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The Fatemarked Epic #4
Deathmarked
While the war for the Four Kingdoms drags on, a new threat emerges from across the sea...
To the north, Annise Gäric seek to rescue Lady Zelda and retake Castle Hill from the sellswords known as the Brotherhood. In the back of her mind is a growing fear, something she can't quite explain. Meanwhile, Lisbeth Lorne tries to regain control of the ancient army of Sleeping Knights before they become the horde of death her soulmark has shown to her in visions.
In the west, Rhea Loren find herself at a crossroads. Continue down the path of destruction or seek another way, another life. But when the truth she's buried from her own people comes to light, she loses the control she so desperately clings to.
In the east, newly crowned King Gareth Ironclad must decide whether to pursue peace or follow in his father's and brother's footsteps. After all, he now has a dragon...
In Calyp, Raven Sandes is forced to fight in the pits of Zune. She wants nothing more than to give up, to die, until she discovers her sister, Whisper, is a prisoner too. What she doesn't know is that Gwendolyn Storm is closing in on her, seeking her own vengeance for the latest attack on Ferria.
Roan Loren, on the other hand, continues to seek knowledge, clinging to the Western Oracle's prophecy of peace. His journey takes him southward, to Teragon, where a truth has been hidden for more than a decade.
Grey Arris, with his new pirate allies, sails for the southern continent, but he doesn't know what monsters lurk beneath the waters of the Burning Sea.
In the southern empire of Phanes, Jai Jiroux and the Black Tears fight to maintain order as the newly released slaves cry for the blood of their previous masters. At the same time, he must control the slave army to defend against the Phanecians warriors to the north, who have a new leader: Bane. The kingslayer still wants peace, but he's finally realized that he might have to destroy everything to achieve it.
To the north, Annise Gäric seek to rescue Lady Zelda and retake Castle Hill from the sellswords known as the Brotherhood. In the back of her mind is a growing fear, something she can't quite explain. Meanwhile, Lisbeth Lorne tries to regain control of the ancient army of Sleeping Knights before they become the horde of death her soulmark has shown to her in visions.
In the west, Rhea Loren find herself at a crossroads. Continue down the path of destruction or seek another way, another life. But when the truth she's buried from her own people comes to light, she loses the control she so desperately clings to.
In the east, newly crowned King Gareth Ironclad must decide whether to pursue peace or follow in his father's and brother's footsteps. After all, he now has a dragon...
In Calyp, Raven Sandes is forced to fight in the pits of Zune. She wants nothing more than to give up, to die, until she discovers her sister, Whisper, is a prisoner too. What she doesn't know is that Gwendolyn Storm is closing in on her, seeking her own vengeance for the latest attack on Ferria.
Roan Loren, on the other hand, continues to seek knowledge, clinging to the Western Oracle's prophecy of peace. His journey takes him southward, to Teragon, where a truth has been hidden for more than a decade.
Grey Arris, with his new pirate allies, sails for the southern continent, but he doesn't know what monsters lurk beneath the waters of the Burning Sea.
In the southern empire of Phanes, Jai Jiroux and the Black Tears fight to maintain order as the newly released slaves cry for the blood of their previous masters. At the same time, he must control the slave army to defend against the Phanecians warriors to the north, who have a new leader: Bane. The kingslayer still wants peace, but he's finally realized that he might have to destroy everything to achieve it.
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First published July 28, 2017
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David Estes has written more than 40 science fiction and fantasy books. He loves chatting with his readers, all of whom he considers to be his friends. David lives in Hawaii with his beautiful Aussie wife, Adele, his moody cats, Bailey and Luna, and his rambunctious sons, Beau and Brody.
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Books by David Estes:
-The Fatemarked Epic- For fans of A Game of Thrones, Lord of the Rings, and The Way of Kings! Four kingdoms. A century-old war. One ancient prophecy that could change everything.
-The Kingfall Histories- a follow up series to the #1 Amazon bestselling series, The Fatemarked Epic
-Strings- “A wonderful retelling of the Pinocchio story…I simply couldn’t put this book down.”—Rysa Walker, bestselling author of TIMEBOUND
-The Dwellers Saga and the Country Saga. Voted books to read if you enjoyed the Hunger Games on Buzzfeed and Listopia.
-Salem's Revenge trilogy- the witch apocalypse begins!
-Slip Trilogy- "Someone must die before another can be born..."
-The Adventures of Nikki Powergloves- Kid superheroes? 'Nuff said.
David Estes has written more than 40 science fiction and fantasy books. He loves chatting with his readers, all of whom he considers to be his friends. David lives in Hawaii with his beautiful Aussie wife, Adele, his moody cats, Bailey and Luna, and his rambunctious sons, Beau and Brody.
Join 3,000+ David Estes Fans and YA Book Lovers Unite in David Estes' official fan group at:
http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/7...
Books by David Estes:
-The Fatemarked Epic- For fans of A Game of Thrones, Lord of the Rings, and The Way of Kings! Four kingdoms. A century-old war. One ancient prophecy that could change everything.
-The Kingfall Histories- a follow up series to the #1 Amazon bestselling series, The Fatemarked Epic
-Strings- “A wonderful retelling of the Pinocchio story…I simply couldn’t put this book down.”—Rysa Walker, bestselling author of TIMEBOUND
-The Dwellers Saga and the Country Saga. Voted books to read if you enjoyed the Hunger Games on Buzzfeed and Listopia.
-Salem's Revenge trilogy- the witch apocalypse begins!
-Slip Trilogy- "Someone must die before another can be born..."
-The Adventures of Nikki Powergloves- Kid superheroes? 'Nuff said.
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October 20, 2024
Hands down, best of The Fatemarked Epic series so far!! Estes has surpassed himself with his mad talent of giving us characters we care deeply about. And the world he's created is so complex with so many different storylines, although they all seem to crash together at some point.... Just magnificent! He kind of blows my socks off!
