The Lost Crown

by La Kayshal

“A symbol of wealth, power and prosperity, the crown was never meant to be found.”
Carried away in the torrents of curiosity, Dr Ryan Johnson is accompanied by his happy-go-lucky friend, Christian Willis, to the golden city of Jaisalmer, India, in search of a crown lost centuries ago. They never expected a simple archaeological excavation to turn into a game of life and death. Problems arise when Ryan picks up a street fight and finds himself in a messy situation with a feisty, Deiva Chauhan. In a foreign land rich in traditional acts, his bachelorhood is at stake when he is simply ordered to act as Deiva’s fiancé. An easy ordeal if only the two could get along. Ryan discovers that his expedition was never an easy one especially if the only clue available was an old tale which to his disbelief said that magic was involved in hiding the crown. In a romantic adventure where Ryan’s beliefs are questioned and courage is tested, will he be able to stand up to the challenges of his quest?

Genres: Romance, Mystery, Adventure, Fiction

197 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 15, 2015

About the author

La Kayshal is an Australian writer of romance, YA, and children's fantasy novels. She lives with her husband, daughter, and a wild dingo mix-breed in the coastal plains of the Sunny State.

An adventure romance set in the exotic landscapes of India, The Lost Crown was her debut published novel. Her first children's picture book, Sylphie Is Resilient, launched the much-loved Sylph Series. Book two, Sylphie and Her Friends, focuses on conflict resolution and the importance of personal space in friendships. The third book, Procrastie Sylphie, is a Christmas-themed story about overcoming procrastination, accompanied by a fun and practical Christmas Activity Book to help readers build better habits.

A lifelong fan of wizards, magic, dragons, swords, and elementals, she poured all these elements into her debut—an upper middle grade fantasy, Ariston Baker in the Weird Picture Book—a wild, magical journey through realms and riddles.

Reviews

[Shabana Mukhtar · Rating 4 out of 5]

The Lost Crown (Paperback)
Non-review rant
I have been reading this for months now. Finally, marked as 'read'.
Review
The plot
I have read plenty of titles with non-indian female and indian male protagonists. This was the first book with a firangi hero and desi heroine. I obviously don't read much.
The plot rests on three pillars - pretending to be engaged (a modified version of contract marriage?) and falling for each other for real, finding a lost crown, and the beautiful city of Jaisalmer.
Detailed review to come.
The characters

Deiva Chauhan
Dr Ryan Johnson
Christian Willis

The good




The bad




General observations about story and writer



Verdict

[Viswa Pilla · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is one of the best adventure books I have read so far as it stands out with its unique combination of romance, adventure, thriller and fantasy. The narration is brilliant and detailed; it lets you visualize every scene immaculately which makes this read even more magical. Ryan, an archaeologist from London, who loves challenges, visits India with his friend Christian in search of the lost crown of Jaisalmer that leads to a series of escapades which also includes his contract marriage with a beautiful Indian lady, Deiva. But finding the crown is not an easy task as many men had failed to do so earlier which made the very existence of the crown dubious, and the rest of the story goes about how the trio; Ryan, Deiva, Christian, try to unearth it. I loved Ryan for his grit and attitude. The romance between Ryan and Deiva was beautifully portrayed by the author; I loved the part where Ryan stole his first kiss from Deiva, it was steaming hot. Their chemistry was developed very well.
This book is a cocktail of Indiana Jones and Lara Croft Tomb Raider topped with its own unique ingredients; trust me, you will love every sip of it, quenching your thirst for adventure, but it also leaves you with a high wanting for more. I look forward to future books by La Kayshal.

[Sreehari Sreehari · Rating 5 out of 5]

The lost crown is an action packed novel where there is no waiting for the action to begin. Right from the beginning the novel reels us into archaeologist Ryan's adventurous search for the lost crown. And then when the reader is thrilled to the limits with the suspense and mystery surrounding the history of a kingdom in India, off comes Deiva with a romance so powerful and entertaining that it becomes impossible to stop reading even for a short while. At the end it will be very difficult for anyone to answer the question of what was more enjoyable-the adrenaline rushing search for a lost historical artefact or the totally gratifying romance, that till the end never fails to leave behind a feel of in need of more.

