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Dati Amon wants to be free from his satyr master and he hates his job—hunting human children who display demon balefire. Every hunt has been successful, except one. A thwarted attempt ended up as a promise to spare the child of a white witch, an indiscretion Dati hopes Master never discovers.

But Master has devilish machinations of his own. He needs human-demon hybrids, the Daimonion, to raise the Dark Lord to the earthly realm. If Master succeeds, he will be immortal and far more powerful.

The child who was spared is now a man, and for the first time in three hundred years, Dati has a reason to escape Master’s chains. To do that, Dati makes some unlikely alliances with an untrained soulless witch, a self-destructive shape shifter, and a deceitful clairvoyant. However, deals with demons rarely go as planned, and the cost is always higher than the original bargain.

330 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 10, 2017

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J.P. Jackson

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J.P. Jackson is an award winning author of dark urban fantasy, paranormal, and even paranormal romance stories, but regardless of the genre they always feature LGBTQ+ main characters.

J.P. works as an IT analyst in health care during the day, where if cornered he’d confess to casting spells to ensure clinicians actually use the electronic medical charting system he configures and implements.

At night, the writing happens, where demons, witches and shape shifters congregate around the kitchen table and general chaos ensues. His husband of 22 years has very firmly put his foot down on any further wraith summonings and regularly lines the doorway with iron shavings and salt crystals. Imps are most definitely not house-trainable. Ghosts appear at the most inopportune times, and the Fae are known for regular visits where a glass of wine is exchanged for a good ole story or two. Although the husband doesn’t know it, Canela and Jalisco, the two Chihuahuas, are in cahoots with the spell casting.

J.P.’s other hobbies include hybridizing African Violets (thanks to grandma), extensive travelling and believe it or not, knitting.

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1,556 reviews174 followers
July 16, 2017
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This is one interesting story. There is action aplenty and a world of diverse supernatural beings who are flawed but intriguing. While the characters haven’t quite been able to grab me fully, and I can’t say I love any character in particular, the para/fantasy story pulled me in and I’m really fascinated to see what they do and where they take me next. It is so hard to find quality paranormal/ fantasy reading of the queer variety, especially ones that are fascinating and whisper dark promises of things to come like Daimonion does, so I am grateful when authors come out with books like this.

J P Jackson shows a ton of promise in his first book and I really liked the world he has weaved in Daimonion. I’d love to see him settle down into a comfortable groove and take his time with character and overall relationship development – no matter what kind of relationship. It’s vitally important to make readers not only want to connect with the world, but want to keep connecting with the characters at the heart of the story. I think the author will produce even better storytelling once that happens. Fun, action packed, deliciously dark, Daimonion is wholly entertaining reading from beginning to end.
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Author 5 books22 followers
July 6, 2017
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"But this is what I am bid to do. I am Dati Amon, a D'Alae, and we gather back the children who belong to us."
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This is a well-executed story of conflict, horror, magic, and desire. Shape-shifters, witches, demons, creepy burrowing insects, elementals, satyrs and even a deliciously evil succubus make for a colourful cast of characters to guide readers through a beautifully described series of paranormal events, culminating in a satisfying end to Book I of the Apocalypse series.

I was most impressed by the skilful manner in which imaginative and unique magical goings-on were described. Certain paranormal tropes and clichés were explored in new and creative ways. Without giving too much away, I was particularly amazed by the wonderful descriptions of what happened to a certain character when encased in a demonic cocoon. Yes - the action and the magic are where words were extremely well spent in this novel! Bravo to the writer!

For me, the characters were solid but they didn't totally engross me. I didn't find myself emotionally invested in any one of them in particular. I enjoyed them well enough, but I didn't find a strong connection that had me dying to see what would happen to any of them in the future. The plot itself had me turning the page though, so this wasn't a major issue overall. I also think that as a reader who doesn't normally read this genre, I'm not quite the correct target audience for this cast of characters. I also suspect that most of the characters have a great deal of development ahead, so the author needed to save some of that for the next book, especially with Jenae.

The story feels well-planned. There's a strong sense that the author knows exactly where it will all lead in the future books, each thread weaved purposefully.

Overall, Daimonion is intriguing, confronting, action-packed, and intense.

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"Perception and assumption ruled the human thought processes, and in their minds, they saw what made them comfortable."
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As I said, I don't usually read horror, so I apologise if my review and rating were coloured by my own natural tastes/preferences.

A few warnings in case they're relevant to anyone: high level of gore and violence (really well written gore, I might add!) and some sexually confronting themes (they're not depictured, but referred to) such as incest.

I was provided with a free ARC in exchange for a review. The author was keen for me to be very honest in my comments.
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Author 17 books34 followers
June 15, 2017
This is an incredible, INCREDIBLE read. I was hooked from the very beginning. The opening line, such a basic thing, just drew me in and I knew I wasn't going to get out of the spell of this book until it was finished.

The characters are smart, sharp, and vivid. Despite the plethora of supernatural beings they all felt so very real to me. I really loved the dynamics between all of the characters--though a few were a little more flat than the others, though that doesn't mean they were by any means two-dimensional.

The plot is gripping. It hit all of its marks as it pulled me along. There was a small moment where it seemed to drag a bit but before I could even start to think . "hey it's dragging" it picked back up and slammed me along until the end, which is probably the finest crafted element of the entire story.