Annise and Tarin head north to rescue Lady Zelda (love her). Lisbeth heads south with the Sleeping Knights army along with a surprising companion. Rhea makes some soul-changing decisions and surprisingly, becomes one of my favorites (I've had a love/hate relationship with her throughout this entire series). King Gareth becomes the King he needs to be and I love him for it. And Raven meets an unexpected ally and I can't get enough of this new duo! We also have Roan, Grey and Jai and we can't forget another favorite... Gwen! Oh my! So many characters and so many amazing storylines.
And did I mention dragons? I have never loved dragons more than in this story!
But... David does throw in some heartbreak as well. Of course! I'm not sure I've ever read any of his books without tears. Some happy tears, some very sad tears! He always seems to give me an emotional rollercoaster of feels. Deathmarked is no exception. That ending!!
I was truly blown away at the depth of this remarkable epic fantasy. If you like fantasy, you will love this entire Fatemarked series. I'm on pins and needles waiting for the final book, Lifemarked!
Annise and Tarin head north to rescue Lady Zelda (love her). Lisbeth heads south with the Sleeping Knights army along with a surprising companion. Rhea makes some soul-changing decisions and surprisingly, becomes one of my favorites (I've had a love/hate relationship with her throughout this entire series). King Gareth becomes the King he needs to be and I love him for it. And Raven meets an unexpected ally and I can't get enough of this new duo! We also have Roan, Grey and Jai and we can't forget another favorite... Gwen! Oh my! So many characters and so many amazing storylines.
And did I mention dragons? I have never loved dragons more than in this story!
But... David does throw in some heartbreak as well. Of course! I'm not sure I've ever read any of his books without tears. Some happy tears, some very sad tears! He always seems to give me an emotional rollercoaster of feels. Deathmarked is no exception. That ending!!
I was truly blown away at the depth of this remarkable epic fantasy. If you like fantasy, you will love this entire Fatemarked series. I'm on pins and needles waiting for the final book, Lifemarked!
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July 28, 2017Whew! After a whirlwind month, I managed to release book four in The Fatemarked Epic a month earlier than expected. You can buy or read for free on Kindle Unlimited here:
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I am very pleased with how this 800+ page tome turned out, especially considering how many characters and plotlines I needed to bring together as the war for the Four Kingdoms continues. The most important thing you all need to know before reading this book is:
There is much more to the creation of the fatemarked than you know so far. This book will reveal the truth, and what it means for peace in the Four Kingdoms.
I hope you all enjoy the read and I look forward to your reviews!
David
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I am very pleased with how this 800+ page tome turned out, especially considering how many characters and plotlines I needed to bring together as the war for the Four Kingdoms continues. The most important thing you all need to know before reading this book is:
There is much more to the creation of the fatemarked than you know so far. This book will reveal the truth, and what it means for peace in the Four Kingdoms.
I hope you all enjoy the read and I look forward to your reviews!
David
September 23, 2022
2/5
“Somewhere between right and wrong, there is a garden. That is where we shall meet.”
This journey I’ve taken through the Fatemarked Epic has had it’s ups and downs, but I’ve always managed to come out of each book on a high note. There’s a lot to love about what I’ve experienced so far, but unfortunately, as with many series, sometimes there’s a sequel that just doesn’t live up to expectations.
In Deathmark Annise Garic is on the march to rescue her castle and aunt from the sellswords known as the Brotherhood. The Sleeping Knights are a mighty force, but the control Lisbeth Lorne has over them is waning, foreshadowing the death and destruction her Soulmark has shown her. In the west, Rhea Loren has a choice to make. Reveal the truth of her actions to herself and her people, or continue on the path to war. The newly crowned King Gareth Ironclad is trying to bridge the gap between war and peace, but Gwendolyn Storm has other plans. Raven Sandes is in the fighting pits of Zune, battling for her life, but it’s not her opponents that she should be worrying about. Roan Loren continues his search for answers to the Western Oracles prophecies, taking him to Teran for hidden truths. In the Southern Empire of Phanes, Jai Jiroux fights to maintain order now that slavery is abolished, but an army is marching towards them, and their leader is Bane.
It truly pains me to write this review. I wanted to love this book, but unfortunately there were just too many issues overpowering what could’ve made Deathmarked a worthy addition to the Fatemarked Epic. Let’s start with what I liked. The northern characters such as Zelda, Annise, Tarin, and many others have maintained being a highlight in every single book in this series. I love their interactions and their growth. Deathmarked is no exception to this, and made a story I might’ve hated into something that was tolerable. Their arcs made an impact on the story that I could not find anywhere else, and their characters stayed true to who they are.
In every book there are epigraphs that grace the page whenever the reader ends parts 1, 2, 3 ect. I’ve enjoyed these epigraphs, but the ones in Deathmarked have been the best in my opinion. I found them to be memorable as well as impactful when reading. At the end of each book there are always postludes of events and characters that give the reader information they previously didn’t have, or new insights into happenings that weren’t entirely explained. They’ve always been a joy to read, and I haven’t come across one that I didn’t enjoy. These postludes are where Estes truly shows his mettle as a writer. The postludes at the end of Deathmarked are fantastic! My favorite one I’ve read thus far can be found here. It was not only insightful but emotional and thrilling. Showing me that classic Estes writing I’d been missing from the book itself.
Now, we come to the crux of my problems. This book has so much happening. There isn’t a dull moment, and I had no issue being bored. The core of my criticisms comes down to a single character arc. I could not stand this character. Deathmarked dedicated so much time to a redemption arc for them that honestly did not feel earned in the slightest. I enjoyed following this character in their villain arc because of their unpredictability and impulsive tendency to make rash decisions in the heat of anger. They were fun to hate! The redemption arc they were handed turned them into a wet blanket, crying for approval from everyone they’d ever wronged. This was some book one behavior that had no business being in book four. I found this to be an issue with a lot of the characters in this book. So many regressed in ways that were just not believable. Confrontations and decisions that these characters had already battled and overcome came back and suddenly I was having Game of Thrones season 8 PTSD. One character suffered what I’d call the Jaime Lannister Effect and completely disregarded everything they’d ever learned and worked towards, becoming the exact same person we were introduced to in book 1.