[Gounvi · Rating 5 out of 5]

Interesting piece of work. Has it all mystery, suspense, adventure, love and romance.

[Rachel Wright · Rating 5 out of 5]

A wonderfully charming adventure in exotic India with a heady mix of royalty, magic and villainy.

Archaeologist Ryan Johnson travels to India with his crazy friend Christian to look for the Lost Crown, a valuable relic that has been missing for hundreds of years from the royal family. Ryan runs into trouble with the beautiful Devia, who is the daughter of the King’s aid, almost as soon as he arrives and things become complicated when her father asks him to act as her fiancé in order to avoid an arranged marriage requested by the King. As their search for the crown leads them on a crazy adventure reminiscent of Raiders of the Lost Ark, Devia and Ryan are forced closer and although there is chemistry between them, there are also heated arguments. They battle against an evil villain as they follow an intricate web of clues across the kingdom and their lives and those of their families are put at risk as they get closer to their goal.

This is an entertaining and imaginative story which is fast paced and keeps you turning the pages to follow the characters as they encounter dangerous traps, magic and bandits on their quest for the crown. It’s is well written and the characters are intriguing, especially the feisty Devia who gives Ryan a run for his money. A fantastic holiday read which will leave you looking for more from this author.

[Debbie · Rating 4 out of 5]

The Lost Crown is an action-adventure/romance novel set in modern-day India. It tells the story of two young English Archaeologists, Ryan and Christian, who set off to the village of Jaisalmer to find a valuable mystical crown that had mysteriously vanished after the death of its owner 900 years prior and had never been found.
After his arrival in Jaisalmer, it isn’t long before Ryan (literally) bumps into Deiva, a head-strong half-English, half-Indian beauty. In spite of their strong attraction for one another, these two main protagonists have difficulty getting along; both being plain too stubborn to admit their mutual attraction. Stuck together in the royal palace where Deiva’s father is employed as the personal assistant to the King, Deiva offers to assist Ryan in finding the missing crown in exchange for his assistance in helping her avoid an arranged marriage to the King’s lustful nephew. As time passes and danger from those who would thwart their mission builds, Ryan and Deiva discover they can no longer resist their feelings for one another and a strong bond develops between the two former antagonists.
With lots of action and adventure reminiscent of Indiana Jones and fiery romance that may bring to mind Scarlett O’Hara and Rhett Butler (but with more spicy passion), The Lost Crown is an entertaining yarn that will keep you up reading into the wee hours of the night, turning the pages, just itching to discover what might happen next.

[Amy Walsh · Rating 5 out of 5]

A Romantic and Suspenseful Treasure Hunt

This book was well-written, fascinating, and imaginative. I enjoyed the struggle between the main characters as they fought their feelings. The details of secret passage ways, hidden clues, and archeological treasures were well thought out and beautifully described. If you liked Lara Croft, National Treasure, or Indiana Jones, you will enjoy this book.

[Samantha Evans · Rating 5 out of 5]

First of all...What a beautiful cover. It had me interested right from the very beginning! A treasure hunt beyond intensity! Ryan and Devia are such amazing characters that so much developed between the both of them all throughout the book. Both of them want to look for the same thing. Suspense and romance are the common genres you see all throughout the book. In a way reminds me of a story you would see in Indiana Jones. This is well done, and I hope to see more from this author!

[Mr Charles · Rating 5 out of 5]

A great young adult adventure


The Lost Crown is a great young adult adventure, story. A good old fashioned tale of archaeology, passion and romance. The author has even managed to slip in magic along the way.
I enjoyed the well-written characters. Apart from a slow start, the action never lets up. It

[Jessi · Rating 5 out of 5]

adventure

A great story with history and thrill must get if your a fan of adventure books. I enjoyed reading this book!

[Shelly Roberts · Rating 5 out of 5]

Will they survive to find it?

Great characters with intrigue and interest. What a twist put upon Ryan at the beginning that leads to frantic hunt filled with lies, thefts, boobytraps, and murder(?).Can the team find the crown? Or will they die trying? Only you can find out by reading to the end.