I HIGHLY HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend this book to you all. It's end of the world mayhem and fun for all!
867 reviews1 follower
July 15, 2017
I received an ARC from the author for a challenge.

I give this book 4.5 stars, I may have been a bit more generous in rounding that up because I received a free copy. This is not really something that I would typically read, although I do want to follow the rest of the trilogy for its conclusion now. It was very dark. Told from a first person perspective, occasionally switching characters between clearly marked chapters but not too confusing. Mostly from the perspective of Dati, a demon that harvests children for his dark master. There is a lot of torture, gore, blood, and pain. This is not a light and happy escape of a world. Neither is this erotica. I don't think there was a single, explicit sex scene in the novel. The main characters are gay and attracted to each other, but that is all that makes this a gay novel. I actually appreciate that to some degree and would like to see the author finish the series without including plot irrelevant sex or erotica.

I thought this was a powerful debut novel and look forward to further work from this author, even if it pushes how much darkness I am willing to accept.
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Author 15 books84 followers
July 7, 2017
I was gifted an ARC for an honest and fair review.

Daimonion is many things. The first book in The Apocalypse trilogy, a debut novel, and a blood-spattered, gory quest for one demon who struggles with the whole “killing kids” thing. The book is told in the first person, and has more than one protagonist, but it works because they are each given a chapter, clearly marked. This can go horribly wrong, but not in this case.

Dati is the main character, a demon who is a bit hapless, to be honest. Despite his his job description, he seems to have a human side, which gets him into all sorts of trouble, especially when he tries to save one special person who eventually ends up in a cocoon. He just seems to have the kiss of death about him, but I liked him because he was obviously struggling with unfamiliar feelings. Obsession, rather than love, but for a demon, it’s a start….

I couldn’t fault the writing at all. There were no faltering mis-steps at any stage, so I felt I was in good hands, which was essential as urban fantasy horror is not a genre I’m familiar with. I usually like my horror to to have a human heart, allbeit one that has been dragged across a gravel road, still beating. This was unfamiliar and it took me a few pages to really get into it. But I did because the author has obviously had a huge amount of fun, throwing in satyrs, vampyres (not sparkly ones), shape-shifters and blood-thirsty demons, and a succubus so sexy I almost fancied her myself.

At first, I thought I was going to miss the human set-up before realising that it was there, but told from the demon’s side, something I’ve never experienced before. The most memorable human was the girl, untrained witch, Jenae, also a stroppy teenager, which I loved. Her voice was en pointe, a thoroughly modern witch, without resorting to stereotype. The dialogue was sharp and there was a lot of humour, but not in a slapstick way. The book didn’t take itself too seriously, as some of these books about an imminent Apocalypse can be. The bombastic horror is inescapable, but balanced with a lightness of touch. It’s an interesting concept and a risky one, but it works.

One quibble would be that the plot was slightly confusing, as books with lots of characters and unfamiliar names always are (to me.) With first books, there is a tendency to throw in the kitchen sink, just in case you never write another one, and I sensed an element of that, even though the book is part of a trilogy. Now that everyone has been introduced, it will be really interesting to see how the plot develops. With a less frantic pace, the reader will have more breathing space to sit back, relax and enjoy.

As well as the icky parts, the descriptions were fantastic, steeping the reader in a post-modern, urban world with utter conviction. Monster dogs, magic, creatures of fantasy move around an indeterminate city, scenes of torture are gut-twisting but never seem gratuitous. The characters all had some element which kept them from being unsympathetic, apart from Master, who is badass (but then, he has to be…) Alyx, Dati’s potential/possible love interest, did get more interesting as the book unfolded, as well as Dati’s inner conflict over unfamiliar feelings for him.

To round up, this is a steaming, visceral debut novel for those who like their urban fantasy steeped in blood and gore, and demons wrestling with human dilemmas.
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Author 8 books68 followers
June 30, 2017
If you are into dark urban fantasy, this is bound to become one of your favorite books this year.
Demons, white witches, shape shifters, guard dogs made of stone and what not, thrown in a magic cauldron from where J.P. Jackson pulls the threads to entwine this action packed story. You'd think a demon planing to destroy the world is cliched but this book will make you think again because even though it is a known topic, the new ways it is explored makes it really intriguing.
Many points of view are intertwined, giving a more realistic, 3D feel to the whole plot.
On the downside, I couldn't really connect with any of the characters except Dati. I guess they were just not the types I like reading about.
However, even at the times when my interest in particular voice or occurrence was lowered, I kept reading because of the writing style. It was by far the thing that stood out for me. The descriptions of settings, characters and actions are so masterful you'd never guess this is a debut novel.
I'm sure that the adventures of the whole cast of characters would be even more intriguing in the second book.

*I was given an ARC of this book in exchange for a honest review.*
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Author 20 books194 followers
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Author 13 books102 followers
July 16, 2017
**I received an ARC in exchange for a fair and honest review**

Horror is not usually my genre, but I had so much gleeful, dark fun reading DAIMONION that I didn't care. J. P Jackson has created a kind of neutral evil Scooby Gang that is an absolute blast to get to know.  