Another character that was introduced in book 2 was a joy to follow through the series! I fell in love with their personality and involvement in the story. They’re a secondary character but strong in their influence over the main ones. They were reduced to a plot device in Deathmarked, completely being disregarded in their arc and adding to the regression in others. This character was far too good to be so neglected. I hated what was done with their development. For the first time in reading this series I wanted to skim over pages because I had become so disappointed in the interactions between these characters that I had so loved.
This is the longest addition to the Fatemarked Epic, and yet the entire story felt rushed. There were a lot of confrontations that were added just to create conflict but not truly resolve anything. Some plot points that I thought were relevant took a hard left turn and suddenly became obsolete. I wish I had a better word to describe this book, but messy is the only one that can properly encapsulate what I felt while reading. It felt like the first draft to a novel. The story was there, but it needed two or three more drafts before being ready. Deathmarked does not feel ready. There were just so many character decisions that made no sense, and their journeys truly left me baffled that these characters regressed so hard into arcs that had already been dealt with.
This does not mean that I will not continue the series. I will say that if book 1 had been written like, this I probably wouldn’t have continued onto book 2. I know that Estes is capable of so much more than this! He has the talent, and the postludes at the end of Deathmarked prove that to me. I’ve praised this series as one that I cannot believe hasn’t been picked up for traditional publication, and I stand by that statement! Estes is a great writer! This one was just not up to par with the rest of the series. I am excited to continue onto Lifemarked and I hold onto the hope that the final book will renew that Estes flame I missed in Deathmarked.
“Somewhere between right and wrong, there is a garden. That is where we shall meet.”
This journey I’ve taken through the Fatemarked Epic has had it’s ups and downs, but I’ve always managed to come out of each book on a high note. There’s a lot to love about what I’ve experienced so far, but unfortunately, as with many series, sometimes there’s a sequel that just doesn’t live up to expectations.
In Deathmark Annise Garic is on the march to rescue her castle and aunt from the sellswords known as the Brotherhood. The Sleeping Knights are a mighty force, but the control Lisbeth Lorne has over them is waning, foreshadowing the death and destruction her Soulmark has shown her. In the west, Rhea Loren has a choice to make. Reveal the truth of her actions to herself and her people, or continue on the path to war. The newly crowned King Gareth Ironclad is trying to bridge the gap between war and peace, but Gwendolyn Storm has other plans. Raven Sandes is in the fighting pits of Zune, battling for her life, but it’s not her opponents that she should be worrying about. Roan Loren continues his search for answers to the Western Oracles prophecies, taking him to Teran for hidden truths. In the Southern Empire of Phanes, Jai Jiroux fights to maintain order now that slavery is abolished, but an army is marching towards them, and their leader is Bane.
It truly pains me to write this review. I wanted to love this book, but unfortunately there were just too many issues overpowering what could’ve made Deathmarked a worthy addition to the Fatemarked Epic. Let’s start with what I liked. The northern characters such as Zelda, Annise, Tarin, and many others have maintained being a highlight in every single book in this series. I love their interactions and their growth. Deathmarked is no exception to this, and made a story I might’ve hated into something that was tolerable. Their arcs made an impact on the story that I could not find anywhere else, and their characters stayed true to who they are.
In every book there are epigraphs that grace the page whenever the reader ends parts 1, 2, 3 ect. I’ve enjoyed these epigraphs, but the ones in Deathmarked have been the best in my opinion. I found them to be memorable as well as impactful when reading. At the end of each book there are always postludes of events and characters that give the reader information they previously didn’t have, or new insights into happenings that weren’t entirely explained. They’ve always been a joy to read, and I haven’t come across one that I didn’t enjoy. These postludes are where Estes truly shows his mettle as a writer. The postludes at the end of Deathmarked are fantastic! My favorite one I’ve read thus far can be found here. It was not only insightful but emotional and thrilling. Showing me that classic Estes writing I’d been missing from the book itself.
Now, we come to the crux of my problems. This book has so much happening. There isn’t a dull moment, and I had no issue being bored. The core of my criticisms comes down to a single character arc. I could not stand this character. Deathmarked dedicated so much time to a redemption arc for them that honestly did not feel earned in the slightest. I enjoyed following this character in their villain arc because of their unpredictability and impulsive tendency to make rash decisions in the heat of anger. They were fun to hate! The redemption arc they were handed turned them into a wet blanket, crying for approval from everyone they’d ever wronged. This was some book one behavior that had no business being in book four. I found this to be an issue with a lot of the characters in this book. So many regressed in ways that were just not believable. Confrontations and decisions that these characters had already battled and overcome came back and suddenly I was having Game of Thrones season 8 PTSD. One character suffered what I’d call the Jaime Lannister Effect and completely disregarded everything they’d ever learned and worked towards, becoming the exact same person we were introduced to in book 1.
Another character that was introduced in book 2 was a joy to follow through the series! I fell in love with their personality and involvement in the story. They’re a secondary character but strong in their influence over the main ones. They were reduced to a plot device in Deathmarked, completely being disregarded in their arc and adding to the regression in others. This character was far too good to be so neglected. I hated what was done with their development. For the first time in reading this series I wanted to skim over pages because I had become so disappointed in the interactions between these characters that I had so loved.
This is the longest addition to the Fatemarked Epic, and yet the entire story felt rushed. There were a lot of confrontations that were added just to create conflict but not truly resolve anything. Some plot points that I thought were relevant took a hard left turn and suddenly became obsolete. I wish I had a better word to describe this book, but messy is the only one that can properly encapsulate what I felt while reading. It felt like the first draft to a novel. The story was there, but it needed two or three more drafts before being ready. Deathmarked does not feel ready. There were just so many character decisions that made no sense, and their journeys truly left me baffled that these characters regressed so hard into arcs that had already been dealt with.