[A. Cely · Rating 5 out of 5]

Handsome archaeologist, Ryan Johnson, takes us on colorful trip to India in search of the Lost Crown of King Jaisimha. His search is deliciously interrupted by the daughter of the personal assistant of the king, the beautiful Deiva. She has some plans of her own regarding Ryan. He becomes her ticket out of an arranged marriage and it does not hurt that he is hot and single. The author also includes fun secondary characters like Christian, Ryan's best friend, and his parents. All of them are in search of this exotic treasure that is surrounded by magic and mystery. This is a page turner that I could not put down. The Lost Crown is a must read! 5/5 all the way!!!

[Chelsea Kong · Rating 5 out of 5]

Interesting story to tell

This book is a interesting book to read and unexpected story of two different cultures in how they meet and connect.

[Yelena Bosh · Rating 3 out of 5]

Looking for a mystery treasure but having to "endure" some obstacles on his way there.. The Lost Crown had/was everything.

Adventure.

Mystery.

Action.

Romance.

Commanding dialogue.

Unique.

Fun.

Beautifully written.

The beginning was captivating and in a different way than most books that I've read, it made me immediately want to know what happens next. I couldn't flip through the pages fast enough.

I loved the overall concept of the story.

Set in India meant that it was a new setting that I have yet to read that much of. The author was beautifully able to capture some of the more exotic and extravagant places within the streets but also on the inside. With that, La Kayshal was also contradicting the beauty with that of the inside tunnels and many other aspects of certain relationship within the story, which were not so colourful. I felt that was a great touch and a refreshing idea.

Hoping I don't spoil anything since it is in the synopsis, the "fake/pretend" marriage was an interesting addition to what I expected to be a simple mystery, adventure romance. It added to the already fun aspect in Ryan looking for the Lost Crown.

The way the "marriage" was introduced and all the way to how it was developing later on, truly showed the relationship between Ryan and Deiva.

I can't say that their relationship was a happy one to begin with since neither of them fell head over heels for the other. BUT it was fun to read the dialogue and mindful narrative between those two.

At the same time that Ryan & Deiva realise what their feelings for one another mean to them, and how it increases in certain ways, we also get to realise that even though they might have a love/hate perspective towards each other, their attraction is obvious.

What I wasn't a huge fan of or did no necessarily like, was the often over descriptive narration that I thought would not be evident throughout the entire story. But it was. I was trying to overlook that part because I genuinely liked the main characters (particularly Ryan) and the way the story was evolving - but at times little too strong.

It often took away from being engrossed within the created world and it sometimes dragged on..

However, even though I was tempted to skip a paragraph or two due to the describing of a certain room, landscape or specific décor, I knew that it would be an important part to fully understanding the story. So in essence, it added to the story but in my personal point of view, it wasn't the best way to make me absolutely love a story.

I often find that the best of mystery/adventure stories, are those that are written to keep the reader at the edge of their sits and not for one second blink away from the fictional world. The Lost Crown was a great example of that BUT it just lucked the addictive aspect of needing rather than wanting to know exactly what will happen next.

Aside from that, the relationship between Christian & Ryan was a fun way to have two friends journey though an unknown country (from London to --> India). Christian was not there just to merely fill in the best friend or sidekick role. No. He was funny, sweet and very cleaver in his reasoning and persuading certain actions..

So yeah, I was so happy and grateful that I was able to read a beautiful book in return for an honest review!

The Lost Crown by La Kayshal is a definite recommendation. If you want to learn a little bit more or even something completely new about a different culture then this is for you. If you want an adventure and mystery filled book to the very last page, this one is for you. And if you enjoy beautifully explained architecture and fun characters but a romantic/sexy edge between the "married couple"? Then you definitely need to read this one!

