I was so, so excited to read this book, especially as it hits closer to home for me with it centering around the homeless community in Seattle. Unfortunately, I just couldn't get into this book. There were a few reasons for this:
One of the first things that struck me about the writing was the main character’s thought process and her way of viewing the world, which was a bit jarring and difficult to get into. It’s clear as you read on that she’s not quite like most people and that there’s some sort of mental illness she’s suffering from. She hallucinates at times, she phrases things in a peculiar way, and she doesn’t completely understand a lot of typical social cues and other concepts. So following along in her perspective was sort of cumbersome and at times required some guesswork in order to understand what she was thinking, feeling, or expressing.
I understand the author’s decision in writing the main character, Rain, in this way, as a means of connecting protagonist and reader and thus allowing the reader to better understand and empathize with people who have these sort of conditions, and because there is some correlation between severe mental illness and homelessness. At the same time though, I thought that having Rain be homeless and also have a mental illness was a bit cheap and sort of playing into that stereotype a bit that every homeless person is mentally ill, which is obviously not the case. I think I would’ve enjoyed the story a lot more if Rain were just a typical teenager born into homelessness because I think she would’ve been able to articulate her experiences in a more clear, visceral, and profound way, and it would’ve shed light on the many teenagers who are born into these circumstances and feel helpless to their situation.
Another issue I had that prevented me from loving this book is that there didn’t seem to be a whole lot of plot to this story. I went into this novel thinking the story would begin with the Winterfolk community being kicked out of their space in the Jungle and having to adapt to moving into the city, thus kick-starting the plot from there. That would've been a lot more gripping in my opinion. But there isn’t ever any big moment where enforcement officers from the city forcibly evict everyone from their home in the Jungle. The Winterfolk get a flyer notice, but beyond that, it mostly just begins with the main characters knowing that they’re going to get evicted sooner or later and from there decide to take a field trip of sorts into the city. From here, the plot just felt very aimless and like it wasn’t really building up to anything. They were sort of just wandering around the city and things happen? At one point, Rain loses her boots, which causes all sorts of mayhem and takes them all over the city. They’re also trying to avoid this other homeless character who’s a lot of trouble, so they get on a city bus to try to lose him off their trail. And that’s sort of just it. Things happen but nothing that ever builds up to any big climax or with any particularly large stakes involved. I thought this book was going to incorporate a lot of social issues regarding homelessness, and I’m really sad that it’s didn’t because that’s definitely something I’m interested in and I think it would’ve made the book A LOT stronger if it did talk about things like homeless shelters, affordable housing, counseling, specialized programs, etc.
Finally: that ending was pretty ambiguous. It doesn't really tell us anything about where Rain is in her situation. Is she still homeless? Is she living in a shelter? Did they manage to save the Winterfolk? All we can really infer from the ending is that:
1) She can hear the seagulls from where she's at. Whether she's inside or outside is another question
2) She finally got her pet kitten. Surely she wouldn't be able to take care of a kitten if she were still homeless? Especially if she bought it from a pet store, where they typically do a background check on you and require at least an address and phone number.
3. She's practicing learning how to write.
I don't know, based on all of that, we can't really deduce any real conclusions that came out of this ending, so it just feels like there are so many unanswered questions.
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All in all, this book was a pretty big letdown for me, which is unfortunate, considering it centers around a very real situation that’s very close to my own home and there were SO many missed opportunities to talk about a lot of social issues surrounding homelessness and to shed a deeper light on it all. I didn’t feel it did any of that but rather just portrayed an aimless day in the life of homelessness with all of the larger significance stripped away.