This does not mean that I will not continue the series. I will say that if book 1 had been written like, this I probably wouldn’t have continued onto book 2. I know that Estes is capable of so much more than this! He has the talent, and the postludes at the end of Deathmarked prove that to me. I’ve praised this series as one that I cannot believe hasn’t been picked up for traditional publication, and I stand by that statement! Estes is a great writer! This one was just not up to par with the rest of the series. I am excited to continue onto Lifemarked and I hold onto the hope that the final book will renew that Estes flame I missed in Deathmarked.
July 24, 2021
Wow! Another fantastic ride from David Estes. Deathmarked continues the Fatemarked saga and does not disappoint. Just as great as any of its predecessors, it’s a real testament to the author that this tale has never waned in action quality and character development. Am so excited to be heading into the final instalment!
March 30, 2025
Simt un pat vairāk gadu ilgais karš starp karalistēm turpina plosīties ar lielākām un mazākām militāru kauju sadursmēm gan starp četrām karalistēm, gan to iekšējās cīņās par godu ieņemt attiecīgās karalistes troni rit uz nebēdu, ka dažbrīd pat rodas iespaids, ka autors David Estes cenšas žonglēt ar pārāk daudz sižetiskajām līnijām, kur politiskajām un militārajām intrigām pa virsu vēl vairāku pārīšu romantiskās attiecības.
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October 17, 2018
The joy of being able to read really great books such as this series!
I have absolutely thouraghly enjoyed reading this series. Mr. Estes has created a fantasy of epic proportions. Can't wait for the rest. I am starting Book 5 now! I am 78 years old and learned to love Sci-fi in the 70's & 80's while raising five sons and one princess (😇 so named by her brothers!). Thanks be to God that I am still able to read and enjoy one of life's greatest pleasures!!!! I love exclamation points.......! Thanks
I have absolutely thouraghly enjoyed reading this series. Mr. Estes has created a fantasy of epic proportions. Can't wait for the rest. I am starting Book 5 now! I am 78 years old and learned to love Sci-fi in the 70's & 80's while raising five sons and one princess (😇 so named by her brothers!). Thanks be to God that I am still able to read and enjoy one of life's greatest pleasures!!!! I love exclamation points.......! Thanks
August 10, 2017
I usually hate when books have cliffhanger endings, but this book is such an awesome read I find I can forgive the author for leaving me hanging like this. The worldbuilding is amazing, the plot is an action-packed rollercoaster, and a fantastic cast of characters rounds off the whole thing perfectly.
August 1, 2017
I can wait, maybe
So he says by the end of the year. I hope so. It's a great series and I can't wait to get my hands on the last book. I was hooked the minute I started reading. Seriously, it's a great series, you won't be disappointed.
So he says by the end of the year. I hope so. It's a great series and I can't wait to get my hands on the last book. I was hooked the minute I started reading. Seriously, it's a great series, you won't be disappointed.
September 28, 2021
The horde is coming!
Don't start with this book. The series starts with Fatemarked. This is book #4.
Many things going on in this book. We find out what Shae's fatemark does. Annise heads to Crimea for aid and is severely unhappy with what she finds. King's Bane is doing what he does best.
Estes is outdone himself with this epic fantasy book and series. Infighting, unlikely allies and treachery most foul. Looking forward to the next one
THE HORDE IS HERE!
Don't start with this book. The series starts with Fatemarked. This is book #4.
Many things going on in this book. We find out what Shae's fatemark does. Annise heads to Crimea for aid and is severely unhappy with what she finds. King's Bane is doing what he does best.
Estes is outdone himself with this epic fantasy book and series. Infighting, unlikely allies and treachery most foul. Looking forward to the next one
THE HORDE IS HERE!
November 20, 2022
I am finally getting to the end of the series. This was another great addition. The love triangle came to a conclusion and all the players are now in position for the end of the series. The fatemarked are ready to bring peace or more likely death and destruction probably both. The sins of the past have now come back to control the future.
August 5, 2017
So I thought this was the last one! Now I will have to try to be patient for the next installment. I am loving this series. No surprise, David Estes is one of my favorite dystopian writers and now this epic fantasy is wonderful. Same good writing, same sense of humor, same lovely flawed characters, so I give this one five stars. Some swearing (though made up swear words) and implied sexual content, there is loads of violence (its fantasy good versus evil kind of stuff). I can recommend for teens and up.
October 20, 2018
First of all forgive any out of place text grammar punctuation or spelling, I'm using my phone microphone to give my immediate thoughts after reading the book( while drivinglol) Where do I start Inconsistencies and more inconsistencies, protagonist and antagonist popping up out of nowhere. The horde suddenly know how to sail ships... really? Mere mercenaries killing ancient Mighty Warriors? ... Really? Bane a confused little boy now a genius and master strategist... Really? The introduction and mastery of guns out of nowhere.... Really? where was these weapons during the first books in the series ? The time frame of travel is completely off. Sometimes characters are too well informed about other Empires other times they are completely clueless about things they should obviously have information about... are you telling me no one knew about monsters that grow from blood and Sand although slavers have visited the island on numerous occasions, and no one spilled any blood? Ever? ... Come on! completely sloppy writing . The sad part is I really do like the characters represent in the series it just has a lot of missing details. It is seem like Parts where at is just to make the narrative fit and when it did not fit it seems that David just changed it all together going into a completely different directions. Examples The Mercenaries were completely unnecessary in this series he should have just left that part out and build upon other narratives that were already there. I could go on and on but I'm about to run off the road trying to write this review I guess in his nest books ghosts and vampires will be introduced along with scud missiles
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 17, 2017
EPIC. AWESOME. WORTH-IT.
