Overall okay
Overall it ended okay. Not telling us much and leaving lots of hanging threads. It seemed an abrupt ending. Would have loved an Epilogue instead of them talking about starting their own world, whatever that meant. I guess in the end they beat the bad guys, but I just never felt the characters and their relationships. The overall story plotline was good, just the character building was minimal at best and the story suffered greatly for that lack. The main couple spent so much time mistreating each other, battling each other, keeping unnecessary secrets from each other and generally being apart for 99.9% of the series that I just couldn't feel their romance. He never told her he loved her. I think they barely had sex twice and it wasn't memorable that I could tell. Maybe this should be sold as a YA story. That's what it felt like. I get not wanting a romance to overcome a story, but you gotta make the reader feel it and care. That is where this series failed. Like when Rosalind found out that the humans kept by the vamps weren't being treated well, kept warm or fed well. She did nothing. Sure gave one girl her jacket. What about the rest of the humans? She had enough power later to insist on giving them better living conditions, but she was always so self centered that she never did. There were so many proactive things the character could have done to protect, but she never did anything until she was about to die herself. She would look up and see the ward thinning, but ignore it instead of strengthening it like she could. And then she is shocked when monsters come through. All 3 mages were in Lilinor for weeks, maybe months with not once trying the daylight spell. She just struck me as apathetic. Drifting through the story and reacting to what's thrown at her. Until her daylight monster idea, she was just barely there. Overall, the storyline made it readable, the characters made it barely readable. I guess an overall rating would be 3.5 stars. It would be 4 if the last book was done away with. That was useless.