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313 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 31, 2017
He swallowed the large mouthful of eggs. They went down like a camel swallowing a porcupine. (139)
The pose sent a chuckle coursing through my body like a hamster in a tube maze suffering from PTSD. (180)These comparisons were just two of many that frequently made me question what I just read and completely took me out of the novel. I suppose every common turn of phrase sounded weird the first time it was ever used, and maybe Kincade is simply trying to invent some of his own, but I think he went a little overboard.