Smug, Condescending SJW Attitude Mars Otherwise Decent Story
Authored by Mr. Joshua Guess, “Cascade Point (The Ghost Fleet Book 1),” is a decent SciFi space opera. The smug, condescending, and at times, arrogant SJW attitude of the author, irritatingly permeates and mars the otherwise entertaining story.
In a far future, humanity has expanded throughout an large expanse of space, under the “Planetary Alliance (PA).” The crew of a former PA naval warship prototype, the “Fallen Angel,” mainly disgruntled, ex-PA personnel, are independent contractors, surveying stellar systems for a living. During one survey, the crew witnesses an apparently alien vessel, emerge from a “Cascade Point,” into normal space. The “Fallen Angel,” limping away on conventional propulsion due to the alien ship’s dampening field, eventually distances herself, makes her escape, and informs the PA navy. The aliens are not unknown to the PA intel assets, as multiple incursions have been observed. The “Fallen Angel’s” crew is manipulated into a espionage/privateer asset, within the PA’s “Ghost Fleet,” and dispatched to thwart the aliens’ invasion plans. Various plot lines ensue, including sentient AI, a human/genetic-enhancing as a religion/Spartan/world, interstellar space battles, and a potential fifth column within the PA.
Mr. Guess, has created an entertaining storyline, that has merit. On two levels, the arc is undermined, causing dissatisfaction for this reader.
Firstly, Mr. Guess, an experienced author, has serious flaws in his skill set. Writing “tics,” needless with the most basic of editing/proofreading, appear throughout “Cascade Point.” Examples: “after all;” “obviously;” and “snorted.” The most egregious repeated and systemic flaw is the use of “but.” Mr. Guess, is apparently of the writing philosophy that “but” can be used in lieu of “and,” as well as punctuation (comma, period, etc.). It’s indicative of a lazy and undisciplined effort. Further, the author commercially offered his story initially as a serial “chapters” enterprise, then combined all into one book. The result is an abundance of repetition in the book form of “Cascade Point.” Again, this is simply lazy.
Secondly, the smug, SJW, leftist ideology, that the author patronizingly intertwines throughout the story is irritating to this reader. Other readers might disagree, as they espouse similar beliefs. For this reader, it is more the arrogant and condescending manner of the author, as he pushes his agenda, rather then the agenda itself. Many of his main characters - “Dex,” “Crash” - are portrayed through the lens of victim hood. Dex, a young man, the “Angel’s” assistant engineer, is an escaped, genetically enhanced, de facto slave, from the religious, Spartan world. Crash, the XO, is the expert female pilot, who was unjustly discharged from the navy, after fighting off the sexual assault of her CAG. Even the captain and engineer, both navy buddies of Crash, left the PA in disgust, as their defense of Crash, went unfulfilled. The author sings the praises of how humanity has evolved to a better state, due to everyone having shelter, food, and medical care, “...at no cost....” Yet, he doesn’t explain how this is possible. In fact, the crew of the “Angel,” are working for a living, needing to get paid, and paying for things while on space stations. The contradiction is galling. This reader highlighted and noted dozens of examples of both the writing flaws and the author’s failure in subtlety, when pushing his agenda.
“Cascade Point,” is recommended as a SciFi story. Readers will decide for themselves, in regards to the author’s political ideology.
The book was fully read via Kindle Unlimited.