Fantasy is my favorite genre, so obviously I have read too many books that fall into this category. I did not pay a cent for this book and had access to it for free using my Kindle Unlimited account. Hands down this series was better than all the fantasy I have purchased in the last year.
Why I absolutely adore this series:
1.The worldbuilding is intricate and thorough.
2. The plot is fast-paced and action packed.
3. I usually hate too many POVs and quick POV switches and this book was the perfect example of what I absolutely hate in a book. But wait. The fantastic cast of characters made me care for each and every one of them.
4. Nobody was back or white. Plenty of grey, immoral characters.
I read 4 books in this series in a span of a week, I thought this book was the last and imagine my surprise when I leanrt there was one more final book to the series! But this book was so awesome that I forgive the author for leaving me with a cliffhanger.
I recommend this series to anyone who loves epic-fantasy or has the time to read a good book!
Fantasy is my favorite genre, so obviously I have read too many books that fall into this category. I did not pay a cent for this book and had access to it for free using my Kindle Unlimited account. Hands down this series was better than all the fantasy I have purchased in the last year.
Why I absolutely adore this series:
1.The worldbuilding is intricate and thorough.
2. The plot is fast-paced and action packed.
3. I usually hate too many POVs and quick POV switches and this book was the perfect example of what I absolutely hate in a book. But wait. The fantastic cast of characters made me care for each and every one of them.
4. Nobody was back or white. Plenty of grey, immoral characters.
I read 4 books in this series in a span of a week, I thought this book was the last and imagine my surprise when I leanrt there was one more final book to the series! But this book was so awesome that I forgive the author for leaving me with a cliffhanger.
I recommend this series to anyone who loves epic-fantasy or has the time to read a good book!
May 19, 2018
loved it....the end...that damned end!!
April 15, 2021
David Estes continues to not disappoint. This work was a strong continuation to the Fatemarked series, following many of the same characters as the previous works while introducing a few new ones. Estes is amazing at juggling so many characters and stories while keeping it fresh, engaging, and without overlapping too much. The characters continue to develop and grow throughout, creating realistic and relatable characters. I really can't recommend this series enough! I'm sad there's only one more book left.
April 8, 2018
Just about to finish the penultimate book 'Deathmarked,' and I can't wait to get stuck in to the last. This series has gripped me from the beginning with totally believable characters and a truly breathtaking depth to the four Kingdoms. Atmospheric, detailed and a bit visceral and gory (in a totally appropriate way, lol). Looking forward to seeing if the HOARD can be dealt with and if peace can be found across the four Kingdoms at last.
August 23, 2017
I enjoy this series it keeps you reading. Each books tells a story of the people and how they evolve to earn their place in the story. If you decide to read this series I don't think you will be disappointed.
January 8, 2018
I've thoroughly enjoyed the series thus far, but this book.....I already loved the characters, and even the ones I hated, touched my heart. This book made me cry, and laugh and then cheer. What an amazing story! I can't wait to read the next.
April 24, 2018
Really enjoying this series.
January 27, 2020
Continuation Good Like the Others
*****Spoilers*****
Another good book in the series and though I wanted the best for many characters, I found myself thinking it's dangerous to like one character too much because the way this author writes, they'll be dead. No sooner had I thought that than Archer was taken down and many pages later so was Jai. Nothing goes as expected and those two deaths were tough to accept.
The prophecy, Oracle, and adventures of Roan were scattered throughout and his influence was felt throughout the kingdom, Roan I felt could have been doing more particularly given how his quest ended. Yes he finally met Bear Blackboots and communed with the Oracle but he could have been of greater use elsewhere throughout the kingdom I think, especially since there was no special knowledge he gained from the voyage.
Gwen's actions in this book were both heroic and honorable, she's quickly made herself one of my favorites. I was surprised to see Gat turn on Viper and in a moment that mattered most. She hid her true goal but he saw through it anyway and made a great choice I think. That Jai never got to see his mother before he died was very sad to me given they both lived so closely in Phanes. His cowardice at a pivotal moment coupled with her hiding meant though they were in the same palace they did not meet again.
Rhea is swiftly making up for her mistakes but she is but far the character I like the least. Her actions over the previous books made it so that she'd close to irredeemable in my eyes. And that she ended up with Grey after all of her scheming and terrible choices just seems so unfair. I felt for Kyla and what could have been with her and Grey but I did feel like they were thrown together more by circumstance.
There's more instant love in this book which seems to be the theme that carries across the series. Annise and Tarrin are doing what they can with Zelda to hold the north but they've been devastated by battles with another yet to come.
I didn't like that the lost knights were destroyed, especially when I felt like they could have been redeemed at some point and helped against the horde.
Helmuth, the lost crippled son returns and with an army and fatemark as well. It'll be interesting to see what happens next though I will admit to becoming impatient for the story to end. There are so many characters now and so many changes of perspective that I've lost references a couple of times and it takes me a while to remember who was from where and their purpose. At one point in the book, I think the author confuses himself and I can't keep the kingdoms or their strongholds or cities straight anymore. It's wonderfully complex this series being told from each nation's perspective but I need a reference page.
*****Spoilers*****
Another good book in the series and though I wanted the best for many characters, I found myself thinking it's dangerous to like one character too much because the way this author writes, they'll be dead. No sooner had I thought that than Archer was taken down and many pages later so was Jai. Nothing goes as expected and those two deaths were tough to accept.
The prophecy, Oracle, and adventures of Roan were scattered throughout and his influence was felt throughout the kingdom, Roan I felt could have been doing more particularly given how his quest ended. Yes he finally met Bear Blackboots and communed with the Oracle but he could have been of greater use elsewhere throughout the kingdom I think, especially since there was no special knowledge he gained from the voyage.
