Funny, cute, loved how Laurie was quickly in love/committed/upfront with Mackenzie about his feelings. A keeper. Hope Taylor and River get a story!
ETA - July 17 2018 - I have now read this 3 times since April 2018. I'm pretty sure there was a 4th time too that I just didn't note on gr. This is such a yummy feel good read. I keep rereading books on my keeper shelf since they are a sure hit with me. Time well spent.
ETA - July 21 2024 - reread. Adding a more detailed review.
Tropes: rich/poor, age gap, forced proximity, hurt/comfort, found family
Feels: 5/5
Steam*: 5/5
Kinks: marking
Angst: low
HEA: yes
Pairing: MM
Triggers/potential icks/content themes: dead parents, not so great guardians
Mackenzie is 23, about to graduate with his teaching credentials. His mom left when he was a baby. Dad died when he was 15 or 16, so his brother River took care of him so he wouldn't go to foster care. His brother left as soon as he was old enough to care for himself to pursue his wanderlust photographer dreams. He is poor as can be and has invested all his effort into his schooling. He's a virgin. He's evicted from his rental because the building's getting teared down for gentrification, this happens a few weeks before his graduation. All the other options are out of his price range or rodent infested.
Laurie is about 10 years older. He's an antisocial genius and works as a mobile app developer at the same place Mackenzie's friend Taylor works at. He's super rich and an orphan. His parents died when he was a kid and he was raised by his crappy uncle. He's horrible at cleaning, forgets to eat, doesn't know how to people. After a couple interactions, Laurie offers Mackenzie a place to stay, in his huge house. Mackenzie can just contribute by cleaning and cooking.
Mackenzie is kind. So easy to make blush. Laurie quickly falls for him. And he very quickly tells Mackenzie that he loves him, and he tells him often. They are there for each other a lot and tension/awareness is there. Laurie starts offering up orgasms and getting all over Mackenzie, not expecting anything in return but enjoying the heck out of marking him and having him. Mackenzie is confused about his sexuality, never having really been arsed to feel anything for anyone before, but he's attracted to Laurie for sure and possessive over him. Conflict comes when Taylor and Mackenzie's brother start pressing for Mackenzie to move out and Mackenzie needs to decide how in this he is.
I adore this book. It's been a keeper for many years. I've read it so many times. It's a feel-good story. There's funny moments, there's a ton of passion and I just love how open Laurie is about his feelings, Mackenzie has all the power at the beginning. And Mackenzie is just a kind man who has been through a lot and is good to Laurie. The writing is so casually conveying so much. Little zings of humour, awkwardness, heat.
Some notable moments:
"“It’s…impressive. The artwork is…unusual.” He let out a belting laugh I hadn’t been expecting, so I jumped, but then the rich baritone of it made my toes curl. It was an odd reaction, as I wasn’t usually affected by such things. “Unusual is a kind way of putting it. The artwork came with the house, along with much of the furniture. I just haven’t gotten around to redecorating.” “Oh, that’s…” A relief. “How long have you lived here, then?” Beaudry turned back to his computer and began typing furiously. “About five years,”"
"He leaned in. “I don’t want anyone else to touch you. I don’t want you going home with anyone else. I’ve decided I’m in love with you.”"
"“What the hell kind of name is River?” “Excuse me? What is wrong with you? Where the fuck do you get off talking about my brother like that?” His eyebrows reached for his hairline, and his mouth fell open. “Brother?” “Yes, brother. Who did you think it was?” He looked down at his hands and his high cheekbones stained pink. “You were jealous again, weren’t you?!”"
This sex scene, omg. "He pushed back in with more force, obviously deciding I’d had enough time to adjust. Apparently he was right because the burn began to fade into a delicious fullness and stretch that was like nothing I’d ever experienced. His dick sawed in and out of me, stretching the limits of my body and stringing me out until I was a howling mess. My face and chest were still plastered to the bed, and the sensation of my oversensitized cock dragging against the duvet was driving me batty with the need for…something."
"“What the actual fuck, Mackenzie?” “Huh? What now?” He gestured vaguely at my lower half. “How about how you look like you dipped your dick in honey and got mauled by a hungry bear.” I looked down and saw tracks of hickeys and love-bites all up and down my inner thighs, disappearing underneath the fabric of my briefs. Dear lord, I was going to have to go home and have a conversation with Laurent fucking Hoover, because I did indeed look like some kind of animal had been gnawing on me."
*FYI, I rate steam based on a combination of quality & quantity. I note kink separate from steam because I don't want to underrate steamy reads that don't have much kink."