" The plot line is shallow, and there wasn't alot of character dialogue, or inner monologue. However, the sex scenes will leave you breathless with your pulse racing. The Steamy hot, kinky fuckery is top notch.
Profile Image for The Talented Miss Ripley.
338 reviews
May 14, 2017
Ummmm....

I just didn't understand how the story could end there. I was left in a stupor with more questions then I had answers to.
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618 reviews50 followers
May 1, 2017
4.5

This is one ménage you don't want to miss. A girl in need of money, 2 heroes to save her day, and a kinky relationship followed by lots of love!
Profile Image for Julie Kirby.
920 reviews13 followers
June 5, 2017
Their Spoilt Brat 3.5*
J L Beck 29/5/17
Hot, Sexy, quick read.
The Wright brothers, and the ever so sweet Stephanie, meet in strange circumstances.
Stephanie finds herself having to support herself through the last year at college, due to her father’s company being in rouble. Through her friend Zoey she joins a dating/escort site and goes on a dinner date.
Only her date, is not one very strikingly handsome Adonis, it’s Two, but you feel there is a connection all three hit it off really well. Twins Riley and Hawk
They all go back to the boys place, with plenty of lust in their eyes, they had a fantastic relationship, feelings coming out of nowhere, totally surprising them all.
This is written in alternate points of views and you get a greater understanding of each of them as individuals and as a threesome.
The boys, Riley and Hawk lavish Stephanie with lots of affection, and love they have a very caring way about them.
What started out as purely business arrangements, soon becomes so much more, all three wanting more than just the week.
I loved their honesty through the whole book, and their bedroom scenes – flipping heck, I needed a cigarette afterwards! 
Loved the secret twist at the end, and how they all reacted and dealt with it.
Great quick, sexy hot read.
Profile Image for SBee Reviews.
2,661 reviews81 followers
May 4, 2017
Finding their little princess...brat!

I received an Advance Reader Copy for Their Spoiled Brat written by JL Beck and voluntarily reviewed this book. Stephanie had one year left of schooling to obtain her nursing degree, but her father had just informed her that his company was being sued and that he was no longer able to pay for her schooling or anything else for that matter. Her best friend had suggested that she apply for AlphasOnTop.com, a sugar-daddy-type website which pays for girls to go out with them. Luckily for her, Rider Wright had posted an ad, and she couldn't get him out of her mind. With no choice left, she applies and is pleasantly surprised to find that his twin, Hawk, is also interested in dating her. This was a cute and sexy little story, that ends in a predictable finish but was a nice read, nonetheless! The twins knew who and what they wanted, and they treated her like a princess from day one - she really couldn't ask for more than that and their great connection ;-D
Profile Image for Laura  Redmon.
489 reviews16 followers
May 5, 2017
I am 100% Team Twin Alpha's!

I have to fan myself just think properly enough to write this review. Just typing the names "Hawk and Rider" make me Le Sigh and girly squeal at the same time!

All I have to is is "Thank you so much J. L. Beck for writing a not cliche menage and making me enjoy evert second of what real MFM should be!" I love menage stories that seem more real life and that's what this fabulous author has done for her readers!

Ladies, you will definitely want to one-click your hearts out on this sexy, hot number! Be sure you have spare batteries, spare boy toy, or just something to spare yourself from the torture these two Alpha Twins are sure to put your lady bits in. You've been warned! You won't regret it.

***I voluntarily reviewed this advanced reader copy.***

Laura Redmon
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489 reviews16 followers
May 5, 2017
I am 100% Team Twin Alpha's!

I have to fan myself just think properly enough to write this review. Just typing the names "Hawk and Rider" make me Le Sigh and girly squeal at the same time!

All I have to is is "Thank you so much J. L. Beck for writing a not cliche menage and making me enjoy evert second of what real MFM should be!" I love menage stories that seem more real life and that's what this fabulous author has done for her readers!

Ladies, you will definitely want to one-click your hearts out on this sexy, hot number! Be sure you have spare batteries, spare boy toy, or just something to spare yourself from the torture these two Alpha Twins are sure to put your lady bits in. You've been warned! You won't regret it.

