Let’s start with the typos and grammar mistakes. There are MANY. I can usually overlook the typos and grammar if the story was engaging but guess what? The story was not engaging.
Edie is a two dimensional, unlikeable character that only thinks of herself throughout the entire book. She always jumps to conclusions, she is whiney, she smart mouths to just about everybody, suspicious of everyone and thinks nobody knows how to do their job except her. She always has to have the last word no matter how immature is it, and gets butt hurt when people are rude to her.
***SPOILERS***
I didn’t like that Edie just started assuming Ben her boss was the killer. Even though the police said his alibi was verifiable, she finds out Ben lives in the apartment over the tavern and he is immediately again a suspect in her book. She sneaks into his apartment. And of course Ben catches her.
The storyline is predictable. There is no twists and turns.
And if Edie truly believes Ben is the killer, why did she tell him she hears spirits? And when she tells him she hears spirits, Ben says “why don’t you ask the ghosts if they know who the killer is”. Edie ignores him. Ben goes to his office, and Edie thinks “why don’t she ask the ghosts if they saw anything”. And Edie goes so far as to think “why didn’t I think of that before?” Like she was the one who first thought of it, not Ben. *smh*
She even runs her smart mouth to her best friend Jessica and hurts her, and doesn’t care.
What made me want to stop reading the rest of the book was when Ben and Edie got into yet another fight. She of course is running her mouth, he finally has enough and tells her the Tavern is HIS, not HERS, She is his employee and that her family couldn’t keep up with the tavern and lost it. He was just telling her the truth and Edie’s mouth just falls open in shock and then, she starts calling Ben names. He FINALLY FIRES HER. And it’s of no surprise that Edie is shocked and how dare he fired her??! Than the tavern is falling apart without Edie, that the only waitress left is Tia and Tia is wailing like she lost a loved one so close to her. Tia was mentioned to be a new employee at the Tavern. Tia and Edie barely spoke three words to each other before this. Why is Tia wailing and crying and carrying on so much? If the author wanted us to think Edie and Tia had a very close relationship and were such good friends, then she should of written more scenes with them two or tell us in the book they were great friends, but the author didn’t, so the scene made no sense to me. Then, Ben calls Edie and begs Edie to come back cause he couldn’t run the Tavern without her. He even gave her a raise….
Did I mention this book was predictable?
It got to the point that I didn’t care who the killer was.
When I got to chapters 17,18,19 (the last three chapters in the story) the writing seemed to of changed. Yes, still had typos and grammar mistakes but Edie was written to be more tolerable. Either the author got better so quickly or the chapters were written by someone else. I do not know. The writing just flowed differently.
Positives about the book:
Author got better towards the end of the book.
There is a story here, a beginning, middle and end.
The ghosts and Poe were written very well.
Easy, light hearted, clean read.
Cons:
Edie the main character has a smart mouth, I’m better than you attitude; didn’t care to much for it. I think the author was trying to make Edie look like a smart, fierce, independent lady. But she only made Edie seem childish, mean, self-fish, a smart mouth with no respect for authority.
There is nothing I can write that I liked about Edie. I could not relate to her. Edie is a weak character and needs work.
Typos and grammar mistakes throughout the entire book. Fire your editor.
I would of given the book 3 stars but I just couldn't get past Edie's attitude.
I received an advanced copy to read and this is my honest review.