Dragon Web Online: Dominion

Electric Shadows #2

by S.R. Witt

Being the Saint of Shadows is murder...
I used to be an ordinary thief, but now I'm the most wanted man in the world's most popular virtual reality game: Dragon Web Online.
A simple quest to shake down a crooked merchant landed me in the middle of a deadly conspiracy. Now I'm on the run from bloodthirsty nightspawn killers, ruthless bounty hunters, and a fanatical priesthood. Did I mention I can't even trust my own brother?
Fortunately, I've got a plan that can save my hide—if it doesn't get me killed.

Dragon Web Online: Dominion, continues the thrilling LitRPG adventure of the Saint of Shadows. Snag it now and get a bonus LitRPG tale for free!

793 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 24, 2017

Reviews

[Travis · Rating 3 out of 5]

I really hope this author gets a better writer for his what this book is about text, because the text on the contents of this book isn't any better on this one than it was on the first book. At least with this book, the whole reasoning became clear in the last few paragraphs, but claiming that the whole book was about what occurs in the last couple pages barely qualifies as accurate, and if you're a purist, you could even argue that evne then, it didn't actually fulfill the blurb promise even then, since it stopped before anyone actually discovered what was done. Really, the author needs someone else to write his descriptive texts, because if this continues as a trend, I can't imagine most folks who pick up the book to read it are going to be happy when they complete it only to discover it's not about that at all.
Bah. The story isn't bad, in fact, it's quite good, but if you go into it, expecting a story about the cover blurb, you will be sadly disappointed. However, if you ignore that, and just read it for the story itself, you will probably be very happy with the results. I liked the story well enough, I just like to read about what the book claims I'm supposed to be reading about. -1 star for lack of accurate description.

[Asbjørn Bjelland · Rating 3 out of 5]

Was it even proofread?

Story itself was worth 4 stars, but all the double words, words injected where they don't belong and wrong names being used should drag it down to 2 stars but feel story earns atleast 3.
I read many unedited stories posted online and even provided proofreading for one, but even that felt better then this, and I had to pay to read this.........