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[Mike Jones · Rating 5 out of 5]

This novel is great. The plot was well thought out. The characters are well rounded and realistic. Dialogue is quick. It has a bit of an Allan Quatermain or Indiana Jones feel about it, which I loved. If you enjoy adventure and romance, you'll enjoy this book.
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[M.L. Rosado · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Lost Crown is a roller coaster ride full of mystery, magic, romance and intrigue. Ryan Johnson is a hot archaeologist/lecturer that finds himself in an adventure of a lifetime. With his best friend Christian by his side, he decides to visit India and look for the lost crown of King Jaisimha. He never expected the whirlwind of adventures that would lie ahead. By a simple twist of fate, he meets Deiva Chauhan, and Indian beauty that intrigues and captures his heart. Between an arranged marriage, an archenemy, a lost treasure, magical creatures and sorcery, Ryan gets tangled in an unbelievable ride. The author is also successful in making India and it's traditions come to life in this book. The picturesque descriptions painted a perfect picture in my mind of the beautiful surroundings in the story. 5 stars for LA Kayshal! The Lost Crown is a must read.

[Rajesh Kumar · Rating 5 out of 5]

The lost crown, as the name suggests, this story revolves around the search for a  long lost crown of great values and magical powers. But not all can understand the perseverance shown by Ryan Johnson, the main lead that many of us with abundance of curiosity can connect with. It is a duty expressing how sometimes we human come across the impossible but yet pledge to reverse it to being possible. Based on an Indian culture by a foreign writer, the book The Lost Crown introduces us to the fact that a true writer can adopt to creativity being miles away. The author La Kayshal entertains the reader with her beautiful narrative techniques displaying an assorted number of themes such as magic, power, culture, treasure, greed. Nonetheless, as it is famously quoted 'behind every successful man there is a woman' and thus Ryan Johnson not only solves the mystery of lost crown but also finds the love of his life &  her support during the process. An entertaining read.

[Pratikshya Mishra · Rating 4 out of 5]

The narration is fast paced- either the action raises a great deal of curiosity and immense thrill or the scene changes every two pages. Take my word there won’t be a single instance that you’d get bored. There’s a lot of adventure and chase involved throughout the novel. The treasure hunt and the guessing game is interesting; with a hint of magic and the old Indian architecture it takes you through secret passages, tunnels, hidden gateways, dark labyrinths, deserts, camel rides, royal weddings and almost the whole culture cauldron of Rajasthan.



And there’s romance between the unusual leads- British archaeologist Ryan, who has so much interest in Indian lost artifacts and Deiva, cultured Indian maiden born and brought up in palaces who wants to seek freedom and escape the restrictions imposed on her but nonetheless is proud of her roots. Certain subtleties of Indian way of life, way of expressing deeper feelings and hiding vulnerabilities is brought about well by the author. Decisions which come naturally to our western counterpart may be too difficult for us to take. Take perspective is brought about well here through the character of Deiva in her monologues.



This book can be made into a hit Bollywood movie. It would really make a worthy adaptation with so good a plot, feisty heroine, inquisitive hero, and a stereotyped villain- all as per our liking. And talking about the book- once you start reading, you’re going to end it. You won’t be able to leave it in the middle. Every chapter leaves a mystery and is well connected with the other chapter; so the curiosity is too high to let you stop reading altogether.


It’s a standalone book. My rating-4/5 stars. And I thank La for providing me an ebook in return for an honest review.

[Igor Eliseev · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved The Lost Crown, a beautifully written archaeological and romantic fiction novel that reeled me in and kept me interested. This is a story of warm and sincere love, magical adventures, fascinating structures and monuments, great lovable characters, good story line and remarkable ending. I was captivated from the beginning to the very end. The author’s attention to even haunting beauty of Indian culture mixed with the lost artifacts, deserts, camel rides, tunnels and dark labyrinths transported me to a time and place of the not-too-distant past where I felt I was caught up in the events going on all around me.
And what is more important, this is a true love story that deals with real obstacles made me fall in love with India… all over again. I had a friend from India, and he told me that he didn’t know a single Indian who didn’t dream of returning to India, and now I understand the real meaning of his words.
Thoroughly enjoyed this book.

