Book Review of L.N. Denison’s “Only the Few.”
By Charles McCormack.
I just finished L.N. Denison’s book “Only the Few” in kindle format. I was really looking forward to reading it in that I enjoy post-apocalyptic sagas such as The Road, The Legend, and World War Z. So, I happily hunkered down, hoping to be transported in time and situation. And, in the beginning I thought this would be quite possible. After all, “Only the Few” sets up a good story line and has plenty of action. The protagonist, Catherine Hyde, a corporal in the army, along with other members of her unit, is sent out into the devastated countryside to look for survivors following a catastrophic bombing by a foreign entity and many adventures occur along the way. In other words, the bones of the book in terms of action and adventure are good and promise much.
However, for various reasons, although the adventure and action are there, I could not get absorbed by the book. It did not provide, at least for me, that experience of being drawn into the read and transported to another time and place. As I wondered about this I repeatedly asked myself “Why?” My answer slowly emerged. I found “Only the Few” lacking sufficient character development to allow me to identify with any of its characters. Further inhibiting my ability to relate to the characters was that I found them to be inconsistent, not true to character, over the course of the book. For example, on the one hand Judd, an evil character, would be described as having care and concern for Catherine while in the act of abandoning her, almost certainly guaranteeing her death. On the other, in a later chapter he would take great sadistic pleasure in torturing her for no other reason than he could. There was no explanation of this change in attitude. Such inconsistencies within characters occurred throughout the book making it difficult for this reader to invest or believe fully in them.
Another issue I had with the book was that some of the scenes were simply unbelievable. For example, as Catherine and another character, both weapon-less, were chasing a well-armed Judd across miles of devastated landscape, with the possibility of the dreaded cannibalistic Cavers or their kindred spirits the Scavengers potentially popping out from anywhere, Catherine is seized by such powerful need to bath and change her clothes that without even bothering to reconnoiter the situation she runs without heed, fully in the open, to a devastated department store to see what she could find. I’m sorry. I know women are different than men, but the whole idea that her well-honed survival instinct would suddenly and completely evaporate while in such dire straits so she could get a change of clothes simply didn’t work for me on any level.
“Only the Few” could have been considerably enhanced by a bit of research. In another scene, Catherine is shot by a sniper who had orders to maim but not kill. Yet, though the sniper is vaunted for his skills and not far away he hits her in the stomach. There are not very many places one could be shot that are more likely to kill someone than the stomach. The hydraulic pressure of a high-power bullet wreaking havoc on the intestines and internal organs alone would almost certainly do the job.
I thought “Only the Few” would have been greatly enhanced by a good editor, who not lost in the weeds of the writing, could have made these points and more and challenged the author in the best possible way to turn an average book into a truly entertaining read.
I look forward to L.N. Denison’s next effort.