It could be better - a lot better.
Terry Schott is running off the success of the first novel, but the problem is not the story, which is entertaining, but the editing and content.
Before I continue, there will be a few spoilers here that could affect your read. These will be clearly marked so you can just skip over them.
First, like most of Terry's recent works, there are a lot of editing issue that could be addressed easily. The fact that they are still in the finished work screams shortcut to publishing, which is what most self-published authors are doing now. Please, make sure you read reviews and see if the author actually had proper editing done on their title. If no, I strongly suggest skipping it for an author who actually cares about their craft and gets editing done to address errors in the mechanics of writing along with repetition. In one paragraph containing three sentences a key word is repeated four times. This should not happen.
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One thing I found disruptive in the read of this story is the abrupt ending. One minute we're looking at an issue with a fraction getting out of an isolated area of the digital world and then the next an unexpected, and not planned, announcement of who did what. And instead of pulling the pieces together in a logical form, the work jumps to the end time of the story, missing out any explanation of how we got there. One minute the original displaced are free and the next no "live" gamer is in the virtual world. What happened? I was very shocked at that jump for it left too many questions.
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I'll be continuing with the Fractured - book 8 in The Game is Life because I purchased the set, but after this I'll not continue with the series. I will also mark the author, Terry Schott, as one to be careful when buying due to his lack of proper editing on the work.