[Pascal's scriptures · Rating 5 out of 5]

The storyline is interesting and it gets better with every page.
It grabbed my attention from a get-go when Ryan bumped into Deiva while he was on his expedition to search for the lost crown.
And from there it was love on first sight.
If you're into archeological movies then this book is definitely for you.
The grammar is flawless, you will enjoy it.

[Regina Timothy · Rating 5 out of 5]

An intriguing story that combines romance, adventure and fantasy.

The Lost Crown follows two archeologists Ryan Johnson and Christian Willis from London to India in search of a lost artifact, presumably a crown, which is hidden somewhere in the palace in Jaisalmer, India.

In India, Ryan inadvertently finds himself saddled with a wife Deiva, who has a unique access qualification to help him find the lost crown, an artifact that has been sought by many but still proves to be elusive. As their search for the crown progresses, so does the romance between the two.

The Lost Crown is an entertaining and action packed story that is full of humor, well written to vividly capture the essence of the story and keep the reader glued to the pages

[D. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Better than Bollywood!

An intriguing adventure full of love, lust, and lost treasure. I found myself grinning like a fool as I read The Lost Crown. I couldn't help but laugh aloud and squeal in delight as I read Deiva and Ryan's interactions. I love that they are both strong-willed characters who have to learn to give a little for love to blossom. I had fully planned to read only one chapter to start, but found myself pushing all of my priorities aside just to find out what happened next.

The prose style is easy to follow and fast-paced (to my relief!)

As a lover of Bollywood, I long for this book to be made into a movie.

[Camaliya · Rating 5 out of 5]

I felt like I was watching Harrison Ford's Indiana Jones or shall I say Nicholas Cage's National treasure series. To add on to all the suspense and mystery was the sizzling classic romance. An amazing Hollywood and Bollywood Combo! Yeah an interesting book it is.

[Adam · Rating 3 out of 5]

Glad to have won this ARC from Goodreads. A fun read. Thanks, La Kayshal!

[Beth Pieprzica · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a fun read! An Indiana Jones themed plot with twists and turns.

[G.L. Cramb · Rating 4 out of 5]

Love entwined in a deadly archeological pursuit

Fated lovers meet in an exotic Indian locale and the adventure begins. The premise will pull lovers of the genre in and send them on a chase as the characters of the tale spar in both the romantic sense as well as a cultural sense. The male and female leads are a little to perfect for the real world, but are custom made for this tale of a treasure hunt mixing modern Indian royalty still steeped in custom with an Indiana Jones style archeologist and his wingman.

Throw in some twists and turns and romps in the desert sands, the perfect villian, and a little intriguing magic and you get a fun read. I found the dialogue just a tad unrealistic and story lacking a bit of desired 'Show' in favor of keeping the pace, but a strong ⭐⭐⭐⭐ in spite of it. Admittedly, I'm not a romance junky, but the action alone kept me turning pages.

[P.G.R. G. R. Wright · Rating 5 out of 5]

Romantic Adventure

Oh what a fantastic tale this is as you follow Ryan on his quest to find the lost crown. Unfortunately, it isn't a simple task, his adventure becomes even more complicated as he meets Devia. As they try and put the pieces together of the lost crown, with their chemistry of the scale as they try and overcome villains. I wanted to keep reading as the clues and mysterious things kept happening. I enjoyed the character Christian, Ryans' eccentric friend. I thought the writing of India was very good and very descriptive. I highly recommend this action-packed adventurous book.

[Marcelle Valentine · Rating 4 out of 5]

The Lost Crown

Little did Ryan Johnson know that the simple act of slipping into a pool could have life-changing consequences. Enter Deiva Chauhan, a woman determined not to let tradition stop her from doing what is in her heart; independence, education, a chance at a life she has chosen. While searching for the treasured lost crown in Jaisalmer, Deiva and Ryan quickly discovered sometimes the path you wanted is not the best path for you. The Lost Crown has romance, magic, and treasure.

[Gauri Mittal · Rating 5 out of 5]

It is an engaging read which piques one's interest from the beginning and holds it.

[Tia Dhar · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was a nice, fun-filled adventure through Jaisalmer with archaeologist Ryan, his friend Christian and Deiva. The writing engages you enough to make you feel like you’re present right there !