I immediately developed a soft spot for Dati Amon, the D'Alae, a winged demon. He serves a mysterious, vile creature who holds part of his soul captive. Dati's mutual obsession with Alyx, a dark young man he should have harvested as a child for his Master, is doomed from the start, it seems, but Alyx has a larger destiny that neither he nor Dati can escape. They band together with a group of other creatures of shadow who bicker, bitch and reluctantly form a cadre of supernatural soldiers who might be able to bring down their Master, and regain their freedom.  Can't wait to read the next one!
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Author 2 books19 followers
June 30, 2017
**I received an ARC in exchange for a honest review**

To start off, I will preface by saying I don't normally read this sort of book - demons, paranormal fantasy, etc - so bear that in mind. :)

The creative elements in this book are really top notch, populated with a cast of characters that thrill, entrance, and intrigue. I mean, there's a sexy bestial satyr with a large penis, dark witches and healers, stone guard dogs, and spells, magic, and demons everywhere! If this sounds like the kind of elements you like, then "Daimonion" delivers! As you can see from other readers, there is no shortage of action and throw-downs between magical characters and creatures. The world-building is full of fun intersections between genre-typed characters, many introduced in fun and fresh ways, such as werewolves and vampires. Overall, this book is a very creative and fun read!

However, in contrast to these really excellent portrayals, I found most of the secondary characters more interesting than the Master (nemesis) and love interest, Alyx, and sometimes more than the main character. I especially didn't care for the "instant" magnetic attraction and constant dwelling on "that super hot guy" - it's a trope that really annoys me. Then switching into his actual POV irritated me, I found him really boring in comparison to Dati's story line. Overall, I just didn't feel the love angle was compelling. Again, a lot of this could be me (I'm also not a big romance reader) so take that with as much salt as you want.

There were also parts of the narrative that seemed to wander and I found myself confused at certain points in the plot development. I will say the central plot itself was compelling and it unfolded in complex and layered ways. I never felt as though I "knew" what was going to happen in advance. I'll leave it at that, because too much more and we veer into spoiler territory.

Demons, fantasy, magic, oh my!
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9,092 reviews518 followers
July 27, 2017
A Joyfully Jay review.

3.5 stars


The plot of the story, as evidenced from the series name, lets us know that there’s going to be a bit of a slog through the muck and the mire to the end of the book. Apocolypses are rarely happy events, after all, and this one — shaped by Silenus and the elemental witch, Aradia — took a sharp left away from happy town and headed all the way into darkness and despair. And that’s a good thing. The author has a vivid imagination and the world building in this story is a mix of mythology, horror tropes, and a nice spin on witchcraft. The pods, the skin shifters, the various demons were all creative and interesting. Unfortunately, when it came to the primary focus of the story, the ideas were better than the execution. For example, Dati and his demon.

By all accounts, from Dati and Marta and even Silenus, Dati is a demon, but he doesn’t seem to think of himself that way. If he came from Hell — but did he? — he’d be familiar with Satan, demons, and evil. The impression I receive through reading is that Dati isn’t from Hell. But… he isn’t from earth, either? He’s fascinated with humans and their rituals and refers to his demon self as his other self. There’s a problem with that, as though Dati doesn’t quite know what he is. Either that or he’s simply not sharing it with the reader, but we aren’t given enough details in the story to be able to figure it out. By calling on his demon powers he gains wings, a tail, claws, and strength and speed. Without his demon half is… human? Human looking? And why is it a demon half? Is he a D’Alae or not? There is so much about Dati left unanswered and I think that was a mistake, considering that his are the eyes through which we are primarily introduced to the story.

Read Elizabeth’s review in its entirety here.