Gwen's actions in this book were both heroic and honorable, she's quickly made herself one of my favorites. I was surprised to see Gat turn on Viper and in a moment that mattered most. She hid her true goal but he saw through it anyway and made a great choice I think. That Jai never got to see his mother before he died was very sad to me given they both lived so closely in Phanes. His cowardice at a pivotal moment coupled with her hiding meant though they were in the same palace they did not meet again.
Rhea is swiftly making up for her mistakes but she is but far the character I like the least. Her actions over the previous books made it so that she'd close to irredeemable in my eyes. And that she ended up with Grey after all of her scheming and terrible choices just seems so unfair. I felt for Kyla and what could have been with her and Grey but I did feel like they were thrown together more by circumstance.
There's more instant love in this book which seems to be the theme that carries across the series. Annise and Tarrin are doing what they can with Zelda to hold the north but they've been devastated by battles with another yet to come.
I didn't like that the lost knights were destroyed, especially when I felt like they could have been redeemed at some point and helped against the horde.
Helmuth, the lost crippled son returns and with an army and fatemark as well. It'll be interesting to see what happens next though I will admit to becoming impatient for the story to end. There are so many characters now and so many changes of perspective that I've lost references a couple of times and it takes me a while to remember who was from where and their purpose. At one point in the book, I think the author confuses himself and I can't keep the kingdoms or their strongholds or cities straight anymore. It's wonderfully complex this series being told from each nation's perspective but I need a reference page.
August 6, 2020
Deathmarked by David Estes is the fourth book in his Fatemarked series. I’ve been preoccupied with other books but finally found the time to continue with this series. Although book three felt just like the middle of the road, Deathmarked redeemed itself in a very good way as I found myself enjoying it much more than the previous two in the series. Finally, we have the characters we’ve been following all throughout this journey come together for their fateful meeting!
“Most believe peace is the work of kings and their armies, but it is scholars who can change the world.” – Windy Sandes
I’m glad that I found myself liking some of the characters a bit more after finishing Deathmarked. Lisbeth for one was not interesting in the least when she was first introduced. Here in Deathmarked, the struggle we see her go through to control the death knights made me respect her character all that much more. Grey Arris got my attention in Soulmarked after not leaving a good impression in the beginning of the story but after Deathmarked, he’s earned it that much more. Regarding the Tarin and Annise connection, I still feel they are a bit worn out and the author should have included something fresh for them both instead of reminding us each and every time how glad they are to be together and that yes, they love to make out whenever possible. Where Rhea is concerned, my worst fears were confirmed with her character but luckily, the author managed to salvage it in my opinion. I’ll have to wait until after having completed book five before I give final judgement on Rhea.
“Peace should be simple. But would it be worth as much if it was?” – Roan Loren
Book five and the final in the series will definitely be epic and I can’t wait to start on it. There’s still some things I wished would have happened such as bringing the Horde’s arrival a book or two earlier to build up momentum. As it stands, I didn’t feel any hype when things finally got moving a bit. The author relies again on telling specific character backstory and history at the end of the book and I like that idea. We get to focus on that character’s history and motivation without getting distracted with the overall story itself.
Ladies and gentleman, you already know this but stuff is about to go down in the final book! Bring on all the chaos, death, life, dragons and fighting one can handle. Bring it all on as I wouldn’t expect anything less in the final conclusion to this epic series!
“Most believe peace is the work of kings and their armies, but it is scholars who can change the world.” – Windy Sandes
I’m glad that I found myself liking some of the characters a bit more after finishing Deathmarked. Lisbeth for one was not interesting in the least when she was first introduced. Here in Deathmarked, the struggle we see her go through to control the death knights made me respect her character all that much more. Grey Arris got my attention in Soulmarked after not leaving a good impression in the beginning of the story but after Deathmarked, he’s earned it that much more. Regarding the Tarin and Annise connection, I still feel they are a bit worn out and the author should have included something fresh for them both instead of reminding us each and every time how glad they are to be together and that yes, they love to make out whenever possible. Where Rhea is concerned, my worst fears were confirmed with her character but luckily, the author managed to salvage it in my opinion. I’ll have to wait until after having completed book five before I give final judgement on Rhea.
“Peace should be simple. But would it be worth as much if it was?” – Roan Loren
Book five and the final in the series will definitely be epic and I can’t wait to start on it. There’s still some things I wished would have happened such as bringing the Horde’s arrival a book or two earlier to build up momentum. As it stands, I didn’t feel any hype when things finally got moving a bit. The author relies again on telling specific character backstory and history at the end of the book and I like that idea. We get to focus on that character’s history and motivation without getting distracted with the overall story itself.
Ladies and gentleman, you already know this but stuff is about to go down in the final book! Bring on all the chaos, death, life, dragons and fighting one can handle. Bring it all on as I wouldn’t expect anything less in the final conclusion to this epic series!
