3.75 stars, August 30, 2008
MY THOUGHTS: I took out 1.25 stars because the hero, Nick, was a bit of a bastard! SPOILERS ALERT. The story is Rachel, 18, helps a pregnant woman who is giving birth early. The woman turns out to be the hero's sister. I kinda missed how old Nick was but earlier in the book Rachel think he looks late 20's/early 30's. Of course, they are attracted to each other and if I'm not mistaken after 3 days they sleep together. And its after the deed that Nick turns into a bastard. I know bastard is a harsh word but he was just so mean to her! Supposedly, Nick is pissed off because he thought Rachel was experienced (she was a virgin) and he thinks that she is trying to trap him in to marriage with a possible child. Ok, so Nick does have a reason for being a bastard - he was an adopted child and supposedly his evil mother tried to trap his rich biological father when she got pregnant with Nick. It didn't work and at three years old, Nick's mother gives him up for adoption since she had no use for him anymore. Oh by the way, Nick is a world renowned, rich, famous tennis player. Of course we also have our villain, Suzy and man she was SUCH a bitch and caused a lot of trouble between them! Thankfully, Nick never slept with her yay! So throughout the marriage Nick would keep throwing accusations at Rachel, etc. etc. just basically mentally, emotionally hurting her. Of course, they both couldn't deny their bodies desires, so that wasn't a problem 0_0 I guess if I tried to look closely I could sorta see that Nick needs/loves Rachel, but you gotta REALLY pay close attention, sheesh.. And for the life of me, I don't know why Rachel discovered that she loved him while Nick was treating her so cruelly. As for Rachel, I applaud her. Even though she was young, she was a bit feisty and in some instances, held her own with Nick. Unfortunately, she didnt hold her own with that evil villain, Suzy. Rachel was even to strong enough to walk out on her marriage (yep, she did!) Since Harlequin Presents have a designated 188 pages, they skipped the two years were they were separated. Yeah, Rachel and Nick got separated for two years, and Rachel had Nick's child - of course, Nick doesn't know. But during this time, Nick finally grows up, and realizes he truly loves and misses Rachel and asks her back. Thankfully, Nick does a bit of groveling and even throws away all his pride and says he is willing to share Rachel with her other man, Matthew, wink wink. I'm sure you can guess who Matthew is. Anyway, thats good cause I dislike those romance novels where the hero is such a super bastard and the heroine just takes him back immediately or the hero doesn't even bother super duper trying to ask for her forgiveness, etc. etc. Anyway, I obviously liked the book since this is such a long review, but took of a few points because of the mean hero. =P