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Author 13 books52 followers
January 13, 2020
This felt like the beginning of something greater, the opening of a supernatural epic, where all the elements are put into place, squirming around and crying, yet struggling to reach out to each other in the middle of their torment, much like the characters themselves. Caught in a web woven by cruel masters without regard for those caught in the strands, the trapped are forced to wiggle their way out, with no guarantee there is a way out. With each wiggle, a little more character, details of what and who they are, what they wish for, and the world they had to snatch it from are revealed. That world involved a detailed demonic bestiary, vampires, witches, gods, and devils whom emerge from the conflict and the struggle. Much of this struggle was told from the perspective of Dati, ages-old captive of a cruel master grown weary of the world’s wickedness, along with Alyx, mysterious vessel of desire and doom, whom becomes Dati’s hope and salvation through the bonds they forge together. Other voices are heard throughout the narrative, including Jenae’s, a fledgling witch equally caught in the web of supernatural machinations and some of the villains, whom reveal tantalizing bits of their plans, yet not too much. What is explicit are the methods these villains use to control those they’re using to execute those plans, shown and felt in graphic, bloody, flesh-ripping detail which may evoke faintness of heart. These gory scenes provided a striking contrast to the sweeter moments, such as the description of a fall day which the protagonists experience together, all the more lovely and fragile for the nightmarish world they’re trapped within. There’s some powerful imagery within these pages, often grotesque, yet at times beautiful. This gives a visceral depth to the world and the conflict their creator shapes. Both appear to be on the verge of growing, developing further, and getting bigger. I look forward to seeing what they’ll become.
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Author 30 books128 followers
July 21, 2017
Background: JP Jackson is a Canadian author of LGBT fantasy and horror, and Daimonion (released 10th July 2017) is his first full length novel. Outside this, he also appears in NineStar Press’s ‘Into The Mystic’ anthology, due for release on 31st July 2017.
Daimonion tells the story of Dati Amon, a demon tasked with hunting down children that hold latent demon blood. After a botched job some years ago, Dati finds himself reunited with the man the child he failed to retrieve has now become, and things are about to get very complicated. Dati’s Master has plans in mind, and dark schemes have been set in motion. The question is, can a series of unlikely alliances gain Dati his freedom?
The Good: As this is a book about a demon, it seems logical to talk about the demons that appear in the book first. I cannot stress enough how much work has clearly been done in terms of this. In some instances, such as with Dati, the author has created whole new species. In other cases, he has taken more commonly recognised character types, such as witches and shapeshifters, and given them a new spin. This combination ensures that the book has an eminently fresh feel to it rather than simply treading familiar floorboards in terms of setting.
But how do the demons come across as characters? Well, Dati is a surprisingly sympathetic lead. The superb opening chapter really sets the tone for the character, and gives us a clear glimpse of the internal conflict that he feels when out on a job. As the book progresses, we also get to see him struggle with his nature, strive to set himself free of servitude, and forge friendships with a myriad of unlikely allies. Of all the characters in the novel, he is by far my favourite, and is certainly the one that is given the most time to develop. That’s not to say that the other characters are abandoned in this respect though, and the young witch Jenae in particular is an interesting addition to the series.
Praise also needs to be given to JP Jackson’s ability to create vivid images of the magical aspects of the world. Demonic transformations, magical conflicts and the different forms that the characters take are all described in such a way that it’s hard not to get a clear picture in your head.
The book breezes by as well, and you’re unlikely to find any moments where you’re bored or wanting to skip ahead. This is a definite positive for me, and one that made it very easy to read through quite quickly. Any book that lets you get that easily lost within has plenty going for it in my eyes.
The Bad: This is a tough one to broach as the only things that I could view as relatively negative with the book are such that they won’t be detractors for everyone. Case in point, the clear pictures that the writing throws up for you may be problematic for some during the more gore laden scenes. It is also worth noting that the theme of incest is raised, and though this is neither depicted nor shown as being in any way positive, the fact that it’s there will be off putting for some. By the same token, the fact that Dati first saw Alyx as a child and then found himself to be attracted to him as an adult has the potential to make readers uncomfortable. These are less criticisms and more content warnings though.
I did feel that Alyx perhaps came across as a little less developed than the other characters. This was a shame as the other POV characters were so well rounded. If I want to be picky, I’d say that I’m more of a fan of positive depictions of satyrs too, but I’m not going to deduct marks for something so trivial when the rest of the book was such a fun romp through a dark world.
Final View: Daimonion is a quick, easy read that pulls you along on an often times very dark story. Dati Amon is an excellent companion for this trip, and his plight is one that will draw you in and leave you wanting more. Providing none of the themes already mentioned put you off, this one is well worth a look in.
Final Score: 4 / 5
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Author 1 book39 followers
July 15, 2017
I love this book. I'm a huge fan of dark themes, so this was right up my alley. The descriptions were glorious. I love the visuals that conjured up inside my head while reading this. If you love demons and dark themes, give this one a try!
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750 reviews64 followers
September 10, 2017
You going to need a really strong stomach to survive this trip into supernatural darkness where demons of all species are the apex predators and man is just flesh to satiate the uncontrollable hunger of the beast.That aside this book is just bloody glorious in it's carnage as evil becomes the new good in an effort to halt a forth coming apocalypse that's about to bring hell on earth.This book is apparently the first of a trilogy with "Nephalem" being the next.
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Author 12 books48 followers
July 10, 2017
3.5 stars

To be totally up front, I usually don't read books like this. I guess I was expecting something a little different than what the book turned out to be in the end (I was expecting something more romance and got more violence). It was a little...hum...how to put this nicely...gross for my taste. I'm not big on descriptions of bloody/horror scenes and the like so that wasn't really to my liking but if it's your thing more power to you. :D They were well done just not my thing really.

Okay, so the overall story telling/style was pretty good and I loved the premise of the book. I think it just fell a bit short in some things (like the love story just seemed weird for me probably because Alyx came off as a horny teenager with an obsession for a stranger at the beginning and that first impression dogged him for me for the rest of the book). I think it was an ambitious project that maybe needed a little more focus.

J.P. Jackson is a new to me author and I'm not ruling out his future works because I think there's talent here.

*I received an ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.*



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Author 43 books260 followers
July 3, 2017
Book – Daimonion (The Apocalypse #1)
Author – J.P. Jackson
Star rating - ★★☆☆☆
No. of Pages – 259
Cover – Gorgeous!
POV – 1st and 3rd, past tense
Would I read it again – No
Genre – LGBT, Horror, Thriller, Paranormal


** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Reviewed for Divine Magazine


Sorry, this one just wasn't for me. At all.

Let's start with the warnings, of which there were none when I picked it up. None of it was on-page in detail, but there are mentions of rape, bullying, abuse, and incest. This is on top of the warnings that come with the book – graphic violence, torture and gore. To be honest, none of the given warnings were as bad as I expected them to be. There was nothing truly graphic or gory in the book that turned my stomach, like some books I've read. But I did have an issue with the fact that one of the MC's was flirting, on page, with a guy he'd previous had sex with, only for both me and the MC to later discover that man was his father. That was obvious by the time the big reveal came, but it was also incest which I didn't sign up for. It makes no difference to me whether it's human incest or demon incest; it's all the same thing.