December 18, 2020
UGHHHH THE WAY THIS BOOK MAKES ME SO MAD
First of all, Grey?? And Rhea??? As a couple???? Absolutely NOT. Kyla x Grey was clearly the superior ship. This is not even an argument. How can the author write such a wonderful couple, with so much development and chemistry and SUCH A PERFECT DYNAMIC and then think Grey and Rhea are better? And yes, I know, Rhea is pregnant and all that, but that doesn’t mean she and Grey are good for each other. Not to mention we see barely ANY interaction between the two for the whole series, where we see lots of interaction between Kyla and Grey. Idk man I just don’t think the romance between Grey and Rhea was developed enough. They seemed more like a one-time summer fling than a steady, long-lasting romance. Plus the romance between Kyla and Grey was so sweet and so soft and UGHHHH I HATE IT HERE
ALSO??? JAI JIROUX??? DYING???? I should’ve known...There was no way Shanti and Falcon could get together without Jai out of the way. But that last line in his perspective? “And it felt like justice, at long last.” I REREAD THAT LIKE TEN TIMES BEFORE SCREAMING INTO MY PILLOW FOR TEN MINUTES. He may have been a straight-laced goody-two-shoes who could be boring af at times, but HE WAS SO NICE AND KIND AND JUST WANTED WHAT WAS BEST FOR HIS PEOPLE AND GOSH HE DIDNT EVEN GET TO SEE HIS MOM 3 DAVID ESTES WHY MUST YOU BREAK MY HEART LIKE THIS
Didn’t really care about Archer’s death, ngl. I mean, I guess it’s sad? Or it’s supposed to be? :/
Just to touch on Lisbeth Lorne and David Dietrich- idk, the ship doesn’t really do it for me? It wasn’t that well-developed in my opinion. I feel like all the characters are going to be paired up by the end of the series, and I kind of hate it. Not that I have anything against romance itself in the series - I happen to think many of the pairings (like Roan and Gareth, or Shanti and Falcon) are great. But it feels as if the author is scrambling to stick everyone into a relationship as the series closes, so a lot of these ships are coming out of nowhere and not getting the development they deserve. Furthermore, a lot of these characters just... don’t have chemistry? Anyway~
*I would take off half a star for the romance, but Goodreads is a basic bitch and only has whole star reviews, so I guess I’m just rounding it up to a five :/
Time to read the fifth and last book! Cant wait for the heartbreak!
First of all, Grey?? And Rhea??? As a couple???? Absolutely NOT. Kyla x Grey was clearly the superior ship. This is not even an argument. How can the author write such a wonderful couple, with so much development and chemistry and SUCH A PERFECT DYNAMIC and then think Grey and Rhea are better? And yes, I know, Rhea is pregnant and all that, but that doesn’t mean she and Grey are good for each other. Not to mention we see barely ANY interaction between the two for the whole series, where we see lots of interaction between Kyla and Grey. Idk man I just don’t think the romance between Grey and Rhea was developed enough. They seemed more like a one-time summer fling than a steady, long-lasting romance. Plus the romance between Kyla and Grey was so sweet and so soft and UGHHHH I HATE IT HERE
ALSO??? JAI JIROUX??? DYING???? I should’ve known...There was no way Shanti and Falcon could get together without Jai out of the way. But that last line in his perspective? “And it felt like justice, at long last.” I REREAD THAT LIKE TEN TIMES BEFORE SCREAMING INTO MY PILLOW FOR TEN MINUTES. He may have been a straight-laced goody-two-shoes who could be boring af at times, but HE WAS SO NICE AND KIND AND JUST WANTED WHAT WAS BEST FOR HIS PEOPLE AND GOSH HE DIDNT EVEN GET TO SEE HIS MOM 3 DAVID ESTES WHY MUST YOU BREAK MY HEART LIKE THIS
Didn’t really care about Archer’s death, ngl. I mean, I guess it’s sad? Or it’s supposed to be? :/
Just to touch on Lisbeth Lorne and David Dietrich- idk, the ship doesn’t really do it for me? It wasn’t that well-developed in my opinion. I feel like all the characters are going to be paired up by the end of the series, and I kind of hate it. Not that I have anything against romance itself in the series - I happen to think many of the pairings (like Roan and Gareth, or Shanti and Falcon) are great. But it feels as if the author is scrambling to stick everyone into a relationship as the series closes, so a lot of these ships are coming out of nowhere and not getting the development they deserve. Furthermore, a lot of these characters just... don’t have chemistry? Anyway~
*I would take off half a star for the romance, but Goodreads is a basic bitch and only has whole star reviews, so I guess I’m just rounding it up to a five :/
Time to read the fifth and last book! Cant wait for the heartbreak!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 4, 2021
EPIC. AWESOME. WORTH-IT.
Fantasy is my favorite genre, so obviously I have read too many books that fall into this category. I did not pay a cent for this book and had access to it for free using my Kindle Unlimited account. Hands down this series was better than all the fantasy I have purchased in the last year.
Why I absolutely adore this series:
1.The worldbuilding is intricate and thorough.
2. The plot is fast-paced and action packed.
3. I usually hate too many POVs and quick POV switches and this book was the perfect example of what I absolutely hate in a book. But wait. The fantastic cast of characters made me care for each and every one of them.
4. Nobody was back or white. Plenty of grey, immoral characters.
I read 4 books in this series in a span of a week, I thought this book was the last and imagine my surprise when I leanrt there was one more final book to the series! But this book was so awesome that I forgive the author for leaving me with a cliffhanger.
I recommend this series to anyone who loves epic-fantasy or has the time to read a good book!
Fantasy is my favorite genre, so obviously I have read too many books that fall into this category. I did not pay a cent for this book and had access to it for free using my Kindle Unlimited account. Hands down this series was better than all the fantasy I have purchased in the last year.
Why I absolutely adore this series:
1.The worldbuilding is intricate and thorough.
2. The plot is fast-paced and action packed.
3. I usually hate too many POVs and quick POV switches and this book was the perfect example of what I absolutely hate in a book. But wait. The fantastic cast of characters made me care for each and every one of them.
4. Nobody was back or white. Plenty of grey, immoral characters.
I read 4 books in this series in a span of a week, I thought this book was the last and imagine my surprise when I leanrt there was one more final book to the series! But this book was so awesome that I forgive the author for leaving me with a cliffhanger.
I recommend this series to anyone who loves epic-fantasy or has the time to read a good book!
July 20, 2020
The Horde is coming! The Horde is coming! The kingdoms are forced to unite to meet this threat but have several skirmishes with each other before this occurs.
Unfortunately, some of my favorite good guys are casualties of war. Lots of bad guys die too.
In the postludes we learn more about Fay the blacksmith, Helmuth the painmarked and Mortis Ironclad, the founder of Ferria. I really enjoy these back stories. (Did anyone besides me sort of confuse Ferria and the furia?) I wonder what is the significance in the naming of Ferria since it seemed to come out of thin air. It didn't have anything to do with Scarlett Browning whom I would think Mortis would want to immortalize.