***I voluntarily reviewed this advanced reader copy.***

Laura Redmon
Cutting Muse Blog Review
Profile Image for Jasmina Holly.
131 reviews2 followers
June 5, 2017
So sad because this had the potential to be a good story. The plot was decent and the characters were interesting enough, but too many errors made this a terrible read. First off, it felt rushed. Things moved too quickly and weren't thoroughly explained. Second, there were so many grammatical errors, sometimes the storyline was compromised. Lastly, the whole thing just seemed completely far fetched and unbelievable. I know sometimes stories can seem far fetched and still be an enjoyable read, but this one had me thinking "Wow, that would never happen" the entire time I'm reading. Also there were a couple times the characters contradicted themselves. Overall, not a great read.
Profile Image for Sofia Almiroudis.
375 reviews8 followers
May 11, 2017
If your into menages then Their Spoiled Brat is the book for you. The Wright brothers are two hot twins who love to share their women. When they stumble upon Stephanie, the sweet little virgin with just the right curves and sexuality, they know they have found the ONE they can't let go. Stephanie is shocked to find out that the ad she answered is for not for just one but two insanely HOT TWIN brothers. Rider and Hawk wine and dine Stephanie and before you know it they have her wrapped around their fingers. Their Spoiled Brat is a quick sexy read with a HEA.
Profile Image for Arica Shupe.
232 reviews4 followers
May 18, 2017
THEIR SPOILED BRAT
by J.L. Beck

If you like M/F/M you will love this one. Stephanie has financial trouble her last year at college and takes the advice of her best friend to answer an ad to get the money she needs. Enter the hotties the Wright brothers who are so hot they could melt ice during a snow storm, who share their women and are looking for the forever kind of love. This book will melt your panties and keep you reading til the end. Will so be looking forward to reading more from this author.
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53 reviews3 followers
May 4, 2017
I voluntarily read an advance reader copy for my honest review.

This book is a M/F/M romance novella, one of my favorites genres. And J. L. Beck definitely didn't let me down.

This story is full on steamy, sizzling, smoking hot. If you're looking for something with hot scenes this is perfect. I loved the connection between the three characters. This is a great MFM romance and if you like your books super sexy and hot grab this one quick.
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14k reviews162 followers
July 14, 2017
HOT, HOT, HOT!!! This is another scorcher from J.L. Beck. If you want a book that will turn up the heat, make you sweat and need a cold shower; look no further. Stephanie needs money. She decides that the only option she has is to sell her virginity. Enter the Wright Twins. Twin brothers who love to share and they really want to share Stephanie. This is a great MFM romance and if you like your books super sexy and hot grab this one quick. I voluntarily reviewed an ARC copy of this book.
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185 reviews14 followers
August 14, 2017
Did not finish at 9%

I got this from instafreebie and... I want my money back dammit.

The grammar is non-existing, there are words missing, or wrong words used.
She keeps changing inds and thought patterns that I didn't even know what I was reading.

The whole thing is so unbelievable and needs to go through a shredder, before being sent to an editor.

Save your money and stay away from this book
Profile Image for Tianna McPherson (Anna Lee).
880 reviews11 followers
August 20, 2017
Oh my this book was so sexy and sensual that I just couldn't put it down.  I fell in love the twins right away.  They gave off that alpha male vibe that most women want. Ad for Stephanie she had it all and then nothing. It was a fairytale dream come true.
I absolutely felt that J.L gave us a great story and I'm looking forward to read some of the other books that I have of hers. She writes what most woman are thinking about. I give this book 5 stars absolutely.
Profile Image for Jackie.
49 reviews
May 4, 2017
Rider and Hawk are hottttt twins and they decide to date Stephanie who signs up for a website to date rich men who will take her out on dates and pay for things. She is in a financial bind with school so she signs up and gets a nice surprise when she meets the twins.

What a read. It was a fast paced great read and I loved it.

Profile Image for Chelsea Ortiz-Gonzalez.
1,184 reviews4 followers
May 11, 2017
Headline: I have voluntarily read and reviewed an ARC version of Their Spoiled Brat by J.L. Beck.
This book was hot as hell. Some can’t handle one sexy man, but two, let alone sexy twins! I say, “sign me up!” Rider and Hawk were so sweet and Stephanie was the truly innocent virgin turned naughty. Loved the book. Would recommend for a lazy day in bed. Happy Reading!
Profile Image for Terri Handschumacher.
383 reviews20 followers
June 8, 2017
this was pretty good for a quick read. was not disappointed in the lease when it came to this one, other than i wish it had been a little longer. that way there could of been a little more given in the development of the romance between all three of them. the switching of POV was good and helped make the reader know what each of the characters were feeling.
Profile Image for Nancy Ward-keys.
283 reviews3 followers
July 18, 2017
I am new to author J.L. Beck's work. She is simply incredible. Who wouldn't love two very wealthy twin brothers to swoon over them. I know I sure would. I couldn't put Their Spoiled Brat, down till I turned the very last page on my kindle. So if you are reading my review I highly recommend you buy it..it will not disappoint.
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