The demons were, I'm sorry to say, kind of lame. There wasn't really one baddie amongst them except for the Master himself. Which caused serious confusion, because 'the Master' is one of Satan's very well known titles, yet it wasn't used for him here. It took until 9% for us to discover that 'the Master' wasn't used for Satan but another character who wanted to bring Satan to Earth. It was very confusing to try to figure things out. Yet, in the end, even the evil Master proved to be less than what he'd been made out to be. He couldn't protect himself from a witch, he was led by his ego and ended up being a big diappointment.

There were various new terms that weren't always explained and expanded upon the world of demons – D'Alae, demon wolf, Nephalem, Darkening marks, witches using wands, Shishi statues that come to life, healers, witches, Satyr, Succubus, Horsemen of the Apocalypse. These were all linked into the story, but I found that though so many creatures/demonic influences were within the story, it fell flat for me in the 'evil' and 'demonic' aspect. It just felt a bit too tame.

I was intrigued by the start of the story, because there was a demon with a conscience, but it turned out to be that Dati wasn't so much a demon with a conscience but a demon without a backbone. He lives in the human world, with an apartment, money under the table (though we don't know what that means or where he gets it) and real belongings. It was a unique and interesting take on the demon genre, but it failed to really go anywhere after the Prologue, which had so much promise.

Unfortunately, there are some problems with the chapters – there are no chapter numbers, just chapter titles, and it doesn't tell us that Deal With a Demon is the Prologue and A Night's Harvest is actually Chapter 1. It would have been helpful to know that, considering years pass between one and another.

Similarly, there is an issue with the POV. The story is told in 1st person and there are headings under the Chapter heading, warning us which POV the chapter is in. However, this is usually done to show that there are multiple POV's, particularly in a 1st person story, but it took until 15% for Alyx to get his POV, after Dati had taken up all of that time previously. Then, there is a single paragraph at the end of his chapter, where the Satyr, Silenus, gets his 3rd person POV. This also happens with Alicia's POV. It switches between 1st and 3rd for these short, add-on POV at the end of chapters quite frequently. Following this, Jenae gets her POV at 33%, switches to 3rd person POV for Hemming at 52%, Silenus gets his first 1st person POV at 69%, and the Kasadya gets his first POV at 97% where it switches inexplicably to present tense for the first time. It became difficult to settle into the writing with the constant switch of POV and tense, never knowing what was going to appear next.

To be honest, I didn't find Alicia, Jenae or Silenus' POV particularly important, since we found out what had happened through other POV's or what we were told was really small and unnecessary to know. Jenae's POV seriously exaggerated her life to being something dark and brutal; with people calling her shit-face and telling us that she was forced to eat dog shit at her high school. I find her entire existence in the story a little pointless and frustrating. When she's not being an over-excited Goth teenager full of angst, she's whiny and constantly getting into trouble because she's not listening to people who know more about the world she's been thrown into. I particularly don't understand her insta-love story with Caleb. It makes zero sense. They literally look at each other, during someone else's POV, and they're inseparable.

There are a lot of convenient, predictable and quite unbelievable aspects of the plot that really got to me. Such as the way that Alyx wakes from his cocoon so conveniently after everyone leaves Dati alone with him; Dati knowing that Mira's real name is Mirabelle, when Jenae has only ever referred to her as Mira before; Dati being a badass demon (apparently) yet standing motionless while a little girl (Jenae) calls the shadows to attack him when he could have knocked her out at any point before it got dangerous for him; Dati being one of the Master's charges for centuries, having been in trouble and tortured by him before, yet unable to hold back his anger in front of him, to spare himself more pain. It really seems unbelievable, to me, that things like this would happen. Despite Dati having a conscience, he's still supposed to be strong, lethal and capable of brutal things, yet he never once lives up to his reputation. Most of these things are used as devices to introduce Alyx and Jenae's powers, but are just unlikely situations and proof that Dati is an incompetent demon. Though both Alyx and Jenae have big parts later in the story, there's really no need for the constant “proof” of their powers, when it's shown so frequently within multiple POV's.

I also have to question why, in two days, no one thought to warn Marta that her son was captured in a cocoon pod. No one thought that she could help, that she might want to know where her son was and that she could help heal them of their problems. Considering Dati has been to her throughout the years for help, it would seem obvious that she should be the first person they turn to for help, yet no one even thinks about it and when Dati finally goes to see her, well after he should, it's only so that they can be attacked. There are a whole lot of things that should never have happened, if they characters had made any logical choices.

The entire first 30-40% is just setting the scene for what follows. Which means that the story is really slow to evolve and nothing much happens before the first 'infection' that is the impetus for anything that follows. The entire plot is set up right from the start of the story and the only sub-plot is that of Dati and Alyx's potential romance.

I don't get why no one ever questions why Aradia wants to keep their bugs, with their demonic DNA inside of them, or what she intends to do with them. These people are smart enough to realise that the bugs can transform humans into what they are, with their powers, but no one ever panics that her price is the potential to make more of them. And quite honestly, the witches are more badass than any of the demons are, proven with this -
“After that display, no one dared defy her.”
For being demons, they have no strength, no evil, no real ability to fight against some manipulative witch whose best display of power is to throw Dati against the wall. I just don't get it.

