DNF at 30%
I was going to finish this book, but decided that I'd read enough, going by other reviews revealing major plot points/twists throughout the story, which I guessed. My time is too precious to waste on a poorly-paced book which gives me limited pleasure, so I'll bow out.
Summary: Laura Baron-Cohen (that surname is unfortunate!) is a single mother in her early-thirties with a nine-year-old daughter called Autumn. They've moved to Bristol due to Laura's divorce with her ex. Unfortunately, Autumn is finding it hard to settle into her new school because she's being bullied by an older boy Levi. One rain-soaked afternoon, Laura witnesses Levi and his cronies tormenting Autumn, so she decides to take action. Will she suffer the consequences of this incident? Will the bullying cease? Or has Laura bitten off more than she can chew?
First thing's first, before I bash it, this started off decent. There was a nice sense of mystery in the prologue and the writing promised a story with an effort at description, which a lot of thriller writers miss out on, instead relying on a lot of dialogue and choppy, short sentences. There a few good descriptions of the setting and Autumn's artwork, although many passages seemed overwritten and excessively detailed as to detract from the storyline as well as failing to provide adequate characterisation.
As I said, the writing style is fair, nothing outstanding, but it had a few good moments like the scene where Laura confronts Levi. That was a tense, exciting, high-stakes scene in which anything could have happened. What Laura did to him may have been irresponsible since she's the adult, but under the circumstances you understood why she did it. However, her actions afterwards were completely foolish - she sees that the boy is severely injured (his head hit a stone), but fails to call the police/emergency services. In that respect, she seemed very stupid. Admittedly, she didn't have a phone on her at that moment, but she could have asked on of his mates to call.
From that point, I thought it would continue to be exciting and tense, but I was disappointed. The author was too focussed on silly little things like describing the layout of her home, her gardening work etc. It didn't make for gripping reading.
Also, it was predictable in that I guessed who Levi's dad was the moment he was introduced which was at the beginning. He turns out to be the I.T. guy who Laura is introduced to by the school mums. She stupidly gives him access to her security details/passwords when he comes round to fix her WI-FI. Why on earth would someone be stupid enough to allow a complete stranger access to her details because she fancies him? Argh.
Some reviewers have pointed out that Autumn's narrative voice wasn't convincing. I'd have to disagree. They criticise Kay using vocabulary and phrases in the narrative which a 9 year old wouldn't have used, but it's fiction and wouldn't it be boring if she resorted to using dumbed down language? Kay conveys Autumn's sadness and isolation about her parent's divorce, moving to a new area, trying to make new friends and having to suffer from bullying in a realistic way.
I stopped because I was put off by the boring storyline. Perhaps it would have been better if it had been put under women's fiction instead: if this has been a story about a family trying to adjust to a new location and a mother and daughter going on a personal journey it might have worked. However, to classify this as a thriller/suspense book, was poor marketing and misleading to potential readers.
As such, I can't recommend this book for those looking for a thriller.
I'm tempted to finish it, because I have the "started-so-I'll-finish" mentality, but... nah. Maybe I'll add an edited passage later if I come back to it.