It seems to me that the Western Oracle sure picked a convoluted way to bring about peace. This in no way lessens my enjoyment of the story.
The cover shown here is different than the one on my Kindle. Anyway, it appears to be Grey Arris AKA Grease Jolly because the right hand is a blade. His left hand is the one that was chopped off. (I just double checked) Oopsie.
Unfortunately, some of my favorite good guys are casualties of war. Lots of bad guys die too.
In the postludes we learn more about Fay the blacksmith, Helmuth the painmarked and Mortis Ironclad, the founder of Ferria. I really enjoy these back stories. (Did anyone besides me sort of confuse Ferria and the furia?) I wonder what is the significance in the naming of Ferria since it seemed to come out of thin air. It didn't have anything to do with Scarlett Browning whom I would think Mortis would want to immortalize.
It seems to me that the Western Oracle sure picked a convoluted way to bring about peace. This in no way lessens my enjoyment of the story.
The cover shown here is different than the one on my Kindle. Anyway, it appears to be Grey Arris AKA Grease Jolly because the right hand is a blade. His left hand is the one that was chopped off. (I just double checked) Oopsie.
August 1, 2024
And the saga continues.......
With her army devastated Queen Annise of the North crosses the sea to find reinforcements and finds the HORDE instead. The HOARD is a multitude of different sects of barbarians united by the long-lost Maimed Prince, Annise's uncle Helmuth bent on revenge.
The Sleeping Knights protectors of the North are out of control killing all in their path. The slaves are fighting to keep their newfound freedom. Roan finally meets Bear Blackboots and learns all of the prophecy still fighting the fact that he and Bane are "two sides of the same coin". Bane is slowly succumbing to the plague that the beggar infected him with.
All comes to a head when the nations' armies meet at the Bloody Canyon.
There are so many great characters spread throughout the kingdoms, some you love, some you love to hate.
My favorite odd couple is Captain Christoff Metz and Private Mona Sheary. He is very literal in all aspects. This series just keeps giving.
With her army devastated Queen Annise of the North crosses the sea to find reinforcements and finds the HORDE instead. The HOARD is a multitude of different sects of barbarians united by the long-lost Maimed Prince, Annise's uncle Helmuth bent on revenge.
The Sleeping Knights protectors of the North are out of control killing all in their path. The slaves are fighting to keep their newfound freedom. Roan finally meets Bear Blackboots and learns all of the prophecy still fighting the fact that he and Bane are "two sides of the same coin". Bane is slowly succumbing to the plague that the beggar infected him with.
All comes to a head when the nations' armies meet at the Bloody Canyon.
There are so many great characters spread throughout the kingdoms, some you love, some you love to hate.
My favorite odd couple is Captain Christoff Metz and Private Mona Sheary. He is very literal in all aspects. This series just keeps giving.
August 29, 2018
Great Story, Irritating Errors
Potentially a Classic ... but.
In this medieval universe, words and sayings based on our current time and universe scream at the reader.
Example: A large rock, shattered by an explosive, exploding with pieces of "shrapnel". A term established in early 19th century Earth, was specifically named after General Henry Shrapnel (1761–1842), the British soldier who invented the shell (the idea that these "fragments of a bomb or shell" originated during World War I, Earth - not in the Marked Universe).
Other mistakes exist as well.
But remember, this is a really great story.
Potentially a Classic ... but.
In this medieval universe, words and sayings based on our current time and universe scream at the reader.
Example: A large rock, shattered by an explosive, exploding with pieces of "shrapnel". A term established in early 19th century Earth, was specifically named after General Henry Shrapnel (1761–1842), the British soldier who invented the shell (the idea that these "fragments of a bomb or shell" originated during World War I, Earth - not in the Marked Universe).
Other mistakes exist as well.
But remember, this is a really great story.
September 20, 2020
The entire series is very satisfying
I have read all five of the fatemarked books. Early on I was judgemental about some of the names of places and creatures. They sounded like tropes or creative laziness (mamoothen, crimea). Now I realize it helped make visualization easier and the foreign lands accessible to the reader.
I really liked this series. The characters are deep and have very unique voices. They all grow through out the series. The author never forgets any of his characters he does not leave any of them hanging. The end is satisfying on all levels. Every thread is sewn up and questions answered with closure.
I have read all five of the fatemarked books. Early on I was judgemental about some of the names of places and creatures. They sounded like tropes or creative laziness (mamoothen, crimea). Now I realize it helped make visualization easier and the foreign lands accessible to the reader.
I really liked this series. The characters are deep and have very unique voices. They all grow through out the series. The author never forgets any of his characters he does not leave any of them hanging. The end is satisfying on all levels. Every thread is sewn up and questions answered with closure.
September 27, 2019
Again, another great book in this series! Perhaps my only "negative" is that there are some less-than-engaging POVs throughout this book that tend to slow down my reading whenever I hit them. They are not insurmountable obstacles, however, and I found myself very much enjoying this book. I don't have a ton to say about this one, because honestly? All the books are beginning to meld into one in my mind. As far as I know, I've only got one book to go before I've finished the entire series, so hopefully, Estes will end this epic satisfyingly and powerfully!
January 1, 2021
I keep rating these four stars and I hate to do it but it's after reading the entire series and I need to save the five stars for the final book! From book one I was like "Damn you, Bane! Go die!" and I couldn't do that anymore with this book! It was making me mad, I just wanted to hate someone for once in this series, but all of the character arcs are just so perfect. The introduction of the horde had me quivering in fear and excitement because after reading so much of Este's works in the previous books, I knew it would be great.
August 26, 2018
I think I wish there were more fatemarked in the series. While it's interesting to follow the current characters it seems the world could be interesting if there were more, but perhaps that would ruin it too. Hard to say. Overall still just very solid. Not the best fantasy series ever written but just a very solid one that is recommended if you enjoy long fantasy stories that are well constructed.
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