Overall, half the story didn't make sense to me. The witches were more badass than the demons, the demons weren't evil or strong when faced with an attack, and the constant mish-mash of POV's and tenses had my head spinning. Sadly, though the plot had potential, with a great, original idea, it ended up giving me a headache and leaving me wanting more. I won't be reading the rest of the series and I doubt I'll read more from this author.

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Favourite Quotes

“I was certain that Master had elicited a new form of revenge. My actual punishment for disobedience and tardiness at the summoning wasn't the broken wing; it was the perpetual headache in the form of a yappy and clueless witch.”
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1,414 reviews13 followers
August 20, 2017
I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book.

3.5


This book was a solid introduction to what could be an engaging and imaginative trilogy. There were many things to enjoy about this book. For example, the world-building seemed well thought out and not only included many paranormal/supernatural creatures but an interesting take on their origin/mythology and powers, and the writing style is succinct yet descriptive. Moreover, it was interesting that while many of the characters in the group have powers/dominion over humans and self identify as evil or acknowledge that they are comfortable acting in the outskirts of evil, their most defining characteristics are their humane concerns—a father’s love, respect for humanity and honoring one’s promises, and other ideals commonly associated with good.

Unfortunately, there were a few aspects of the story that kept this from being a great read for me and from engaging with Dati and Alyx as MCs because, at the end of the day, they were only marginally main characters in this story. Because this book functions as a setup for a larger tale, almost all the narrative action boils down to a group of characters only able to respond passively to being used by more powerful entities. Additionally, there are over 4 character POV shifts, which contributes to the sense that almost everyone in the group is as important, if not more so than Dati or Alyx. For me, the lack of agency, that nothing about Dati or Alyx resonated with me on a personal level and made them stand apart from the members of their motley crew and that, by the end, the story felt like an ensemble cast of pawns being moved around on a chessboard, left me feeling a bit conflicted. However, since this is largely due to the fact that this book does a lot of heavy lifting in order to set the stage for the remaining two books, I have faith that Dati and Alyx will grow into actual MCs that carry the narrative flow as opposed to being swept up in its current. I look forward to reading the next step in their journey.
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Author 1 book14 followers
May 27, 2019
Wow. DAIMONION isn't just a fantastic read. It's an experience!

Of course it had all the qualities of an amazing book: the writing was sharp; the characters were well-rounded; and the story was always exciting. However, I found myself more involved in this book than others, as though I was being slowly seduced. Sometimes I was turned on by the chemistry between the two main characters, and other times I'd yell at the author for a sudden twist. "Damn you, J.P. You're a monster!"

I went through a lot of emotions--sadness, happiness, anger, embarrassment (for getting turned on on a crowded train)--but no matter the feeling I always found myself speeding through the pages--a clear sign of a great book.

You're a little devil, J.P. Jackson, and I cannot wait for the second book!

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Author 12 books112 followers
July 1, 2017
4.5 stars

This book is an exceptional work of queer horror fiction. I loved Mr. Jackson's voice and writing style, and the language was rich and evocative.
The plot was mostly fast-paced, and had me on the edge of my seat until the very end. It's very difficult to make a story involving such profoundly flawed characters so gripping, so kudos to the author for doing just that. None of these guys are especially nice or identifiable, but somehow I cared about what happens to them.
The character I liked the most was Dati, the demon that seeks freedom, revenge, and redemption. He really struck a chord with me as a reader. I also wish there was more about Hemming, the shape-shifter.
The best part, in my opinion, was the ending. It was so strong that it caught me by surprise, to be quite honest, and now I can't wait to see what happens in the next installment.

It is important to not, however, that this is a very dark horror thriller. There is lots of blood, gore, and very graphic scenes of torture and murder, so this is definitely not for the squeamish. But if you 're a fan of the genre, I believe you're going to enjoy this story.

*An ARC was kindly provided to me by the author*
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2,040 reviews
July 19, 2017
I'm finding it hard to put into words how fascinating this book . Once I started to read I didn't want to stop.

I enjoyed learning about the different types of demons, what the Daimonion were and ultimately how each character was tied to the other. The plot was ever thickening and when you didn't think you could be shocked anymore, more details would be revealed effectively drawing the reader in. There were a lot of grotesque moments in the book but I think that was part of the appeal. There was also a good amount of despicable acts that occurred off page that were referenced to. It all made for a very good read.

The author segued from one event/issue to the next in such a masterful manner. At first I thought the constant barrage of events But thinking back on it I can't imagine the author approaching the story any other way
to convey the satyr's (Silenus) so called masterful plans and end game.

A review copy was provided to me in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 13 books133 followers
November 5, 2018
Clever, original, I read it for my Halloween book and it was the perfect choice!!!
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279 reviews
December 10, 2017
It is a very solid plot and very well written story line. My problem is the speed....the reading comprehension can't keep up with all the action. It drops one stone after another and tired me out. It's like one of those movies where they try to push so much information in the movie that i start to lose attention.
The book is missing breaks for the reader.
132 reviews
January 25, 2020
I really wanted to like this one. It's a Urban Fantasy where the male lead is a demon that fancies the kid he once spared, once that kid has matured into a man, which in itself is trouble enough, but add in a bigger plan his master has concocted, troublesome witches, and the new clueless baby witch he has to babysit? Chaos ensues. Mostly in the last third of the book. Romance however or anything more is pretty much not there, because didn't you just read that this is about a demon?
We are talking about the evil, we hurt kids and elderly, bastard demon kind. Obviously they don't get what love is, but what's character evolution for? But alas, that's probably in the next book.

I actually liked the worldbuilding a lot. A book with actual bad guys (with occasional good intentions) as the main cast is always fun, and the different kind of demons and their procreation was really interesting. When it came to other aspects of the world, aka witches, it however got a bit much, and especially the last third of the book I just ride along, wondered "Wtf main cast", and tried to make sense of what the witch is doing now.

The book switches its POVs around a bit, with each voice actually being distinct, which is always a plus as it gives you more information on how the characters think. Unfortunately, I still couldn't connect to them. Alyx was super bland, Dati was oh-so-powerful-let-me-show-you-by-him-getting-hit-into-the-wall-every-five-seconds and he came across more as a sort of pathetic whipped dog. And I'm not a dog person. Jenea was fun, I liked her, and the other side characters had my interest as well, even if there wasn't enough of them yet in the book.
So yeah, while those characters obviously had strengths and flaws, I still wasn't overly fond of them. And I usually like my psychotic characters.

The problem I actually had was that in the last third of the book, I really had trouble making sense of what was going on, because of how much was going on, worldbuilding wise. It was hard to predict anything if you don't know what the characters can all do. Essentially, I only knew that the main cast is behaving sort of idiotic for plot reasons.
How I love it when characters are described as strong and powerful and cautious, and then prove it by doing the complete opposite. Bonus points if they themselves point out they don't trust that and that person, then commence doing so immediately.

If you like Urban Fantasy, you might want to give this one a try. It's written very well, and while there are some troubles, I really enjoyed the first two thirds of the book.
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251 reviews10 followers
November 10, 2020
*I received a free review copy in exchange for an honest review of this book.

Daimonion is a viscerally creepy with extra viscera (also insects, spiders... swarms in general). It backs up the body horror with interesting MCs and a horrific twist on several mythologies.

I’ve never been quite so grateful to be unbothered by horror related to insects and spiders, because there's a lot of it in here. The horror (arthropod-related or not) is well-handled and genuinely creepy. It felt like the author had a good sense of what traumatic events to show, and what was best left as backstory, especially in the context of horror. The rotating POV characters helped to keep the story moving even when someone was doing something potentially boring (like being in a coccoon unable to move for several days). The backstory involves a lot of bad stuff happening to people, including kids, for a very long time before the book starts and in the time jump between the introduction and the main story, so please take care of yourselves and check the CWs before starting this one.

The way the grander arc of the series is balanced with the needs of this particular volume was so great. I was very immersed in the story, began realizing that there was too much I needed to know and not enough book left, then was pleasantly surprised by how the last few chapters found that perfect stopping point. There's a lot of untapped stuff here for the series to expand on, but most of the main things driving the plot in this volume are settled, one way or another. In particular I like the way that the last part of the book contextualized the significance of things which we knew already, transforming them from their introduction as things the characters needed to deal with or work around just in this story, into bits of a much larger mythos that we don't have the full shape of yet, but I'm very intrigued. This particular blend of mythology and horror has a lot of different directions it could go, but all of them seem good from here.

CW for gaslighting, body horror, sexual abuse (backstory), sexual assault (backstory), graphic violence, torture, gore, major character death, child death, death. Please note that some of the body horror and gore in this book is related to being swarmed by or forcibly ingesting creatures including but not limited to spiders, beetles, and undifferentiated masses of insects.
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Author 72 books106 followers
July 19, 2017
I had a hard time with this one. I think I wanted to like it more than I did, because the writing was really tight and it was clear to me that the author is extremely skilled. The world itself was really interesting and I wanted to know what would happen, especially with Dati, who I was invested in from the beginning.

...And then the POV changed. Over and over again. The POV shifts felt unnecessary and while they weren't poorly done, I felt like the work was unfocused and the novel didn't want to commit to something, anything. Sometimes, information was repeated, which I know was done by necessity because of the different POVs, but then were those necessary?

The characters themselves were the strength of this story and what it carried it through to the end for me. That said, it annoyed me considerably that it felt a lot like a prequel, even until the very end and that every time that I seemed to become invested in a character's POV, the book would throw another one at me.

Since it was confusing and it felt like a prequel--it felt very much like set pieces for a long-standing series--I'm knocking two stars off. That said, I'm excited to read the rest of the series! Provided I don't need a spreadsheet to keep track of the characters, of course.
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Author 29 books124 followers
August 15, 2017
I’m not a big fan of dark urban fantasy and when it comes to demons and evil creatures I wasn’t sure what to expect from this book. I was worried this was going to be slaughter fest, but it wasn’t. Yep, there were some icky parts but nothing that was over the top. I found the character of Dati interesting and compelling and someone I wanted to learn more about. All the characters were interesting and different I especially liked Hemmingway (I think I spelled that right).

When it came to the story I will admit that I thought the plot was going to go one way, but it surprised me and went a completely different way, which was a nice treat. It’s rare that authors are able to trick me to that extreme but JP did. I also, love, how JP Jackson tied up all the loose ends. I know this is the first book in the series however he didn’t end the story on a massive cliffhanger which I was very glad about. He did end the story and he gave us enough reason to need to read the next book.

I don’t want to give away too much here, so definitely check out this novel, it’s a good read and a lot of fun. I look forward to the next story.
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24 reviews1 follower
January 5, 2018
jksjsjs i wrote a review and it was deleted skskskss

since i’m lazy, im just going to leave off of where i started and maybe later i’ll type it again.
(OKAY THIS MAKES MY REVIEW LOOK SO NEGATIVE OML. ITS A GOOD BOOK I SWEAR, THERE ARE SOOOOO MANY GOOD THINGS ABIUT IT BUT I JSUT DINT WANT TO TYPE IT AGAIN UHHhhhjGhh)


the plot is amazing. however, there are a few little things that i find to detract from the book, one such thing being the relationship between Dati and Alyx. i do admit, they do look cute together, but, i feel like their relationship has developed too soon.

Dati had saved Alyx when he was little in exchange for the healing services of alyx’s mother, Marta. then, fifteen or so years of no contact, Dati comes into Marta’s shop for assistance, and he lays his eyes upon Alyx for the first time. they are instantly attracted. this then spurs Alyx to try to find Dati, which then leads to him being changed completely(not telling how). they didn’t even speak much, and the little words between them were insignificant. i don’t think that they created an emotional bond deep enough for it to be realistic for Alyx to seek Dati out. i don’t understand how they got the most intimate ‘ruby red’ bond late in the story when they didnt even have a true, meaningful conversation together.

also, i didn’t like how fast the plot moved along. it might just be me being picky, but i felt like there was so much action that the reader wasn’t able to digest everything. perhaps, if the author had delved deeper into the explanation of why summoning satan was so dangerous and why Silenus wanted to summon him, the reader would be able to understand why Silenus worked so hard to make it happen. i mean, yes, probably everyone knows the story, but describing the horror and carnage would help the reader imagine the consequences.

there was so much action, so much going on, that the author doesn’t do a good job of explaining why theses actions are committed,

from this, another problem is reveled. he never explores each character deep enough. seriously. what is silenus’s intent behind his actions? is he simply a sadistic satyr who just feels like wrecking the whole entire world because, why not? why would he go to the trouble of making generations of descendants until he found the right son? it aggravates me that, being the antagonist and the driving force behind most of the character’s actions to remove the ‘bugs,’ we don’t see him often and enough. we don’t see what horrid actions he is doing, except for the parts that are needed to get the plot moving, and to explain the biological relationship between characters we don’t really care about yet, because there is no emotional attachment.

then, when Silenus is finally killed, it’s sort of anticlimactic. all these years of being a complete buttface and scary spooky monster who has kept probably hundreds of other creatures under his control and probably like a century worth of knowledge, and he is bested by his own son, who has only been using his powers for a few weeks. we can’t forget that also just recently, he had been a normal school boy. i guess it didn’t take AnY adjusting or panic for him to accept who he was. thus, as a reader, i was like: oh, he died? cool. yaaaaaay.

there was no fluttering heart or nervous anticipation. just a some sort of shock that Silenus was so easy to kill. we really need more of the ‘hearty’ stuff to truly appreciate the story.

also, it feels like NO ONE cares about summoning satan. the characters against Silenus are just doing it because they were forced into doing his bidding, not because oh, it will DESTROY THE WHOLE WORLD. yes, there is lots of evil, and not everything is good in the world, but where are the other creatures? does no one care about the fate of the world? does everyone just want humans to die? does no one (except the goodness in Dati) care about others? this makes the driving force behind the plot weak and insignifcant; the reader isn’t as excited as they could be. cool, it’s just an average day of someone trying to take over the world. no big deal. oh well. this downplays silenus’s devotion and YEARS spent trying to make it happen.

so basically THIS BOOK IS AN AWESOME READ other than it not reaching its full potential AND SO IM TOTALLY WAIITING FIR THE NEXT BIOK in the SERIESSS
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Author 5 books235 followers
February 19, 2023
Video Review as part of this compilation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wj-xF...

Daimonion is an LGBTIQA+ Dark Urban Fantasy written by Edmonton-based author J.P. Jackson. This was his first novel and those themes continued throughout his writing career. I have read some of his subsequent work and it was neat to go back and see his start.

Daimonion follows a demon who lives on Earth. His job is to hunt human children that are high potential for Master. Master is looking to summon the dark lord. Only one hunt was unsuccessful. We are now years later and that spared boy is a man. That is where our story starts as we unfold an attempt to break the pattern of the last few hundred years.

Overall, there is lots of great gore and a ton of creative monsters, as well as some new takes on the supernatural tropes! I also liked J.P.’s use of framing the human characters through the point of view of supernatural beings.

The book does feature multiple POVs. Multi-POV is one of the most challenging things to pull off and J.P. does a fantastic job with his first effort in the writing style. It is by no means done poorly and every author and reader of multi-POV will tell you that delivering strong characters in this writing style is a challenge.

I gave this 4 Stars. Outside of the challenges that come from multi-POV, there is nothing else that bothered me and if you are comfortable reading that format, this book is worthy of a weekend!

Daimonion did win a Rainbow Award for Alternate Reality Fiction in 2017. The Rainbow Awards show in the Literary Awards section of Goodreads so congrats to J.P. on earning the title of Award-winning author in a prestigious contest!
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